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Fazemood:
Pls Mr Larrysun, I am in a very sad state right now, while gluttonously savoring the sweetness of the story "paradox of Abel" then It just stopped no further updates just some incomprehensible comments from other readers telling how magnificient detective Lot was to uncover the murderer of Jamal Malik.

Honestly, I'm wounded , how can It be remedied cuz if not I'll wail o, I GO BLOW WHEESUU eehee! . Heh! sumbori hold me o I NEED THE CONCLUDING PART OF THAT STORY *sobbing*

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

You need to read it.

apholaryn:
this story don dey loose that remarkable ,astonishing, captivating ,brilliance it started with.. wtf! going back to get the jewelry like seriously??

Really? I thought we've not even reached the major intrigues. These are just icings.

Fazemood:
Breaking into Rhoda's home will reveal so much like Peter's been sleeping with an arch enemy's daughter...

LOL! Wrong!

domido:
Breaking into Rhoda's home!! I'm expecting a twist to this story.

We shall see.

nkemdave:
What is wrong with Peter Black

I pray that your stupid love for a gold necklace will not put you into more troubles.

Nice update.

Amen. But it did.

fabjo:
what's his ish with the necklace ni? sha strongheadeed person like Peter black won't accept defeat, thanks Larrysun you always make my day....

Thanks for following.

EkopSparoAyara:
In reekado banks voice..Peter,easy oo jeje..take it slow oo..
Weldone Larrysun...
Nice write up..

Thanks.

gabi98:
I believe Mr Larrysun is back.I swear this is one hell of a story, that i must know how it end

LOL! It's a long story.

hm54:
Nice update, more ink to your pen

Thanks.

indodon:
More ink to your pen larry ___following____

Amen. Thank you.

zesh:
Maybe black is connected to the family somehow too

I strongly doubt that.

ftosino:
what is his problem with the necklace now,
thanks Mr Larry for this,

awaits another ....

Obsession, I suppose.

Vicoch:
..Bobby wants to create another mistake again.

LOL! To err is Blacky.

Observer3:
Break into their house



Larry why

Why are you calling me? I'm not Peter Black.

hoyinmide:
me I started dis story 2016 ooo...den stopped nd come back 2017 now December we Neva even reach half way....
I like d story buh dis ....... oga sha

LOL! I apologise.

Fazemood:
Where arth thou o Larrysun?

Update posted.

Jbfranklin:
women are very greedy....they put their feelings before others....they put their selfish desires first...."Rhoda Gold" Is unaware of they Cost of a bloody friendship

Male Bonding is a very strong type of invisible bond, Stronger than "Ionic bonds"... breaking they bond brings forth sporadic volcanic eruption in a dormant instance very disastrous to parties involved.....
A friendship so strong women are unlikely they brain or vices behind it explosive and fearsome collapse.

I would gladly give up they woman I Love. Than to betray a "two headed true brother like friendship".

can relate to they situation on ground as a victim...still trying to overcome....
Women don't know they true meaning of friend-ship...
They prefer Relation-ship.

I commend you Mr LarrySun for creating in our mind through words a wonderful world , where we witness firsthand they plight of they less privileged...

I am an upcoming "Moving pictures(simply 'Movie')producer" from my speculations, with more detailed description of your work and a flowing suspense, stricken work,like they ongoing project...your write-ups would make it to they "Big Screen" More detailed they "Box Office"...
Am also A writer ...but not very Good with words...I like an eagle settle on writing scripts for scenes ...
I would try to write though knowing that It will just like a " Boa" swallow my Time , Money, and brain Glucose....

Thank you, sir.

marvin902:
larrrrrrysunnnnnnnnnnnn..
abeg na beg i dey beg you cum give us update

Updated.

Ali1king:
This is the reason i don't like Larry Sun

Why, my friend?

Vecto:
I thought I was the only one that had this in mind. Larry Sun is gifted. Heck, after reading his writings all other literature work on nairaland just seem below standard. It's not as if there aren't other good writers on nairaland, it's just that I've not seen anything compared to Larry's writing.

His style, twists and turns, suspense, comedy, just to mention a few just makes you picture every single words.

I had to save a particular episode from the paradox of Abel. The interrogation room scene...Detective lot, Daniel and tunde..the way Larry described Daniel's apparent surprise at Mr tunde's newly *less frightening and intimidating composure* makes you really wonder what could have possibly humbled the Goliath! LOL!

Wow! Thank you, sir. It's good to know you've read my other works.

Feanah:
I really don't feel sorry for Black,he got what he deserved.Basky is my main guy nowhere

LOL! Nice.

ftosino:
why are some people like this. there is no crime in asking for permission. MR Larrysun ,its good you have won the war. Thank You Sir Again For This Educating And Wonderful Story.

Thank you, boss.

Rick9:
Larrysun you are a rare gem, honestly you have natural talent for writing, it's in your blood.

I swear your writing style is so amazing that if I want to write I measure myself by your standard, I will just give up.

You are extremely good.
When am well to do, I will assist.

You can be better than me. I'm just a learner, too.

Temtopy:
Larrysun sorry u have to go through this, I know it's sad to see someone else take honour for the work u suffered to write, I don't know why some bloggers can not take permission from the writer and acknowledge the writer before posting his story on his/ her blog.
Larrysun please don't be too angry biko

Thanks dear.

AryEmber:
This is one of the reasons why I don't complain when you update late, who knew this was what you were going through, I'm glad you won the war. And to you SOBs, I don't know why it's so hard for you to ask for permission and acknowledge the owner of a story,I sincerely hope there's a special place in hell for you arseholes for stealing someone's efforts and sweat.

Thank you, ma'am.

lumzybo:
I can see pple are really following this story religiously.

Larry, it's been a while....

I am impressed.

Adasun:
dat was really a moonlight story

What was?

bonarhyme:
So, Rhoda knew that Peter was the one that actually stole the necklace.

Peter fvck up jooooor.

Rhoda: smart chick without wisdom.

Basky: bad guy with igneous rock heart.

Looool! Igneous rock heart! Lmao.

Mafhe:
I tink u shld update more often if u wanna turn d story into series...or its already series

I don't understand.

Taniaa:
Am the chairperson of the ghost readers club association.
I've been following since day one and i must say you really did a tremendous job.

Thank you, ma'am.

EkopSparoAyara:
Larrysun i hope say u no plan 2 go juju 4 blackie oo..
Great write up,nice twist..
Thumps up

Be rest assured that I wouldn't tread that lane.

nkemdave:
Hmmmmm......Peter Black has made a terrible mistake.

Thanks for the update.

Thanks for reading.