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MuhdG:
Kr0ne I'm waiting for u to say something o



What do y'all have to say... words of advice

Nice job, bro. I'm more thrilled with the metaphor and imagery laced in your verse and your consistency on topic. You just have to be careful with the way you repeat end rhymes, though, unless you're attempting a wordplay. I noticed you played Mucus/ mock us but they definitely don't have the same consonant. Mucus is pronounced ''myookəs'', not mock us. Aside that, I enjoyed the delivery. And I feel you can take this tourney if you maintain this tempo.

Jigsawkillah vs Oluwagrin.
https://www.nairaland.com/2781096/kings-tourney-2015-jigsawkillah-vs

[size=18pt]Jigsawkillah Vs Oluwagrin[/size]

Topic: My High School Crush.
Narrate your experience with a girl you had a crush on while in high school; the fun you had, the daredevil risks you took and some silly things you had to do to get her attention and, probably, win her heart.

Criteria

Creativity - 2

Entertainment - 2

Rhymes - 2

Imagery - 2

Consistency on Topic - 3


*Explanation of how a person won and where both can improve would be appreciated.

Rules:
No recycling, biting, complaining, whining, swaying, free-posting or being a biitch in general.

12 bars Maximum = 24 Total Lines.

Due Date: Friday, December 4th, 2015.

Time: 6:00PM

Good Luck!!!

JigsawKillah:
then you all don't know what monkeys and baboons are

They do. That's why they can't bleeps with you.

JigsawKillah:
your ho thinks otherwise

My hos don't do monkeys and baboons.

llaykorn:
Oh my God! I thought the deadline was 6pm of Friday. I can't believe this. I think I made that mistake while calculating what day the 3rd fell on, or, was it changed?

Kr0ne, please can our deadline be changed to 6pm this evening? I'm very sorry for this stupid mistake, sir.

Cc:
Kr0=ne
Hen=zekido
Ada=nna28
Muhd=G

I don't think you made any mistake. The deadline of your battle is 6PM today.

JigsawKillah:
is there anything you actually know?

I know you're actually ugly.

Raplinx:
thanks bro

You're welcome.

JigsawKillah:
you wouldn't know if you weren't one

Dull people are losers.

JigsawKillah:
that was actually a metaphor. . . but you're too dull to understand

JigsawKillah:
how come you understood what he wrote?
you're supposed to be dull!

Dull people repeat words.

JigsawKillah:
how come you understood what he wrote?
you're supposed to be dull!

Unfortunately, I'm not, coz I've outwitted niggas who have outwitted the niggas that outwitted you.

Hahahaha! Llaykorn, you have a rival. Beware of MuhdG!!! Dude is a killer! I believe Liricyst saw this coming and decided to play safe.

Raplinx:
yo, im in bro KrOne.

You're battling Obesemf on Saturday.

funlord:


Dude! A lot of the netcees you have participating the king of poetry tournament are unreliable no shows! Or maybe its because there is no "owo, kudi or ego" involved in the comp? Who knows!

Although I've noticed that most dudes in the rap section are also lazy when it comes to trying to perfect their art via battling or while trying to make it in this game! Its called the 'reverse hustle syndrome'! You vets and the mods need to find a solution to this ish! Even the millionaire artists who come to my spot to perform regularly are more committed than this regardless of whether its about 'cash or kind'! Sound the "alarm"!!!

LOL! It's not about cash. I think it's just a trend thing. The new phase of rappers on this block are just too damn lazy to battle, and it's just getting worse and worse. If you look up our archive, when pioneers like DBR, Streetwise, Ibime, Emaprince, Mikuz used to host tourneys and regular battles, you'd see enthusiasm in them. Most of them came all the way from Facebook to battle niggas here and claim a spot. Today, only a few still have the zeal but are not regular because their work is eating out their time. Darkenedrebel would have been a motivator because he has the zeal but his stubbornness is a barrier.
I believe it will all get better sha.

Iceskidd, withdraw your verse na. It's tomorrow, not today.

Any areas for improvement for this guy?
Cc:
Sinizia
Guykhena
Adanna28
Reyginus
Funlord

Thread closed. Rexaxe wins via no-show and proceeds to next stage.

obesemf:
Sure

Cc: Sinizia. Please help us create a topic - and a thread later - for our late comers, Obesemf Vs Raplinx. To post on Saturday. Thanks.

obesemf:
you want a battle or no show win?
kr0-ne, let it be judged..

No way! We were not expecting you there. But if you really want to join, let's pair you with Raplinx; and you drop on Saturday. What do you say?

sinizia:
Aite. Off to edit them out.

Er...you omitted Guykhe.

Limerick:
mo'fucker
Shey u don chop?

Just hope say Elymax no wipe you o. You better go prepare well.

Creativity - 2 points - Jason

Rhymes - 2 points - Jason

Flow - 1 point - Tie

Consistency on Topic - 3 points - NiL

Imagery - NiL

Explanation: Simply disappointed!

Mvgt - Jason

Limerick:
My name is limerick, and I want to battle elymaxiimus, ibime, mikuz, gray line, kr0ne and jason

I go battle you next year.

Sinizia, please don't include the KOP participants: Jig, Muh, Llay, Ices, etc . . .

Limerick:
Abuchi leave me o, I must switch from rapping to singing... God Don show me for dream, don't try to stop me

Na Airmark you dey call Abuchi? That guy is not Airmark o. Every NL moniker get replica for FB. I don even see another Ibime yesterday.

Rexaxe:
work*

Would you wait for Heywhizzy or should I give you a no-show win?

RapAcme:
so whats up bro........what are u guys gona do about who's the winner of the 2014 version?

Meanwhile,im in for the 2015 version...or is it too late?

Almost too late, but if you can find an opponent we might consider you.

sinizia:
Kr0ne, will my judgment/verd be the final say or would others be able to judge too or will they wait for my verd before they can give theirs?

No, other judges will give their verdicts and the battler with the major votes wins. However, as the owner of the topic, you are to state (maybe after voting is done) how well your topic was treated, what you expected from them and so on.
Meanwhile, you can now open the thread for votes and tag the judges.

St3v3nr3x, drop your lines.

Happy new month to:

Llaykorn

Emaprince

Gottoboy

Ibime

MuhdG

Adanna28

Oops! I did six.

llaykorn:
I'll do 12 quatrains.

KooL.

Rexaxe:
Not a no-show.. how can the thrend be open the day am surposed to post

It's to avoid free-posting and derailing. As you can see, I had to quote you outside the thread. In some cases, the thread is not until both battlers are ready to post. There's nothing that annoys me more than an empty thread. . .it's just baseless.
Secondly, if you wish to wait for Heywhizzy to get ready, you can. Just communicate with him to know when his verse will be ready. Otherwise, just post right away and get a no-show win.