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This is for you don ifez

The value of your heart
like diamonds,no fall
you strive listening to the sound of wind
like horse,you need to quench your taste

Hey! stop there
the voice of wind
with evil intention
rail,wail,crawl to get you.

you can if you never care
the sound of impediment
them,will strive to dinned

ooooh! boat of love and success
yes you me will cruise on
if be you not mind the sound of wind.

u wlcm.....

As for the first poem u wrote ( road of fate). you make use of allegory..... can u pls translate

Awesome..... for the Christmas poem,I'm glad u implored a new style of writing.... kip up wit it cos its da hook. the ryhmes are a.b.b.a.c.b.a.a.b..the imagery is clear and you write in hyperbolic way.Good it is. the first stanza has five lines which is limerick.the second stanza has 4 lines which is quatrain.the third stanza has 7 lines which is 1 quatrain and 1 tercet.The fourth stanza has 5 lines which is didac.the last stanza has only 2 lines which is an elegy. NYC writeup

@tijehi.... novellas are refer to as short novels. they only have 1 to 3 settings.gist! hmmm,its much like a gist ....be nyc frnd

we need to be wise....plagiarist are under our pillows......dats y I don't post much of my works on social network. dear my fellow writers, be wise

I got da image@dmus4love. but you should work more on ur style

ooooh dis is awful....its da negative implication of posting ones writeup on social network.
you be wise,
thee,be not give out,
your daily meal,
when you are famished.

I don't post my vital works on social network. be wise my fellow writers.

no mean heart @ tijehi.... its only a novella

dear my noble readers what do you think about the story?

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Tunde parent came to meet my parent,they brief happily and peacefully.
By the time my MD came back from his holiday,a lot of water as gone under the bridge and he was not happy with a number of things, he called upon me and expresses his disappointment openly to me.
I later found out that he was bitter because he was scared that if I got married to Tunde and I set my own clinic,the entire olatunji famy including chief would start patronizing me and the patronage of chief olatunji which he had enjoyed for years would be stopped.
However,whatever God destined to happened,will happened.Tunde and I were destined to marry and we did.
THE END.

The impact he made on me was so much that for the first time in all my life,I slept with a man on my first date.
we went home to my place and he slept over till the next day.our love goes on smoothly. it wasn't up to a week that he was talking about marriage.
when he told his father about us,the old man was excited,he said his dream had been fulfilled and his wish had come true.
No sooner that we started talking marriage that Tunde started saying that I must quit my job and set up my own clinic.when I told him I don't have money to set my own clinic,he said Money was not a problem.He said he would give me any amount of money I needed to setup my own clinic.

dear my noble readers, I'm so so sowi 4 da delay... I will roundup da story 2day

I'm sowi my noble readers I shall roundup d story by 2mrw

nyc poems

still.......

nyc poems

I need atleast 5 of my noble readers to write #simplicity# before I continue. this will signify that u r following.

The following is an elegy,lyric poem on free verse.allegory, oxymoron, personification, rhetoric question and paradox were present.

Dedicated to my late father and sister and to those who had lost their diamonds.

oooh death!
why did you hit it hard onto the world?
why did you cast your anger on the one who is innocent?
you are so mean that you even appear in our dreams,is it nightmares?,you took our pride,and turn us to a statues.

oooh death!
you are not still satisfy after you have taken the pride of some,you still came into my little kiosk and stole my priceless diamonds, you keeps us ill,and make us mourn knowing fully well that the diamonds you stole will never return.

oooh death!
This diamonds is an epitome of integrity, sweetened of honey,heart of dignity,oooh oooh,and diamonds above diamonds.

Adieu.Adieu.Adieu

"never mind how I got here,the important thing is that I'm here."
"but,you said you're coming to see me in the hospital."
" yeah! see you. that's the important thing. its you I want to see not the hospital,so it doesn't matter where I see you."
well, I opened my door to let him in,but not until he told me how he got to know my place.one of your nurses is my cousin and it was from her I got your address.Tunde added that he wanted to give me a big surprise by coming to my house,instead of the hospital as he promised.
After much talk,he took me out that night. it was an unplanned date but one that turned out to be so romantic, so out of the world. Tunde is such a nice guy,it was as if I had known him all my life.He was simply irresistible.

The next day I was in the hospital waiting for him,he didn't come. I felt so bad,and I just couldn't concentrate on what I was doing,if for any reason he would not come,why wouldn't he call to tell me he was not going to come.was he just teasing me?.
you can then imagine how shocked I was,when I got home and found Tunde sitting in front of my balcony and beaming with smile.
"How did you know my house?" I queried, my heart beating faster. Tunde just smile confidently. he seemed to enjoy the shocked and confusion that I was apparently having.

tanx@ lucentbeauty.......this is a true life story...... I assure u you'll ave fun throughout to da end

I saw the image of his handsome face every now and then.The smiles on his face,the touch of his hands,and the aroma of his perfume. unbelievable, that this was happening to me at age 27,but it was more than real.
very late in the evening, he called me on the telephone. The moment I looked at the screen of my handset and found out that he was the one calling,my heart started to beat very fast,I was shaking like a leaf.
"stop behaving like a baby!" I yelled at myself." This nonsense must stop, I must pull myself together and stop acting as if I was going to know a man for the first time."
I said all to myself,but it didn't change down,I would rather not answer the phone "I said", my voice will be shaky,my heart will be pounding and I would not be speaking smoothly. Tunde might just notice and I won't be nice.even if I have falling in love with him,let him not have the impression that I hopefully fallen for him.
so,I didn't answer his calls.After calling for several minutes, he sent me a text message that he called to say hi,but it appears I was not around to pick his call,he then repeated that he would come to the clinic the next day to see me.

dear my noble readers, I'm sowi 4 da delay,just kinda busy

The following poem is an elegy in a free verse style. it has 2 quatrain, 2 tercet and 1 sestet. paradox, personification,rethoric question were present.

our aim is to climb a Golding ladder
but, it takes decades for we to climb
we persevere to succeed,
in this life,full of impediment.

our eyes,enemies it seek,
beg God to unravel the
mystery of their heart.

why is man so wicked?
they still struggle to pull us down
when we are rising.

protection and mercy we seek,
thee,only God can spray,
we need to widing the eyes,
not to fall pray,
faith and determination,
all we need.

Tunde would not let go of my hand,even though I tried to free mine from his.He never appeared to be in a hurry to leave my side.when I say to his mother goodbye,as I leave,he followed me outside,talking and posing one question after the other at me.He didn't ask anything about his father's health, he was more concerned about knowing much about me.
I answered his questions smoothly, making sure I did not say too much about myself. it was obvious to me now that he was trying to woo me. I wasn't keen in him wooing me, but at the same time,there was something compelling, something attractive about his personality that made me to continue to stay with him as he ask one question after the other. I started talking in my mind that,is this love at first sight? I just found him so irresistible.
we ended up,exchanging cards. I gave him my complimentary card and he said he would come to the clinic to see me the next day.
" what for?" I asked.
" what for? to see you of course.I'm coming to consult you because I'm sick. I'm your patient, or you don't want patient to see you?"
"of course, I need patients as many as possible,but not people like you.you're healthy,you're not a patient."
"you're wrong doctor. wait until I tell you what is happening to me and you'll know I'm very very sick."
" you better believe me,doctor. I may look healthy but I'm lovesick."
"what did you say?" I asked,pretending as if I didn't hear him
" lovesick, that's the ailment I have," he said, trying to get hold of my hand again,but I had to force myself to leave him.
" i have not had of such ailment," I added.
" don't worry,when I explain the symptoms to you,you'll know. I managed to depart from him,but I couldnt take him off my mind.from time to time, I admonished myself to situp and stop behaving like a teenager, but Tunde was like a virus that has infected every cell of my body.

pls my noble readers your comment is my motivation

sowi typing error ....there is no cause for alarm..... tanks for ur observation

As he drew closer to where I was standing, he raised his head up and our eyes met for a couple of seconds,he blinked uncomfortably and missed one of the steps and almost fell.

"easy!" I said,reaching forward to hold him and preventing him from falling.he took my helping hand promptly and steadied himself.

"Thanks", he said with a very warm smile that made my heart beat faster. I tried to smile but I guess I didn't succeed at that.he was so gorgeous.the aroma of his after shave was so compelling and sexy.
I walked down to the sitting room where I met Mrs olatunji waiting. she said she was very happy that I came,she asked me when my boss will be back,she handed a brown envelope to me which she told me chief said should be given to me.
"thanks ma,I'm grateful," I said. As I was putting the envelope inside my handbag,I heard footfalls descending the staircase. I knew it was the same young man and I looked up instantly.
It was him quite well,his determined eyes fixed on me,while he came down confidently with a smile that spread from ear to ear.
"Tunde,have you met Dr Vanessa?" Mrs olatunji said, " yeah, I've met her, " replied Tunde. "But, I didn't know she's a doctor."
"she's one of your fathers doctors, she is from Dr Gabriel's hospital."
tunde stretched a hand towards me.
"please to know you Dr Vanessa", he said.
I couldn't resist shaking is hand again. And as I did so, Mrs olatunji said.
"doctor meet my son,Tunde."
I should have known that, I thought there was an obvious similarity between chief and Tunde. He had his mother fair complexion,but his facial features were those of the man I met on the sick bed,his father.

wow that's fabulous@ lucentbeauty......do u write novella or novels?..if u ave passion 4 it,you can go tru my writeup (secret of love)...u will surely love it