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Wow, its good to be back. The story still got me locked in. Hope ma evajael z doing great. Pls enuf with the deaths already, everyone's been through a lot, try giving them a happy ending.

I have a feeling I'm gonna enjoy this. Oya leggo

Congrats Kara on the safe delivery. What are we gonna name this cute chap now?

EvaJael:
Sweetheart,I'm not so strong. I'll try to post another one today. If I can't,prolly tomorrow morning

Hey Eva pls take time out and care for yourself though I can't wait for the next update but first things first, I hope its not serious. Stay strong

I'm beginning to love this story even more, the twists and turns just makes everything sweeter. Evajael I don't know what to tell u again o. In summary, your head is there.

If Gbemi has any funny ideas of disrupting bukky's relationship with Chike I suggest he just abandon it and move on because I will enter this story and kidnap him till bukky is happily married before I release him. He's had his chances and he didn't take them. Allow my alakara to enjoy her true love in peace.

Is this Toke girl mad or something?! Which kind ogbanje friend be dis, abeg Diana if u like yourself quickly unfriend her and block her if possible.

Captivating... thumbs up mille, oh I mean evajael

EvaJael:
Thank you dear. Could you point out these repetitions for me?

Ok you have used 'its no bother' about 5 or 6 times since the start of this story, instead you can use 'its fine' or 'its no problem', it'll make u less predictable. Sorry its coming late but i want to say happy birthday to u dear, wish u a more prosperous year ahead.

Good job evajael, this is by far the best story I've read on NL. Apart from a few unnecessary repetitions here and there, you've done a superb job. Keep up the good work.