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yorhmienerd:
Weldone fiyah, but you haven't answered my request

it's fine by me.

Fidelismaria:
Interestin But Wait Ooo @fiyah How Old Is Tobi? How Old Is Tori? How Old Is Johanna Dat She Is Already A Specialist?Or Is A Gynaecologist Not A Specialist?

Tobi is 27 and Tori and Jo are 26

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Sveen:
Fiyah. Your id looks familiar, are you a student of Unilorin?

Yeah

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Cirphrank:
Fiyah

I don't know if it will interest you but I'd love to have your stories on my blog.

Quote me with your reply.

That would be nice and thanks

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Mattkent:
Nope
Waiting for next update.

you have issues

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Mattkent:
Its a great awareness story. I must admit that I've not read any of Oyinprince stories till this collabo with donkross1, I really must commend u guys for this great story.

May u both not suffer from writer's block like some people

like you. You better get over it

DokitaG:
Wow... nice work, more ink to ur pen. Re u a medical student??

Yep.

Mattkent:
R u seriously joining my name with the likes of wole?

Totally agree with u, her writing skills is distinctive to her and its never a boring read. Of course there r some minor errors, mostly typing errors that I think should av been avoided.

I hope you do believe me when I tell you you are good now

I don show

I din dhoe

SmartestPopQUEEN:
well, well, guys, 1stly m sorry 4 coming late, I was kind of stucked in traffic. #pleading...

Having said that, let me check, if there's any vacancy in the front row? (long neck activated)... Oh... Oh my,!.. No empty seat available...

What am I even saying?
How should I expect any vacancy on a moving thread like this... Just let me go nd give my freshly spanked buttocks a nice resting at the back...


Fiyah mate... Ride on..

Welcome on board Ma'am. You are so very welcome

49cents:
On a lighter note, you come across like a girlfriend who needs validation of 'I love you's to carry on!

But seriously what I like about your writing skill is your ability to to take us into the hallowed chambers of the character's minds freely.

I think you should not let your updates be influenced by the 'criticisms' not because they are mis-directed but because they could distort the flow of your non-boring, naturally suspense-laden narratives.

All those details they are pointing out to you to reveal have the potential of making the read a bore if they don't come in according to your own discretion.

I am enjoying the purity of your movement so far. Take us there baby

Thanks for that. It really got me thinking. Wow wow wow! seeing how lenghty this was first scared me. Was thinking it could be a heartbreaking critic. Thanks so much

yorhmienerd:
Huh! madam fiyah abeg continue

As per my own observation, I think the enviroment of the characters needs little description like the office setting, the paint, the arrangement.. something like that, the characters too; there are no description of their dressing, hair-do, finger nails, foot wears... just an observation though

Description. Noted!

Melonny:
Honestly, I don't care about you describing the outfits or the houses. you have a good story here. that's all we care about..But wait o, you never tell what tori looks like- (beautiful, short or tall)

You can already guess. She has a miniature stature meaning she isn't tall and she is beautiful. She has Jo's eyes remember and I can remember telling you how hot Jo is.

mayowa24:
Well said fiyah. You wanting your fans criticisms means you want to get better, I have never had no reason to comment here, but for your great write ups. You have to work more on your description of the characters, sort of cloth they are wearing and the scenery. it's going to make it more realistic and make us have more connections with the characters Somethin[color=#006600][/color]g am sure you already caught up with. Aside from these, it's a thank you from me. You have kept me coming back for more. I'll be looking forward to your update. Have a nice day and God bless you.

Thanks Ma'am. I'd try to describe more even though I'm not exactly good in description.

mzlizabelle:
What's up with Jo's foolish weird feeling?

And why isn't any of the doctors, Jo inclusive not seeing the resemblance between Tori and Jo yet?
Or is the resemblance noticeable to only Tobi and Marcus?


Keep it going baby
#AlumnaBetterByFar✌

This is more like it.

Firstly, whatever the reason is for Jo's weird.
feeling is known to her.


and I never mentioned Marcus saying she looked like Jo. I quote 'you look like someone I know.' He didn't say who it was and even if he meant she looked like Jo. Then she probably do.

To him.

and also Jo can't sense the resemblance. You can't tell if you look like someone or not.

'And besides, the resemblance both girls share isn't that obvious owing to the fact that Tobi didn't see it the first day he met Tori. it's only noticeable to those who have seen much of both girls. I think I mentioned Tori being a mini version of Jo or something. They aren't exactly alike. The only resemblance I think I keep mentioning is the eyes which might not be noticeable to other people who aren't interested or pay attention to them.

I hope this is more comprehensive enough.

And thanks for this comment. It really made my day.

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Hey guys.

This is not an update in case you think it is but a note to my wonderful readers. The read-and-comment reader and also the read-and-flee-without-dropping-any-comment readers.

I am especially grateful to the read-and-comment readers.

Like, you guys are the bomb!

The encouragements I get from your comments totally inspire me to write more and I'm also very grateful to those those who draw my attention to several mistakes in the previous updates.

The thing is I'm getting so much praises and a lot of 'Way to go Fiyah!' Or 'you are good, girl!'

Like seriously?

Not even a single critic?

Something like. 'The way you express your characters is somehow obscene. You should work on that.' Or 'I don't like the way you describe your characters. You don't do much describing the outfit, houses and others.'

You guys are making me feel fly over nothing.

And also, you guys do less talking about the story itself. After each update, I was expecting you guys to do more talking about the update itself. Because you guys are not doing that makes me feel the storyline is boring and all the 'nice update' thingy I get from you is just for show.

You know I love you guys.

Like Love Love Love...... Endless love. You get what I mean.

An update will be coming soon but I'm not so sure if our definition of 'soon' really rhymes. What I'm saying is, I'm not sure how soon the update's going to take.

SPDAZZY:
I have this feeling that Jo and Tori are siblings. Tobi and Marcus remark that they look a bit alike.

What has grandma got to say?

Nice observation. I gats give you thumbs up

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MrsExplorer. Your book covers are so catchy.
can you please design a cover for
Title: Silent Seduction Author: Abdullah Rafiyah Snippet: It all started from a lost phone

percentile, please don't wait o. I hate to disappoint but update would be available tomorrow morning. Typing the above update took me hours. I'm sorry I won't be updating tonight.

Tgold1:
ThanKks Man.....

But Fiyah u neva ansa me ooooO...... Y choose my name(TOBI)

Because I kinda think Tobi is a synonym of jaunty and saucy

OladeleJohn:
Your story is really captivating dear... I can't wait for updates abeg *Runs to grab chair and popcorn*
Are you a Unilorite?

Yep. A better by far student

OladeleJohn:
Your story is really captivating dear... I can't wait for updates abeg *Runs to grab chair and popcorn*
Are you a Unilorite?

Yep. A better by far citizen