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listen nosa u r stupid anyone with a brain would understand that i said killin erything in my path u notice how in the line before it was talkin bought tornadoes its sayin like a tornado im killin erything in my path
and destroy jus like a tornado no way to enjoy my wrath meanin no way u could be happy afta im through wit u
homey u need to go back to school u cant even undastand simple mmetaphors and similies

I repeated my lines on caramellounge because i was too bored to make up some more but any ways u aint worth any new rymes

yo 100 bars tell me whats good and bad bought my verse


and yo judges judge my rymes too

Someone tell me how my rymes is whack judges what did I do wrong if I mso whack like this Gbade punk says then what did I do wrong Please tell me

tell me then Gbade how was that whack I done ripped ya A$$ dont make me do it again someone tell me how dats whack

@ phenom
Yo its J-Nice and all yaw know me
im bought to kill phenom but I'm going to do it slowly
Yo not everybody know that hoe phenom
bitch think he syk but he got no venom
and see im da one u don't want to meet in da street
and im da one who gon make u meet defeat
u don't believe me well bitch face da facts
I have ya momma screamin befo she reach her climax
So bitch rymeback if u want to ryme back
u still get beat even if u going to rymeback
see its a prime fact that i hold da crown
and everynight its young joc so bitch its goin down
u fuckin clown I aint no joke
im going to scatter ya pieces and leave ya a$$ for broke
Hoodboi ripped u so will I
boi in da hood to good to die
Oh my J-Nice is back again
back for some more killin and assasainin
Lyrically and literally at da same time
and I rip two niggas wit da same ryme
kill two birds jus wit da same stone
and kill two rappas jus wit da same song
u all alone nobody by ya side
and I'm going to kill u fareal by da inside
Yo let me help u out which way u come in
leave u weak so please don't come back again
u started on da bottom its been downhill eversince
I'm attackin from every angle so u got no defense
U nothin but a gay a straight anal invader
A bitch A snitch and a mothaFu##in hater
so remeba my rymes i kno u can't forget
and think don't be a fool get a clue for u spit
piece of shit I own this fu$$in town
I'm da mothafu$$in king wit da mothafu$$in crown
so shut ya mouth for i shut it for u
I don't even listen to ya shit I ignore u
every syllable I spit is a disaster
Like a twister i keep spinnin faster and faster
and keep on killin anything in my path
and destroy no way to enjoy my wrath
my hearts cold cooler then da metal of da mic
and hear let me get u a lil bit u might like
got ya moms seven digits if I ever want to hit it
I got ya throat so now im going to slit it
goodnight u out homey this is the end
Wrap up pack up for I rip u again
this is how to rip a bit$4 how to rip a coward
Punchlines da munchline now your devoward


Game over homey u have been defeated

@ haters  
I'm a hoodloyals rep  hoodloyals yes
hoodloyals make ya throat hurt like strep
niggas can yap and say dat we no more
but what u sayin now u lil  bit$$ a$$ LovePeddler
mothaFu$$ing bitch u kno da deal
u want to talk shit den ya a$$ get killed
im so damn real so why u hatin
I make da world hotter den hell wit satan
No playin lil nigga jus cap cap plat
jus like a sumo wrestler hell yea im phat
plat plat ping stick my fingaz in da air
#1 bad wit a gun so be aware
im a mothafu$$ing genius Sharper than nails
brighter then da sun and im hotta den hell
My rymes prevail any shot u throw at me
I throw back at u because im so dang nasty
I do like captain crunch and peace and I punch
I'm like a bully and that crown is like ya lunch!!!

Bitch I'm takin It !!!!!!!!!

HOODLOYALZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anybody want some come get some

Sleek U whack never gon change
and nigga hit back if u think u got range

Judges what u think bought dese lines

oh yeah and flomirakulaz u aaight but hoodloyalz still on top homey

Yo Hoodboi u aint da only one reppin
@ Hoodboi Im back homey im in dis jus tell me who to rip

Yo somebody real gotta join no fakes but if u aaight try out

Yo Phenom Nice verse

Im startin A new crew yaw so If u are real den come try out

Okay heres how dis goes jus spit a verse if I like u u in

Yo Menike we got to many people on our squad so Ill start my own group

OKay anibo2 lets go then u wanna battle then lets battle u gon be the next victim of the Lyrical Assasain

yo when dis tourney startin off

Yo Dblcok nice verse coz dat wwas hot

@ Abdulla come on then Punk nuck if u buck fool do somethin if u so syk

yo kaydee dat was pretty hot

Yo Dblock syk need al il work but he got good organization and knows how to ryme

2Pac
Biggie
Jay-Z
Eminem
Rakim
Snoop Dogg
Dr. Dre
G-Unit
Dmx
Method Man
Ludacris
Kanye west
T.I. ( U cant say he aint syk he always got hits)

Yo thanks for writing this you have inspired me to change da world of rap from cussin fightin drugs and killin to godliness Its hard though coz u wanna make it so bad but i vow to stay loyal to god while still remainin loyal to the game I am basically gonna be like t-bone the gospel rapper from callifornia

Yo Myspace people add me My Name is J-Nice

spit a verse den

Haha nigga u so funny im 13 bought to be 14 nigga u dont know me U probably some scrawny ass nerd

Me im a g always been i am a baller at anything football basketball baseball track oneday imma be rich off what I do and u probably some poor dude who can only afford oodles and noodles man I scored two touchdowns and a two point conversion in my football game yesterday u probably aint scored a point in ya life so ont look down on me piece of trash

HOODLOYALs gonna woop errbody no doubt Tianshie can talk all dat nigga want but we all know who da best is and dats da Hoodloyals

@ Tianshie
talk all u want while u can coz when im through wit u u gon be so embarrased u jus quit comin on

HOODLOYALS Till I Die Niggas!!!!!!!!!

nilla ice

wow Shishi dat was da longest and whackest verse ive ever seen
dat was terrible i neva thought u was dat good I only stuck up for u coz we was cool but know we not so ima speak da truth

Tianshie da source didnt talk to u aint nobody fans of u whack punk

@ Tianshie
Yo ef u Tianshie id rip u any day u aint no king nigga yea im white but so is Eminem so is paulwall talk bought my race if u want I dont care ill take care of u in da tournament

Yo judges u need to pay attention to ryme scheme, flow and actually rymin some these cats dont even ryme and no votin for ya friends like the first everyone knows tianshie is whack

anyways hoodloyals gon win

Yo anyways time for a freestyle

Time for me to show what my flow can do
drop da baretta aks and glocks too
grab up da mic and start to flow
and when its ya turn u to afraid to go
to all my enemys haters and foes
any of my contenders all who oppose
soon u will feel da wrath of reality
coz all i got to show is flow and brutality



well pops said gotta get off holla

Yo i saw earlier back howsomeone saide my boi Menike white well Im white and ill rip any u fools who wanna try

Yo do i see a new tourney cmin up if so im in