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About the first time I get to read a romantic story with some 18+ innuendos and it wasn't a bad read.

Kudos to the writer of this story.

Interesting beginning which should hopefully inspire great reading expectations.

Op try not to abandon this story at some point as many writers are in the habit of doing.

Good work...........Keep it on!

Considering that I'm a person deeply enthralled with the profound rarity of the Igbo cultural heritage & will always unapologetically revere the sanctity of its history; this story though not in the same literary pedestal with the classic 'Things Fall Apart' still rekindles the same philosophical nostalgia in me that leaves me questioning the phenomenon of reincarnation as I'm literally thrown into a mental reverie that can only be best described by those who were physically here when the route beyond the breadfruit tree was always an access road.

The awesome descriptive panache of the OP is a laudable expression of literary greatness with original African uniqueness.

I hope to continue following this story with undivided attention.

OP you're very much appreciated.....Keep it on!

Apparently the "epilepsy " was a test of love which Darous failed unfortunately, but it remains to be seen whether he'll be finally lucky to regain his wife's trust and love this last time?


Op your writing prowess and conjectural dexterity leaves no one in doubt as to the gift of greatness in you. Thanks for this scintillating work of fiction....

Well done op.

Following the updates closely.

Really captivating storyline.....Keep the updates coming please. Kudos!