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Damex333: the same thing i said, am here now as in am still in mainly to improve myself.

Damex333: i should have just pulled out and turn everything to dots, but i want to hear the critics to improve the "me"

Rap maestro: I'll let it go... O~K

Ishilove: I disagree. Most of the writers already had their storylines before Miss Fibre posted (I can't think of Miss Fibre's username without craving for fibre active digestive biscuit )

Ishilove: O yes, baby!! It was on repeat for most of yestermorn

Ishilove: 'Hilarious' is an understatement

repogirl: loool, you put the fear of God in them when u said that.

damexx, okay, I get you, but guys why not put in extra effort, would it be asking much if you typed it on a PC somewhere, went to a cyber cafe and uploaded? I know its just recharge cards at stake here but then its still a competition and you do want to win, don't you?

also, u're right, no ones above mistakes. Yeah, I know I've got typos in my own write UPS but there are typos u can overlook, but what I've been seeing, I'm not sure if they are spelling errors or grammatical ones. Mixing up tenses and then mispelling.....its seriously reducing the quality of your work.

Damex333: which one shouldn't be an excuse? Mistakes ish or paragraph ish?

Damex333: most of the writers of this competition are using a small graded phone like me, so paragraphing is not something you see in there kinda phones, and the wrong spellings, no one is above that, even my oga Mynd and many writers here (judges included) works sef get plenty mistakes.

repogirl: HBG, habatically, take it easy on these writers, the idea behind the competition is to find good writers from a pool of new ones. There will definitely be some poor work as most of them are doing this sort of thing for the first time. Lets encourage and in the end, let them know what they're doing wrong. I'm not an expert myself but I can feel a good story when I read one, also you know even if the beginning isn't catchy, it could pick up later, so we owe it to them to read it all.

now to writers, truthfully its seeming miss fibres story is influencing the dream stories. What's the point of talking about a dream when it has no consequence to your plot? To me its just a waste of words you coulda used in developing your character more, just saying sha.

and please whatever happened to paragraphing (don't look at my own here, I'm using a wack browser that doesn't seem to have the feature).
please, spell check, paragraphs and be true to your unique self when you write. Enjoy it, don't labour for it.

Kslib: You can call it 'an essay' 'sack letter' 'an eulogy' or 'rubbish' but if your reply is anything to go by, then i'll say "she got the message but chose to play dumb" but "hey,who cares?"
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