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Yo Menike stop speakin my name man yaw be lookin down on me. Now I be ya boi but I aint da one to be get looked down on so man memba I can rip anyone on here so dont think u can look down on me U and me r cool but Im jus sayin if u want beef I got it u wanna be cool we cool

Yo Hustler u was killin it

yo dblock not hatin man but not a lot of that rymed like one line of it did U soundin like young Jeezy a lil

Aight man thanks

what u mean mayne what should I work on comin harder wit it or somethin like comin more hardcore? what u think I should work on

whats crackin howd yaw like my last verse

Yo I see someone frontin on da hoodLoyalz well let me drop a verse
@flowhackulas

Yea homey i b spittin soomen like T.O.
and im gettin sexy love but my names not neyo
stevie wonda wassup u dont c Bro
nah we dont rock but guarantee dat we roll
hard get cheeses real thugs im a og
\hitem up trice and i aint talkin bought obie
somen like Kobe but i be passin da rock
and my rymes is like nikes coz ya know im gonna shock
rims gleamin ride fly like jordan
and im runnin through da game wit speeds like Jeff Gordon
Wayne Make it rain But J its pourin
and yea i keep scorin and da girls keep adorin
attack back gonna crack back gonna let it go
let it blow man u know dat im gon let it snow
I Speak da flame hotta den da eaths core
fake playas in da game jus askin what da turf for
On da double poppin yaw like a bubble
plus im makin mo graves then da undatakers shovel
20 lins im spittin and 20 dimes im gettin
and yaw jus paper what im shreddin and rippin


Yea HoodLoyalz

Aight B No prob I ket u check it out

yea im on here but i dont feel like battlin no more for a while i gotta work on my cd

@ SHishi and all who hatin on da HoodLoyalz
memba fake cats speakin my name
im speakin da game a.k.a flame
burnin hot smokin yaw like pot
only need one shot and i scorch u on da spot
3rd degree burns bakin tracks by da batches
I'm a forest fire u cats is jus matches
comin wit da heat da suns equivalent
somen like a dragon fire ya know im spittin it
da dough im gettin it I aint failin it
stages burnin stomach turnin because im shellin it
tracks im sellin it because mics is meltin
got a large brand and no its not elton
somethin like felton da way im passin rocks
come up on ya block glock cocked and its going to pop
somen like a balloon hittin a needle
hearts full of malevelence yea dog evil

finally u decide to ryme a little thank u

@ Shish
Everybody love my game every body love my style
I could spit fo days flow longer den da nile
I freestyle dats all I do coz my mouth blow shots somethin like a 22
im servin yaw up U can call me a waiter
and I have u withered down u jus a used eraser
U wanna front on me well homey dont try
coz i have u turnin black and blue jus like da sky
Im insane they aint no need to explain
coz My rymes is rope and u saddam huessain

One maw to destroyem

U can fire at us but homey we aint da kennedys
when im done I lam da mic its broke like my enemys
I spread da venom C jus like a cobra
boom its ova blowin up like a supernova
U pearl harbor and im japan
bomb on u cat grind ya bones in da sand
im da king of nairaland
rep wit hood and menike
winnin da tourney makin my journey to da mic
lik jack da ripper killin on dese bitches
bustin on dese snitches when my trigga finga itches
homey dont be talkin I give dese cats stitches
set da mic to flame coz my games got no glitches
look at dis man fake ass tryin to push me
Hes fake dog (Pause) Im tighter den a virgins pussy
dats straight up and down not side to side like an asians
I cant lie coz man Id die fo da bacon
c da crown dats mine fo da takin
U say u da best but U sadly mistaken

man someone tell me how paddy lo can calll dat rap half of it dont ryme

ok Big shishi taste this

jus beatin and boxin somethin like D fresh
yaw jus hatin yea coz we fresh
hulked but I aint dustin jus hustlin
my mics got wd40 so it aint rustin
sellin butter like land o lakes
dis is da land of fakes
cept fo da hoodloyalz we reign in da land of cakes
yea lets confirm coz B see I got dat sherm
and i have yaw bitches eatin dem words jus like a bookworm
i got dat key da dough im gon lock it down
bricks like a house and yaws im gonna knock it down
Im a g would serve grams in da brahms
havin ladies up all night like exams

wats good ya bois back da One and only J-Nice


fans feelin da beat
want to talk shit ya be feelin da heat
7 days of da week
da street going to speak
mofuckas is gunnin I have u runnin like a creek
holdin it down so u callin me gravity
every bitch in da thang hear my name want to have me
I'm sellin da rocks and bouldas slangin da cola
im white but i got mo color den crayola
got yaw key if u got da benjis
because I'm lookin fresh up in my benz c
u don't like me my ass unda da mistletoe
jus hope u aint one them dudes I send a missle fo

cheeaaaaaa I'm back and better
comin fo da cheater
i've improved my spit from every line to every letta

wassup holla at ya boi J-Nice Da Lyrical Assasain

wats good ya bois back da One and only J-Nice


fans feelin da beat
wanna talk shit ya be feelin da heat
7 days of da week
da street gonna speak
mofuckas is gunnin I have u runnin like a creek
holdin it down so u callin me gravity
every bitch in da thang hear my name wanna have me
Im sellin da rocks and bouldas slangin da cola
im white but i got mo color den crayola
got yaw key if u got da benjis
coz Im lookin fresh up in my benz c
u dont like me my ass unda da mistletoe
jus hope u aint one dem dudes I send a missle fo

cheeaaaaaa Im back and better
comin fo da cheater
i've improved my spit from every line to every letta

wassup holla at ya boi J-Nice Da Lyrical Assasain

Wassup yaw I jus got a studio or found one actually where im gonna go make a cd man im pumped up u got any advice or anything I could use it so whatever HOODLOYALZ! Till I Die!

Thanks bro anyways nah I dont think they still in style

anyone else got advice. I really appreciate everyones advice drop some it ya got some

@ Tianshie Thanks bro I really think Ya rymes is hot too I dont wanna admit it I dont know bought ahyone else on ya squad no offense to them. but u is nice though

@jcock
I've got hoodboi's pic with him sittin in a white plastic chair.

@ Tianshie prove it then post this pic u say u have

Ok cool glad u was playin anyways thr max raps against your opponent is 5 least is 1

I like dallas but I think The chargers will win Or the Bears Maybe Saints or colts

@ Gbade
Sorry Bro Stay strong

Who Do yaw think gon make it to da superbowl and who do you think will win

New tourney Come join

someone come join my tourney its an individual one

Wassup im startin a new rap tourney Its to see who is the best on Nairaland Last time tianshie was crowned King

Rules:
1. No talkin bought mommas
2. NO posting raps after your time has expired
3.Rymes cant be no longer than 20 lines


We gon need some judges so if u wanna be a judge let me know
also we are gonna have a poll The judging will be similar to the group tourney judging
If u wanna be entered let me know

OK here is my rymes tell me which ones you like da most and what I should work on then rate me overall as a rapper 1- 10 Thanks holla

@ metafuckas
Hoodloyalz crew real cats and real rappas
u know how we do jus killl cats and kill rappas
we some ill rappas not touch and feel rappas
want to talk junk ya fall victim to da steel clappa
Yaw whack cats aint tochin a soul
I burn yaw up im da furnace yaw da coal
u keep dissin but ya bullets keep missin
and u keep tryin and b u jus keep missin
Yea I be trippin yea B jus 9 clinchin
yea man im rich yea b jus dime pinchin
theres talk about us when theres talk of da game
u talkin bought us when u talkin bought fame
because I'm enflamed like one da devils gnomes
everythings burnin B except fpr my throne
we hold da crown its HoodLoyalz kingdom
Dey in da backgroung tryin to hide but i seenem
I'm a HooDloyalz soldier ready to brow dey brain
HLoyal Advocate man this crew is insane
If Rap was rome wed be ceasar
and if we talkin bought ice den id be a freezer
when we talkin bought hoes u know im da pleaser
and I sellin More albumns den drug dealers do reefer
This is hoodloyalz territory our domain
and so U know we gon reign longer den a hurricane






U Got Mo dots on u den a giraffe
take aim and spit more lines den a graph
Hold ya ears c yea u feel my wrath
Who won? now lets all do da math
I'm a algebric eqaution hes kindergarten addition
dese people is hatin tryin to take up on my mission
Dese people wishin dey could defeat
this man in adolescence that aint never been beat
I leave a hole in ya heart an evalastin impression
And i have u people fallin like da stocks in da depression
every thing I spit u know I spit literally
because B u know I got more cheese then freakin Italy
I undastand why u talkin why u be hatin me
because U know I got more dough then a bakery
and i Cant be fakin man I gotta spit real
got more Ice on my neck den in ya grill
and im so real im so ill wit a gun* hear gun cock in back ground*
I Got 99 problems but this Bit$$ aint one
* here gun shots*

@ Tianshie
U out like a dyin flame please u is da dyin flame
My spit put u out and cool down ya game
u started as a spark and now u jus ashes
I'm a forest fire and da rest is jus matches
U aint a match homey U is nothin
u da smallest flame in da game u jus fromtin
man u couldnt set A barn wit hay to flames
u couldnt burn toilet paper ya games to lame
couldnt melt a candle couldnt make it wax
when im meltin da mic and everyone who attacks
Man im so syk that dey callin me young pac
and yea u goin down like ya names young jok
it wont stop so don't sweat da tech
have pieces of u ever where like u a car in a wreck
Ive been In da game for ever ruled da world for a century
and I spit more bars then da state penetentury
im 6 inches away and im still out ya reach
because I keep da mic stainless like I washed it with bleach
I don't herem speakin I guess they plead the fifth
and he make more attempts to run then Emmit smith


Enough playin and enough of this sayin
time to start sprayin yea time to start slayin
I'm gettin laid ya girls legs im spreadin
and I got more cake then a mothafu$$in weddin
got more cheese then a motha fu$$in burger
people talk wit ease and ya c dey get murdered
don't play I get hoes every day
like da x and y axis deygo every way
okay and u fake gs tryin to faze me
keep on talkin u be pushin up daisys
wipe my feet on u like a rug step on u like a bug
I aint puttin words in ya mouth nah man jus slugs
I don't need a knife or a gat don't even need a pen
jus need my freestyles to guarantee a win


I can make it syk if I ryme or I hum
Homey I beat u like u was a fu$$in drum
I don't stop heart pains no I aint no tum
I jus start aches blow da brakes off this bum
Sink u like the titantic erybody trip and panic
because U still da second largest like u was the atlantic
Gettin all this money cats call me a billionaire
and yea im ridin dirty like my name was chamillionaire
I'm da sykest in da game and all u cats c why
call this man frodo because like peach hes nehi
I'm puttin u down mollify u like lotion
I spit so much man I could make a sixth ocean
my glock speak loud and proud so im a slaughter hoes
and I spray more then a motha Fu$$in water hose
Yea I be gettin all da hoes so dey call me J-Nice
and this man be grabbin more balls den Fu$$in J rice
I keep on blowin up like a supernova
and I got more venom den a fu$$in king cobra
when it comes to talkin homeboy im da husher
and I let my sh$$ burn like I was fu$$in usher
and when u lookin through my cell homey u gon get shook
because I got more digits in my contacts then a phone book
So u get head well bit$$ I get more head
and my game stay bigga then ya mothafu$$in forehead
feel u wit dread and i will feel u wit lead
feel da streets wit heat even till da beat bled
even ya seat said homey sit down
this cat got u beat wit da heat from motown
Me without a mic is like a beat without a snare
comin wit a flow so inventive and rare
I'm a freestylist and a poet off da top and a writer
either way I Have u passin da mic jus like a cipher
have u sayin no I don't want to go I'm through
haha now u witness what J-Nice da Lyrical Assasain can do


yo yo as soon as he wake up
this fool put on makeup
rippin cats poppin cats droppin cats who fake up
Who I take up anyone I please
and jus like a mouse homey all I want that cheese
don't u c homeboy im a g
been doin this Sh$$ $ince da age of three
Dont mess wit me I got a Lyrical sword
and I'm super bowl Mvp like hines ward
To all them bitches and all them freakin hatas man
I soar like jordan and get hoes like chamberlain
aint no playin b c aint no playin me
keep on talkin shit den u know im gon be sprayin b
haha weak bit$$ lil snitch paddy hoe
got ya girl im my crib have her sayin daddy o
sayin daddy slow because u do it so well
I stroke so mean man i make her shit swell
Yall can call me names like white bitch and cracker
but ya shit cost less den a kfc snacker
betta yet da wrapper u aint worth that bit
Ya mom cost a penny and she aint worth that shit
wastin time not worth da clit
tell her go to school and I might think about a hit


Call me mr. clean because im fresh like soap
and call me crack slanger because i always got that dope
no joke and I aint talkin bought no coke
I'm jus talkin bought pimpin ya kno im rippin I hope
and I'm da # 1 shampoo because im da best bet
think clear listen hear as I cruise like a jet
and keepem off so dey don't dirty da scene i set
hold up this soap opera that is dope aint ova yet
because ill freshen up da place like I was febreeze
a spray a spit and da company I will please
set da stage grab ya swords ready for war
ya lyrics betta be tight because da best whatll soar
What u here for u strapped wit a dagger
and we rock great swords that is longer den a ladder
and sharp as could be jus like a hornets stinger
a real bell ringer ready to fell any singer
who step in da midst of battle without some protection
so please get some lessons get strapped or be regrettin

Can Anyone give me some advice on my rymes Yaw have seen me spit what should I work on

@ Kaydee thanks for your advice

Hey can ayone else give me advice every one has seen me rap so tell me what u thik I should work on please help me out I need to improve but I need to know how

Hey who hoodloyalz battling now I know yaw said we lost but who else can we battle.  Maybe we could have a battle for third place


@ Judges I would like you to judge my verse so I can know what I need to work on