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All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:51pm On Sep 01, 2014
D9ty7 is pleased to announce the start of a new story for the last four months of the year.
So I call on all Nairaland users, my fans, my bosses in the story writing industry to read and correct my mistakes.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by iamsegsy(m): 1:29pm On Sep 01, 2014
D9ty7: D9ty7 is pleased to announce the start of a new story for the last four months of the year.
So I call on all Nairaland users, my fans, my bosses in the story writing industry to read and correct my mistakes.
OK following.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:43pm On Sep 01, 2014
PROLOGUE
TIME: 11:45AM
VENUE: CHIEF OBI PATRICK'S MANSION.

A yellow volkswagen drove into the compound at a very top speed of
what could be described as fast and furious kind of speed. The gateman
made a fast getaway and ran into his gatepost for safety. A young man in
his late
twenties came out dressed in a white t-shirt and a pair of black jean
trouser and
a pair black vickers shoe. Covering his eyes was another pair of
sunshade.
FULL NAME: KELVIN PATRICK
AGE: 28
GENDER: MALE
HEIGHT: 6FT 5
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN/TERRORIST
HOBBIES: PLAYING GOLF & KILLING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: CZ-97B; 45ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.


TIME: 12PM
VENUE: A CRIME SCENE AT ALLEN AVENUE.

It was a sunny afternoon at Allen avenue along the North central
district. Hundreds of people were standing on either side of the road.
Men of the Nigerian police were taking note of strange objects and
things around the blue mercedez benz which has it occupant killed. A
police photographer was taking forensic pictures of the car and its
occupant from different angles. Men of the press were not left out as
they all seemed to be making stories for their respective News medias.
The occupant of the car was being attended to by the madical team who
were cleaning his blood soaked clothes. Mr Kingsley the occupant of the
car had the bullet shot at his head. He was the secretary general of the
Oil Price control and Regulation agency in the country.
A tall handsome young man was talking to a young lady in a police
uniform. He is the leader of the police team at the scene and he was made to work hand in hand with the medical team leader.
"Inspector Clement, we'll be taking the body in our custody for more tests. I need you to sign this papers." The leader of the medical team said to Clement who took his pen and appended his signature.
"We'll get back to you."
Kingsley's body was put on a stretcher which was rolled into the back of the ambulance which drove away at once with its siren blaring.
"Clara, get me my phone." Inspector Clement said to the lady who was writing report on her notepad and taking pictures with a small digital camera.
"Yes sir." The lady replied as she handed a mobile phone to her.
The man took the phone and left the scene to a more secluded area.
"Inspector Clement sir." the man said.
"Hello Clement. What have you got on the murder?" The reciever asked.
"Its a blue mercedez benz belonging to one Mr Kingsley. As far as I
can tell you, the man is dead and every possible measure has be taken to
nab the perpetrator." Clement explained.
"Get you report forwarded to area F-command for review after which
you start the investigation." The man at the other end said.
"Yes sir."
"Feed me more after the review." And the line went dead.
FULL NAME: CLEMENT PATRICK
AGE: 30
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: POLICEMAN
HEIGHT: 6FT
HOBBIES: READING & MEETING PEOPLE.
MARITAL STATUS: MARRIED.


TIME: 12:50PM
VENUE: LOVERS MIX GUEST HOUSE

Sitting in a big spacious room was a group of people numbering up to
eight including their leader who had her back turned to the others.
"Vicky seriously we need to carry out our plans and killings as from
now without leaving trace or lead." A huge black complexioned dude said.
A lady who turned her back to the others sitting down in the private
room turned to face them.
"Its not about killing without trace, its about killing everybody
involved and mind you, no one recieves any call except on my order.
Okay?"
"Yes ma'am." They all chorused.
FULL NAME: VICTORIA VICKY
AGE: 25
GENDER: FEMALE
HEIGHT: 5ft 5inches
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN
HOBBIES: SEX & DANCING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: BARETTA CHEETAH; 32ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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FULL NAME: OSELU SANDRA
AGE: 26
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: MODELLING
HOBBIES: TAKING PICTURES & MEETING PEOPLE
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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FULL NAME: ABDUL MALEEK
AGE: 39
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: TERRORIST
HOBBIES: NIL
MARITAL STATUS: WIDOWER.
----
FULL NAME: JANET
AGE: 21
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: HOUSEMAID
HOBBIES: BLACKMAILING
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 1:50pm On Sep 01, 2014
Following ***yupeeeee*first to comment***000pppppsss second cry to comment

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:52pm On Sep 01, 2014
This story will officially start when I finish my other story that is in its final stage. But I'll post something so you can know what to expect.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:20pm On Sep 01, 2014
CHAPTER ONE
Kelvin a 28 year old young man came down the stairs into the living room to see his elder brother, Clement talking to their father, Chief Obi Patrick. Clement who got married last month had to cut his honeymoon short by coming back to Nigeria when the crime rate increased.
"Morning bro." Kelvin greeted his elder brother.
"Hey kelv." Clement greeted smiling.
"Morning dad." Kelvin greeted their father.
Chief Obi smiled happily at the relationship between his two sons. Even though they both had different characters. Clement is an easy going person who will only talk when spoken to. He is an advocate of peace and is ready to die fighting against corruption, crime and other social vices which was why he studied criminology in the university while he was in the United states.
Kelvin on the other hand is an advocate of terror, a hot tempered human, he studies Biochemistry in the university of Lagos. He was made to study here in Nigeria where his father, a total disciplinarian will be able to monitor him. But despite his bad boy attitude, he still remain the apple of their father's eye.
"Dad, I need to go. My attention is needed at the station." Clement announced.
"Is it about the killing along Allen avenue?" Kelvin asked.
"Yeah. I've gotten the lead on it and we'll do the briefing today then we proceed to nabbing the man. I shouldn't be telling you all this." Clement said picking up his car key.
He proceeded to give his younger brother a hug and off he left the house.
Kelvin left the living room deep in thoughts.
"This guy is good at what he does. I pray my track is covered. I killed Kingsley with no trace left."
He entered his room where he knelt down to say his prayer.
He brought out his gun and held it close to his nose.
"You've been keeping me and you continue to keep me. On my life I pray." He said the short prayer and kissed the weapon before going into the bathroom.
Chief Obi on the other hand was left in thought with Clement's revelation.
He picked his phone and dialled a number.
"Hello Maleek. You are doing the wrong job."
"How sir?" Maleek a notorious terrorist reported to have come from Sudan asked.
"You know my son is a policeman and he is in charge of Kingsley's murder. He is almost through, all that is left for him is to nab the suspect."
"Keep your calm sir, my boy who did the job is the perfect man for the job." Maleek replied assuringly.
"What's his name?"
"Danger-kelv is the name." Maleek replied.
"I've heard so much about the boy but am yet to meet him." Chief Patrick said.
"He is faceless." Maleek replied.
"I got it."
Chief Patrick heaved a sigh of relief as he picked up the television remote control and tuned in to a news channel. Coincidentally, Kingsley murder was being said. Chief Patrick gave a short laugh.
"We got it covered. Yot got a wrong lead." He mocked.


--to be continued--
The remainder of Chapter One will resume as soon as I am through with my story, Shadows from the past.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 4:06pm On Sep 01, 2014
D9ty7, keep it up.

This is going to be interesting.

The Patrick's Family.








#1,500 post

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:18pm On Sep 01, 2014
What I do sir?
LogoDWhiz: D9ty7, keep it up.

U vex me gan o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by barackodam: 4:44pm On Sep 01, 2014
Thank you xtarxhyne... wink



Following d9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:21pm On Sep 01, 2014
barackodam: Thank you xtarxhyne... wink



Following d9ty7
y thanking me
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 6:22pm On Sep 01, 2014
D9ty7: What I do sir?

U just dey ignore me.. U no even invite me for this thread.

Are u on whatsapp?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by barackodam: 6:49pm On Sep 01, 2014
Xtarxhyne: y thanking me




undecided na you carry me cum hia
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:58pm On Sep 01, 2014
barackodam:




undecided na you carry me cum hia
tanks to D9ty7
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by barackodam: 8:34pm On Sep 01, 2014
tanks to D9ty7

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by PrinceAdepoju(m): 8:49pm On Sep 01, 2014
###Automatic Following!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:40pm On Sep 01, 2014
LogoDWhiz:

U just dey ignore me.. U no even invite me for this thread.

Are u on whatsapp?
sorry bro. Somethings actually came up.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LogoDWhiz(m): 9:44pm On Sep 01, 2014
D9ty7: sorry bro. Somethings actually came up.

okay bro.

No prob

Havent answered my question about the number.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Jeanfortune(f): 10:34am On Sep 02, 2014
woah!!, this story is gonna be a hit, considering the fact that Clement is up against his dad and brother and doesnt even know yet, reminds me of a novel 'Mystic River'

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 2:20pm On Sep 02, 2014
Alright! Am following. Hvnt read a crime thriller in awhile (I miss my James Hardley Chase days). Enough of d luv mushy mushy stuff! D9ty7, dis is d 1st story am going 2 read frm u. Pls make me 4get James Hardley Chase o! Tanx

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:35pm On Sep 02, 2014
I appreciate your coming here and I take this as a challenge. I'll try my best in making you forget about the man Chase.[quote
author=AudreyTimms]Alright! Am following. Hvnt read a crime thriller in
awhile (I miss my James Hardley Chase days). Enough of d luv mushy
mushy stuff! D9ty7, dis is d 1st story am going 2 read frm u. Pls make
me 4get James Hardley Chase o! Tanx[/quote]But wait o! Aren't you that lady who won the best writer for the month of August?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by PrinceAdepoju(m): 4:02pm On Sep 02, 2014
D9ty7: I appreciate your coming here and I take this as a challenge. I'll try my best in making you forget about the man Chase.But wait o! Aren't you that lady who won the best writer for the month of August?
She no be lady oo, boss.
She be woman--happily married!

And yes, she is!!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 6:24pm On Sep 02, 2014
PrinceAdepoju: She no be lady oo, boss.
She be woman--happily married!

And yes, she is!!
Bros Prince, y r u trying 2 fall my hand na! Woman? Pls o! I'm still very young. Nt evry married female is a woman o! tongue
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tmamuda(m): 6:30pm On Sep 02, 2014
Followin
saw U Prince
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:36pm On Sep 02, 2014
My sincere apology Audrey Timms. I never knew you are married.......
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:58pm On Sep 02, 2014
oga obinoscopy, hope you got my mail.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 8:20pm On Sep 02, 2014
D9ty7: My sincere apology Audrey Timms. I never knew you are married.......
Haba! There's nothing to apologize for. Please don't keep us waiting for long
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LarrySun(m): 1:27am On Sep 03, 2014
D9ty7: PROLOGUE
TIME: 11:45AM
VENUE: CHIEF OBI PATRICK'S MANSION.


A yellow volkswagen drove into the compound at a very top speed of what could be described as fast and furious kind of speed. The gateman picked race (took to his heels/made a fast getaway) and ran into his gatepost for safety. A youngman (young man *notice the space*) in his late twenties came out dressed in a white t-shirt and black jean trouser and a black vickers shoe with a Rayban sunshade (dressed in a white T-shirt, a pair of black jeans trousers, a pair of black Vickers shoes, and covering his eyes was another pair of sunshades).

FULL NAME: KELVIN PATRICK
AGE: 28
GENDER: MALE
HEIGHT: 6FT 5
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN/TERRORIST
HOBBIES: PLAYING GOLF & KILLING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: CZ-97B; 45ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.


TIME: 12PM
VENUE: A CRIME SCENE AT ALLEN AVENUE.


A tall handsome youngman was talking to a younglady in a police uniform. They seem (seemed) to be in a crime scene, a blue mercedez benz was parked at the side of the road and the windscreen has (had) been shattered as a result of a gunshot at it. The occupant of the car gave up the ghost few minutes ago (earlier) when the policemen arrived with the medical team. (You should describe the victim in detail. Who was he? A young man or an old one? Was he behind the wheel or at the back seat? Was he driving when he was killed or the vehicle was already at rest? Where was he shot? Head or anus? Describe the weather too.)

"Clara, get me my phone." he said to the lady.

"Yes sir." The lady replied as she handed a mobile phone to her (I'm sure you meant 'him').

The man took the phone and left the scene to a more secluded area.

"Inspector Clement (kindly insert a comma here) sir." the man said.

"Hello Clement. What have you got on the murder?" The reciever (recipient) asked.

"Its a blue mercedez benz (It's a blue Mercedez Benz) belonging to one Mr Kingsley. As far as I can tell you, the man is dead and every possible measure has be taken to nab the perpetrator." Clement explained.

"Get you report forwarded to area F-command for review after which you start (This is quite confusing; do you mean 'as soon as you commence/end the investigation'?) the investigation." The man at the other end said.

"Yes sir."

"Feed me more after the review."

And the line went dead.

FULL NAME: CLEMENT PATRICK
AGE: 30
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: POLICEMAN
HEIGHT: 6FT
HOBBIES: READING & MEETING PEOPLE.
MARITAL STATUS: MARRIED.


TIME: 12:50PM
VENUE: LOVERS MIX GUEST HOUSE


Sitting in a big spacious room was a group of people numbering up to eight (eight people) including their leader who had her back turned to the others.

"Vicky (insert a comma here) seriously we (we seriously) need to carry out our plans and killings as from now without leaving trace or lead." A huge black complexioned (dark-complexioned) dude said.

A (use the definite article 'The') lady who turned her back to the others sitting down in the private room turned to face them.

"Its (It's) not about killing without trace, its about killing everybody involved (insert a semicolon here) and mind you, no one recieves (receives) any call except on my order. Okay?"

"Yes ma'am." They all chorused.

FULL NAME: VICTORIA VICKY
AGE: 25
GENDER: FEMALE
HEIGHT: 5ft 5inches
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN
HOBBIES: SEX & DANCING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: BARETTA (I think it should be 'Beretta') CHEETAH; 32ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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FULL NAME: OSELU SANDRA
AGE: 26
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: MODELLING
HOBBIES: TAKING PICTURES & MEETING PEOPLE
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
----
FULL NAME: ABDUL MALEEK
AGE: 39
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: TERRORIST
HOBBIES: NIL
MARITAL STATUS: WIDOWER.
----
FULL NAME: JANET
AGE: 21
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: HOUSEMAID
HOBBIES: BLACKMAILING
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced either in part of (or) in whole in electronic or photocopy medium without the prior written approval from the author.

You can contact the author instantly via +2348166920449 or durodola9ty7@gmail.com or @I_am_d9ty7 on twitter.
Rough Review.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Gracy295(f): 9:56am On Sep 03, 2014
Take note of LarrySun's corrections. Everyone is trying to be the best at what he/she does.
I know you'll take this in good faith.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Jornson: 10:12am On Sep 03, 2014
A new story? I pray your well of wisdom will never run dry....
Welldone LarrySun
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:08am On Sep 03, 2014
This story is gonna rock. I just pray the author have time to post consistently.
Lets take a look from this angle.
Father is sponsoring a terrorist group where his son is the main hitman and the killer unknown to the father. His other son is a policemen making efforts to nab the terrorists(his brother and co.) and their sponsors(his father)....
My question is.... Who will succeed?...
I can see so many bloodshed in this story.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 12:22pm On Sep 03, 2014
LarrySun: Rough Review.
LarrySun, yet you say you aren't a professional editor!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by LarrySun(m): 12:38pm On Sep 03, 2014
AudreyTimms:
LarrySun, yet you say you aren't a professional editor!
Lol! I'm just having a nice time. smiley

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