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Ayoshewa12:
Yippee , Av finally finished reading the novel, the brand of Cain and paradox of Abel. Mr Larry u are such a great and an excellent writer (novelist) Yee. Can't believe I finish reading both stories in two days. Thank you. Sir,I enjoyed every moment reading the stories. More inspiration fall on sir [img]

Thank you, ma'am. I remain loyal.

Hada2020:
LarrySun, you are indeed great writer, I doff my cap for you sir, I have been following your story b] black maria[/b] on nairaland, before I come across brand of Cain and paradox of Abel, more ink to your pen sir.

Thank you for reading.

becca2017:
This story is wowww!! u're doing a great job here Mr writer.. i guess Esther is the murderer, right??

You've obviously not yet finished reading it.

Ishilove:
Please ignore him/her. He/she's a notorious troll

Thanks, sweetie.

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fumiswtpusytwo:
Larrysun how can you not tell your readers that.I am the amara and rohda.with my sexy bighips and flat tummy.

No, you're not.

Skimpledawg:
Has someone broken your trust before?

It's not just about Black gbenshing Rhoda.


I have broken my madam's trust before according to her even though I did not do what was alleged. Trust is one funny thing. One time you are in good terms another time you are pleading to be taken back

Looooooooooool! "Gbenshing", that term sounds so hilarious!

nkemdave:
Peter now have more troubles...........how I wish he had earlier avoided Rhoda and told Basket about Rhoda.

Well, let's see how more events will unfold.

Many thanks for this update #Larrysun.

Thanks for following.

SNOWBOI360:
[color=#990000]now u ar on track then u shall move mountains with ur story MR LARRY KEEP ON WITH THE WORK OF ART WELL DONE SIRE.

Thank you, boss.

AryEmber:
This is the part in India movie when you hear that action theme song and see INTERMISSION. I so much love this story! My dad would say women are Necessary Evil but don't I just love that I am!

Lol! I understand that feeling; but technically, we have not arrived at the INTERMISSION.

macpetrus:
I love this line :::

Rhoda was irresistible. It was like I was under a spell; I couldn’t refuse her for long. I tried to stay away, heaven knows I tried; but I obviously didn’t try enough, my body was too weak to resist her.

What havoc lust can wreak.

domido:
this is emotional. Friend turned foe cos of a woman. How sad. Like they will say, after the devil, fear women.

It is not my intention to paint women in bad colour.

stuff46:
Those years sound like generations and the blanks is too complicated to be easily filled.


I know Larry has more twist...

so i patiently read

Consider the time difference between the 1980's and 2010's.

honourable356:
seconded!!! This is close the truth..! As I am a 100 percent convinced that this story had already been written down by larrysun... the challenge is just to type it here on nairaland and having the time to do so.

I am quite impressed.

Thank you, sir. It's true, i have the plot cut out already.

Patotelli:
@koolcat01, i go with that ur suggestion, just what i was thinking...
Nice update oga larrysun, mb fall on ur phone.


#PATTOSKI_PATOTELLI

Thank you, sir.

Koolcat01:
Junior son to peter black while Lola daughter to basky.... I think.... Well done boss larry

We shall see.

crislyn:
Jesus! This is heartbreaking.

It is indeed disheartening.

ftosino:
now no more black n basket going on an operation again, am so emotional right now, wehdone sir mr Larrysun.

Thieves will still be thieves.

bossy512:
Lo ba tan

Lol! It is finished. Jesus knew what He meant.

jasmine2013:

No words, just very sad.

Sweet memories can turn sour with just one wrong decision.

Raynino:
this update was so emotional I couldn't believe they end up like this ,but basky should remember that While seeking revenge, dig two graves - one for yourself.
any way it goes ,may God crown your effort Mr larry sun(amen)

The quest for vengeance has always ended up badly.

LogoDWhiz:
But why does it seem to be that John Balewa is over reacting... Move on, not turn your best friend to your worst enemy, even when he showed remorse...

A loving heart that suddenly turns to hatred finds it quite hard to forgive.

Silensa:
Fear women .Fear women. Fear women. Fear women.
(Even my mother)

Rhoda or nah Amala or Amara....

They can make or mar, still they have kind hearts...understanding them is only complicated.

Fazemood:
What more can one say ?

The guilty must pay for the sin he commits #sad fact

Yes...sad but true.

dabywhite:
I talk am say women dey devilish, Roda I'm coming for you

And yet, some women are angelic.

lumzybo:
A very emotional update. I feel so sorry for the two friends.

They had a good relationship until the evil men can't do without came and scatter things for them _WOMEN.

The trust is broken nothing can be done to fix this. Sorry Blacky! Sorry Basky.

But to you Rhoda,

Nice work Larry. You are gbaski

An unfortunate cycle that spirals into damnation.

Vicoch:
Oh no! just 5 minutes could crumble what you've built for over five years...

I guess the real battle begins.

I foresee Black killing basky in the future.

Black killing Basket? If you were a prophet, I would not attend your church. Lol!

Rick9:
I appreciate your writing, anyway I saw the part where you felt down, I understand that's exactly what's happening to me now, lots of ideas no way to bring them out but we still have to encourage ourselves.

Never lose hope, I still believe that you writings would pay off someday, your name command awe in Nairaland Literature section along with my Aunty Audreytimms, (can't believe I am re reading Letting Go again, thanks Aunty Audreytimms.)
And of course Aunty Repogirl I wished she would complete 'Forever and For Always'


And other amazing writers too numerous to mention
I wished I had the means right now, I would have gladly assisted you writers in anyway I could.

But keep on writing y'all inspire us all.

Oh, thank you so much. Those are great writers you mentioned up there, and I'm fortunate to be friends with them. They are awesome.

bonarhyme:
This part almost made me cry.



A short but powerful update.
John Balewa should listen to what his friend has to say.
Peter Black should have gone away after saying i'm sorry.

But nevertheless peter isn't wrong at all and John isn't too. They are only victims of circumstances.

Rhoda Amara is not human. She is probably possessed but obsessed with peter's big "Member" . I bet she has a fresh boo somewhere.

I hope John doesn't misbehave because of a b¡tch

We shall then find out.

Kisitic:
Hmmmm so sad
a brother turned to become enemy
larrysun welldone nice work u got

Thanks bro.

Vecto:
Sorry for the long quote but I'm trying to connect the dots but it ain't working. How does this tie up with the story line so far Larry

Patience is the key. Consider the time difference.

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