₦airaland Forum

ghettochild:
omotayo sulaimon
i so much want to turn this into a movie.
i told u to email me a soft copy of this so i can start to write the script...
buh u dint
email me ur num asap or u flash me now n imma call u back.. +27813991092

Sir, Seriously I don't understand you
Firstly, We had never talked or agreed on u writing a movie script on it. Secondly, I am still working on the story, yet to complete it. Thirdly, why not send me an email. Fourtly, u are not the owner of this number. Lastly, My instincts never lie, I don't trust you.

honourable356:
UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!!!

I still can't resist the urge... the temptation to ask if this is a copied work or really the writer's undisputed creative imagination.

HORROR!!!!!!!
HORROR INDEED!!!!!!

This is not a story for teenagers..
or
The faint heart...

Obviously, the story line left very little room for constructive criticism which begged the question.. "is this actually the writer's creation "??

Intriguing and mind-blowing..
Indeed,not only romantic or sex filled stories, and action filled stories sells and held one spell bound but horror stories accompanied with an extraordinary storyline and suspense does the same too with an intimidating effect.
Even the supernatural does the magic too..
It has been proven here by the writer.

I repeat one more time again if this stuffs is actually coming from the writer's head, then I won't be exaggerating if I say I just come across a writer here on nairaland who i can confidently place in the same category of these male writers.. the souloho19..the ironkurtan.. the appolux,the Eze2000, and many more I can't accurately recall..or have not discovered.

However we all need to let go of these alluring anticipation of what happen next.. may this not happen, may he or she not die etc... I know.. you also know.. the anticipation is endless so is the temptations...ignore all that for a moment and focus on making the writer an even more better writer by criticizing him fiercely constructively and pointing out the impossible and errors...

We must object to make the writer an extraordinary horror story teller.

It is possible..
Who say it is not?
Certainly not me.

Ghostwritter, I will ride with you henceforth as you lead us all to part two.

Ladies and gentlemen, I was not bored!
Were you?

Excellent job.

Sir, I really appropriate the fact that u had taken so much time to pen down ur feelings. Thank you.
Now to clear ur doubt, I personally wrote the story day by day through the help of God. I will admit that my imaginations most times are unexplainable, but it takes God's favour to pen them down. I try expand my mind and improve on my writing skill. NOTHING IS EVER IMPOSSIBLE WITH YOUR MIND TO IT.
Funny enough I don't read foreign novels neither do I watch much of foreign movies, those white people speak too much grammar. I like simplicity, I like originality.
My readers anticipation or prediction had never for ones affected my storylines and will never, suspence and surprise are the key to any good story. (Na only God fit know wetin I go write next)
You can also read my other stories such as 'The Day I Died, 'Fourty-nine shades of Me, 'Corridor of Hell, 'Home Coming, 'Red Ribbon...and others on my other threads. But you still need to read many wonderful write-ups by other writers on nairaland far better than mine, I still dey learn.
Again I really appreciate you my honourable356

Chommieblaq:
Ghostwriter we are hereeeeeee
Front page

na true o, we don enter front page...I say thank you to all my students of LFK 241, my fellow colleagues in the department, seun the vice chancellor, lalasticlala the Deputy vice chancellor, Divepen1 the HOD and the entire school authority of Uninairaland. God bless us all.

to the moderators of this forum, please why do i always get banned and my post cancelled whenever i now post stretchy write-ups on my other thread 'Corridor of Hell'? (I still get mails requesting i complete it and i am trying hard to fulfill all righteousness on my part)
and please can you help me use just small style push this thread enter front page for the first time , At least i haf tirayi.

welcoming all my colleagues and mentors, I thought it wise to invite you knowing how well I had also been invited to your various threads. I only hope you enjoy and criticizes (with common sense).
Cc:Tommyjidex1 khennykhay Johnspurgeon014 skillful01 boladex1 johluv bibi294 maryclaire1 auric forzarush mariamalheri emmyn nastynic honourable356 tusinsola missmossy atayis mobecs ayoxelee arrestdarrester mzdee01 zika19 emmotion iamloyalty princessadeola aminatope247 prettyrose daniluv2k4 funnyfun alarmednigerian bibijay123 surestg evajael hadampson stephengee12 ashatoda yommy20 chinnybaby99 yorhmienerd blissfuljeff chidozeze jamieoyel pweetywizzy mummyimadeit sikells mzztega rchilee kaytash kimberlywest silensa bleeze2 precial419 kimkardashian elzionista mickeysho phetto countrygirl ayomicome olamega78 dmssy cindymorgan petitchouchou dview001 toyin223 rachealfst yewande1234 tenderblaze cerowo dinabbella favouritetega ikombe chidozeze chisiudeh Lleigh boffinjay donkelz ebonyqueen001 wizsolzy queenjuli solomonbrown64 divepen1 lankyannie maltaleeza mikesmd queenitee samexdx debbcy misselocon meneski flakkydagirl nawtielizzie oyindawealth donteanz damynj vakjay08 : moseph(f ), stayceeL (f ),
Mirray ( m ), gentlelily (f ), francis6611 (m ),
GreatCracker , AtomElect , Escapevelocity ( m ),
Heryordele94 (m ), onometee ( f ), bilirayz( f ),
Bleeze2 , larride ( m ), titanic1 ( f ), ashatoda ,
omosefeeguaibor ( f ), omonice2010 , dazzlingisha
(f ), emeraldb16 , ayorinbolableszy ( f ), Yorubaangel
(m ), mkas101 , Vkay1 , vital , idrisbabat5 ( m ),
do4luv14 ( m ), missTreasure ( f ), Solowisy (m ),
kbitss (m ), viciati( m ), william258 , SouLPoison ( m ),
ebmama , beardedObi, tijehi( f ), Divepen1 ( m ),
IRALIFE ( f ), TessaJ ( f ), tonychim, Streetmade ( m ),
mmaluv2 ( f ), Typicool8 (m ), oyekanwahab (m ),
Silensa (m ), CwazyBlaqGal (f ), solexie (f ),
patriciakase (f ), danlucky12 , donkelz( m ),
ewa20buredi100 , rukygold001 (f ), XavierBlue (m ),
joshwonder , Heavensz (m ), Johngla (m ),
Horlardorjah( m ), matrixA, yommy20 ( f ), tobeGod ,
oluwatundey ( m ), Mafio , marve20 ,
GODSMILEFOREVER , Amaobi07 ( m ), judette (f ),
mujib1 (m ), peluhmii( f ), surddick( m ), kayjay007 ,
t1976 ( f ), DRZAY ( m ), seyilaw3 (m ), mirej( m ),
tzminaj ( f ), bfawzie ( m ), Ayooluwawamiri
datola, ayoola648 ( m ),
Charlesedet , otosa (m ), Rtopzy ( f ), saydfact( m ),
onyichick ( f ), Orlins , phemmylink ( m ), slayminder
( m ), olayinkai , debque (m ), dhesire ( m ), Kekostic
(m ), Partyrider(m ), Reekado13 , 1miccza ,
Cosmique, Benqozenero (m ), eph12 (m ),
ochukwuma15 ( m ), matthewijiogbor (m ), Xangel1 ,
akins56 (m ), dadebayo1 (m ), Michaelgreg08 ( m ),
lovicks , Amagite , GJames ( m ), mercuryeyez ,
FleexenTainment , hiambib( m ), Gangarerian ( m ),
dhope001 ( m ), xender (m ), lagbaja (m ), ahless (m ),
frcxs( m ), HonNellymike12 (m ), jovincyy10 (m ),
kenniboy , tempest01 (m ), Articul8 (m ), innobarca
( m ), shutto , drey076 (m ), femmygold, ehizos ,
fidalgo19 , dellabella, tosan200 (m ), tens4real (m ),
hayesconcept, Benz4pimp ( m ), ebeano1 , sankky,
cutepaul (m ), Akalia (m ), openmine( m ), mayDtolu
( m ), hidee20 ( m ), toseen7 , Abee79 , droid007 ,
Gaddafithe2nd (m ), iyke649 (m ), anthoi (m ),
doris4angel , OmaniPadmeHum ,
dotunbekro06 ( m ), sogodihno , dabiton ,
undisputednesta ( m ), Upoo , adeinfinit( m ),
Tobilexy , alvinjoe( m ), Jayv ( m ), shinasheff (m ),
akinbode1 ( m ), theNOISEmaker, BRAV0O ( m ),
akins177 ( m ), Silas0 ( m ), Dammytemmy (f ),
beeveepee , cutesmilez ( m ), makooma ,
Kaiser94 ( m ), mimifrancis84 , leyeakanji ( m ),
wizzyrich( m ), Osama10 ( m ), danimodd (m ),
solarbam ( m ), onemanarmy , zubynadis (m ),
An2elect2 , Lewandoski20 , chukwudi3 ( m ), tobdee ,
abelprice (m ), Boss733 , legendary11 ( m ),
Luckyomon ( m ), dreamcrew , tswaggs10 ,
stevecantrell , tobillionaire( m ), benedima1990 ( m ),
vickyluvu2 , PierreDeFermat( m ), reindeer ,
Temitope91 (f ), Sirmee (m ), Bhella5 (m ),
eduandgist, Victoriousvic( m ), kapturdfutur ,
omakay( m ), benegas (m ), pimpchi(m ), awollowo ,
PVision2020 ( m ), skyhighweb (m ), kelvincoke (m ),
jamace( m ), searay (m ), Ayzo , larychi , espn (m ),
okeyximo ( m ), mashin (m ), joshujoshu ( m ), san4u
(m ), Quamone, solomonope(m ), Simon202 ( m ),
Geosystem (m ), Drive512 ( m ), williams85 (m ),
emoa2002 ( m ), slim19 (m ), pecoprince,
kingin55 ( m ), suko19 (m ), Taywon , joel1991 ( m ),
Sleek85 , SIRKAY98 ( m ), SORTER , bejick ( m ),
seunny4lif ( m ), BekeeBuAgbara , Uwabunkonye ,
Emmanuel555 ( m ), announcement , 8stargeneral ,
ikaboy, fidet1 (m ), Saammiee( m ), lifezone247 (m ),
Ufuos1607 , Rooneyboy (m ), femi4 , afrika4real ( m ),
presidentMZ, boogie2910 , akano19 ( m ), Enoquin
(f ), Isaac1988 , stankezzy , bigma( m ), WilliEben ,
ADAMS0129 (m ), officialJP(m ), mike1994reds ,
bigfreak , abdallah9566 ( m ), idoko232 ( m ),
Trinity33 ( m ), masterplan303 ( m ), Dannyfan ( m ),
gillz (m ), sundilazo (m ), iswallker (m ),
Chukwudi4naija (m ), MxFactor (m ), magnum247 ,
Joythah (m ), mailingdgreat , beejay1207 ( m ),
abdeiz ( m ), dingbang( m ), nwosue67 ,
Honestagbons( m ), sinequanon1955 ( m ),
SycophanticGoat , tlordz ( m ), Trudy12 (f ),
ilesanmima( m ), Vilante , edlion57 ( m ),
omoplaycool(m ), Chevinsmedia, Jreserved( m ),
jman77 ( m ), dayotheone (m ), Charly17 (m ),
yhemie99 , IamaNigerianGuy (m ), Slayer2 ,
preciousmaro , Johnrake69 , Michelbare( m ),
tundelight , Danielmoore( m ), jitolala (m ),
nwadiuko1 (m ), osazsky ( m ), kakaG , Edusouls (m ),
Gracian (m ), papiforreal (m ), mekleelex200 (m ),
gregormendel, TeejayMaya ( m ), delard1285 ,
kk4real , mavenguru , Aquarius15 ( f ),
bodekom92 (m ), Tedassie (m ), webcalculator,
francisbarrack(m ), GGclef ( m ), Emarc16 ( m ),
Ufranklin92 ( m ), Lemonade01 (m ), tagtj , teflonjake
( m ), djakinwande( m ), yale001 (f ), hyxt05 ( m ),
styman , loneatar , bigblangston , Miracle4Sure ,
IamSINZ (m ), Larryfest (m ), juandalyn , narrowpathy
( m ), worldmoney ( m ), hardwerk, BOss31 ( m ),
Freddonance, adslipps, Mashrock, NAGUZY ,
fakxon ( m ), OluwasureGig, Geoxplorer , zyzxx (m ),
Hizzy ( m ), Elnino4ladies , adexfeekbabs (m ),
Abuleoshi , airamuche , silentrock (m ), Timkriss ( m ),
juitar ( m ), Cachez (m ), x2lambo (m ), reubenobi( m ),
Ustec (m ), moonberry, donestk ( m ), Durhleepee (f ),
tonyeverready (m ), Chukkyboi , eitsei (m ),
mayyorr01 ( m ), DALE917 ( f ), uchenadu (m ),
barbiecue, Nalikedis , alienvirus, Boyooosa(m ),
Bantino , Ore000 , Ighohor , crestrader (m ), Sveen ,
Psoul (m ), damiclem (m ), Bash10 (m ),
Amajerry83 (m ), MRAKBEE( m ), Dancos ,
obinoral1179 (m ), winexviv, bobolizim (m ),
ruuudboy, haske7 (f ), nochio( m ), Lessonteacher
(m ), chuks5552 , foreverkind1 , djksp( m ),
TruthNigeria (m ), GoldNiagara (m ), tunapa2009 ( m ),
jeffizy ( m ), ajiwukari ( m ), multiconcept (m ),
Smartfeek , Peera (m ), Eray (f ), HyconMojo (
welcome onboard, …please help mee invite others I can’t recall

*******
****
(sixty-two years ago)

Jazaa rushed back into his father’s room with his luggage in his hand, but he was shocked at what stood there staring back at him. He saw creature standing right above his father’s lifeless body with his blood stained hand resting on the book of secrets.
***
*******
Disclaimers: This write-up is 99.9% fiction, nothing you had read above is real...everything na lie and i don't have any mystical powers (people e-mailed saying i should tell them more of heaven and hell as if i belong there ) Every bad dream you've had relating to this story is as a result of your village people. Just forgive me if i had somehow gotten your imagination twisted. Like i had said in the beginning,it's all a rough sketch yet to be developed.
And to fellows bloggers who requested copying it, please i beg you, don't try it if you don't want your site hacked by demons

...by the way
The End of Book One...
*What horror awaits the community
*Who will now lead the people of the Islamic village
*Will the community be able to survive the wars that are yet to come
*Will Sinnar's prophesy come to past
*What other great evil still lurks within the heart of community
*Will Al-Mustapha and Fabian be freed
*What other new characters will be coming up
?
*So many thrill, evil, fear, betrayer, romance, horror and death is to come
Watch out for the Book Two of Lucifer's key by Omotayo Suleman (Ghostwritter)

MY POINT OF VIEW
God is not a man, He only shows man what needs to be seen. The greatest sin a man can ever commit in the sight of God is for him to neglect his talent which ought to be used to help develop the world. (God does not care about your going to church or mosque, all He need from you is just discover yourself and potential and make the world a better place through it)

********
****
CHAPTER TEN

…WAR COMING


Fabian opened his eyes, it was quiet and dark, and he could hear the ticking of the wall clock above his head as he lay on his bed next to Lucy who appeared fast asleep. He recollected the dream; he had been lured by ‘the Voice’ again into killing some individuals. They were sinners.



***
******

Get prepared...for the next chapter will be a WAR COMING. just stay tuned.

*******
***
In the dungeon, Jazaa dropped the corpse and sat to catch his breath; he sat on the freshly molded tomb of his late father and stared across to the other tomb which was of Amarat. It had brought back memories, bad memories and there was shielkh Bilal’s body which had just made a count into the list of his bad memories.



****
*******

I like what I had read but pls improve on ur tenses, your conversational quotes, ur suspence, reduce the unecessary vocabularies and most of all make ur story captivating with every post. Readers get bored if stories lack all the above...I dey ur back.

********
****

CHAPTER NINE

HOUSE OF JAZAA

__________________

(Sixty-two years ago)

[i]Jazaa Dingin then a young man, hurried through the narrow pass-way with a fire torch on his hand which created bright illumination as he carries the lifeless body dangling on his shoulder towards the dungeon secretly located under the mansion.

****
*******

thank you so much guys for your show of love, it was beautiful reading all the well-wishes and being celebrated but i promised i won't thank you all without an update.
#Hugs&Kisses to everyone of you.

Divepen1:
We celebrate two of our great writers.. We celebrate Thee... With glasses of wine lifted and chicken periperi in the mouth, loud music blasting and people screaming their heads off, and we celebrate you with Billions in the accounts and Ferrari ready to fall on you..

Divepen1...Edumare bless you for celebrating a brother, may you be celebrated as well.
Thanks to you all for showing me so much love, I fully appreciate. God bless you all.

*****
***
HURRAY!!
Ghostwritter is a year plus... August22.
In full acknowledge of God's favour in my life all along, I am using this wonderful medium to say a HAPPY BIRTHDAY to myself. I wish myself good health in abundance of wealth by the special grace of God.
Guys, please show some love to a brother by dropping your well wishes, it will go a long way in making my day.

******
****
HURRAY!!
Ghostwritter is a year plus... August22.
In full acknowledge of God's favour in my life all along, I am using this wonderful medium to say a HAPPY BIRTHDAY to myself. I wish myself good health in abundance of wealth by the special grace of God.
Guys, please show some love to a brother by dropping your well wishes, it will go a long way in making my day.

*******
***
HURRAY!!
Ghostwritter is a year plus... August22.
In full acknowledge of God's favour in my life all along, I am using this wonderful medium to say a HAPPY BIRTHDAY to myself. I wish myself good health in abundance of wealth by the special grace of God.
Guys, please show some love to a brother by dropping your well wishes, it will go a long way in making my day.

******
***
HURRAY!!
Ghostwritter is a year plus... August22.
In full acknowledge of God's favour in my life all along, I am using this wonderful medium to say a HAPPY BIRTHDAY to myself. I wish myself good health in abundance of wealth by the special grace of God.
Guys, please show some love to a brother by dropping your well wishes, it will go a long way in making my day.

******
***
___________

three male stewards entered the spacious room with tray of food and drinks, they spread the varieties of mouth watering dishes on the table. Mustapha sat facing his two guests Fabian and Lucy who had come visit him and also see to Fayeez well-being.
***
******

just because I was few days away on strike, una don dey derail my thread...
anyway, thanks to Rodriquez12 who nominated and recommended my write-up, Edumare bless u and same goes to those who encouraged through comments.

ghettochild:
ghostwriter, i really want u to complete this story as am planning to adapt it into a movie..
please mail me on oderindemotayo@gmail.com
or call me +27813991092

I have replied you on mail...check it.

Divepen1:
4

Lucifer's key by ghostwritter ( as reviewed by Rodriguez12)

Abubakar found a necklace on his farmland that he can use to control legions of fallen angels, he used that power for his own selfish interest and got married to d daughter(aminat) of d king he killed. In d quest to win her love he was bent on doing d unthinkable but was stopped by his only son shiekh, he was later killed by shiekh his son (aminat his second wife) being d architect of his death, his last request\wish was to cm back for revenge. His request was granted but he reincarnated as a grandson to shiekh. Will he b able to fulfill his last request? Will he be able to take revenge on his grandpa d only relative that breed him up? find out on this breathtaking story
https://www.nairaland.com/3765512/lucifers-key

thanks to Rodriguez12 for helping me out with synopsis and nomination(even though it might be confusing to new the readers).
I advice you read the story with an open mind...

******
***

CHAPTER EIGTH

THE REVIVAL

_________________

(Three years earlier…)

Three corpses were carefully laid on the floor in the large decorated room within the mansion. A medical practitioner Doctor Ali was examining the physical condition of the three lifeless bodies.


***
*****

kennypedia:
fabian a man entangled between the Web of love and power. he reincarnated himself back to life to revenge for his death only to find himself in another set of trouble. starting from the missing chapter the missing document and being the most wanted criminal after confiding in a trusted one. will power give him peace or love watch out

Class rep, I was expecting a full page from you, but anyway shaa u try even when u made it appeared like it is purely a romantic novel ...tell ur class members i will be out of school for few days maybe, we will fix a class for next week.

*******
***

CHAPTER SEVEN

DEJA VU

_________________

It was like one of those nights he had grown use to, but that night had something different in it, it was his awareness of Lucy’s presence that changed it, it made him feel heightened up but surprisingly nostalgic.
*****
*********

Side Note: Don't let religion divide us, treat everyone with love and respect and let's see ourselves as one big family, for God Almighty so love us all even though He is neither a CHRISTIAN nor a MUSLIM.

due to the fact that my data would expire this midnight (and not certain to subscribing soon) I would try rush-up and post the entire chapter seven tonight in a stretch. Don't miss it.
But while I would be away, pls try submitting my test otherwise....

Chommieblaq:
Fabian(Abubakar) the only survivor of the ghastly accident that took the lives of his parent, was brought up by his grandfather, who later sent him abroad to further his studies.
The news of his grandfather's death made him return back to Nigeria. Upon his arrival he was given a book by his grandfather's protégé. In the book he discovered scary things about himself and family that he never knew, all these are tie to the necklace he believed was given to him by his mom.
He got feed up with everything and decided to go back, his travelling documents got missing. The emergence of belzubub made his life and the life of others more difficult. The only option he has for everything to be okay is to make a deal with Lucifer; trade his soul in exchange for his loves.
But then, will Lucifer keep to his part of the deal?
What becomes the fate of Fabian?

He who sups with the devil should have a long spoon

really impressive...I love it...Kudos girl

Jane1234f:
I really don't think that the lady that visited is Lucy,it could be one of Lucifer's agent

Lol, See one of them...awon ti Mountain of Fire. but let's wait and see.

Streetmade:
ok let me drop this one.
Having survive a ghastly motor accident which claimed the life of his parents.Fabian was brought up by his grandfather.He spent majority of his adulthood in london but the death of his grandfather made him return to nigeria where he discovered some things he was oblivious of,like the book of secret,sinnar,his real identity,and lucifers key.
Fabian got fed up of the things happening around him,and decided to go back to london but couldn't find his travelling document.The interference of belzubub in his life because of lucifer's key made life difficult for fabian,he was even ready to strike a deal with lucifer in order to free his soul from hell.
The question now is ''Will Lucifer Free His Soul From Hell'' we are yet to know that.
Prof i don try my best oh

wow!
U really did more than I expected. Kudos

Rodriguez12:
Well I have to admit that u r unique, I love your style......n Am so loving ur writeup but u dey do us strongtin ooo 1)ur update day tk forever n a day for my eye 2) we way no cm sabi draft short n captivating synopsis nko ntin for us on corridor of hell 3) I still de reload D DAY I DIED asiv I won die there bro jorr do somtin....... I've bin in ghost mode for a longtym now so that I can read d ghostwritter stories clearly wit ma ghost eyes......more mb to our phone jare

Oga Rodriguez, just because of ordinary test, na so u kon dey confess all ur sins for me...ogbéni abeg carry pen make u write something...we wan know wetin dey ur head.

DaLaw22:
errrmm.. Reading your update by 2:25am has to count for something right?

of course yes, just show me something, anything crafty, I don't need to be impressed, I just want us all to have fun and be creative.

Streetmade:
So we dat can't summarise have fail the test

as long as u try then u can never fail...just a little attempt is what I want to see, I'm not expecting ur perfection.