Hello guys, i jst joined naira land and dis is my first post.I love literature a lot and if u're lyk me let's get it on.post a poem wit a gud rhyme scheme.It culd be abut anytin but for starters let's make it vengeful or abut revenge.Here's mine i wuld really lyk to know what y'all tink abut it.

The Sweet Revenge

Balls to bust, dust to dust
2nite i'll get mine no mata d cost
i warnd you but u wouldn't listen
so 2day on your blood i'll be feasting
so clever u tot u were
but wit my knife , ur intestines i'll severe
the deal was mine, you were told
but you chose to act proud n bold
so now u'll end up up stiff n cold
2day i'll get my due
a vampires promise good n true
run 2 d East, run 2 d West
`Godspeed` i bid you do ur best
run 2 d north, run to a fort
run as u please for all it's worth
Scream wit ur mouth, or run to d south
but whateva you do,get ready for a bout
2nite will be a bloody night
Avenge the wrongs and make them right
On a stake i'll hang your lifeless skull
more valuable than the titanic's hull
tonite all your wrongs i'll avenge
Truly and Truly the Sweet revenge


so what do you think!!!!

talk is cheap
revenge is no mean feat
tho' i hear it can be sweet . . .

think u'r up to the game?
brotha, don't be so lame!
i eat foes up for breakfast
i'm freakn cold like belfast -
don't need to spill blood;
i slay with the (written) word!
i've got the fury like one scorn'd-
any1 test me, gon' get burn'd.
i'm stakin' my claim as the lady of rage
i step on some toes as I step on the stage

u crossed the line when u thot this up
the grim reaper's here to fill ur cup
with blood, so drink it up and like it!
bustin' in & actin' like you can pack it
hope u can stand up to the lady of retribution . . .
hey, any1 else got a contribution?

One came up with a bloody rhyme and now it is revenge time. One thing is common-violence,violence everyone seems to dispense. But as for me in my best,violence is of no interest.For i am of socratic phylosophy, promoting virtues to the apogee.8-)

^^^^ ok, pls rhyme in your socratic-philosophy-promoting-virtues-to-the-apogee ( ) if u can. And choose any non-violent theme u can think of.


U can't Thought not.

What is LOVE
Grandma said "Its a feeling from God above"
As my food cook on the stove
I ask my belove
Have U ever been in Love?
He give me a little shove
I smiled and look above
He smiled and said "Love is you my little dove"
He kept on smiling as he walked off

**Hey,I try**

i hope this topic is not limited to revenge only 'cos i ain't got anything on revenge
check this out,


Lonely call…

He was twenty-three years of age
Not lucky to be among the computer age
He believed it was time to be a man
His mother said “no” with a strong adage
The father did nothing but warn



In sudden anger he would flare
Soon, his face became so rare
Man and woman couldn’t take it any longer
So they disowned him in tears
Since he said he wasn’t growing any younger

He approached his love Tina
She: dark, hairy, slim or even thinner
They begun spinning the web of love
Stronger it grew and even thicker
Till love got so high above

She had a boy for him
On hearing, his face was full of beams
They went on to have their wedding
On their honeymoon, they sang hymns
Not knowing they were close to tears shedding

He never knew the marriage bids
Misunderstanding germinated like weeds
They took their words with a pinch of salt
He closed down her fees and feeds
Finally, everything came to a halt!

She left after calling him wretched
He roamed the street dejected
He had a child but not a wife
With sorrow he had been injected
He had asked “could this be life?”

Taking to heavy drinking
Not an exception was smoking
He came home in the dead of the night
Never caring about his son’s living
The son now believed life wasn’t right

He lost his job
Behaving worst than a dog
Now he couldn’t go to his family
His grave was been dug
Life had stung him with infirmity

Then with such heavy breath,
He began seeking death
Never seen one so brave
To bring the waters above the neck
Emotion was so watery as he kissed the watery grave

jeythunder:

i hope this topic is not limited to revenge only 'cos i ain't got anything on revenge
check this out,


Lonely call…

He was twenty-three years of age
Not lucky to be among the computer age
He believed it was time to be a man
His mother said “no” with a strong adage
The father did nothing but warn



In sudden anger he would flare
Soon, his face became so rare
Man and woman couldn’t take it any longer
So they disowned him in tears
Since he said he wasn’t growing any younger

He approached his love Tina
She: dark, hairy, slim or even thinner
They begun spinning the web of love
Stronger it grew and even thicker
Till love got so high above

She had a boy for him
On hearing, his face was full of beams
They went on to have their wedding
On their honeymoon, they sang hymns
Not knowing they were close to tears shedding

He never knew the marriage bids
Misunderstanding germinated like weeds
They took their words with a pinch of salt
He closed down her fees and feeds
Finally, everything came to a halt!

She left after calling him wretched
He roamed the street dejected
He had a child but not a wife
With sorrow he had been injected
He had asked “could this be life?”

Taking to heavy drinking
Not an exception was smoking
He came home in the dead of the night
Never caring about his son’s living
The son now believed life wasn’t right

He lost his job
Behaving worst than a dog
Now he couldn’t go to his family
His grave was been dug
Life had stung him with infirmity

Then with such heavy breath,
He began seeking death
Never seen one so brave
To bring the waters above the neck
Emotion was so watery as he kissed the watery grave

LOVE IT!!

maedan:

talk is cheap
revenge is no mean feat
tho' i hear it can be sweet . . .

think u'r up to the game?
brotha, don't be so lame!
i eat foes up for breakfast
i'm freakn cold like belfast -
don't need to spill blood;
i slay with the (written) word!
i've got the fury like one scorn'd-
any1 test me, gon' get burn'd.
i'm stakin' my claim as the lady of rage
i step on some toes as I step on the stage

u crossed the line when u thot this up
the grim reaper's here to fill ur cup
with blood, so drink it up and like it!
bustin' in & actin' like you can pack it
hope u can stand up to the lady of retribution . . .
hey, any1 else got a contribution?

i trip

jeythunder:

i hope this topic is not limited to revenge only 'cos i ain't got anything on revenge
check this out,


Lonely call…

He was twenty-three years of age
Not lucky to be among the computer age
He believed it was time to be a man
His mother said “no” with a strong adage
The father did nothing but warn



In sudden anger he would flare
Soon, his face became so rare
Man and woman couldn’t take it any longer
So they disowned him in tears
Since he said he wasn’t growing any younger

He approached his love Tina
She: dark, hairy, slim or even thinner
They begun spinning the web of love
Stronger it grew and even thicker
Till love got so high above

She had a boy for him
On hearing, his face was full of beams
They went on to have their wedding
On their honeymoon, they sang hymns
Not knowing they were close to tears shedding

He never knew the marriage bids
Misunderstanding germinated like weeds
They took their words with a pinch of salt
He closed down her fees and feeds
Finally, everything came to a halt!

She left after calling him wretched
He roamed the street dejected
He had a child but not a wife
With sorrow he had been injected
He had asked “could this be life?”

Taking to heavy drinking
Not an exception was smoking
He came home in the dead of the night
Never caring about his son’s living
The son now believed life wasn’t right

He lost his job
Behaving worst than a dog
Now he couldn’t go to his family
His grave was been dug
Life had stung him with infirmity

Then with such heavy breath,
He began seeking death
Never seen one so brave
To bring the waters above the neck
Emotion was so watery as he kissed the watery grave

hmmm, sense-ful , cool and nice




finally a place i can make my zone,
its good to know am not alone,
i always love forums dat play with words,
just like warriors fighting with swords,
makes me feel like david when he flung d sling,
or like mike tyson when he was still good in d ring,
jab, jab, punch
jab, jab , right hook, punch,
flow in easy,
but leave ur face all bloody and messy,
but i ain't no fighter
am more of a thriller and a lover,
u know, like intellectual love making,
with no need for orgasm faking
for i always love to enjoy it,
and not endure it,
cos when i feel d attraction,
and d mounting tension,
then i do d necessary interaction
to ignite d passion
thereby increasing d excitement
and afterwards, we will both savour d moment.
u feel me yet?
then stay glued to d net.




where is my princessa

THE LIVING FLAME

a look in the flame
does not only show the burning rays
on the blue part of this flame
i have seen a laying lame
who never wants to be in shame
aiming to the top to make fame
in this very flame
have seen hustlers who wants to make a hay

and dare not remain dead and grey
and eaten by deadly birds of prey
then decay
with rotten remains
and erased out of human race
then forgotten in the list of famous names

(ii)
in this very flame
i have seen great men who wants to remain on the top burning flame
and even though its going to take an age
for the lame to reach the burning flame
they don't really give a damn hey!
for there they want to make a live stay
they are men who want to be buried in their own way
while all they did has gone in vain
and washed away by heavy rain
cos the land they cultivated for the rainy days
their children have all sold away
now they are world less and have nothing to say

(iii)
in this very flame
i have seen men who wants to live in a simple way
and eat with brothers on the same main
and ready to make the lame make a hay
to the top burning flame
these are men which non of their confide has gone in vain
nor washed away by heavy rain
cos the land they cultivated for the rainy days
their sons have neither sold away
but rather cultivated more for the coming rainy days
and on a may day
they make a very useful spray
of their cultivated hays
then pray
for the lame
to meet a good aim
these are men that always have something to say.

(iv)
in this burning flame
i have seen children play
hurrying towards the running train
of which the burning flame stays
want a good future hey?
but things are never the same
nay!
this is the living flame
of which i also pray
and very determined to aim



the poem sort of symbolizes the woes and good of our top men in the society, those who want to help the aspiring youths and the ones that don't give a damn HEY!

Right!! where did yall copy that from?

from above it's shown to prove
guys are leading three to two!!
abdulone, olulu and jeythunder
i'm seriously beginning to wonder . . .
so NL is really stuffed with such skills
spinning rhymes like u'all are spinning wheels
what can i say, i'm impressed
spitting these lines from east to west
i'd rhyme more if i wasn't so stressed -
anyway guys, u're all the best!!!

_{@ olulu
thanx 4 d "tripping"
these days i'm even slipping . . .
or else i'd hav given u all a whipping!!}

maedan:


from above it's shown to prove
guys are leading three to two!!
abdulone, olulu and jeythunder
i'm seriously beginning to wonder . . .
so NL is really stuffed with such skills
spinning rhymes like u'all are spinning wheels
what can i say, i'm impressed
spitting these lines from east to west
i'd rhyme more if i wasn't so stressed -
anyway guys, u're all the best!!!

_{@ olulu
thanx 4 d "tripping"
these days i'm even slipping . . .
or else i'd hav given u all a whipping!!}

get me ass whopped by a lady?
girlfriend, i ain't ur baby.
u think u can match me,
flow like me,
kiss the words and make dem dance
then this ur chance,
show what u've got
lets c if u are part of d special lot.
but i know, it's a man's world,
hey, wait, don't yet draw ur sword,
cos am a true word samurai,
and with my skills i can cut out ur eye
though i come in peace,
i wouldn't mind takin u apart piece by piece.
but i ain't fightin,
am just flowing and vibing.
abi, u don vex?
then get naked and have _{s e x}
afterall u are just a woman,
so get on ur knees and go serve ur man. . . . .
u don't like me dat much, right?
good, cos it's only me in d spot light,
so back off,
or jerk off,
or just play d clown,
b4 u get knocked down.


_{omoge, na play i dey play o,}

Eh yo,
The World can't deny nothin from me
I give you life, yet I grind to turn melodies into money
Odviously I'm a star, so of course I'll go far
Create a masterpiece, with raps & my guitar
This Hood Music from the Soul,
Soul Music from The Hood,
I put my all into it, please
Let's get this overstood
I'ma shine till the day that I rest
Homie, I put that on my next-born, Put it on my flesh
Got no reason to stress,
Cause I know that God got my back
Talk to my ancestors when I spit on the track,

@olulu

 

  no harm done, i know it's all fun
  but u won't be "playing" when i'm cocking my gun
  bey sed men rule the streets, but women keep the tempo
  aint it true y'all treat our p**sies like ur temple
  u made this fight turn dirty,
  and i'm no coward so ill give it back to u plenty
  just don't make a fuss
  when a babe turns u to a wuss
  it's a game, so play it
  lets hope that as u give, u can take it!!!

  it's been a while since i put down my blade
  i aint afraid to call a spade a spade
  the war is on, i sure hope u're ready
  it's a bet u can't hold me down steady
  whatever sha, i've got time on my hands
  i'll soon have u with ur hands in iron bands
  u'll be on ur knees, begging for mercy
  i'll lock u for life n throw away d key!!



_{i'm warming up, guy
i don't get scared n i aint shy
but for now i've had my say
letz leave to fight another day} . . .

maedan:

@olulu



no harm done, i know it's all fun
but u won't be "playing" when i'm cocking my gun
bey sed men rule the streets, but women keep the tempo
aint it true y'all treat our p**sies like ur temple
u made this fight turn dirty,
and i'm no coward so ill give it back to u plenty
just don't make a fuss
when a babe turns u to a wuss
it's a game, so play it
lets hope that as u give, u can take it!!!

it's been a while since i put down my blade
i aint afraid to call a spade a spade
the war is on, i sure hope u're ready
it's a bet u can't hold me down steady
whatever sha, i've got time on my hands
i'll soon have u with ur hands in iron bands
u'll be on ur knees, begging for mercy
i'll lock u for life n throw away d key!!


_{i'm warming up, guy
i don't get scared n i aint shy
but for now i've had my say
letz leave to fight another day} . . .

_{hmmmm,
coooooool, love d ones in bold}


u feel u can mess with me?
stand up to me?
fight me?
try me?

u say whaaat, . . . . . d war is on?
hey, u ain't got d balls to turn it on

treat ur pu**y like a temple?
when u beg for us to on d bed do d love rumble

u think u can have ur say?
if not to beg me to s c r e w u for 10years and a day

u better back down,
b4 u get smacked d f u c k down,

so stop acting like a lyrical contender
cos u stink even as a pretender,
go back to ur normal role of an house keeper,
dish washer,
gardener,
home maker,
meal cooker,
and then fulfill ur natural everyday role of a bed warmer.


NOW,
get ur ass into d kitchen
and stop being a kitten

cook my meal,
put on ur mouth a seal
bring ur body for me to feel
then maybe i can consider ur plea for a love deal

its takes two-times a woman
to stand up to a blabbing man
i'm more than u can handle
u with ur mini-proportioned candle 
talking to a babe with no respect
i'm sure u always hide behind skirt
don't worry, here's a real woman to school u
those ones tripping only fool u

i've got class an' my skills cut glass
while u're just a gainsayer, no, more a naysayer

i make things happen, my mind to sharpen
u only shoot the breeze till ur brain u freeze

i know u must be high to think u're d main guy
so long as I'm here i'll make ur hair fry

with my lyricism i'll dull u
with ur criticisms u'll crawl thru'

i'm warming up, while u're burning up
with  a babe like me, u've overfilled ur cup
making mouth like u can handle a chick
i dont need ur sorry ass talking slick
me, plea for a love deal?
you mean you, tryin' to cop a feel
u wish u could screw for 10 years and a day
wen u can't even last a minute on B.J. 

one-minute man, go one side jo
one taste of me, u'll be begging for more!!!

_{hmmm, u growing balls baby,
like dat}

maedan:


its takes two-times a woman
to stand up to a blabbing man
i'm more than u can handle
u with ur mini-proportioned candle
talking to a babe with no respect
i'm sure u always hide behind skirt
don't worry, here's a real woman to school u
those ones tripping only fool u

i've got class an' my skills cut glass
while u're just a gainsayer, no, more a naysayer

i make things happen, my mind to sharpen
u only shoot the breeze till ur brain u freeze

i know u must be high to think u're d main guy
so long as I'm here i'll make ur hair fry

with my lyricism i'll dull u
with ur criticisms u'll crawl thru'

i'm warming up, while u're burning up
with a babe like me, u've overfilled ur cup
making mouth like u can handle a chick
i dont need ur sorry ass talking slick
me, plea for a love deal?
you mean you, tryin' to cop a feel
u wish u could screw for a year and a day
wen u can't even last a minute on B.J. emi? can't last a minute on b.jlol

one-minute man, go one side jo
one taste of me, u'll be begging for more!!!

men made d mistake allowing womenfolk out of d kitchen
now, u going all wild like a sex starved kitten,
if u wanna play d game of men,
then ur genitals u need to amend.

i know u loving up for me,
always wantin to come up to me
and try to impress me,
but ur ways depress me.

Now u callin urself a chick,
but all what u do best is sucking mal-functioning, albino D i c ks,
saying u've got class
but we all know u are just a cheap piece of ass.
Worse still, ur ass is as hard as a rock,
i wouldn't bother in u to stick my c o c k.
u,. . . . gimme a b l o w job?
i would rather take shark catchin as a job.

u calling me. . . . a one minute man?
so what are u,. . . . a real woman?
yeah rite,
by laying down on d bed like a log of wood,
when u can never handle me, a real brother from the hood.

if i work on ur body,
and allow u to suck my love candy,
u will beg to always be my baby,
willing to pay me just to be my lady.


if i were to handle u for a nite,
treat u right
put it in where u are suppose to b tight
(even ,though it ain't no more tight)
u would always submit ur body for me to feel,
and always come beggin for a love deal.

but u aint worth d trouble,
since u would definitely fumble,
cos u can't match my lyrical skills
and u stand in awe of my love thrills

olulu:



finally a place i can make my zone,
its good to know am not alone,
i always love forums dat play with words,
just like warriors fighting with swords,
makes me feel like david when he flung d sling,
or like mike tyson when he was still good in d ring,
jab, jab, punch
jab, jab , right hook, punch,
flow in easy,
but leave ur face all bloody and messy,
but i ain't no fighter
am more of a thriller and a lover,
u know, like intellectual love making,
with no need for orgasm faking
for i always love to enjoy it,
and not endure it,
cos when i feel d attraction,
and d mounting tension,
then i do d necessary interaction
to ignite d passion
thereby increasing d excitement
and afterwards, we will both savour d moment.
u feel me yet?
then stay glued to d net.




where is my princessa

ryt here ma lova
i'm lookin 4 a nigga
who'll love me lyk no otha
even result 2 murda
just 2 be ma only lova
baby, i got no otha
so no need 2 botha
imma make u shine lyk a nova

***tyt 4 a starter, init***

Laughing my head off at your comeback
u couldn't handle my shaq attack
making things personal aint my style
but for fun i'll make this worth my while

i don't need balls to make u fall
u'll come jumping even b4 i call
u fell for my flow now u're acting slow
pretending i'm the chaser
when i burnt u like laser

u know i'm bam, take it like a man
if i say i'm a chick u can bet i am
if u dont believe set a time
u'll see me n beg me to make u mine

no need boasting, ur ass i'll be roasting
my looks and style will have u toasting

talking about women and kitchen
looks like ur babe's a pigeon
datz y u dnt know how to scope a lady
talkin me down n acting shady

make it plain, i've got u hooked
i make it rain, i'm fully booked
so i dont need u dogging my back
u'll need to do much beta b4 we can hit d sack!



i dey play oooo

maedan:


Laughing my head off at your comeback
u couldn't handle my shaq attack
making things personal aint my style
but for fun i'll make this worth my while

i don't need balls to make u fall
u'll come jumping even b4 i call
u fell for my flow now u're acting slow
pretending i'm the chaser
when i burnt u like laser

u know i'm bam, take it like a man
if i say i'm a chick u can bet i am
if u dont believe set a time
u'll see me n beg me to make u mine

no need boasting, ur ass i'll be roasting
my looks and style will have u toasting

talking about women and kitchen
looks like ur babe's a pigeon
datz y u dnt know how to scope a lady
talkin me down n acting shady

make it plain, i've got u hooked
i make it rain, i'm fully booked
so i dont need u dogging my back
u'll need to do much beta b4 we can hit d sack!



i dey play oooo

_{hmmm, 9ice and tite, i like ur flows}

u still want to contest my skills?
or doubt my love thrills?
well, i really couldn't bother
cos u such a trivial matter,
u just a lil kid seekin attention,
cos u already runnin into frustration,

i would have offered to act like ur big brother,
and talk sum sense into such a dumb sister,
but u acting dumb, fat and proud,
showing ur "dumbness" out loud
making u get dumb and dumber,
thereby u doing blow jobs in sharp corners.
now u want with me to hit d sack,
me on top, u on ur back,
u would just get addicted to me,
and u would not want to unglue yourself from me.
cos when i hammer u right,
which would open ur sight,
make u see d lite,
and u love to ever hold me tight.

but its such a shame,
ur mental capacity so lame,
is it by force u roll with we d big boys?
hey,kid, go play with ur toys.

for dis is the game of kings,
fit only for we da crowned kings,
and cos it is also d king of games,
so u need to get lost , u dumb dame

if u've not got it,
u can't do it.
cos u are what u are,
and we all know what a pig u are.

but i 4give u ur sins,
cos u such a poor, loveless , dumb, lonely tin

or u wanna get fired?
scattered and tattered?

then its better u get a move on,
for am about to turn d heat on.





@maedan
_{which part is d play play? d hittin d sack part,
haba, y na, i was thinkin that was an invitation to treat
i don dey warm up already}

$Iceee$:

ryt here ma lova
i'm lookin 4 a nigga
who'll love me lyk no otha
even result 2 murda
just 2 be ma only lova
baby, i got no otha
so no need 2 botha
imma make u shine lyk a nova

***tyt 4 a starter, init***

now here is a lady
i can make my baby,
if u are a princess,
i would treat u like a jewel so priceless.
and if u loyal,
i will always treat u royal.
u ready for me to b ur love doctor,
and be ur frills and thrills author,
then lets get nakedly naked,
and in sweat be bathed.

Am back again like the king of Roma
to tell you another story of a true murder
this one is really like no other

so if you don't mind
and you are sure you wont whine
when i take my time
to make my rhyme
into beautiful flowing lines

then here i go
just as i bow:


BLOODY NIGHT
tonight as we both stand to the east
staring at each other like hungry beast

i say do not dare the anger of this rod
of which men call the sword

as i look into those innocent staring eyes
i saw in it those betraying lies
i know surely tonight i shall justify

with this iron
i will bounce on you like a hungry lion

and tear you up so cool
then watch your blood form a pool

am the making of a thousand warriors
and am about to unleash a terrible horror
a serious one and without honor
ah! my friend tonight you are the blood donor

of which this earth shall gracefully suck
and men will verily walk

i will pierce into you like a hot panama sun
then leave you to watch the pain burn

i will then tear you to pieces
then scatter you to the seas
so violently without a single beat of peace

the line is drawn
you have nowhere to run

let the owls make the rhythm
for now is the right time

just now that the fight is about to start
then i got that feeling of a dying cat

then, i just woke up with a scream
just to realize it was only a dream.

^{hit sack ko, ram sack ni
i know na only dat line u see}


anywayz, aint u tired of me giving u a beating
'cos my standards u just aint meeting
wuz just playin' witcha, but maybe soon
i'll smash u down like a dumb-assed goon
what makes u think u're a big boi
running ur mouth just like a rude boy
here's a chick who can flow, n u cant take the heat
so u talk about how ur rhymes are so neat

yeah right! ur lines are so crappy its more hit n miss
u act the fool and call it a diss
by now u should know i'm the queen of the flow
i've taken on better than u and i killed the show

ur act is so flawed, i don't know why i bother
u can't even rhyme up to my six year old brother!

[quote author=maedan link=topic=233228.msg3483345#msg3483345 date=1234964588]
^{hit sack ko, ram sack ni
i know na only dat line u see}

spoil sport


anywayz, aint u tired of me giving u a beating
'cos my standards u just aint meeting
wuz just playin' witcha, but maybe soon
i'll smash u down like a dumb-assed goon
what makes u think u're a big boi
running ur mouth just like a rude boy
here's a chick who can flow, n u cant take the heat
so u talk about how ur rhymes are so neat

yeah right! ur lines are so crappy its more hit n miss
u act the fool and call it a diss
by now u should know i'm the queen of the flow
i've taken on better than u and i killed the show

ur act is so flawed, i don't know why i bother
u can't even rhyme up to my six year old brother!

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u are so full of crap,
ur mouth i need to slap,
ur rhyme stinks like a dead , bloated rat,
and u can't see cos u are like a blind bat
u trying to act cool,
but u showing urself off as d fool.
u think u flow?
girlfriend, ur brain is so slow.
u need to upgrade ur brain from ur per minute billing
to conform to per seconds thinkin.
i know am a big boy,
and i can't help but treat u like a toy,
cos u ain't in my class,
u just a cheap piece of ass.
where is dat my cane?
make i flog u back to ur lane.
i don't wanna really lay on u d blame,
but its ur fault dat ur brain is so lame,
cos ur ways are full of shame,
and u bring disgrace to ur name.
so quit d game,
and go live ur life of an old, ugly dame.



_{omoge, hw far with hittin d sack . . . . . oya now, my body don dey hot o,
make i enter ur "temple", and b ur priest for life}

you will get lost inside the temple if u dont take time

Wow m impresd 9ja has got so much talent
But y'all shuld tak al dis lame stuff n shove it down d drain
Dn't 4get m d dude who startd dis blog
And y'all are a cog in d wheel
but wit my heel
i'l crush all ur sickening rhyme
dis is my time
d skillz
i bring thrillz
dat leave u runnin 2 ur mama
i suggest go home n try on sum pampers
cuz my rhymez leave ur ears pounding like jackhammers
BEWARE!!!
Dis dude is comin thru d Blue
A force so hard dat leaves you sickend wit d flu
My Crew
lyk fine wine i groom n Brew
And d next tym i sign on,it'll b 2 rule forever
Watchout 4 dis name
SKILLZ4EVA

clemcykul:

you will get lost inside the temple if u dont take time

no worry, i go carry touch light, compass and map

U sure can rhyme meadan
Bt i stil tink u're a dumb old maiden
ur flow's a comedy
i tink u shuld consider lullaby's
cos ur flows are good sleep inducers
Stakin claims 2 d Queen of flows
Honey d only group u control
is a couple of clowns
Ur rhyme schemes are nice
bt evritin u talk about are lies
''Fully bookd''
U mean by junkd-out freaks
What makes u tick
Talkin abut urself
like some amazon
Lol,cum out of ur emotional prison
Learn 4rm d masters
phew,dat's all i can cum up wit 4 now

What's up with y'all.Especially meadan,d supposed "Queen of Flows" did u run out of steam??M waitin 2 whip ur ass all ova dis forum.

Alas, it is time.D men av bin separatd 4rm d boiz.
Maedan is SILENT
It seems she has bin caught in a TORRENT
no more striking 4rm jayTHUNDER
he can only sit n PONDER
ova his rhymeless BLUNDER
olulu has run out of STEAM
i think he came apart @ d SEAMS
no 1 else or so it SEEMS
anyway m stil WAITIN
2 take y'all apart @ d next POSTIN

Waitin?Cmon av y'all lost ur nerves?
Pitiful house hold elfs?Humph!!!

another lame lyricist
trying to be self-publicist
a rhyme-king wannabe
are u sure u want a piece of me

I was doing this just to while away time
but it seems to me that u're next in line
to taste the full pinch of my sting
i'll whip u till my name u'll sing

speaking of names, u think u're so clever
u don't deserve to be called "skills4eva"
skills? huh, don't make me laugh
soon u'll be begging 4 my autograph
'cos u and me aint in the same category
go n meet olulu to give u the testimony  

enough said cos i don't have your time
n i don't want to waste my gold-studded rhyme
but if u insist, my attack i'll persist
though i strongly advise, a word's enuff 4 d wise
or else on NL they'll soon hear ur cries  

dumb reeaal DUMB!!!!!