texanomaly:

The best poems often do. Nice job.
Following

:* Thanks dear

Lucent

harlos: Lucent

Harlos

I want to compose a poem for a friend but each time I try another one comes and pop itself in my head so I guess that had to come first.

~To everyone who feels this way~

Looking back I feel we could have done better
All those tears and those pains
We could have avoid them

We could have lived without those lies
Those fights
Those thoughts
That always threatened our existence

Blindly we went with people's opinions
Casting our resolutions behind us
Things mundane
Like child's play
Started
Slowly
Choking the Life out of us

Parted to never met
As time goes by we shall know
If it will last
Or it was merely a break
From those words

Nice collection of poems. You've got the talent, the flow and the beautiful usage of spontaneous words. Please what are you studying, I am curious?

Clemzy16: Nice collection of poems. You've got the talent, the flow and the beautiful usage of spontaneous words. Please what are you studying, I am curious?

Clem here?
Thank you

I just got admission this year to study History.

Lucentbeauty: I want to compose a poem for a friend but each time I try another one comes and pop itself in my head so I guess that had to come first.

~To everyone who feels this way~

Looking back I feel we could have done better
All those tears and those pains
We could have avoid them

We could have lived without those lies
Those fights
Those thoughts
That always threatened our existence

Blindly we went with people's opinions
Casting our resolutions behind us
Things mundane
Like child's play
Started
Slowly
Choking the Life out of us

Parted to never met
As time goes by we shall know
If it will last
Or it was merely a break
From those words

This is cool
well done.

Lucentbeauty:

Harlos

I'm still waiting for you to reply me na

Lucentbeauty:

Clem here?
Thank you

I just got admission this year to study History.

Hmmm, i did history in pre-degree. Pls wat skul?

harlos:
This is cool
well done.

Thanks dear

I'm still waiting for you to reply me na

Ipaja

Clemzy16: Hmmm, i did history in pre-degree. Pls wat skul?

OAU

Lucentbeauty:

Ipaja

i live at berger bt visits iyana-ipaja most weekends

Thats good to know!

For a dude whose attitude to life makes me think twice.
I wish it wasn't so. There are better ways to let it die.





I feel like I have been slapped
I have been taken for a fool
The so called love you had for me
Was fool-proof you said
And here
My eyes are telling me
I was a fool to have believed you

So this is the other me
The other me you prefer
I wasn't your type
But because of what I Had
You stood through

I thought I was loved for me
But I have been proved wrong
Do I deserve this?
What wrong did I do?
Why couldn't you love me?
Wasn't I man enough?
Or didn't I treat you right?

Am hurt beyond words
You've made me lose faith in your kind

Beware!

You made me this
A human machine
Raking recklessly
Loving without emotion

Tell your kind you made me this
They shall bear the pain of your betrayal

Don't forget my name
I will make sure you don't

Lucentbeauty: For a dude whose attitude to life makes me think twice.
I wish it wasn't so. There are better ways to let it die.





I feel like I have been slapped
I have been taken for a fool
The so called love you had for me
Was fool-proof you said
And here
My eyes are telling me
I was a fool to have believed you

So this is the other me
The other me you prefer
I wasn't your type
But because of what I Had
You stood through

I thought I was loved for me
But I have been proved wrong
Do I deserve this?
What wrong did I do?
Why couldn't you love me?
Wasn't I man enough?
Or didn't I treat you right?

Am hurt beyond words
You've made me lose faith in your kind

Beware!

You made me this
A human machine
Raking recklessly
Loving without emotion

Tell your kind you made me this
They shall bear the pain of your betrayal

Don't forget my name
I will make sure you don't

to you dude, from me ms...

Hey Mr dont get me wrong,
i saw ur wallet, it was fat,
u enticed me, u showed how it throng,
u forced me to show u love,
i didnt give u my heart,
day after day, i tried to tell u,
but u made perfect love all night long!

i dont knw who told u,
i dnt aw yu found awt,
i tried to paint my love true,
i never meant to throw d clout,
i still scratch my head as i wonder who,
cos i knw yu tot my love was witawt a doubt!

I'm sawrie if we have to go dis way,
d false was anything but personal,
if u must hurt anoda, it shouldnt be becous my kind u want to repay,
we always had differences, just like man u and arsenal,
dat doesnt mean i would mind anoda mary kay,
we may no longer be lovers, but i hope to still be ur best pal!!!

Nice n sincere, i love your talent. WRITE ON!

The following is a traditional poem,written in blank verse.it is arranged in 4 quatrain with simple and beautiful language that makes it unique. hyperbole, metaphor, personification were all present.

This is for my lovely family

I see no changes in the water
because we all live sincerely
we all live happily and comfortably
that no one cannever separate us

we all share things kindly
that know conflict displayed
we all have fun together
till the sunset

Happiness flows around us
that people envy us
charity is what we belief
that we cannot stop

furious is farther
love is near
we all live joyfully
and all we rejoice.

GenWOJUOLA:

to you dude, from me ms...

Hey Mr dont get me wrong,
i saw ur wallet, it was fat,
u enticed me, u showed how it throng,
u forced me to show u love,
i didnt give u my heart,
day after day, i tried to tell u,
but u made perfect love all night long!

i dont knw who told u,
i dnt aw yu found awt,
i tried to paint my love true,
i never meant to throw d clout,
i still scratch my head as i wonder who,
cos i knw yu tot my love was witawt a doubt!

I'm sawrie if we have to go dis way,
d false was anything but personal,
if u must hurt anoda, it shouldnt be becous my kind u want to repay,
we always had differences, just like man u and arsenal,
dat doesnt mean I WOULDNT MIND ANORTHA MARY KAY
we may no longer be lovers, but i hope to still be ur best pal!!!

THANK God you not a girl,thats simple hilarious but I doubt the dude is laughing. Thumbs up maybe we could write a duet one day.

noble4d: The following is a traditional poem,written in blank verse.it is arranged in 4 quatrain with simple and beautiful language that makes it unique. hyperbole, metaphor, personification were all present.

This is for my lovely family

I see no changes in the water
because we all live sincerely
we all live happily and comfortably
that no one cannever separate us

we all share things kindly
that know conflict displayed
we all have fun together
till the sunset

Happiness flows around us
that people envy us
charity is what we belief
that we cannot stop

furious is farther
love is near
we all live joyfully
and all we rejoice.

The images I saw are of a perfect family and you just inspired me to write something.

My greetings to your lovely family.

Blaq king: Nice n sincere, i love your talent. WRITE ON!

Thank you.

Dedicated to Noble4d

You reminded me that it all started there.



Running and screaming
What fun am having
Sis you can't catch me
You don't have what it takes

Dad is smiling
Aren't you a little too old for this?
We stop to stare
No we said
And continued our game of Tag

We continue till we tired
jumping on the Bed
We tease dad until he laughs
Telling jokes and stories
Singing a hurriedly formed song
That is sure to make him laugh

This is a day in my life
In my home
And am glad I got them both.

Lucentbeauty:

THANK God you not a girl,thats simple hilarious but I doubt the dude is laughing. Thumbs up maybe we could write a duet one day.

abi, just maybe!

Lucentbeauty: Dedicated to Noble4d

You reminded me that it all started there.



Running and screaming
What fun am having
Sis you can't catch me
You don't have what it takes

Dad is smiling
Are you a little too old for this?
We stop to stare
No we said
And continued our game of Tag

We continue till we tired
jumping on the Bed
We tease dad until he laughs
Telling jokes and stories
Singing a hurriedly formed song
That is sure to make him laugh

This is a day in my life
In my home
And am glad I got them both.

loving every bit

I wrote this last nyt, thinking of someone... Its to all my guys who feel dey cash to pick her up!

Like romeo and julliet,
i may not be able to afford diamonds and gold,
but i promise to buy roses and a trinket,
wich with love, i pray dear you hold!

I may not take u out on a date,
but i want to b closer dan ur boyfriend,
in a restaurant, on tables, i may wait,
but ur needs i promise to fend!

I may not know how to show love,
i may bring doubts and fear,
my affections i may shove,
but always remember dat i do care!

On yu i always had a crush,
my friends, i always did tell,
to ur face, i alwys did hush,
but when d cat was i goin to bell?

Ive summoned courage to open up,
my feelings, im hiding no more,
thinking of which line to drop,
to make ur heart mine for sure!

wow that's fabulous@ lucentbeauty......do u write novella or novels?..if u ave passion 4 it,you can go tru my writeup (secret of love)...u will surely love it

The following poem is an elegy in a free verse style. it has 2 quatrain, 2 tercet and 1 sestet. paradox, personification,rethoric question were present.

our aim is to climb a Golding ladder
but, it takes decades for we to climb
we persevere to succeed,
in this life,full of impediment.

our eyes,enemies it seek,
beg God to unravel the
mystery of their heart.

why is man so wicked?
they still struggle to pull us down
when we are rising.

protection and mercy we seek,
thee,only God can spray,
we need to widing the eyes,
not to fall pray,
faith and determination,
all we need.

noble4d: wow that's fabulous@ lucentbeauty......do u write novella or novels?..if u ave passion 4 it,you can go tru my writeup (secret of love)...u will surely love it

Thanks.
Writing a novel/novella isn't the problem it's continuing it. Soon I pray I will start.
Will gladly do that.

GenWOJUOLA: I wrote this last nyt, thinking of someone... Its to all my guys who feel dey cash to pick her up!

Like romeo and julliet,
i may not be able to afford diamonds and gold,
but i promise to buy roses and a trinket,
wich with love, i pray dear you hold!

I may not take u out on a date,
but i want to b closer dan ur boyfriend,
in a restaurant, on tables, i may wait,
but ur needs i promise to fend!

I may not know how to show love,
i may bring doubts and fear,
my affections i may shove,
but always remember dat i do care!

On yu i always had a crush,
my friends, i always did tell,
to ur face, i alwys did hush,
but when d cat was i goin to bell?

Ive summoned courage to open up,
my feelings, im hiding no more,
thinking of which line to drop,
to make ur heart mine for sure!

You better hurry before someone else beats you to it.

Lucentbeauty:

You better hurry before someone else beats you to it.

yes ooo, i gats to be fast!!!

Result of meetimg with her... Who i tot of in ma last poem(aldoe its not real, but i just got inspired as if it were!)

Cupids arrows just been shot,
i felt my chest, ive been got,
trying to move, love does hurt,
i dnt want to, but it seems im goin to fall in love!

As i walked down d streets of asaba,
i got a call, inviting me to calabar,
in d bus sat a damsel who wasnt from taraba,
her eyes shone, like d cutlass of an Isakaba,
her beauty, flawless like d Niger by Anambra,
O! Her smile calls to love.

I blink my eyes and see her face,
her intelligence, her thinking pace,
yet her beauty leaves any mortal in a daze,
at her smile, i cant help but to gaze,
o no! I think im in love

walkin down d streets alone,
with my dolce and gabbana cologne,
to call her i picked up my phone,
to take her awt, to make her my own,
o shit! Im actually in love!

Her face i seek to see again,
her voice is drivin me insane,
with her, evry other thing seems mundane,
my feelings is my bane,
shes not in love, dats my pain,
but my feelings, i promise to maintain,
even doe she tot it is only profane,
but always i knew it! Love hurts.....

The end

; DI Love This

GenWOJUOLA: Result of meetimg with her... Who i tot of in ma last poem(aldoe its not real, but i just got inspired as if it were!)

Cupids arrows just been shot,
i felt my chest, ive been got,
trying to move, love does hurt,
i dnt want to, but it seems im goin to fall in love!

As i walked down d streets of asaba,
i got a call, inviting me to calabar,
in d bus sat a damsel who wasnt from taraba,
her eyes shone, like d cutlass of an Isakaba,
her beauty, flawless like d Niger by Anambra,
O! Her smile calls to love.

I blink my eyes and see her face,
her intelligence, her thinking pace,
yet her beauty leaves any mortal in a daze,
at her smile, i cant help but to gaze,
o no! I think im in love

walkin down d streets alone,
with my dolce and gabbana cologne,
to call her i picked up my phone,
to take her awt, to make her my own,
o shit! Im actually in love!

Her face i seek to see again,
her voice is drivin me insane,
with her, evry other thing seems mundane,
my feelings is my bane,
shes not in love, dats my pain,
but my feelings, i promise to maintain,
even doe she tot it is only profane,
but always i knew it! Love hurts.....

The end

Like crazy...

Thumbs up

Lucentbeauty:

Like crazy...

Thumbs up

tnxx