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Hehehe, Kitnah you will release album soon o

Now, I hope Dave would prove his rap lines

kaboninc:
If you say so...

Thanks!

The angels said I should say hi to you!

Looking forward to the next episode/update/chapter (all join)

Help me holla at the angels too o, lol.

Many thanks to you, I could finally figure out a way to get it together even if it meant fast-tracking a part and I hope to post it anytime now.

So I hope you'd be around to criticize me again

kaboninc:
You being a witness still doesn't make it apply to the 'average' Nigerian.

Well, let me suspend my criticism since we're viewing his character from Deola's angle.

Let the story continue and I hope I don't in any way try to influence your storyline.

Forgive me if I do!

Nah, actually I needed that. It was a big part of the block I'm having, so you're definitely heaven sent . Lemme try typing again now.

fam's right, kitnah. You need to put some corrective updates.
And I trust you can pull that through.

Just try to explain the whole rape incident and involve Martins more too if he's responsible.

Keep em coming, I got your back

kaboninc:
Hmmmm

That's a general statement.

And it should cut across all races.

Still I disagree with you.

But for your story, well its your own creation.

Moreover, I think it should be the Nigerian women.

Even you story never gave any hint of the Nigerian man (Tolu) having some weird character, rather it came as a result of his mum's stand.

So his true colour was never changed!

Yeah, it cuts across all races but since it's what I had been a witness to, I'm certainly going to point out how he changed. Though not entirely since we're still viewing from Deola's angle for now.

I must have punched that Mark within my imaginations like a thousand times already and Tina's trying very much by still managing a smile for him. If it were me ehn........

That Clara, God is still bigger than her so I'm not so scared for Chris. He just has to be as smart as he always has been.

jezuzboi:
A very big congratulations to you for making the front page with this nice piece.
It's a very good sight to behold and a sweet memory to hold unto.
Kudos!

Hmmm, thank you one and only boy of Jesus.

harjibolar10:
When everybody is congratulating you, make me too gan say my own.. .
Congratulations namesake me to sure
Even if ah no know what it take for a story to 'make front page' congratulation once again

Namesake mi, you are one funny guy o. Thanks anyways

VanTee20:
Congrats on making frontpage, Kizzykeziah. It sure is richly deserved.
Thanks to the mod(s) that did the needful.

Thanks, dear mentor

tizz04:
*dancing shoki# na god win xo happy dis dotun of a guy aint d fada

You really got me laughing

D9ty7:
Writers block they call it. It happens, but don't let that discourage you. Cool off for a while and you'll be good to continue, more refreshed with fresher ideas.
By the way, you are doing a very good job here.

Boss, thank you sir

stuff46:
You will get over it, you just need time to cool off.
You always doing us proud with this work, more MB to your phone.

I'm definitely going to cool off and I will need the MB for my phone too.

tescoleps:
Don't be scared dear, i think its called writer's block. It happens at times.. Maybe u'r distracted or stressed or sumtin. Its only temporary....

Yeah, you got it right. I pray too o...

SexySapphire:
Babe, I'm here already. I trust this one is also going to make a whole lot of sense. Lemme goan read it, will be back to comment properly.
Now done reading and I'm impressed with the way you started. Well done. I think the problem is writer's block, just take ur time and it will come to u in time.
Modified

I'm really happy that you're here now

kaboninc:
Really

Am following you ohhhh.

Beautiful story by the way and sorry about the block. You'll get around it.

Yeah, really. 80% of them are like that and it's just too bad

I think I'm stressed up a little. Got a lot on my mind but I'd get over it very very soon if I can keep with the ten-hour daily sleep I started yesterday, lol.
And with you guys there, I'm definitely going to be over it sooner than later.

VanTee20:
Lol. All of the above and more happened. That day was just a forgetable one.

When is yours?

9th on Thurs and I hope you would type another update by then .

Ahem.....we've got a little problem here guys. I don't know what it's called but I can't type a thing since yesterday and I swear I don't understand myself.
I tried again just now and there is simply nothing to put down. I just played around with the keypad of my phone and......

Ogas at the top and everyone, please help o. I don't know who I've offended that is punishing me like this eh

And I know what to write, only that it's not coming off my thumbs. Would be glad if anyone can decipher what's wrong and any possible solution.


For now, I'm just going to sleep.

VanTee20:
Lol, thanks.

You are most welcome. It feels greater being your mentor .

Honestly, it wasn't. . . .

Aww.... Didn't the cake arrive or was the wine delivered late? Or your brother also turned it into 'birthnight' ??

D9ty7:
Good job Kizzykeziah and a perfect way to draw the curtain on a story.
And congrats on making the frontpage too.

Yeah, thanks boss

repogirl:
Congrats Kizzykeziah on making FP......


Mods on duty, thanks much Also.

I saw that a little while back too. That's many thanks to you and others that endorsed it too.

Mods on duty, thank you guys too o

jjagz sir, your space would definitely occupy an estate
And I sort of skipped the Bimbola part, could make another storyline just like you said.

Adadinmaa:
Am going to call you Kizzysleek. Keep it rolling. Nice work.

I like the name . Thanks, ma'am.

kitnah:
Congrats gf!!!

The sky is our starting point

Yeah, thanks. Just saw it a while ago too.
And the sky is definitely our starting point, you and me both, gf

Equalizer:
Following.. Thumbs up to the writer.. we do have great writers here..

Thank you, sir.

D9ty7:
No dey use that 'boss' word for me. Kai! I go vex o.
By the way, I just hope Buhari gets to read that 'boss' part, I am sure he'll invite you to Aso villa by May 29th to punish you for calling a small boy like d9ty7 a boss.
And I agree with all you said. -kitnah, take note.
I don't like Ivy as well, which kind girl is that?

Hehehe, don't worry. Osinbajo will bail me out .
And Ivy is probably 'mami water', lol.

I have to confess that I'm just reading up today and you've been doing pretty good. Moreover, you've also got D9ty7, a boss indeed, to correct you. I understand how much of a relief that can get, believe me.

So I don't like Ivy and don't ask me why and I oddly like that Martins, don't ask me why either.
And doesn't Ivy have a family that checks on her, especially her father who obviously brought her into the company?
I'm definitely going to be following you like....till.....


I hope it isn't too late to 'wash' your phone ( I remember how happy I was when I also got mine )



P.S; Wishing you the best in your upcoming putme. Just try to finish this before you get busy. Yours truly, me

How many months has it been and you didn't lose touch? You're one fireball, I tell you

Thanks for the update and thanks for the mention too. It feels really great to be your student


And hope your birthday was fun?

adegwurulez:
If you notice, that update was rushed. I wasn't comfortable typing it, especially that killing part.

Thought as much. I would have closed my eyes tight if that was a movie or better still ran under a blanket

---Chapter three---


" When will Tolu be back?" Tayo asked Deola glancing at the clock. He had been around for nearly two hours expecting his friend to be at home since it was Sunday but now he wasn't sure he would meet his friend during his visit to Lagos. He was returning to Ibadan that evening and hoped to see Tolu before he left.

Deola simply shrugged as she cleared the plates she had served him in, " I don't know," she said and went into the kitchen.

" Why? Did he go somewhere far?" He asked again surprised by her tone a little.

" I really don't know," Deola told him as she returned to the living room and sat on the sofa opposite him.

" How is that possible? He didn't tell you when he would be back? I need to see him before I leave for Ibadan," Tayo continued unaware of what was ensuing in the family.

" Call him and ask where he is," Deola suggested standing up to slap Niyi's hand really hard as he went to the wall socket tugging at wires.
Niyi quickly looked up about to cry but held his lips seeing his mum's expression. Even the kid knew when to shut up especially with his sweet mum's new attitude.

" You didn't have to hit him that hard," Tayo said noticing her different attitude.
" If he gets electrocuted, then I'll become the irresponsible mother. I'd rather slap him hard now," She simply told him.

" Easy, Deola. What is up?" Tayo was finally convinced something was wrong.

" Nothing," she replied curtly. Tayo was Tolu's friend and they were obviously going to be made of the same feathers. No use telling him his friend was a jerk.

" I think I know you well enough to notice when something is going wrong. You mind telling me?" He sat up and clasped his hands ready to listen.

" I've told you everything is fine. And don't you think you should leave early if you want to make it to Bodija before dark. It's already 3p.m." Deola started hoping to get rid of him. None of them could be trustworthy. All her other friends had stopped coming since Tolu lost his job the other time and might probably think of returning now that he was more comfortable much to her own discomfort. She wasn't ready to trust any one of them especially if they had anything to do with her husband.

Tayo smiled, " You want to get rid of me? Well, I don't plan on leaving till you let me on what is going on," he stated as Deola sighed and shook her head.

Today is VanTee20's birthday and Kitnah's too. Two April babies in the house So happy, happy, happy birthday!

repogirl:
Mods, ishilove and humbledbygrace, this is a complete story and it's FrontPage material..... so.... you know nah....

kizzy, well done, I'm so glad you completed it, you rock girl! I see you have even started a new story, keep it up! I pray your stash of creative juice keep flowing freely.

Amen o and thanks for the endorsement
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you and THANK YOU!