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Literature / Re: Scarred by Penshalom(f): 5:10pm On Dec 21, 2018
FINAL PART

I FELT ASHAMED till the next day, his words really hit close to home. I took a bold step after my afternoon lecture and walked up to him, sat beside him, opened my mouth and said I'm sorry"
He smiled at me and he looked really handsome which I didn't notice yesterday.
"I'm sorry for shouting at you too" He apologised too.
"So why are you always by yourself, why so angry?"
I looked at him for a moment before replying
"It's because of my face"
"Your face? What's wrong with your face?" He said with a frown.
I made gestures at my face confused by his reply.
"Your tribal mark? That's why?"
"Yeah and thinking about it now it's so silly." I paused a bit licking my lips. "All my life, I always saw this as a shame, my grandmother made it on my face, you know, my mother died giving birth to me and I was given to Grandma. Growing up and moving to the city, seeing other girls, I felt so inferior and then it led to envy and then hate. And I always feel people are after me you know, I guess my thoughts got twisted"
He lightly touched my shoulder
"I can't promise you that everyone will love you and your tribal mark but you have to love yourself and know that you have people that will love you, tribal mark or not." I got teary-eyed, how words got to me.
"Someone like me" He winked at me.
I grinned, he's such a charmer.
"Thank you Kayode"
"You know my name?"
"Of course I do. I've heard it a few times"
We were talking in between smiles and exchanging looks when we got interrupted.
"Oh em gee, your smile is radiant"
The girl dressed in so many colors said sitting beside us.
"Thank you" I said shyly.
"Ki lo wo bayi?" Kay said raising a brow.
"Ki lo kan e?" She replied and Kayode shook his head.
"By the way, I'm Kehinde" She introduced herself.
"I'm Deola"
It was a start of a beautiful friendship and well, I guess there are so many beautiful things around me that I never took notice of.

Penshalom

This story will probably have a sequel, so watch out for it.
Kindly drop your comments and thanks for reading it
Merry Christmas

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Literature / Scarred by Penshalom(f): 3:29pm On Dec 19, 2018
SCARRED
I woke up with a loud yawn stretching my limbs and feeling refreshed, I checked the time and it was just 6:30am which gives me enough time to do what I wanted. I happily turned on the music while walking to the bathroom. I turned on my shower, and started a show in the bathroom.
Thirty minutes later I was done in the bathroom and I dressed up; I decided to check the mirror to assess my dressing. Bad idea.
There it was, the biggest flaw of my life right there on my face and that immediately dampened my mood, my eyes were filled with tears, and then the emotions came in a rush, the anger, the self-pity and with these emotions I walked out of my house to school just like every other day, always angry at the world and at myself.

I entered the lecture room, and sat in the back all by myself, the conversations around me became a blur and then my subconsciousness begins its work. I can see them pointing at me, their laughter, the stares, and I can feel my fear right in my throat. I wanted to scream it out, but a voice stopped me
"Hello, you are Adeola right?"
I jerked out of my thoughts, looked beside me with my blurred eyes.

"Sho wa okay?"
I was quiet trying to make sense of the situation, no one ever talked to me before.
"Yeah" I said quietly.
"Are you sure? You have tears in your eyes"
I turned my face away and cleaned it then j built up my walls, again.
"Well you can leave now" I said with a hard voice, I put my headphone on shutting him out totally.


TWO HOURS LATER, the lecturer didn't turn up but the guy was still beside me, I packed my things and walked out and annoyingly he did too, chattering behind me.
I stopped and looked back.
"What the hell is your problem?" I shouted at him.
"I was just trying to make a conversation." He said quietly.

"Why?" I said folding my hands on chest, glaring.
"I already told you."
"Just f**k off."
I walked on but he held my arm back.
"What is your problem dude?" I burst out.
"I think you are the problem." He said sternly.
"Excuse me?"
"You. Are. The. Problem." He said emphasising each word. "Why are you so bitter at the world?"
"What?"
"You put this wall around yourself and shut everyone out"
"That's because…." I stuttered.
"Stop being so bitter and hateful, not everyone is out to get you."
He left me there speechless and I walked home with his words ringing in my head all night.
Penshalom

Final part coming up soon

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Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 5:16pm On Jul 19, 2018
EPISODE 4

THE PAST FOUR months have been awesome, the more I got to know him, the more I loved him, Tobi is the best man any woman could ever ask for, he helped me grow more, I've learned so many things from him although there were misunderstandings but we got through them.
I honestly thought he would jilt me when my father gave him the list of the things he would buy for the bride price.
"I knew what I was getting into Nkechi, besides you are worth more than all these things" were the exact words Tobi said when I asked him, those words made me fall deeper for him.
Presently we are at church and we are being counselled by one of the members of the Marriage committee "In summary, the man's job is to provide for his family, the woman's job is to take care of her home. The man has to love his wife just as Christ loves the church and he gave His life for us and the woman submissive to him. These and many other things are what will make your marriage work. We'll continue next week."
There were no questions raised, Tobi drove me home as usual.
"I'm so tired" Tobi complained stifling a yawn.
"Same here. Do you want to come inside for a cup of cold water?"
"Should I?"
"Just come in for a few minutes, I'll use that opportunity to show you the designs I saved for my wedding gown in my tab"
"Okay ma'am"
We both entered, I left him sitting on the couch after getting him a cup of water to get the tab from my room.
"Check it" I sat down on the couch sitting close to him opening my gallery.
He collected the tab from me.
"Hmm.. This one is gorgeous but I have a problem with this part."
"What part?" I moved closer to him to see what he is talking about.
"This V neck, I hope it won't expose your…you know.." He pointed to his chest.
"No it won't, it's not too deep"
"Are you sure?" He turned to look at me, it felt like the world stopped. He was only a breath away from me, I could feel his breath on my face and I could hear his breathing becoming laboured as he stared at me with so much intensity. His eyes moved to my lips and mine did too.
I don't know who made the first move but I just knew we started kissing, it got so deep and passionate that I let out a loud moan, that sound made me come back to my senses. We broke the kiss abruptly.
"We shouldn't have done that" Tobi said looking at me his lips swollen.
I barely heard him, the kiss replaying in my mind as I stared at his lips, I'm in trouble, I can't think of anything else. I watched him gulp as he stared at me too, lust clouding his eyes.
"No we shouldn't have" I whispered.
Our heads moved closer again and our lips touched, an electrifying feeling course through my body, I guess he felt it too because he deepened the kiss at and before I knew it we were already devouring each other.
One thing led to the other, we did it on the couch.

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Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 3:53pm On Jul 16, 2018
Episode 3

I ALMOST MISSED my quiet time, we eventually stopped the call at around 3am, so I only got few hours of sleep, I did the quiet time mumbling out a few words of prayer but I kept dozing and later slept off. I woke up with jolt and picked my phone sleepily to check the time, it's 6:50am. I dropped the phone and stretched before something snapped in me.
"6:50am" I said.
"Oh my God, it's 6:50" I gasped and jumped out of bed, taking off my clothes as I rushed to the bathroom. I did everything in a rush, the bristles of my toothbrush pricking my gum as I brushed so it had a lot of blood when I spit it out.
I had to settle on buying something to eat from our school's cafeteria since there was no time to cook.
I rushed out walking in haste, I've been doing that a lot lately but at the end it's worth it, I smiled as I thought of what happened yesterday.

IT HAS BEEN the best week of my life, words cannot express how I feel, the tingles, the butterflies, the smiles and laughs. Tobi is really romantic, I never expected it, he is one of the prayer warriors in my church so I was thinking he would be spiri-koko but it turned out wrong, he is spiritual but not way over his head, him being so handsome is a plus. We agreed to tell the Pastor officially on Sunday so we can start the courtship properly, talk to the marriage committee and all.

I DRESSED IN a beautiful flowery gown, today being Sunday, my face all radiant, everyone noticed the change in me. Tobi and I sit apart but our eyes are always on each other. The church service ended by 12pm and we headed to the Pastor's office.
Pastor came in about 30 minutes later and as usual with a gentle smile on his face.
"Igbo Kwenu" Pastor said jokingly.
I laughed in response. "Good afternoon sir" I said between laughs.
"Afternoon my dear. How are you young man?"
"I'm fine Pastor" Tobi replied bowing his head respectfully.
"So.. Seeing the two of you here.. I guess it's a green light? Or is it red?"
We chuckled.
"It's green" Tobi said.
"Wow, finally. Congratulations Bro. Tobi. It was a tough fight."
"Yes it was o"
I just rolled my eyes at Tobi shaking my head.
"Well.. I thank God for you both. I pray that God will lead you through this journey"
"Amen" We both said in response.
"I don't need to tell you both about the rules of the church. You both are one of the youths I love, you Tobi being part of the Prayer Team and Nkechi you are also in the Sunday School Unit. I would still say it anyway, as you both know, "Marriage is honourable to all and the bed…"
"Undefiled" I said finishing the words.
"Yes. Undefiled. We frown against any form of sexual immorality, just as you know, once that happens and we find out, the church will not conduct the wedding for you and you will be disciplined." He looked at us before continuing "My dear brother and sister, it's just a six month journey and before you know it you are both married, you will be with each other till death do you part, so, please, wait. Don't allow the devil push you both into sin, be careful. Feelings and spirituality are two different matters, avoid things that will push you to sin, you cannot be too spiritual for the devil, ko possible, so be careful. No sex till you both say "I do"."
"Pfft" I thought in my mind, that's no problem at all but I still nodded my head in response with a "Yes sir"
"Good, ask my secretary on your way out to give you the letter you will take to the Marriage Committee leader, I believe they will talk more on this and other important things, things that will help you both, be patient, listen and adhere to what you are told."
"We will sir"
"Good. Let me have a word of prayer with you both"
He held both our hands and prayed for few minutes, we collected the letter and gave it to the Marriage Committee leader who also congratulated us.
"I will get back to both you, se ti gbo?"
"Beeni sir" I said my with my Igbo accent which made us all laugh.
"The journey has officially started" Tobi said starting his car.
"Yes it has." I said heaving a sigh of relief and anticipating for the journey ahead.
Penshalom

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Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 8:01am On Jul 14, 2018
Episode 2

AS TIME DREW near the more nervous I was, there were times that I got lost in thought, you see my imagination runs wild, really wild, I picture things before it happens and there were times when I pictured unrealistic things and today was no exception, my imagination was running wild, I kept thinking of how to tell him "Yes", picturing different scenarios and each of them had a flaw to me but I kept trying.
I got home few minutes to 5pm, I washed my food flask in haste and ate the left over rice from the morning, our Bible Study starts by 5pm, I know I would be late but I just wanted to be reasonably late, if that makes sense.
I carefully picked my cloth, not too classy, not too casual, I redid my make-up, the problem was tying my turban, I'm not really good with head ties so I spent lots of time on the turban before I got the perfect style.
I checked myself again before I ran out as I was already late, it was 5:45pm already. "So much for being reasonably late Nkechi" I muttered as I walked in haste to the junction of my street saying a few words of greetings to people I know and met on the way and with God on my side I got a taxi immediately.
The closer we were to church step the more nervous I was, my heart pounding both in excitement and fear. I stepped in the church and subtly looked around as I made my way to the middle to sit and I found him, he was sitting in the row next to mine, our eyes met and he smiled at me revealing his white teeth, he looks more handsome when he smiles, I smiled back shyly and took my seat.
The Pastor preached I caught a few words but my mind kept drifting, same as my eyes. I kept glancing at him and I caught him doing the same each of us looking away whenever we caught each other's eyes. The service finally ended at 6:30pm and I quickly went outside to avoid greetings and talks that would delay me besides
I had a really important task ahead of me.
I stood in a dark place close to the front of the
church when he texted me asking where I am.
"I'm in front of the church, close to the Gen house"
"Okay, I'll meet you there" He texted back immediately.
And about 2 minutes I saw his silhouette, I stepped out and waved at him, he saw me and moved faster.
"Hey" He said as we walked back to the dark place.
"Hi" I replied.
"So.. How was your day?" He said awkwardly.
"It was great. Yours?"
"It was great too"
"Okay"
We stood in awkward silence for a few seconds.
Everyone left already so it was just us.
"Well...."
"Well.. I have something to tell you"
"Really? Okay" He said as he intertwined his long fingers together.
"I wanted to tell you that I'm good to go"
"Good to go? Where?" He said frowning and looked at me confused.
"I mean, we, you and me, I'm good with it."
"Huh?"
"I'm saying yes to your proposal" I rushed the words out finally.
He kept quiet for a few minutes, the longer he was quiet the more scared I was, maybe he got tired of waiting.
"Oh" He said quietly staring into space.
"Oh?"
And then he grinned widely.
"You said yes" He said as if he just realised it.
"Yes."
"God" He looked so happy and my heart became at ease.
"Thank you Nkechi. You won't regret this I promise" He held my hands.
"I will hold you to that promise" I said jokingly and squeezed his hands.
"I love you Nkechi, I love you so much, you have no idea how much and you just made me the happiest man on earth."
"I love you too" I replied shyly looking down.
He chuckled.
"Let's go, let me drive you home."
"Okay"
We walked hand in hand and he didn't let go until we said good night to each other.
"Today is truly the best day ever" I shouted as I fell on my bed, my phone rang and just as I thought, it's him, I smiled and picked up.
"Good night" my foot, we talked on phone till the early hours of the following day.

Penshalom

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 8:24am On Jul 13, 2018
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Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 8:05pm On Jul 12, 2018
Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 8:02pm On Jul 12, 2018
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Literature / Re: The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 5:04pm On Jul 12, 2018
EPISODE 1

THE SOUND OF my alarm woke me up at 5am sharp. It was really difficult to get out of bed, it was a cold morning and it's dawn, you enjoy sleep more at this time of the day but I have to wake up to beat time, if I don't then I'm not going to observe my quiet time today, which is a taboo to me, I never miss my quiet time, well, ever since I came to know Christ. I stretched and quickly rushed to the toilet to pee rushing back to my room to begin my quiet time and by 6am I'm done, my phone blinked twice as I opened my eyes signalling that I have a message, I picked it up grinning as I read the message.
"See you in church later in the evening ....
I bit my bottom lip nervously as I added the next words..."xoxo" and pressed send before rushing to the bathroom smiling like an idiot.
I took a shower after putting rice on fire and had a not too long but relaxing bath. I wore a black pencil skirt and a nude coloured blouse adorned with pearls, I packed my hair and did a little make-up, picked a bag to match. I got out after packing my food in my "adult" lunch box.
I work as a Biology teacher in a big secondary school 30 minutes drive to my house. It's a job I absolutely love, I love being part of little children's lives, at least the little I do will affect them somehow.
I got to school by 7:20am, signed and entered the staff room which was surprisingly empty, I took my seat, prayed a bit before checking the assignments I forgot to take home on Friday and started marking them occasionally looking up to greet the rest of the staff as they came in.
"Aunty Nkechi" I looked up to see one of my favourite students smiling at me.
"Hello baby." I said returning her smile.
"Good morning Aunty. You look beautiful today"
"Thank you dear" I replied smiling "How was your weekend?"
"It was fine aunty. How was yours?"
"It was good. Go drop your bag in class, it's almost assembly time" I told her while looking at my wrist watch, it was just a minute to the assembly time, the assembly starts by 7:40am.
"Yes Aunty" I barely heard her as she dashed out, I closed the book I was marking following the other teachers out just as the time keeper rang the bell.

AFTER THE ASSEMBLY, we all went back to our various positions, I didn't have a class until the third period so I just sat down and joined in the conversation my fellow teachers were having.
We were all gisting about our weekends when I caught the whiff of a familiar perfume, I didn't have to look up to know it's Vivian, my "seat mate", her seat is next to mine.
She practically cat-walked inside, her hips swayed in her tight black gown as she walked, I saw Uncle James licking his lips while ogling her buttocks before he caught my eye and he quickly looked away. Vivian never greets, I don't think she recognizes all of us because she barely looks at anyone when she enters the staff room.
"Hi Vivian" I said after a while.
"Mm" She grunted without sparing me a glance, she was busy with her phone as usual.
"How was your weekend?"
She finally looked up giving me a devilish grin.
"Here it goes" I thought.
"Oh it was the best, had a nice time with my boo" She purred out.
"But you wouldn't understand that anyway being an Old Virgin Mary" She smiled at me, I could see her white teeth shining behind the bold red lipstick, she is pretty but she has a nasty tongue. There were so many rumors about her, I wonder if her "boo" is the Principal, at least that's what the latest rumor says but it's not my business just really worried about the kind of life she's living.
I sighed and turned around, I picked my phone and played WORD COOKIES just to waste time.
I wasn't at all bothered by what she said she's always like that and have I someone in mind already, I just have not said yes to him, still needed to check a few things but I'm good now.
My parents had a really bad marriage before they got separated so I was scared, I didn't want to make a mistake and I took a lot of time thinking and praying, God helped and a little help from my Pastor did too, although I'm still scared but I'm going to take a leap of faith.
I grinned widely as I finally got the word for the game "HUSBAND".
"This must be another confirmation" I muttered to myself giggling.

Penshalom

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Literature / The Trouble With Kissing Him by Penshalom(f): 5:01pm On Jul 12, 2018
PROLOGUE
We all want want to be loved as no one would wish for one sided love. Someone in which we see a friend in, a lover and a companion, most especially that special someone you could talk and communicate with without getting bored, that special person that you can be yourself with.
We so much crave this, and I waited to experience such.
After so much waiting, I got that and I'm deliriously happy.

What could go wrong?
( Edited by Cynex)
Penshalom

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Literature / Re: Girls Vs Boys: African Culture (1) by Penshalom(f): 11:51am On Apr 17, 2018
"Wow, Akosua.. I....."
He could not finish talking before the stupid time keeper rang the stupid bell. I groaned and then smiled at him and he did too, no, he tried to but he failed, miserably.
"We'll talk during break time" I said and walked into the classroom, dropped my bag, before I rushed to the assembly ground.
It's not a surprise that I heard nothing in school today, I kept glancing at the wall clock counting the minutes until break time.
"I want you all to submit your home work to your class captain." Our mathematics teacher said before leaving the class as the break bell rang. The class got disorganised at that point, some submitted, some were copying from others and those that submitted ran outside for break. I scanned the class but I discovered Kwasi had left, I frowned at that, I didn't see him leaving. I checked the books and saw he had submitted, I didn't even know when he did that.
I became really impatient, I stood up, packed all the assignments that were submitted not bothering to wait for those that were still doing theirs unlike before. I walked hastily to the teacher's office and dumped the books on his table before running off.
I searched and searched for Kwasi but I didn't see him. And that was what I did with my break time till it was over. I walked dejectedly to the classroom and saw him sitting on his seat. I was about walking towards him when the next teacher came in, I groaned internally and reluctantly walked back to my seat. I kept stealing glances at Kwasi every now and then and there were times when our eyes met but he never held them. I was still looking at him when the teacher called my name. My heart jolted in my chest, I stood up slowly, my heart beating fast waiting for her to say something about me not concentrating in class or probably she caught me staring at Kwasi.
"I'm in trouble" I thought to myself.
"Akosua, please get me a new marker from my table in my office. This one has dried off"
I let out a breath of relief and walked briskly to her office.


Finally it was closing hour, I waited outside the classroom for him and as soon as he came out I fell into step with him. We walked in an awkward silence till we got out of school's sight before I stopped him, holding his arm.
"Kwasi, you've been avoiding me"
He didn't look at me just kept glancing around.
"Kwasi, is it because of what I said this morning? I'm not sorry I told you. Just give me an answer that's all" I said looking holding his hand and looking straight in his eyes.
His eyes looked sad and he stared at me too for a while before he hugged me.
"I'm sorry, I'm so sorry" He repeated over and over again.
My heart broke at that but at least he is making an effort not to.
"I think love you too Akosua but I'm not ready for a relationship now, we are both young, I know nothing about relationships but when I'm ready and I'm sure, I'll ask you out Akosua, I promise" He said holding my hands.
I smiled and hugged him again.
"It's Okay Kwasi." I said into his shoulder.
He put his arms around me as we walked home.
"You know you really shocked me this morning"
I laughed.
"I know. You were gaping at me like a fish.." I said demonstrating the way his mouth was opening and closing.
"Me? Fish? Then you are a whale"
"Shark"
"Lizard"
"Monkey"
"Oh please, we both know I'm handsome. Admit it"
"Yeah right" I scoffed.
"You know the other time I thought the teacher told you to stand up because you were not concentrating in class"
"You did too? I thought she caught me staring at you"
"True, you can't get enough of my handsome face, you can stare at it all day long and never get your fill"
"Now you are taking it too far. But I'll humor you, so you'll not feel sad" I said mockingly. The look on his face made me laugh and he joined in too later.
Penshalom
Literature / Re: Girls Vs Boys: African Culture (1) by Penshalom(f): 7:19pm On Mar 27, 2018
Hmm
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Literature / Girls Vs Boys: African Culture (1) by Penshalom(f): 7:46am On Mar 27, 2018
I stared at the mirror in my room taking deep breaths and checking my uniform again, I took extra care in washing and ironing it. I let out a shaky breath as I packed my braided hair up and made it into a donut. I stared at my self again, my black skin shining but I spotted a pimple on my head, I decided to leave it knowing that if I try to pop it it's going to swell up and I don't want that, today has to be perfect.
Today is the day I decided I will confess my feelings to him, for two years I had a crush on him and now I think I'm in love with him and keeping it in me is suffocating so I've decided to just let it out. I debated on this many times because being an African and my parents are excessively cultured people, I've been taught and told it's wrong, according to them "It makes you look cheap" and playing hard to get to a guy makes you more valued but the world is now civilised, so I decided to just go for it and I'm going to ask him out too, hopefully he'll say yes and I'll get a kiss too.
I giggled at that thought.
Twenty minutes later, I'm walking in my school's hallway, I didn't mind the noise, my mind just focused on where I'm going, his locker. As I got closer, I saw him standing in all his glory as he chatted with one of his friends, he let out a laugh that made my heart skip a beat. As I moved closer still, the heavens answered my prayers, his friend left.
"Kwasi" I called out his name to get his attention.
He looked up and grinned.
"Akosua.. How are you?"
One of the reasons why we will be perfect together, we were both born on Sunday, hence, the names.
I looked at him as I stood in front of him from his perfectly cut curly natural hair, his perfect ebony skin, to his shinning white teeth, he has a perfect height, not too tall, not too short, I just can't get enough of him.
I snapped out of my thoughts and looked away from him so I'll not seem like a creep.
"Akosua, you got to school early today, truly, the end is near" He said with his deep voice that always resounds in my heart, and echo in my ears.
"I had something to do" I said focusing on the reason I'm here, trying not to be distracted when he winked at me.
"What is it?" He asked curiously when he noticed my serious look.
I took deep breaths and pushed all doubts to the back of my mind.
"Kwasi. I like you Kwasi, I've always liked you, and I'd love you to be my boyfriend" I rushed the words out but I know he heard them.
He stood there, opening and closing his mouth.
"Kwasi" I called his name again, pleadingly this time.
"Please say something" I said again.
"Are.. Are you serious?" He stuttered.
"Yes I am Kwasi. I really like you" I said, boldly and loudly this time.
"Wow, Akosua.. I....."

Question: Is it right for a girl to ask a guy out? State your reasons why it's right or wrong.
Fun fact: The dominant answer will determine the end of the story.
Drop your comments and like this story, thanks
Penshalom

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 7:21pm On Jan 23, 2018
[quote author=OlufemiWhit post=63486817]keep it up[/quote
Thanks dear
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 7:21pm On Jan 23, 2018
[quote author=OlufemiWhit post=63486817]keep it up[/quote
Thanks dearp
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:41pm On Jan 20, 2018
Kheriee:
Nice work penshalom. I had to stay focused till I got to the end. Mote ink the your pen hon.
Amen, thanks dear

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:40pm On Jan 20, 2018
rachealfst:
Thanks for inviting me. Ever since I got your mention, I promised myself to find time to read the story and it eventually turned out great. Powerful lessons, once God is not through with us then men's opinions don't count in the affairs of our lives.
God bless you Penshallom for sharing this wonderful story. I believed we all learnt one thing on the other.
Thanks for reading dear

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Literature / Re: Wounded by Penshalom(f): 5:57pm On Jan 15, 2018
vickyluvspices:
hmm...captivating...most times i feel domestic violence can be avoided when the victims use there head instead of their heart to think, i ve come across a few victims who claims they are being biinded by luv...luv can be confusing at times sha...more ideas and wisdom darlin.expecting more frm you.
Amen
Thanks Vicky
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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:56pm On Jan 15, 2018
vickyluvspices:
thanks 4 using dis wonderful piece as an inspiration,it has in some kind of way liven my hope again...chances are when u feel u ve lost it all dere is a friend 2 turn to GOD.
Yeah, you are right
Thanks dear
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:55pm On Jan 15, 2018
HORLADSTAR:
Penshalom u are really trying on this piece of urs.I am loving the way u are blending in some nice and sensational music into it,Keep it up mehn.
#horladstar on this one.winkwink
Thank you dear
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:54pm On Jan 15, 2018
pwittycindy:
Ooohkay!! I must say that I've bin a ghost reader ever since I knew Nairaland existed. Neva made comments abt any story I've read on dis platform...but den Penshalom's story #CHANCES# ghat me so high n inspired I had no choice dan to say....Thank yhu 4 dis wondaful story. God bless yhu.

Amen
I appreciate this hon
Thanks Love
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:53pm On Jan 15, 2018
pweetymhi:
we all have a second chance in dz world bh it depends on how best u use it.
Human makes mistakes and we are all given a chance to right our wrongs,do not let go,do not see urself as a failure for just a mistake,brace ursef up do not look back at the past bh focus on d future.
penshalom dear u rock,thanks for this beautiful piece,expecting more stories.
Thank you [quote] smiley
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:49pm On Jan 15, 2018
SomGifty:
@Penshalom I'm happier dear, I can relate to the main character, at a point I wanted to deviate to prove a point to my dad that being too strict isnt the way that I could still do anything I wanted but thank God I got a grip at myself and just didnt walk into destruction.
Strict parents palava
Can relate to you too o
Thanks dear
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:47pm On Jan 15, 2018
AryEmber:
Thank you and thank you for this wonderful piece! I am glad for Fe, she put her shattered spirit together and fortunately for her, jordan came back to claim his responsibility! If only the guys that got girls into situation like that would copy jordan, those girls would feel less shame and their parents would not have to shoulder all the work. God bless you, Penshalom
Amen
Thanks
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:47pm On Jan 15, 2018
thiolhuwar09:
This is so beautiful Penshalom, thanks for sharing
Thanks for reading, Jah bless
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:46pm On Jan 15, 2018
Gloryejims:
Cbella
Pearl05
Cyber5
Tiffanyj
Rachealfst
Ollgentle
If you haven't read this piece, you're missing a lot...
This story got my attention from beginning to the end... Wow you're really a wonderful writer... Can believe I missed it before... The way it was portrayed was excellent and exceptional... Thumbs up to you penshalom... More inspiration to your thoughts and ink to ur pen...
#standingovation
Aww
Thanks for this
I'm literally smiling wide right now.
smiley
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 5:45pm On Jan 15, 2018
pweetyz:
Thanks for this Love.
It was an awesome read.

God bless you penshalom
Amen dear
Thanks dear

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 4:17pm On Jan 12, 2018
Oroolorun:
God bless you for sharing this.
Though I'm not happy that you ladies always claim to guess child gender correctly more than we guys. Haba!
Looking forward to read more stories from you.
The sky is your stepping stone on the literary path of greatness

Amen o, thanks dear

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 4:16pm On Jan 12, 2018
phunmiby:
wow, wat a lovely story, no matter the situation you find yourself, never give up...............for our parent, let's learn the habit of relating with our children, don't be far from them and always listen, generation of nowadays is different from the older generation, many youths are going astray because of the friends they have. Thank God for V, she's truly a great friend

Amen, thanks dear




Thumbs up Penshalom, more grace




Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 4:15pm On Jan 12, 2018
DemiKOL:
Whao!

shocked

This is really amazing!

And you are amazing.

Keep the good work going.

More grace!

Please mention me in your next story

wink

Thank you, I appreciate you

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Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 4:13pm On Jan 12, 2018
Pearl05:
Penshalom, this is so beautiful just like the wounded . You are not just telling a story but you are evangelizing. You always address societal issues in your story. God bless you.



For everyone going through one problem or another and you think that's the end of your life, hold on and trust in the Lord for He will never give up on you. He that knew you before you were conceived and called you even in your mother's belly never sleep nor slumber, is at the door waiting for you to let him in. Don't keep him waiting for too long. He brings peace and restoration with him. You will smile � again. For greater is the end of a matter than the beginning thereof.




Penshalom, may the Lord bless you. Amen.
Amen, thanks darl
Literature / Re: Chances by Penshalom(f): 4:12pm On Jan 12, 2018
SomGifty:
This story got me! Thanks Penshalom for sharing this great piece of art! To everyone out there, mistakes are bound to be made but life continues, we've all got a second chance at life... #beautiful_story
I'm so happy, thanks dear

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