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Arondizuogu:
Your piece of work has a nice story line, almost well thought out and fabtastic. Here goes my synopsis;
Fabian is his great grandfather re-incarnated, "he" was killed by his grand pa in his first life and now he's out to seek revenge on those who killed him. His grand father knew once he saw him as a child that this was his father, and I think he was scared for a bit you know.
Currently he is confused as am I. He's soul is taken by the devil and he's committing these evil crimes he know nothing about except his arrest. I am actually confused here cos it seems that there "two" Fabian, the evil Fabian and the completely confused one.
His Girlfriend is in Nigeria, and he does not want her here because he is a wanted man, who just ran out of the bathroom naked to meet his GF there in his room.
Also he has the key, which he was born with, lucifer's key that the extra strong demon is looking for.
Thanks and can't wait for you to continue.

very funny reading this, I really acknowledge ur effort (even though it appeared u did it out of 'make I just put something down for this guy'). But I still love ur spirit...Kudos.

Hollysaint:
pls explain synopsis.is it summary or a favourute quote or?I dont understand the question.pls reply

A brief summary of the major points of a written work, either as prose or as a table; an abridgment or condensation of a work

synonyms
♦ (brief summary): abridgment, abstract, conspectus, outline, overview, summary

Oya all of you, get a fulls-cap paper, don't write ur name on it, just your matric number will do.
"Draft a short and captivating synopsis on LUCIFER'S KEY you had read so far"

I need enough answers before i drop the next chapter titled 'Déjà Vu' and i swear you don't wanna miss it.
the best of all will be greatly rewarded by reading the remaining chapters of CORRIDOR OF HELL (through email)

I would need a student with a skill for graphics (Coredraw +Photoshop) to come up with a cover that relates to the story (Asin baddest cover ever seëth)
I'm also skilled in graphic design myself but I hope to find someone more creatively crazy right here. (Same reward as above)

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Fabian rehearsed his statements carefully picking the words he sure knows will appeal to Lucy’s hearing.
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Lotiababe:
thanks Prof. please when is your test? really enjoy the class. don't wanna miss your test and exam for anything.

Lotia...Lotia, walahi u haf spoil to the core, u haf join badt gang too abi? but anyway shaa your tests and exam will be a work-over as long as my Banana ones again "fall on you" in room 107 Savanah hotel...omo rere bi custard, you are not a bastard. i don't mind if u come along with queenitee

donteanz:
I don't know where you get your inspirations from, but i must confess of all literaturelanders i've know you're the most outstanding. Keep this up brother, it gonna yield something astonishing someday. Mr ghostwritter

and i say a big Amen to your prayer...and thanks alot for the compliment, Olodumare bless you too

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Mustapha pacing around Fabian’s room feeling so uneasy with what he just heard, he tried to figure it out but he couldn’t. An explanation to same man being in two different cities at a time is logically unrealistic.

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CHAPTER SIX

THE VOICE AND THE PUPPET

“Now open your eyes and do exactly as instructed!”

He opened his eyes into the darkness, he realized he was in the enclosed back of a moving van, he wondered how he got there but he instinctively knew where it was heading. He felt his hands and foot banded in chains as he tried to move. He was surprise not to have remembered anything of his past.


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cassbeat:
Like for real??

So how did you think I got to know about Sinnar and the unspoken secrets the world never knew about?...things happen in the night my dear, many unspeakable things.

cassbeat:
U like better sight abi??

my dear, any normal man with functioning joystick will say yes...so am I

Kennypedia, tell every member of the class to get ready for lectures tonight. it should be hall 4 beside the school library...they should all be seated before 8:59pm.
Every pretty girls in mini-skirt or crop-top should sit at the front...the ugly ones should just stay away from my sight.

Dotwillis1:
I was referring to the part where he said his great grandma gv it to him. Btw

How did you know I answer to Dotun ??

simple....I CAN TAP INTO YOUR SOULS AS LONG AS YOU ARE READING MY WRITE-UP.

Chukwudi92:
U write so beautifully..... The inside of ur mind must be a terrible place.. Nice one

a very terrible place indeed...I wish I can take u on a journey into my mind, I promise u an horrific experience...I see things while I sleep, very strange things.

Dotwillis1:
uhh hot hot!




....btw
I thought he was born with the key on his neck. Or is he referring to his first life as Jazza's father?

Dotun na u still dey ask me dis kain question? he was born with the key to his neck...and yes u are right.

alexanderkings:
aand pls hw can i improve my english .my vocabs . I can write bt with commonly knwn eng... Bt i wana improve for vocabs in writiing .tell muaa hw you do it .my eng is low and i aint happy bout dat

my Oga, if u don't run then u can't fly...if u don't read then u can't write. I spent years reading many books, wishing I could be as half as good as many international writers which I intend to be amongst sooner or later by God's grace. I had to cram many of their vocabs and learn their style of writing, I realised they all have their individual stlyes and genres. So few years back I started writing anything that comes to my head all to create my own style and try new vocabs. Read people stories on nairaland and other sites and learn from them, infact keep reading anything readable (including pornography, u will gain something from it)...make I dash u one scope...open ur dictionary and pick out ten words that sounds 'efikoish' then try chip it into ur writings ones in awhile. but don't tell anyone o. Nobody cares how u did it, they just want it done perfectly...shey u haf hear?

alexanderkings:
mr ghost writttter .... Am ya number one fan ... Ah wana write like uuu jst dat i dont knw how to and also how to lump difference sccene togeeedaa

my Oga, me sef still dey learn but I go try yarn few things since u don kon ask. Let me tell u my secret, I only come up with any crazy title that catches my fancy then next I sketch a story-line to suit it not minding what anyone says. most times I only dare my self with the plots hoping readers would enjoy it. My Oga abeg just write the type of story you would love to read (never compare urself with anybody, ur own ideas might just be what people want), take ur time with it, use ur imagination by putting urself in every character u create (u are the Alpha and Omega of ur work), be unpredictable, be on point, never write to impress (especially nairalander who have numerous stories to choose from), carry ur readers along and respect their views (if only they respect yours ni o), unlike me u can re-edit ur plot if it's not going as planned (nobody go beat u), u must be committed (that one I no get for body)...most importantly...ignore all my rules and be your self, a good writer writes and act with instict and not by anyone's rule.

thank you all for your words of encouragement, you guys are the bomb...
Have a wonderful Sunday.

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Fabian remembered a scenario that happened shortly he got to know Lucy few years back, he had followed her to her church as prove of his love for her; Lucy had dared him the day before. That Sunday, they had both attended St. Anthony church of Christ in Amthyfield free-way London, the two looked happy as they walked hand-in-hand through it entrance.


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For about thirty-six minutes, Fabian paid rapt attention to Mustapha’s shocking details, he was shocked to his bones on hearing the revelation that he found very hard to belief. He watched as Mustapha talked, he closely observed his eyes, his mouth, his gesture to words, his lids, the stress of his voice, all were perfect for a man who spoke the truth despite the fact he still struggles to admit it.



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Lotiababe:
too short but anyways thanks so much

hey baby, you don't need to thank me, a kin dupé ara eni... truth be told, the problem with u is that u are too deep down there...asin just too deep. But I promise to come up with something longer this time so as to get you fully satisfied and longing for more...shey u haf hear?

class rep, tell everyone to meet me in the lecture theatre hall1 tonight. Everyone of them should be seated before my arrival as class starts 8pm. All the boys and the not-so-beautiful ladies should have my recommended handouts ready for a test, it's gonna be an open test shortly after the main lecture.
I will take attendance...I'm sure you are guessing how, just wait and see.

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CHAPTER FIVE

LORD OF THE FLIES


The rain kept pouring heavily like it wouldn’t stop for hours to come. Fabian and Mustapha appeared drenched as they both ran towards the security building from the car. One of the guards was seen outside standing in the rain right in front of the door to the building. He appeared unease.


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kozmicity:
Nah...jhus bring your bikinis for a wonderful foursome at the pool.

kozmicity I'm happy to inform u dat d babalawò dat say u ar not going to carry-over my course he haf die...by d time i finish with u ehn...

kennypedia:
the chain is still on his neck

this is why i made dis boy ur class rep...A1 fall on u.

Eniqurl:
When is our next class oh Ghostwritter

My little Angel Eniqurl, how many times had I warned you to reduce ur heavy make-up, I guess it is now bluring ur vision of seeing my post when I said class holds on Wednesday night. But Eniqurl, kilodè? who are all dis young boys following u around the campus? Tell them to step away from you if they want their grades to step up toward them. Tell Kennypedia to give u my handout for FREE but u will have to PAY back in room 107 Savannah hotel on Saturday.

queenitee:
Prof sir, I'm always present in your classes

queenitee ómó pùpà... even if I don't know all the girls in my class, I know you. Your complexion in my class is brighter than your future. Leave the reading to the ugly ones (who have yet been born), all u need to know is the interior to room 107 Savannah hotel. shey ò gbo?

kozmicity:
Professor,the VC said to inform you about accompany him for a conference at Savannah hotel.

Your carry-over still dey carry belle for LUTH maternity ward...e go soon born, shebi na u wan spoil my plan?

Ego2:
present sir sorry for coming late.

Ego...Ego
òmò rè bi custard...u are not a bastard, look at you. But Ego, just take a look at your self, this your mini-skirt is too short for my heart beat. Shey o fè pa mi ni?...do you intend killing me?. if not wipè u are in my office, I might be tempted to score a goal inside ur body but i will show u messi nitorì because u are a small puberty. Anyways, meet me at Savannah room 107 after Wednesday lecture, I need to enlighten you on the school dress code...shey u haf hear?

kennypedia:
if you like come to class I have warned you all about profs intent if you miss his class 4 unit out if 21 unit no be seresere. I foresee your cgpa shaking. sha come and buy textbook before test commences no textbook no test.
1 kennypedia
2 Babysuccess02
3 Eniqurl
4 queenitee
5 MhizDherbee .........
Am waiting for the rest to pay for their textbooks oo
prof sir they are asking me when will COH234 hold?

class rep, tell them it's not composary to buy my text book coz' i don't need their money but just help me bring d list of those who paid for it, i know what to do.
I need no guest in this class, i want registerd students with name.
Kenny, help me to tell dem wipé d lecture hall for COH234 is still under lock by the school authority...talk to d HOD about it.
LFK456 will come up wednesday night, i will take attendance.

Babysuccess02:
am vry much prepared 4 anytin. Tnx kennypedia

as long as u ar prepared for anything...i swear u haf pass. Just come to room 107 Savannah hotel for a private exam, u need no writing materials...it will be oral and very physical.

Dotwillis1:
Following to the end!..


...where z d Lucifer's key sef? ...abubakar was birthed with it, how come it ain't on his neck anymore

pls I want a very good student of mine to help answer his question.