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 Education › Re: 2013/2014 Obafemi Awolowo University ::ASPIRANTS:: by Nimk(f): 1:59pm On Jan 03, 2015 |
papindinho:w papinx.....wishing you the same dear.....  papindinho:w papinx.....wishing you the same dear..... |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 9:57pm On Dec 25, 2014 |
zyzxx:merry xmas to u too |
| Celebrities › Re: This Piece Written About Tiwa Savage Is Very Deep(with Photos) by Nimk(f): 12:01pm On Dec 23, 2014 |
From all i see.....our AFRICAN CULTURE HAS GONE DOWN THE DRAIN... and when did civilization become unclothed ness...mschew! |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 11:14pm On Dec 22, 2014 |
iyaf blush finish....my head e haf sweeellll Tnx so much guyz...ya d best.....i will update wen i can walk well sha...buh tnx once again.. Really needed this ...tnx |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 11:12am On Dec 22, 2014 |
zyzxx:*blushing* hehehe im better now jare....itwas appendix ish |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 10:44am On Dec 22, 2014 |
zyzxx:Will be fyn soon...it was a surgery so datz y tnxxxxx |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 4:40am On Dec 22, 2014 |
zyzxx:yh buh still runnin in n out of d hosp |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 7:01pm On Dec 20, 2014 |
zyzxx:jes got discharged from d hosp |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 5:42am On Dec 17, 2014 |
thanks guyz @ crocz and zyzxx......thanks |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 7:53pm On Dec 15, 2014 |
zyzxx:lol ,am sorry i ave not updated it...ive been going to the hospital...i promise to try and update wen im strong |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 10:05pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
hemjaylee:looool...tnx for following all d way...God bless #happysunday |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 7:11pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
will try and update tomorow |
| Romance › Re: Upload Your Pix Here Lets See How Handsome Or Pretty You Are by Nimk(f): 3:20pm On Dec 14, 2014 |
meeee 6 Likes
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| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 8:21pm On Dec 13, 2014 |
hemjaylee:should end tomorrow...tnx for following |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 6:05pm On Dec 13, 2014*. Modified: 5:52pm On Jun 20, 2018 |
I wasnt thinking,I didnt want to think. I lunged at him and punched him,he fell down from the chair. Blood came out of his nose.... "You bastard"he screamed as he came at me,he kicked me and punched me simultaneously. "You bastard! I knew it. You are not my son,you can never be my son" He laughed sarcastically. I wondered what he was talking about....I pushed him away and was about to hit him again when he said ... "You are a bastard! You are not my son" I dropped my hand. "What are you talking about" He cleaned the blood trickling from his nose,and stood up to face me. He laughed again "I guess laila must have told you about our little affair" He laughed again,my fists clenched,I wanted to break his teeth. "She was sweet" He laughed again as he downed the beer from the can " sweeter than your mother" I couldnt take it anymore. I raised up my hand to hit him when he said "Your mum cheated on me with my best friend" He wasn't laughing again,I dropped my hand "What are you saying" " Im saying you are not my son" I couldnt believe it. I just turned and ran upstairs to mums room. I met her on the floor coughing seriously,I went to meet her,to lift her up,and i saw blood coming out of her mouth,before she fainted. "Jesus!" ***-********************** "She has cancer of the blood,its been there for somewhile now and it has become malignant,If she had come earlier then it would not have been this bad. Im sorry,Mr fanan,but there is nothing we can do." I just kept looking at the doctor. Mum had been diagnosed of leukaemia four years ago but rather than treat it,she devoted herself to church activities and distanced herself from her loved ones. She was able to hide it because i didnt suspect she was sick even though within four years she had aged a lot. If only i had known. Dad really loved mum,but she broke his heart when she cheated with his best friend to have me. Dad was impotent,so for six years mum couldnt conceive.So she slept with his best friend,he found out and got angry,ever since then he started going to clubs,started drinking but i still cant forgive him for what he did to laila . ***************** the story will soon end tnx for following. |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 4:19pm On Dec 13, 2014 |
Thavybe:thanks for d comment...yh i guessd as much dat it was predictable...maybe coz im writing it for fun buh aniwaiz tnx for d comments@evrione  Thavybe:thanks for d comment...yh i guessd as much dat it was predictable...maybe coz im writing it for fun buh aniwaiz tnx for d comments@evrione |
| Forum Games › Re: Let's Play This Word Game Called Last Man Standing by Nimk(f): 1:13pm On Dec 13, 2014 |
zyzxx:*lol ....the weekend will be fyn tnx* |
| Forum Games › Re: Let's Play This Word Game Called Last Man Standing by Nimk(f): 7:03am On Dec 13, 2014 |
dre11:Rest is almost the same as sleep *@dre11 haba nah |
| Literature › Re: The Corpse on the Couch - a murder mystery by Nimk(f): 9:57pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
following ....nyc one ...but this stranger...mmmh |
| Forum Games › Re: Let's Play This Word Game Called Last Man Standing by Nimk(f): 9:16pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
zyzxx:*@zyzxx im studyin microbiology* |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 8:49pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
I need criticism...o! I am not so much of a writer so i need your opinions and views before i continue. thank u nimk |
| Literature › Re: Rugged Men......... Story by Nimk(f): 8:43pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
Crocz:Its not that easy to type also I'm typing it from my head not that im following a script so it makes it harder....and its a freestyle...i just put it up for fun jare maybe thats why |
| Forum Games › Re: Let's Play This Word Game Called Last Man Standing by Nimk(f): 8:14pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 8:12pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
zyzxx:tnx |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 6:54pm On Dec 12, 2014*. Modified: 5:49pm On Jun 20, 2018 |
I couldnt believe it...i didnt want to believe it,but i knew the truth...i knew she wasnt lying,there was no way she made it all up. One look at her face said it all,but i couldnt accept that my dad was a monster. But only a monster could do all these things. She was still sobbing,I knew she was afraid, I could see the fear in her eyes. I held her hand and took her inside,she was shaking but i understood , she had been through a lot. I poured her a glass of water but she didnt take it, she just kept crying and saying " i'm sorry". I couldnt take it anymore, I was trying my best to hold my tears but i couldnt... "Its not your fault," I croaked.. Of course it wasnt her fault she was a victim. ******************°°°°°°°°°°°°°••••••••••••••••••••••• Dad had been sleeping with Laila since when she came from Kano,not immediately but not too long from when she came. The first time he raped her,he threatened to send her back to kano so she would die the way her family died (according to his words). Being a naive girl she believed him and kept quiet. Everytime after school lessons he picked her from school and took her to different hotels where he committed unprintable atrocities to her. Sometimes he would use hand cuffs to hold her hands,and also a tape to cover her mouth,before ramming into her forcefully. This went on for four years,sometimes he took her shopping,sometimes he took her to fun places but still Laila died inside. The monster who did this was my Dad. ************************* I led her upstairs to her room,she was tired and weak, I waited till she fell asleep. I kissed her on her forehead and left her room. As i went down the stairs,I kept thinking of what to do to the monster. I looked up and there he was,at the bar, sipping from a beer can without a care in the world. My blood was hot,I was angry and i approached him with clenched fists. |
| Literature › Re: Rugged Men......... Story by Nimk(f): 5:57pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
[quote author=Crocz post=28821612]Sure ma'am...checking it out right now, till dicefrost updates[/quote thnks  |
| Literature › Re: Rugged Men......... Story by Nimk(f): 4:24pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
Crocz:I dont av many followers o . and also you can check out my story...Laila |
| Literature › Re: Rugged Men......... Story by Nimk(f): 2:29pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
No updates since  O ga o...dicefrost |
| Forum Games › Re: Let's Play This Word Game Called Last Man Standing by Nimk(f): 12:05pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
zyzxx:*lol,my day is going well jare tnx..* |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 12:02pm On Dec 12, 2014*. Modified: 3:54pm On Jun 20, 2018 |
"Move faster" I shouted at the cab driver.We were losing the jeep. "I think they know we are following them" the driver said as he turned to the expressway. There were a lot of similar cars on the road..I groaned..this was not going to be easy. We sped on until we got to ogudu...from their the car kept making turns into different streets and we kept on following them. They knew we were following them and suddenly they made a sharp turn and sped off. Before we could turn they had disappeared. "Shit! We were so close" I cried out in frustration. I was angry,my heart was beating fast,different thoughts in my head,my head was pounding like i had a migraine. I quickly got home ,paid the cab driver and ran upstairs to her room. I knocked on the door,there was no response. I turned the door knob and entered. For the first time in four years i was standing in her room. It was neatly arranged and smelt nice. I looked on her table and saw her diary on it. I swallowed hard.. and wanted to check it... "What are you doing here?" I turned back to see Mum standing with her hair tied in a scarf and a bible in her hand. She was just coming from prayer meeting as usual. I looked at her and missed those times she used to pat my head and play with my hair,times she used to scold and discipline me when i was wrong...but all of a sudden she stopped caring and became like dad...she was still better than dad though. "Are you dating laila? Fanan!" I was taken aback when she asked me that out of the blue. I glared at her and said "its not like you care" I was really bitter and walked out of the room. I went out of the house and checked the time, it was 6:00pm. I thought about the strange things that had been happening in the house. Mum's total devotion to church activities and neglect of the family affairs. Her constant non-chalant attitude to Dad's weird behaviours. And Dad,where do i start from..He has never cared for me since when i was a little kid..He was unserious and irresponsible...I hated him. And then laila.... The gate opened and she came inside...As usual she wanted to ignore me and go to her room. But this time I was ready, I stood in front of her with bloodshot eyes She looked at me confused at my action..she wanted to walk past me but i held her hand. "Where did dad take you to?" She looked up at me,she was obviously shocked..there were tears in her eyes... I didnt care and i shouted again "Why did dad come to pick you and where did you go" This time she was sobbing uncontrollably. |
| Literature › Re: Laila A Short Story by Nimk(op): 9:30am On Dec 12, 2014 |
any opinions or criticisms before i update  |
