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while we are all waiting for the calender. Read my first on nairaland. Ave just started the story. I need your view to keep me going www.nairaland.com/1999112/threading-right-path |
*********** Allahu Akbar Allahu Akbar... Bimpe woke up to the call of the adhan. She forgot to set up the alarm before she went to bed the night before. Even if she forgot her alarm, she still have the muslim folks to rely on. Part of the reasons she loved staying on the mainland. She took her bath, dressed up, did her make-up and was looking at the mirror for a last assessment of herself. Looking at her beautiful oval face, sexy brown eyes, small button nose and pouted lips. She was wearing a tight fitted green Polkadot cotton shirt and a lucky charlie skinny pants fitting her full perky breast, tone thin legs, average and tight behind. Showing all the curves in the right places. She could bet she looked 18 shinning her pearl white teeth at the mirror. Looking 5 years younger, she smiled and made her way to the dinning table. Rose, her maid, had already served her breakfast. She ate, got in the car and drove off to work. While Bimpe was driving to work, she mistakenly splashed water on a pedestrian. She was lucky it splashed on only one person. She parked her car, got down to apologise to the man because his cloth looked really messed up. As she was walking up to him, she noticed his very handsome face, sexy eyes, broad nose and pink lips. She loved the way he shaped his teddy with his beard, it looked so sexy. Looking at his tall masculine body, she concluded that he should be 6"1 and should be in his late twenties. "Are you blind? Didn't you see that the place was flooded? Aren't you suppose to slow down?" the man screamed at her. She couldn't say anything as she was shocked that such a handsome man could be so rude. "See as this one they look me like zombie", he said. "Errm...I'm...I'm sssorry", she stammered. He looked at her, shook his head and walked away. She stared at him as he walked away and got in her car after he was no longer in sight, still surprised at his reaction. "Its really true that looks do deceive", she said to herself and drove off. |
pelumiakinboye:tanx for d correction |
Jamzig1:u beta tlk nw. Wats ur sincere opinion? |
Pls comment as that will encourage me |
CHAPTER ONE It was early in the morning and still dark when Tola was woken up by a persistent noise from his backyard. "Iwo omo osi omo oloriburuku yi awon ale baba e lo ma pa ko n se emi... (you this unfortunate child. It is your father's concubines that you will kill and not me...)" Iya Tunde the lousy neighbour is at it again. She's always like that whenever she had a fight with her husband. Too bad her children are always the recipient of her anger. Tola opened his eyes and managed to sit up on his bed. He looked up at the wall clock; it was just a few minutes shy away from 5am. Uh...Tola sighed, remembering the events of the last couple of weeks. He had come home from one of his unsuccessful job hunting and his step-mum welcomed him by hurling curses on him and saying all sorts of abusive words as usual. He was infuriated by this and told her to shut her mouth. "Shut your mouth! Or else I will..." Or else you will what? He heard a voice say. He looked up only to see his step brother Bayo, staring at him with a blood shot eyes. "Or else you will what?! You are still here in your father's house, when your mates are busy making huge money and fending for their fa..." His brother was lying helplessly on the floor. That was when it dawned on him that he had hit him. "Yeh! Mo ku o! Tola ti pa mi lomo o! (I'm dead! Tola has killed my son!)", Iya Bayo was shouting. He quickly rushed his brother to the nearest hospital. While in the hospital, he received a call that his father had an heart attack. He became more devasted and felt like his head was going to explode. Only for him to find out that his step mum had called his dad that he had killed Bayo which lead to his heart attack. He was brought back to the present by a mosquito perching on his cheek. Towai! He hit his cheek so hard. He wasn't even able to kill the mosquito, Tola hissed. He got up from the bed so as to prepare for his interview by 8am that morning . He had to be very fast so as to beat the traffic and not be late for his interview. He had found out about the job on a website where he pasted his cv. He did the aptitude test and was called up for an interview. Tola was ready by 6am. He went to the kitchen to check whether there was something to eat. He met his step mum there and she started with her abuses again. He stormed angrily out of the house. He must make it by any means, any way na way, Tola said to himself |
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I have been a nairalander for couple of months now. I'm a very good fan of the literature section. Ave read a lot of great stories. So, I thot it'll would be nice to drop mine here. This is my first work and I'll appreciate corrections and encouragement from readers |
assistant boyfriend |
Jamzig1:jamzig i sight u |
ethereal: ethereal: |
weldone tiff. Tanx 4 finding tym 2 update. I want to be lyk u when i grow up |
Jamzig1:lolx...me sef dey go s.a. Na joburg sure pass o |
ride on repogirl. Ure a really gud writer |
AudreyTimms:really? 3 kids? Wow! AudreyTimms:really? 3 kids? Wow! |
Ayomidric:ah ah ah...lmao. Chai! Diaris God. All of u dat are shairing blood *in m.i's voice* |
dis forkadict sef. U claim sm1 is shwing irresponsibility. Ave bin able 2 see hw responsible u are, aving issues with evwibodi on d thread. Na ova sabi dey wori u |
safarigirl:tanx 4 d update. Buh pls let it be consistent |
hbd pelucosten. Wullnp |
peluscoten:ehn ehn...when will d quiz commence. Time |
ure doing a great job tiffany. Buh na 'a man to call her own' me i like pass. Hp dis decietful couple go sweet pass d odas sha. Buh tiff dis updates are too small nw nd deyre nt even consistent. Ure starving of updates o. Abeg update 2nite |
I manage to keep going got myself back up again/ got to the place got to the fame / hurray! Success here I come / i was very happy enjoying the fun / not until it hit me like a thief in the night/ it took away my happiness it took away my joy/ broken marriage as if that wasnt enough... |
ride on repogirl. Ure a really gud writer
