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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Clumslow17(m): 6:30pm On Nov 09, 2014
U are on point bro .,ride on boss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Clumslow17(m): 6:33pm On Nov 09, 2014
Wait a min boss, who the hell is don?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 6:35pm On Nov 09, 2014
Deoye's cousin who happened to be the leader of Victoria's gang of assassins
Clumslow17:
Wait a min boss, who the hell is don?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:44pm On Nov 09, 2014
Fatalveli:
D9ty7 come gimme ur gf pin jare..... I want 2 thank her 4 having such a wonderful boyfriend like u...
fatalveli come gimme ur house adress.
*tecno4life bring my sniper* i want to use u as an example
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by RhAngel: 6:56pm On Nov 09, 2014
Fatalveli:
D9ty7 come gimme ur gf pin jare..... I want 2 thank her 4 having such a wonderful boyfriend like u...
ole, y dint u ask 4 his mothers pin to praise her 4 giving birth to such a great writer.
Meanwhile D9ty7, Thumbs up 4 u, u r such a great writer, trust me u il mk a good movie producer.
Thanks 4 mking my holiday worthwhile.
God bless U:
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 7:06pm On Nov 09, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jummy604: 7:25pm On Nov 09, 2014
But wait o y is ds deoye killing nd y did he kill ez gf,m eager to knw.also even if racheal tells her sis,aw is it gonna help.well m waiting till d end.welldone d9ty7,more mb to laptop
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:45pm On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7:
Wetin na?
I know say u go talk grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:47pm On Nov 09, 2014
Bluestarry:
fatalveli come gimme ur house adress.
*tecno4life bring my sniper* i want to use u as an example
*brings in sniper and points it at bluestarry* so u wan kill pesin 4 ma oga thread *kicks him hard in his balls and he passes out*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:48pm On Nov 09, 2014
Fatalveli:
D9ty7 come gimme ur gf pin jare..... I want 2 thank her 4 having such a wonderful boyfriend like u...
grin grin grin
ole u don dy plan bad tin again abi
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Clumslow17(m): 7:55pm On Nov 09, 2014
I see. Patiently waiting for the next update
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:56pm On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7..........wetin i being wan talk sef................................................................................................................................................................................[size=8pt][b]"I'M DUMBFOUNDED MEN :O:O:O
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 7:59pm On Nov 09, 2014
D9ty7..........wetin i being wan talk sef................................................................................................................................................................................"I'M DUMBFOUNDED MEN shockedshockedshocked WAS UR FATHER A TERRORIST huhhuhhuh








CAUSE U'RE DA BOMB MEHN undecided
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Holubunmi(f): 8:18pm On Nov 09, 2014
Nice one.keep it up bro!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 8:22pm On Nov 09, 2014
--continuation--
Kelvin's mind and thoughts was preoccupied by his latest mouth slip. His inability to keep mute where it mattered most. Now he is sure his elder brother will be keeping tabs on him. But as he is, he is ready to outsmart any opposition even if it is at the expense of the person's life.
His ringing phone brought him back to life. He decided against picking the call while driving because he was on a very busy road where traffic signs are functioning and road safety officials controlling the movement.
He swerved off the main road and pulled up in front of a restaurant.
"Hello darling." A sweet feminine voice sounded from the other end.
He knew at once that the caller was no other person than his girlfriend, Sandra.
"Hello." He replied in his deep baritone voice.
"Where are you? Its been a while and am missing you. Lets meet." Sandra said.
It was then he realised that he still hasn't achieved one of his aims. He is yet to take her to bed and dive in between her legs.
"Am kinda busy now. How about doing dinner at your place?" He asked.
"No problems. I'll start preparing right away." She replied.
He hung up after making some few jokes which made him forget his sorrows. A question immediately popped in his mind. Are you sure this lady is the one for you? When you met her, you claimed to have seen that woman whom you will spend the rest of your life with. What's up with Ngozi?" The righteous part of his heart asked.
"Shut up abeg and don't question me." The dangerous part of him which occupies about eighty percent of his heart replied.
He backed out of the parking space and continued his journey home.
Once again on the road, his mind was preoccupied with the problems at hand. First, he was asked to get a replacement for himself at his workplace, meaning his services are no longer needed as well as death. Now he just triggered the detective part of his brother on himself and he was quite sure Clement won't stop until he gets to the root.
But first he needed to take necessary precautions. He pulled up at the next bus-stop where foriegn and local movies are being sold. He picked five foriegn films which clearly showed that they are detective and terrorist films.
He smiled happily and this time he sped like the mad driver he was.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Dolapo was ironing her clothes and Tolanis was still on her laptop watching a movie.
"Do you have a party around the corner?" Tola asked.
"Why asking?" Dolapo replied with a question typical of an average Nigerian; replying a question with another question.
"Am just suprised to see you ironing your clothes." Tola replied.
"Oh! That. I decided to do that now because only God knows when next electricity will be restored like it has been today." Dolapo replied.
Even though they lived in a school's hostel, they still lacked so many things like electricity. Some of them have to go downstairs to get water from the major tap as the water channel into each room is either leaking or broken completely.
A ringing phone startled them both.
"Is that your phone?" Dolapo asked.
"It should be yours. Mine is here beside me." Tolani replied.
Dolapo picked the phone which was inside their kitchen. She dropped the call a minute later.
"Exam is starting on Monday." She announced.
Beads of sweat began to form on Tolani's forehead.
"Exam? What are you talking about? Who told you?" Tola asked stammering like a schoolkid found cheating during an exam.
"A friend from my department did." Dolapo replied.
"These people are mad o. This is too close na. They should have released the time-table two weeks before the exam." Tola protested.
"Ehn ehn! Remember the exam was postponed from its initial time. So, they are right to release the time table a day before the first paper."
Even though examination is not the true test of life, yet, the fear of exam is the begining of wisdom. Serious students and bookworms might not be scared when it comes to exams but there will always be the fear factor when it comes to final exams.
Tola is neither a bookworm neither is she the unserious type. But who would be serious with books when death is lurking at every corner. Even books can't stop death from taking lives.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 8:25pm On Nov 09, 2014
Keep your comments coming. If they are encouraging. There will be more updates before 12am but if they are not , next update comes up tomorrow morning before 7am.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onyi42(m): 8:33pm On Nov 09, 2014
yo! nice…. pls now kill that mumu racheal
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by azibit: 8:45pm On Nov 09, 2014
This is really becoming a block buster. Thanks man
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:51pm On Nov 09, 2014
If any1 has to get hurt, it shud be kelvin, vikky and chief
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 8:52pm On Nov 09, 2014
Pls drop 1 more update 2nyt
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by femyodsky(m): 9:01pm On Nov 09, 2014
I couldn't but come out of Ghost mode to comment.




You are really talented and reading through this story only reminds me of ONE OF MY FAVOURITE AUTHORS, HADLEY CHASE.




May God continue to enrich your thinking faculty.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zuma4k(m): 9:11pm On Nov 09, 2014
Feed me more.... OUTSTANDING!!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 9:15pm On Nov 09, 2014
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........but wait o.....dis Deoye no well at all................am still observing him sha......................like am falling in love with Kelvin o...............but clement is still my first love
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 10:03pm On Nov 09, 2014
Falling in love with Kelvin, you have my support. But falling in love with Clement is a no go area, remember Clement is married and unless Rachel dies you have no chance. Lol
adewealth027:
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........but wait o.....dis Deoye no well at all................am still observing him sha......................like am falling in love with Kelvin o...............but clement is still my first love
Am glad to have you here. You are one of the best.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 10:04pm On Nov 09, 2014
femyodsky:
I couldn't but come out of Ghost mode to comment.




You are really talented and reading through this story only reminds me of ONE OF MY FAVOURITE AUTHORS, HADLEY CHASE.




May God continue to enrich your thinking faculty.
What else can I say except. Thank you sire.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ajaxtea(m): 10:10pm On Nov 09, 2014
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I was finally busted on this thread after being a ghost reader since the begining of this story...
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 10:58pm On Nov 09, 2014
--continuation--
Victoria hummed as the car music player blared popular American rapper Kendrick Lamar's poetic justice. A collaboration he had with 2013 Grammy award winner, Drake of young money.
The event of the day kept playing on her mind and she seemed to be troubled by something. Now she needed someone to talk to, but certainly not her mother. How she wished she had an elder sister or brother or even a kid sis or bro she could confide in.
As much as she tried to stay away from guns and crimes, she find herself being pulled back into the waters. Just twenty four hours ago, she promised her mother saying she'll turn a new leaf and live a new life hencefort but here she was strategising on how best to eliminate a lawyer. She has done this kind of job many a times without itches and this one won't be an exception but she possibly can't carry out the attack in broad daylight and her mother won't allow her to go out at night. She thought as she pulled up in front of a supermarket at the entrance of their street. She alighted from the car and walked into the small supermarket.
She returned a few minutes later with a polythene bag, she unlocked the car doors and hopped behind the wheel. She brought out a canned drink and opened it to drink.
She bent a bit to insert the key into the key hole, in one swift turn, the car was back to life.
"Crazy b!tch. Only God knows how you got the money to buy a car." An angry driver yelled at her.
"Your mother." She replied.
She knew she had a problem which indeed was a big one but she couldn't identify what the cause of the problem was and as much as she tried to rediscover her teenage self, she end up making her personal life miserable.
She once heard her mother say something about her father being a secretive human who keeps a lot of papers and indulge in illegal businesses. She learnt he was once a smuggler and from her knowledge, smugglers uses guns too. Maybe that was where she inherited the gunning aspect of her life. And the most suprising aspect was that, she didn't learn how to use a gun, she just started using it.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Sandra got down from her car looking extremely tired and weird.
"Welcome madam." Sabur the gatekeeper said.
"Sabur, how are you?" She asked.
"And e get something improtant wey I want tell you." Sabur informed.
"As you can see, I am just coming back and I am tired. We'l talk when am ready. Okay?"
"Madam, its about Janet."
Janet who stood behind the front door eavesdropping on their conversation.
She knew Sabur was gonna tell their madam about her blackmailing business. He threatened to report her unless she was ready to do his biddings which was to sleep with him, something she find very ridiculous and disgusting.
Immediately, she ran into her room and picked a few of her clothes which was hung in the wardrobe into her travelling bag, packed her cosmetics, picked every of her belongings from the room and proceeded to the backyard where she will jump over the fence and escape for good.
"Hello boss, my Madam got me now. She is after me. Send one of the boys to come pick me up." She said through the phone and proceeded towards the fence.
At least, she pulled eight million naira off Sandra and an additional two million naira from Barrister Benson. She still has nothing to loose, she is richer and now a big girl. All she needed to do was relocate, maybe to Ghana or South Africa.

--to be continued--
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:05pm On Nov 09, 2014
Nice one boss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by oluwatunechi(m): 11:13pm On Nov 09, 2014
Fankz 4 d update
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:15pm On Nov 09, 2014
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oga D9ty7 nice updates.
Please try and make it longer please.
Techno4live please i need a bottle of pammy nd nkwobi to digest these updates
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 11:17pm On Nov 09, 2014
Falling in love with clement doesn't mean I wanna snatch him from rachel o.............and incase u decide to kill her..............I'll help fill in d space.......................am also glad reading ur write up.........abeg janet bia......av been praying for u to suceed o....so where's my sharehuhhuhhuh
D9ty7:
Falling in love with Kelvin, you have my support. But falling in love with Clement is a no go area, remember Clement is married and unless Rachel dies you have no chance. Lol Am glad to have you here. You are one of the best.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by samcidon(m): 4:27am On Nov 10, 2014
Keep d update flowing. I dey watch seasonal movie.d man u r too much. I no dey fit chat dese days cos of ur story.
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