you and i who looks older? :p :p :p :p :p

man you poem is the bomb. i like it okey. believe in your abilities cos they make the realities of your imaginations. good work.

[color=#770077][/color] HELLO VIEWERS AM AN UPCOMING POET. PLS. CAN SOME ONE READ MY POEM AND COMMENT ON IT. WILL BE GLAD TO GET YOUR HONEST RESPONSES.
Am lost, don’t know what to do, I lost my job for no good reason,
I am dejected and I blame God for everything, taking a walk on the railway track in a cool lonely area,

Thinking of all the promises of God to guide and love us, my mind is roaming far, unaware of my surroundings, oh my God a train behind me! Its horns blaring, I can’t hear or see it,

That is the end of my suffering on earth, I shall go and see my Father and ask him why he brought so much suffering to me, the train comes nearer and I suddenly come to reality, tool late! Suddenly, someone pushes me off the rail track, I fall unhurt and safe, the train passes and I am unhurt, who is it? I look back and front and see nobody, I did not hear nor see the train coming, why all this?

Suddenly I remember a passage in the bible, “FOR HE SHALL SEND HIS ANGELS TO TAKE CHARGE OF YOU, ONE BY YOUR RIGHT THE OTHER BY YOUR LEFT AND YOUR FEET SHALL NOT STRIKE THE STONE”,

it must have been an Angel, why? I lost my job and have no more hope, suddenly I realize that God loves me and though I have no job and have lost hope he still cares and loves me,

I suddenly smile because all hopes are not yet lost , I know He has something in store for me, you who are at loss and don’t know what to do put your faith in God, HE IS THE ALPHA AND THE OMEGA THE BEGINNING AND THE END, THE AUTHOR AND THE FINISHER, you out there who has lost hope smile because things will change for the better.

thnks Bro for the sincere advice you given me. I will post some other one. So you take a look at it and give me your verdict. Thnks alot.

Am lost, don’t know what to do, I lost my job for no good reason,
I am dejected and I blame God for everything, taking a walk on the railway track in a cool lonely area,

Thinking of all the promises of God to guide and love us, my mind is roaming far, unaware of my surroundings, oh my God a train behind me! Its horns blaring, I can’t hear or see it,

That is the end of my suffering on earth, I shall go and see my Father and ask him why he brought so much suffering to me, the train comes nearer and I suddenly come to reality, tool late! Suddenly, someone pushes me off the rail track, I fall unhurt and safe, the train passes and I am unhurt, who is it? I look back and front and see nobody, I did not hear nor see the train coming, why all this?

Suddenly I remember a passage in the bible, “FOR HE SHALL SEND HIS ANGELS TO TAKE CHARGE OF YOU, ONE BY YOUR RIGHT THE OTHER BY YOUR LEFT AND YOUR FEET SHALL NOT STRIKE THE STONE”,

it must have been an Angel, why? I lost my job and have no more hope, suddenly I realize that God loves me and though I have no job and have lost hope he still cares and loves me,

I suddenly smile because all hopes are not yet lost , I know He has something in store for me, you who are at loss and don’t know what to do put your faith in God, HE IS THE ALPHA AND THE OMEGA THE BEGINNING AND THE END, THE AUTHOR AND THE FINISHER, you out there who has lost hope smile because things will change for the better.