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D9ty7:
That was some weird thoughts. You know some times, you imagine evil things. Clement was quick to wave off the thought actually.

make him no wave am o

his thought Maybe the ideal thing nw

hmm....

CHAPTER TWELVE
Don walked into the living room finally. Since he left with Victoria over an hour ago, he was just coming back.
Deoye has been anticipating his return because he has some questions for his cousin.
"Welcome bro." Deoye said.
"Thank you guy." Don replied as he slumped unto a couch nearest to him.
"How my babe na?" Don asked glancing towards his room.
"She neva commot o. As you left, I didn't see her at all." Deoye replied.
"Maybe she is sleeping, you know. I did her so well that she couldn't move." He said with a wink. Deoye smiled.
Don picked the tv remote and searched for a suitable channel and luckily for him, he found a music channel.
"This is good isn't it?" Don asked.
Deoye heard his question quite well but he couldn't reply probably because he was deep in thought and conversing. So he couldn't use his mouth.
"Guy!" Don shooked him.
Deoye snapped out of his thought and faced his elder cousin.
"Wetin?" Don asked.
Deoye hissed silently and adjusted himself on his seat.
"That girl who just left. How she be?" Deoye asked.
Don gave a wicked smile.
"That girl is way above your level. You are a small boy compared to her. Okay?"
Deoye wanted to ask more questions but Don was already on his way out of the living room, so he let them pass.
"Get ready. You are rounding up your attacks tonight. We are driving into your school today. Those girls have to die today."
Beads of sweat formed on his forehead, even though he had already written himself off as a student, he knew he has been rusticated.
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Clement was seated in a round table alongside Habeeb and Mike. Two other uniformed policemen completed the fold.
"So how do we intend to get this guy?" Habeeb asked.
"Good question, we have his car in custody right?"
"Yes sir." One of the uniformed policemen replied.
"I believe he can run no more without his car. All we need to do now is invade his room and get some necessary facts." Clement continued.
"Darasimi said something like his gang members all lived in the same lodge with him something Scorpion attested to." Habeeb said.
"Good. We'll release Darasimi, she has been of help to the last she could do. Now all attention must be shifted to Scorpion. I believe he can lead us to Deoye." Clement continued.
"From the questioning sessions that I had with Scorpion, he said Deoye's parents lived in Niger state. But he said he has a cousin here in Lagos, he also had another cousin in Yabatech."
"Okay."
"If we get the facts, its possible he is hiding with either of them."
"So what do you suggest?" Clement asked.
"A team should be sent after those cousin of his, then the second team can act within the school campus." Habeeb replied.
"Lets get it done with then."

--to be continued--

That update is kind of short, sorry that's all we could get.

D9ty7 well done o D9ty7 well done o

Thumbs up bro. You are doing a great job.

Thank you sire

MisterF:
D9ty7 well done o D9ty7 well done o

Thanks sis

enemercy1:
Thumbs up bro. You are doing a great job.

Nice one you have there. Keep it up. However, the first person shot in your first scene has not been mentioned in the police investigations again and nothing about his connection to the story has been established; but I trust you to make justice to all that in the end. I really do like your storyline

Ngizi shud notify clement with the latest development.... And I think sylvester has hand in the other sergeants death

@d9ty7
good job as usual. i noticed the link between Sandra victoria, don, deoye, it is an interesting one. infact d characters are all linked up somehow. circle indeed and u think we are not done seeing it yet. keep it rolling

Am so loving this updates mehn! How i wish nigeria police officers are daring to that extent of invading a culprit home and having heard or detected underground, they would remain unflappable. And secondly, this story advocates for a thorough investigation before any suspects totally found guilty( darasimi's case) which can only happen in a perfect system. D9ty7, u going to be a good cinematographer cos this movie is HD toh badtt!

it must be very important for me to tell you have a raw talent and I will advice you to keep it up .the story is very interesting one and I will also said you should take your time on how end it so that it won't spoil the good beginning

Thanks for your comment and advice.

GodofGrace:
it must be very important for me to tell you have a raw talent and I will advice you to keep it up .the story is very interesting one and I will also said you should take your time on how end it so that it won't spoil the good beginning

Exactly why the story has been stretched this long. I wanted a perfect end, a happy ending actually.

Melancholy:
Am so loving this updates mehn! How i wish nigeria police officers are daring to that extent of invading a culprit home and having heard or detected underground, they would remain unflappable. And secondly, this story advocates for a thorough investigation before any suspects totally found guilty( darasimi's case) which can only happen in a perfect system. D9ty7, u going to be a good cinematographer cos this movie is HD toh badtt!

You need to see how my head was swelling as I was reading this comment.
Thank you very much bruv, I am nothing without you guys.

I swear to God, the plot was just setting itself. I never planned a story as long as this, but on every editing on my manuscript, I come up with another story, thereby establishing a connection/ink between the xters.

handmaid:
@d9ty7
good job as usual. i noticed the link between Sandra victoria, don, deoye, it is an interesting one. infact d characters are all linked up somehow. circle indeed and u think we are not done seeing it yet. keep it rolling

What if Sylvester was innocent? You never can tell

Fatalveli:
Ngizi shud notify clement with the latest development.... And I think sylvester has hand in the other sergeants death

You failed to notice that the first killing, Mr Kingsley actually led us to how Khal corp came into view. Remember when Late Okoro and Ngozi wanted to get the fingerprint of Kingsley's murderer, there was an attack. If you'll remember, Okoro and Ngozi trailed the gunmen till they got to the outskirt of Nigeria, before Okoro was kidnapped....

Ogbarmey:
Nice one you have there. Keep it up. However, the first person shot in your first scene has not been mentioned in the police investigations again and nothing about his connection to the story has been established; but I trust you to make justice to all that in the end. I really do like your storyline

I sure Sey na d end of Don & Deoye be dis cos those police most catch them! D9ty7 d Genius keep it rolling.

--continuation--
Rachel alighted from the car and locked the doors. She picked up her handbag which sat on the passenger seat and her phone which she kept on the dashboard, she walked towards the front door.
"Welcome madam." One of chief patrick's security man said.
"Thank you." She replied pushing the front door open.
There was nothing unusuall about the living room except that a bottle of wine and a glass cup sat on a stool opposite a black sued couch.
"Onome am home." She announced as she dragged the stool away and sat down tiredly on the couch. The heat coupled with her tiredness isn't helping matters, but there is little to what she could do.
Her ringing phone brought her from her trans. She checked the caller and talk of the devil, it was Doctor Rapheal.
"Hello Raph." She said.
She listened for a few seconds before speaking.
"I am yet to tell my husband, and moreso, I am married so you can't expect me to pick your calls while am with him."
She kept quiet trying to process what he was saying, her anger swelling.
"Raph look here, what happened should stay between us, I am married, get that straight. And don't call me, I'll always do the calling." She screamed and hung up.
She dropped her phone on the stool beside her causing the bottle to spill its content.
"Aw!" She exclaimed as she quickly raised the bottle but half of its content was on the rug already.
"Don't worry I'll get it." A voice which unmistakably belonged to Onome said.
She was shocked as she spilled the wine once again, this time from the half filled glass.
"You startled me." Rachel said.
"I never meant to. How was your session with the doctor?"
"It was great. How long have you been here?"
Onome wanted to lie but on a second thought, she knew telling the truth will make her realise that someone knows about her dealing outside marriage.
"I came here three minutes ago, exactly when your phone rang." Onome replied.
Rachel gave Onome a deadly look, Onome on the other hand pretended not to see the look on her face.
"Let me get something to clean the mess." And she strolled out of the living.
Rachel angrily picked up her bag and phone, she marched to their room.
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Five guys were seated ouside Harmony lodge arguing about the best of players between Christiano Ronaldo, a portuguese superstar and Lionel Messi, an Argentine superstar.
"I'll always be in support of Messi." A guy who sat on a banch which stoon next to a Toyota camry said.
"Why won't you support Messi, I remembered you telling us your brother works in Rosario, Messi's hometown. He must have seen Messi's humility and not his playing ability." Another guy seated on the car bonnet replied.
They continued arguing for a while until a ringing phone brought their discussion to a halt. Immediately the owner answered the call, the arguement resumed.
"Guys!" He said after dropping the call. But no one was ready to listen to him.
"Guys." He said banging his fist on the car bonnet.
They all faced him expectantly.
"Ak just called me now, he said the members of Aiye confra just dropped Ay."
Angry groans and wails from the guys shook the whole lodge.
"Lets go and hit them" Another cute light complexioned guy said openening the driver seat and hopped behind the wheel.
Everyone else followed suit, they all drove into the campus, with one thing in mind, 'fightback.'
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Tolani walked out of the lecture hall and brought out her phone to call her boyfriend when her roaming eyes caught something. A crowd gathered around something she couldn't see from her end. Her mind told her it was a student who has been killed again. If it were to be on the street of Lagos, one would conclude it is either a goat or a dog. But here in a school campus, it has to be a student or nothing else.
Her curious part dragged her legs to the crowd and straining her eyes to catch a glimpse of who died. Cold swept through her body immediately she saw the face of the student who was lying on the ground.

--to be continued--

Thanks for that explanation.
Let me take my seat quietly at the back as usual and enjoy the story.

You are the first person to comment after today's update.

Ogbarmey:
Thanks for that explanation.
Let me take my seat quietly at the back as usual and enjoy the story.

Hope you had a nice night rest?

10 comments in the next two hours and I drop the next update. Otherwise, we get the next update by 12noon.

I just hope its not what I'm thinking

What are you thinking?

kristen12:
I just hope its not what I'm thinking

D9ty7 pls update The Thomas. Have you abandoned the story

am enjoying dis

D9ty7:
QUESTION FOR THE DAY
1. Do you think Ngozi is doing the right thing by handling things on her own?
2. Is it true that there is something suspicious about Sylvester? Maybe he is the mole. Give your reason.
3. What do you think about the underground?
Please endeavour to answer the questions, it shows that the story is being followed despite its twists and turns.
HAPPY SUNDAY!

I think Ngozi is doing d rite thing but she should involve at least one more person, like Clement, it will be less dangerous than she handling it on her own.

I dnt think he is d mole but, well it may be dat he is just acting dat way cos he's d boss or sumthing... I'm 50% sure he is nt d mole.


I think d underground will be a very dangerous place nd dat's where dey will find most of deir secrets, but I dnt think it will be an easy place 2 enter lyk dat.... Cos I'm sure d man would hv every part of it protected.

I'll try and drop an update on 'The Thomas' today. You can check back before 1pm.

hinohsend:
D9ty7 pls update The Thomas. Have you abandoned the story

Mmmmn....who died nw? I dnt think it's her frnd sha nd it cnt be Deoye.... Rachael secret is leaking out bits by bits....... Thanks 4 d update...... But won't u continue dat story again? The Thomas? I knw it's nt easy but u can just try 2 update at least once in a week.

I have resolved to always update 'The Thomas' every saturday and sunday. Meaning, All in a circle will run from Monday-Friday.

adeh39:
Mmmmn....who died nw? I dnt think it's her frnd sha nd it cnt be Deoye.... Rachael secret is leaking out bits by bits....... Thanks 4 d update...... But won't u continue dat story again? The Thomas? I knw it's nt easy but u can just try 2 update at least once in a week.

Dis Rachel gel is really annoying.......Weldon oga D9ty7