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as much as I condemn the killing going on in S.A. am just amazed at the number of Nigerians screaming bloody murder on this site. we should remove the log from our eyes Ist before removing the speck in someone else's eye. the way we shoot each other down in this country with our words and action (esp. if they dont belong to the same tribe) is equivalent to what s.a is doing to foreigners in their country so before you start to condemn others for their action check yourself 1st. |
Am not a writer but let me just share my observation from your story. You have a good story line which could easily be translated into a great story. However, your story lacks some important ingredients; cohesion, continuity and flow. You need to work on that. Also, the spacing and general paragraph layout needs to be worked on. You are writing a romantic suspense, by now you should keep guessing. We don't want to know the whole story before the ending. Then try as much as possible to be realistic in your writing, this in reference to the rape scene, the bottle incidence and the whole relationship with Dave thing (if she has been hurt before in the past I think it will make her a bit more careful and less trusting in her new relationship). Then let us get to know your characters a bit more, even though you are writing in 1st person, I feel a bit detached from the character because we don't get to know what she thinks, how she feels and how situations around affect her. |
Op God bless you. To say this revelation came almost 11/2 yrs bf the event took. I truly believe God is on our side and we all hope to see a better Nigeria |
2. Oman 3. Ghana 4. Cuba 5. Russia 6. 7. Spain 8. wales 9. 10. Ireland 11. america 12. Switzerland 16. Iran am coming back for the rest make I go think |
and if you have more than a line. imagine adding all those digits together |
I had to go thru all the thread to make sure am seeing right. chai this people can lie sometimes I wonder if we live in the same Nigeria. I'll try to sound as unbaised as possible and speak of only the ones I know of: The road linking Ilorin-Oyo that was done a long time ago bf Gej came into power benin - ore, lagos -ibadan, apapa- oshodi roads are only partially completed leaving the other part in the same deplorable state they are in. Concerning agric. all I see is things being written on paper which have not translated to increase food or lower prices of food in the market. Concerning transportation I have seen pictures of train in the newspaper am yet to see one in my region, airline are still as expensive as they use to be and am yet to see the buses that gej promised after removal of the subsidy. And as for power I don't need to say much as you all can testify to this. P.S. live in Lagos so this is coming from the view of lagosian. |
just going thru thus pics is enough to bring tears to my eyes, so touching |
wow op well done had tears in my eyes from reading this thank you |
order |
its to the right of the tree |
singing songs, dancing and worship are all acceptable but they all have to be directed to God and God only. when we come to God's presence we should knw it is no more abt us or our situation or circumstances surrounding us but it should be all abt God. That is true worship and that is all God require from us. |
The answer is -2 2 - [1 - (1 - [2 - 3] - 2) + 3] 2 - [1 - (1 - [-1] - 2) + 3] 2 - [1 -(1 + 1 - 2) + 3] 2 - [1 - (0) + 3] 2 - [ 4 ] = -2 |
The answer is 15 by using prime numbers 1+1=2 2+3=5 3+7=10 4+11=15 and so on |
the answer is 15 by using prime numbers 1+1=2 2+3=5 3+7=10 4+11=15 and so on |
pls send to deejokkie@gmail.com thanks |
I feel your pain and the stress you are going thru however getting a permanent cure for a child with convulsion may be a diff. Task even though most could be effectively managed. The first thing to do is finding out the cause of these seizures, which could arise if he has had a previous febrile illiness like meningitis, cerebral malaria or encephalitis or if he had any trauma with head injury. The list goes on, the best thing is for him to see a neurologist so detailed investigation could be done and propably place him on anti- convulsants. But for now whenever he has a seizure pls remain calm most will stop by itself w/o any intervention Let him lie on his left side, better on the floor so his tongue doesn't roll back and he doesn't choke on his own saliva Remove all dangerous and sharp obj from his vicinity Do not place sharp object or spoon in his mouth this can cause more harm than good. PS. Most seizures in children are caused by disruption of electrical activity of the brain which usu. Resolves by the time the get older |
God bless you dear just read the last update from your blog. l pray you ink will Neva run dry and God that has been your inspiration will continue to be. this is the best story I have read this year and I look forward to more inspirational stories from u |
all I want to say is thank you frank for giving us this wonderful story and allowing us to be a part of it. I started reading this this am and have not been able to put it down, have had palpitations, goosebumps in fact its been a roller coaster of emotion. all I wanna say is thank you, you have a great talent looking forward to you becoming a bestseller in the nearest future |
does the Acer mini come it a DVD drive |
hmmm let me see grace and here I am to worship by Michael Smith in Christ alone by Geoff Moore no more than a heartbeat away by hill song ore bi Jesu |
it saddens my heart when I read thru this thread and saw the comments of supposed Christians no wonder the world is the way it is. Christian you have been called to be light of the world, the salt in a tasteless world you cannot afford to do things the way the world does you have to be transformed by Gods word for their to be any change in ur life. all the scenerios painted by the op are temptations that I expect we christains ought to act differently, what is wrong is wrong there is no two ways about it, justifying it just makes it a sin. i think every Christian here ought to read that book in "His steps" and see the way Christians are suppose to live in this sinful world |
where is your office, is it in lagos? |
does anyone know where I can buy a portable power pack from for my phone in lagos |
count me in am I total support this rip-off is getting too much |
you can try www.epubbud.com or smashword there are lots of free books there |
the kingdom of God is a believer's destination don't let me miss it, let me make heaven baba the money I have cannot take me there the car I bought cannot take me there the friends I have cannot take me there all my life achievements cannot take me there don't let me miss it let me make heaven don't let me die like smoke let me make it this world is a market place only heaven is home, let me make it home of glory home of joy home of peace |
niceee |
this is so very true many people dont realise life does not start and end in school, after school is when real life starts school has a way of shedding us but its also prepares us as well. |
I think this story needs to be verified. because from my knowledge leukemias are blood disorders (cancers) which modality of treatment is chemotherapy. from the pics the op posted, that is looking more like a burkitt lymphoma (another blood cancer which is more common in this environment and presents with jaw swelling like in the pics) which is also treated by chemotherapy. I think the op needs to provide a more verifiable info before people start contributing their money |
I find this story too incredible to believe |