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wow....this is awesome....... a traditional poem...of 13 lines......it has 1 sestet and 1 sonnet......u make use of paradox and personification that make it sound.......good work bro

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Dear my noble readers,

I'm so sorry for my slow updates, just kinda busy. let me use this opportunity to express my gratitude for following my
story and the corrections,I humbly appreciate.

I will strive to correct the ills and faults of my work in the future post. seat still and tight your belts, because the story hasn't ended. thanks

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nyc story u have

let's discuss about drama here
www.nairaland.com/1566941/drama-club-drama-lovers#20489790

let's discuss about drama here
www.nairaland.com/1566941/drama-club-drama-lovers#20489790

let's discuss about drama here
www.nairaland.com/1566941/drama-club-drama-lovers#20489790

its like nairalanders have no interest in drama

wow....its epic......NYC 1 bro

" ideas are a dime a dozen, they are worthless, but people who put their ideas into action are priceless". I had already planned to approach the secretary immediately I get to the chamber. as I was moving towards her with a brief smile, I captured her farther smiling, little did I know that the smile is for someone else.

"Good morning to you" I greeted with a calm tone. " morning little boy" she replied.......... I paused for some seconds, looking straight into her eyes,feeling like punching that are insolent mouth. " this girl don tear my pant oooo, little boy!....chai". I mounded within. are you okay?" she asked. I pretended as if I was okay. Not too long that I saw an old,short,fatty, and horrified looking man beside me. " hy babe, I waited for you at the guest house but you didn't show up" the man said. " shit....this was the man I saw a while ago....oooh... silly me, it wasn't me she smiled at". I clinched my stay with disappointment.

" without ambition no conquest are made,and no business created. Ambition is the root of all achievement". At exactly 5.30pm, I visited my friends for our usual rehearsal. " hey guys" I hailed with joy of heart. we were happy to mingle,we were happy because the road is getting even. "we need to prepare earlier because the competition is fast approaching" Paul says. "hmmm! the journey of a thousand miles begins with a step". we listed all our needs and planned for a rainy day.

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@ shorx......nah bro...its not about kcee

At exactly 7am, I woke up, had a bathe and prepared for work. it was really my first time waking up early and bothered about work. my mum walked in to my room with a big surprise " son,I have a surprise for you" she said with a broad smile ."surprise! what is it mum? I asked zealously. you can imagine how happy I was when my mum gave me a check of #100.000. I felt on top of the world. I danced, chanting the precious name of my mum. " this is real" I said dramatically. it was a joyous moment for me. "a day of light" as my late grandpa always say.

I didn't wait so long before I called my friends on air. they were happy,so happy to hear the news that could change our lives. hmmm! my late grandpa ones said, "dreamers look into the future and see promise. those who do not dream only see the future". I had my breakfast and zoomed to the chamber.

to type with touch screen e no easy oooooo .......dats wat I'm using

alright tanks...my nobles readers.......the errors will be corrected

wow!........its amazing that my story hit the front page.........

My mum said we shouldn't get worried
that she would take a step. I felt so calm and happy as I requested for my meal.

Not too long that I saw my dad stepping down from the mini steps, tip-toe It was. he yawned and looked so tired. I left my food and rushed towards him. I greeted him briskly placing my right hands to my tummy. he only came down to give me the jamb scratch card to fill immediately. after my meal,I filled the form online.

I couldn't get a sleep, I was thinking about the secretary. I found her so irresistible. " is this love" I asked myself. I had never felt that way all my life. falling in love at 18 was unimaginable........ I stood still, placing my hand to my heart, feeling every bit of it. "she is older,how will I tell her? what will I tell her? when should I tell her?" this are the questions warbling through my heart. I went low, placing my head on the pillow and dozed off.

ooooh.....cool u know now......its a novella
a true life story

No! this is the period I needed her most.now I'm all alone,no one to talk to". she yelled

in this life,no one will live forever. we are bound to die and so shall it be?"the doctor uttered

I loved my grandma so much. why did she leave me in this troubled earth?" she dinned

you can follow my story
www.nairaland.com/1557383/road-fame-fictional-story

happy birthday 2 u bro......wish u success

you can read my novella www.nairaland.com/1541002/secret-love

dear bro,NYC story u got here. take note of your grammar and spellings....... anyways, u r doing a good job

alryt tanks

As for the paragraphing, I never want it to be that way........

typing on mobile is not an easy task.... no matter how many times a work is reviewed,there will still be errors. As for the tenses,u should know that I employed Ist person narrative technique. tanks

u can read my novella
www.nairaland.com/1541002/secret-love

you can follow my story
www.nairaland.com/1557383/road-fame-fictional-story

alryt