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happy birthday wale, wen was dat? its gud u are back.

hello evry1

hey nilla,tnz for reminding me. the title is A TOUCH TO THE DARK
tnx 4 appreciating it

i can't see the stars anymore in pose
to remind me of the sparklin moments
shared in mutual ecstasy
now wid a big width of apathy
seems they are all aware of the tension
that tends to seize the love we once shared in relaxation

i can't think of the actual thing that needs a trace
all i know is that things went out of place
you avoid me like plague
conversation become vague
and the air between us is swayed
like the bond has been cut wid a wedged blade

i can't seem to get your attention for once
not with the look u now wear on your face
like it has ever been part of you
you hurt me, u hurt yourself too
though i don't knw who is more hurt really
but i guess its me

i can now relax. hw u all? am cool whiteboy. scorpio tell wale to get well soon plz, cos we are all missin him. arent we, guys?

i hope wale gets well soon. besides, somegirl is no were to be found too.

i thot that too whiteboy, too long.but it wudnt be comprehended if its shortened so i guess i just leave it that way. thanx scorpio, am glad u love it. thanx all, u are pillars of encouragement.u guys are not hitting in poems, wats up?and where d heck is wale gone to?scorpio i thot u were going to fix that

c this

When i realize how he has suffered
When i realize what he has passed through
Even acknowledging what was at stake
He still died for my sins
Oh! how i have flawed
And made myself ungrateful
Even nailing him on the cross a second time
With my numerous shortcomings
He still calls me to repentance
And opens wide His arms to cuddle me
And accepts me into His fold
Whenever i overcome my transgressions

its free verse.watdya think?

am rigth here guys. but where are d others? scrpio, hw u gonna fix wale? here's d finishing part of the poem 'devils vice. u think its so long? tell me wat u think.

……………………………. doom!

The fire flaring up to frighten me more
This reminded me of hell
Where I was sure I was going
For killing my sister and trying to commit suicide
What will God do to me, I wondered.
Smack me and ground me like my parents would have done?
That would only be if He would agree to see me.
That reminded me

What would my parents be doing?
At this moment am being held hostage
By some smelly creatures
Probably been hungry for three days
They would have reported to the cops
To be on the look out for my sister and I
Missing children would be the headline of the news
What irony, I thought

I dozed off
I saw my sister all dressed in white
Beckoning me to come
I couldn’t get to her as much as I tried
Till the breeze wheezed her off and I was left standing
Then she came again
This time with a whip looking angry indeed
As she moved towards me owning a wicked smirk
I shouted as she reached for me

Which must have stirred my captors too
Because they all stared and groaned at me
Then I think they remembered
I was suppose to be their meal
Because they all sprang up
Then one moved towards me
Taking the knife I had earlier chosen
As the others watched losing patience

Then the knife began to descend with the raised hand
As I watched, my eyes popping out off their socket
Sweating my gland out
Agrhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…grh…grh

Just then I opened my eyes and heard the tapping of rain
Probably the water above
As I awaited the blood to gush out of my throat
Then I felt a soft spot under me, which made me turn
I felt a skin beside me
I jumped up thinking it was the monster
Oh no! It couldn’t be……… a ghost?
Alas! it was the body of my sister
Breathing in fact!
Then it struck me she was alive.
I looked up and saw the familiar ceilings
Breathing in the familiar scent.
Then it dawned on me.

I have been dreaming!!!
Oh what a dream!
I felt my throat for the feel of blood to reassure myself
Not there after all
Wow! That was a narrow escape, I thought
As I went back to sleep wrapping my sister around me
It’s going to be a long night, I thought
Only to hear my mum’s voice calling
“Arvee, it’s time to wake up”,
OH NO, NOT THAT!

oh mine!!!
thats so cooool whiteboy
its really splendid. i love it

@somegirl, i get wat u mean. it can get dat way. but its just imagination, never really happened. get some grip.

where's wale99 gone, cant c his recent posts.
scorpio, wer are u too?
want u guys back on track now!!!!!!!!!!!

hey evry1, here's d continuation, wat do u think? its titled devil's vice


I turned white and began to crumble

Waking up to a faint sound from afar

I realized what I had done

I had sent my only sister to her early grave!

It dawned on me suddenly

Then an idea struck me like gold

I ought to do same thing to my self


I moved towards the track and slept on it

Another train was moving closer

I felt strong but jumped off the track

When it almost got to me


Then I remembered the main road

I opted for that and walked there

I stood still in the middle eyes closed

But to my terror and surprise

The car stopped,

Blaring its horn at me

I was disappointed as I walked home


Then I came near the river

Just before I got home

I brightened up and went towards it,


I suddenly found myself at the bottom

Not knowing how I jumped in

I looked around to see I was surrounded

By savage-looking monsters

Looking keenly at me hungrily

I felt sick and dizzy


Watching with terror as I saw one of them

Point at something,

My heart immediately jumped into my mouth


There were sharp murdering knives

Arranged in all sizes

I was asked to choose

My own messenger of death

I was then tied to a slate

Shivering as I watched them smack their

Bloodstained mouths hungry for my flesh


I was sure my capture was a blessing to them

To be celebrated after my eventual death


My sister’s death was nobler than my

Impending death, I thought wryly in fright

As I watched them make the fire

To roast my pale flesh

Waiting for my nasty death and doom!

thanx

@ somegirl, u man there's a lil bit of scare in dat?

scorpio, wat kind of poem do u like?

whiteboy, u are welcome back.

She was sleeping peacefully in her room
Oblivious of what awaits her
I walked in to check on her
And it just came over me
It gripped me like scarlet fever

There was a train track
Just some feet away from our backyard
This evil thought became so strong
I sprung into action

I lifted her up
Not a stir from her
I walked out of the room
Not a murmur
Then towards the railway
Not a shout still
I got excited

I laid her quietly on the tracks
And retreated to await the result
I heard a deafening sound
And knew the hour had come

I opened my eyes just in time
To see her wriggle her small body
On the rails and under the train
As the train walked on her
The air became still
So still all life could die
And the sun disappeared


no ryhmes, guys. more like imagination
we need a change for a while though those ryhmes are great
wadya think?

thanx all for appreciatin dat

wale's got cool ryhmes

whiteboy, dat kinda poem is , i dunno d ryt word.well, d girl in question had a big deal of pleasure.

u guys are great at ryhmes. i get a lil hard tym gettin my words to ryhme.

scorpio, wats makin u change ur mind?glad to hear dat anyway cos we cant do wid at least a lil bit of love in our lives

check out this guys,

i cant see the stars anymore in pose
to remind me of the sparklin moments
shared in mutual ecstasy
now wid a big width of apathy
seems they are all aware of the tension
that tends to seize the love we once shared in relaxation

i cant think of the actual thing dat needs a trace
all i know is dat things went out of place
you avoid me like plague
conversation become vague
and the air between us is swayed
like the bond has been cut wid a wedged blade

i cant seem to get ur attention for once
not with the look u now wear on ur face
like it has ever been part of you
you hurt me, u hurt urself too
though i dont knw who is more hurt really
but i guess its me


wat do u think, plzzzzzzzzzz
i need posts pls

She was sleeping peacefully in her room
Oblivious of what awaits her
I walked in to check on her
And it just came over me
It gripped me like scarlet fever

There was a train track
Just some feet away from our backyard
This evil thought became so strong
I sprung into action

I lifted her up
Not a stir from her
I walked out of the room
Not a murmur
Then towards the railway
Not a shout still
I got excited

I laid her quietly on the tracks
And retreated to await the result
I heard a deafening sound
And knew the hour had come

I opened my eyes just in time
To see her wriggle her small body
On the rails and under the train
As the train walked on her
The air became still
So still all life could die
And the sun disappeared