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I had not believed it at first when I heard my love was back. I had to rush down to Ayiba's house.
As I entered Ayiba's compound, Ayiba's mother was sitting on a stool in front of their hut. Although she had her eyes on me,she did not feel my presence. Poor widow.
She was lost in her own thoughts. I had to add waving to my greetings to bring her back to reality.
"she is inside. We just returned from doctor Bello's clinic" She said. Ayiba was her only child.
Ayiba was sitting on a mat and resting her back on the wall,sobbing noiselessly when I walked in. She hurriedly tried to wipe her tears with her palms. It had been almost a year since I saw the love of my life. I wanted to grab and hug her but she started wailing uncontrollably. I had no option other than to sit beside her to console her.
"My precious Ayiba, it's over now, thank Allah you escaped".
She just stared at me and opened her mouth to utter some words but her emotions overwhelmed her. Her mouth moved but words were not produced. I understood exactly what she wanted to say. Our love was so strong that we read our hearts. She wanted to utter she missed me. She continued crying. Finally words came out from her mouth.
"Umar, doctor Bello said I'm eleven weeks pregnant..." she hesitated before adding "...and also HIV positive!"
Her words evoked goose pimples all over my body which sent a cold shiver to my spine forcing tears out of my eyes! I wept. I held her close to myself and she buried her face on my shoulder. My heart was bitter. Those monsters had inflicted my love with an indelible mark.



...to be continued.

This is my first story on nairaland, so all your constructive criticisms are welcomed but your encouraging comments will keep me going...thank you all as you take your seat.




DEDICATION
I dedicate this piece to those abducted Chibok Girls(escapees,still alive and dead).

ride on....making sense

see my comment.

now following...


the story is "looking" nice.


just update some more....then if you need our(readers) help, we would gladly pour out our suggestions.

#WeDeyYourBack....

eiya....

you are on point.........

*grabs a bottle of kunu to cool the suspense.
#RideOn

sorry if it sounded rude....its just some typos i noticed...
e.g there is nothing like "...you does..." it's "you do"
I can't continue...
just continue your story.....I'm following.....

nice one but you have to control your tenses before your tenses throw us into confusion....


#MyOpinion



I know it's not easy but I know you can do better....[i]nice one but you have to control your tenses before your tenses throw us into confusion....


#MyOpinion



I know it's not easy but I know you can do better....[/i]nice one but you have to control your tenses before your tenses throw us into confusion....


#MyOpinion



I know it's not easy but I know you can do better....

if you are finishing the story make sure that there would be a point when Ope's husband will find out the truth then find a way to meander to a satisfactory "ending".....






#MyOpinion ...

"Close your eyes,I want to surprise you" she said.I obeyed. "taawaaaaaaayi!" My closed eyes still produced tears. she promised to deal with me. What a surprise!

[/color]Nice one...

You are on point......

now following.....[color=#770077]Nice one...

You are on point......

now following.....Nice one...

You are on point......

now following.....

I sense humour in this your story line...
Ride on...
I might follow till the end!