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| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by latbas(m): 9:13am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Who be dis maltida again,chai slvester |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by latbas(m): 9:14am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Who be dis maltida again,chai slyvester no get sense abeg,anoda life wasted now |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 9:32am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Maltida should be the undercover agent that clement asigned to pry on victoria. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 9:34am On Dec 10, 2014 |
oga d when you start de kill innocent people?? that Edgar died a fighter I like his spirit pray one day we will do that... |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 10:05am On Dec 10, 2014 |
kelvin still the key man Victoria cm & finish your job |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by macpetrus(m): 10:08am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Sylvester na Big Fool... I dey suspect sylvester. RIP to Edgar. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 10:53am On Dec 10, 2014 |
RIP Edgar hope say no be the Edgar for 24 *lol i hope Ngozi wll not release Nwankwo mechonu o welcome back D9ty7 kudos bro. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 11:13am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Flakeey:flakeey na him oh ...u remember he was fat and couldn't run as well plus he always loved his mum. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 11:49am On Dec 10, 2014 |
Hmmmm...... Liking the turn out of events. Ngozi will know Danger_Kelv soon. That Sylvester with his fish brain. E don kill person now |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 12:14pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Lol bro. Its all coincidence. But anyways u are right summal. But events leading to Edgar's death in 24 is quite different to this. Edgar24 played a big role while our own Edgar here did little. Hope you understand? afamjb: |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Omololamide(f): 12:21pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Weldone..... thanks for the regular update..... i enjoyed this..... |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by afamjb: 12:24pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
D9ty7:yea yea its still cool. more grease to ur elbow |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 12:51pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Ifa cash dis sylvester ehn..............RIP Edgar |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:09pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
oga D u don kill anoda innocent man again *remuvs ma 9mm silver taurus and kiss d nozle* If d9ty7 cum e go learn aw nt 2 kill innocent pple agn |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 1:20pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Viewing this topic: chessyae, Gideon9947, PrinceGozie(m), haydot95(m),(m) and 5 guest(s) u guys shuld comment so dat oga D will update or else https://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-violent043.gif |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 1:23pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Onemansquad:shoot lemme see wat will happen sef |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by GodofGrace(m): 2:11pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
hmmmmm very very interesting oga boss keep it up. another thing I like D9ty7 for is that he never yield to the prediction of people him just they write they go.............by the way oga I'm thirst for MOORE |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kocvalour(m): 2:23pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
mike is still alive, why?? D9ty7 wassup? |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 3:54pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Keep your comments coming guys. As soon as I return home, two updates will drop immediately. Keep it locked. |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 4:06pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Oga D9ty7 come update I'm enjoying this |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Bagayouche: 4:24pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:these story is really good.d writer has got talent more greese to ur elbow |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 4:46pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Hmmmmmm Ngozi in dilemma. Sly dey rush! Now see. Mtchew |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Benjaminbest(m): 4:58pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
vicky has been my best,infact she has play b best role so far......thumb up nice work |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 6:15pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
--continuation-- "Prepare an ambulance to take Edgar to the motuary." Clement said a few minutes later when his bleeding nose had returned to normalty. The medical team went about preparing the vehicle who will transport Edgar's body out of Mr Ayo's residence. "Can we enter the underground now?" James asked. "No, you can't. The connecting room is currently unsafe for you. We need to clear the air to enable you all have safe breathe down there." The leader of the medical team replied. "How long will it take to replace the dangerous gas with Oxygen?" Clement asked. "An hour sir." The lady replied. "We don't have such time in our belt. In fact, we should be out of here in the next one hour. So waiting for an hour before we do what we have to do is totally impossible. Think of something else." Clement said. "There is only one alternative, which is to distribute face mask to everyone." The lady explained. "So, you guys have face masks and you are telling me we have to wait for an hour? Where are the masks?" The lady ordered one of her team members to go and bring the face masks. A minute later, the guy returned with two big cartons, and inside them were about thirty face masks. "There is a problem sir." The lady said. "What problem again?" Clement asked, now confused of her incompetence. They had been working together for many years and she has always been up to the task, why is she making making mistakes now? Maybe because this is the first time they would be fighting insurgence. "The mask has an inbuilt oxygen that last for thirty minutes, after thirty minutes, the air in the atmosphere begins to penetrate and you know what it means? But we could avoid that, if we carry out our job as expected by refilling the room with oxygen." She explained. "No way, we are going in there now or never." Clement said as he picked a mask for himself and tossed a mask to each of the men in the room. "Now this is it, I go in there with one of you, we try to break that electric barricade, then two men comes in to carry the dead body in there, the underground becomes opened and we all go in." He explained. "Yes sir." The millitary men replied. The policemen in the team seemed to have withdrawn out of fear, but they dare not say it. "Remember, we have thirty minutes to do all these, once the oxygen in the mask finishes, run as fast as you can to exit the underground and meet the medical team here, you would be attended to." He explained. The men all nodded, they loved the challenge awaiting them. After thirty minutes, it either they die or they make it back into the main house. "When are they bringing in more antidotes?" Clement asked the medical team leader who was fuming at a corner. "They should be here in the next twenty minutes." She replied. "Good." Clement slid the mask on his face and covered his nose and mouth with a tube. "Remember, don't switch it on unless it your time to enter the underground. Okay?" He asked. "Yes sir." They chorused once again. "You, come with me. You and you should be ready to dive in as soon as I radio James or Sylvester." He said and pressed a button on the side of mask and headed towards the staircase that connects with the underground. A soldier was on his chase as they both embarked on a journey that could either make them living heroes or dead heroes. ----------- "Are you in control of the situation?" Clement asked the guy. They are now three minutes into the thirty minutes. The guy was a computer analyst for the Nigerian Army, so he knew what it entails. "Its seventy percent already." The guy replied. Clement smiled for the first time that day. "We need just seventy five percent to be able to enter the underground." "Clingh!" The metal covering the underground opened at once. "Good job man." Clement said patting him on the back. "The electric barricade has been disabled. We need two men down here to get Hassan's body out of here. Everyone else can move in afterwards." Clement radioed. "Lets go." He said to the guy who stood rooted to the spot. "Any problem?" Clement asked. "Yeah. We have forty minutes before this cover shut again. Ite reading here." He pointed to the screen where a time was reading. "No problems, we'll can do it." Clement said as he confirmed if his spare mask was still intact. And with that, he put his leg into the opening, pointed his flashlight. "There is a ladder around here." He said, then he started going down, until he was no longer visible. --to be continued-- |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 6:17pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
--continuation-- Ngozi stood outside the cell while Jay sat at the far end with cuffs on his hands and legs. "Are you ready to release me?" He asked. "Nwankwo, no one is releasing anybody here. You are guilty of every offece levied against you. You should be lucky that your arrest has not being made public. Its still within few officers around here." Ngozi replied hotly. "Are you saying you can't use you position to influence or effect my release?" He asked. "I am in no position to help you out. The best I can do is..." She said then looked around to make sure no one is around. "I'll try and reduce the security around here. I'll reduce them to one and you know how you can get him close to yourself. You know what t do afterwards. The counter is always free, one officer at the counter during the day and two at night." She explained and watched his reaction. "But for the rest of this week,there will always be a female officer at the counter at night. You can take her out and make you way out. Your first turning by the right connects you to the back of the station, there is an untarred road that connects to the boarder road. If you can make it on foot, then you can sneak out of the country unoticed." She concluded. "So when am I moving?" He asked. "Maybe tomorrow evening. I'll talk to Clement about reducing the men patrolling this area to one." She replied. "Clement?" He asked trying to remember the name. "Yeah. My boss, the man who came with me to the hospital." She replied. "I know." He snapped. "Do you know him somewhere?" She asked. "Tell him to see me, I have a revelation for him." He replied. She decided not to drag it any further. "Nwa?" She called. He raised his head to have a proper view of her face. "What's that mark down there?" She asked. "Oh! This? I am not permitted to talk about it to an outsider. In case you see Danger-kelv, he has it. I learnt Viktor is in your custody, he has it too." He replied. "Who is Danger-Kelv?" She asked. "Tell Clement to see me. Now get out of here." He screamed at her. "Nwa, its me." "Get out!" He screamed at the top of his voice. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Victoria was driving carefully along the busy main road, something she hadn't done in years. She put all her mind into the driving and hummed as the car stereo blared Kendrick Lamar's poetic justice. She looked into the rear mirror. "This volkswagen has been on my trail since. What does she want?" She asked herself. She decided to keep it cool with the girl behind the wheel, now that she was a changed person. If not, she would have done the unexpected. A few minutes later, she pulled up in front of the tea shop and walked in. She walked towards the vip section where Sandra told her she would be waiting. To her suprise, the volkswagen lady parked a little distance away from the shop and walked the remaining distance to the shop. While she sat at the centre of the VIP section, the volkswagen lady sat at the entrance to the vip section. She pretended not to notice her and went about her meeting with Sandra. "You called me?" She said after exchanging pleasantries with the model. "Yeah. I called you because of Janet and her crew. Do you know of anybody by the name Rahmon?" Sandra dived straight into the point. "Yeah! I know him." She replied. "Good. He sent Janet after me." Sandra said. Victoria shifted uncomfortably on her sit. "I want to get my money off him and I was told you are the right person for the job. I will pay you five million if you do this successfully." Sandra explained. "What exactly do you want me to do now?" She asked, the offer seemed enticing. With this, she could fly out of the country with her mother and start a new life. But she promised God of dropping her old habbit a few hours ago. "You should know better. I want you to strike him hard. Make him regret his actions and get my money off him." Sandra explained. "Am sorry, I no longer do that kind of job." Victoria replied. "Stop the joke my dear." Sandra said laughing. "I am not joking. And I want you out of here now. You see that lady at the entrance, she trailed me here from my estate. I don't know the party she is working for. She could be a cop, Rahmon's spy or Don's spy." Victoria explained. Sandra started trembling on her seat. "I will advice you to stay away from Don and his group, but first, get Janet out of there. Lay low for a while, you don't know who is after you. And don't forget, I am done with this job." Victoria explained. "How did you know all these?" "That is not the issue. Get out of here, drive to a friends place. Just don't go home now." Victoria added. "Okay." Sandra rose up and walked out of the vip section. The volkswagen lady still remained on her seat. No doubt, she is after me. Victoria concluded. --to be continued-- |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by alabig(m): 6:25pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Keep on making sense d9ty7!!! |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:27pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Mmmmmn, which tym Jay come turn 2 pastor wey dey see vision nw? Vic! Are u sure u are out of d game? 5million is a big money ooo. Ngozi!!! Chaii, u fall my hand. D9ty7, thanks 4 d updates. But erm..... Tolani nko?? |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 6:35pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Sweety, Dolapo still dey hospital o. I decided to shut out her part cos it has no significance to the story at present. I'll bring her in when she is needed. Shey you get? adeh39: |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 6:36pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
All thanks to u bro alabig: |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:45pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Oga D9ty7 thanks ooh Can't wait for tomorrow update ![]() Make Clement and him team no fie ooh |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 7:14pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
D9ty7 thank u ooooo!! U are sure a darling hummm sorry it a slip of tongue oooo |
| Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(op): 7:22pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Tecno4life: More updates to come b4 12 midnight. Mariamferanmi: I yaff hear o. Kip your comments coming guys. |
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oga D u don kill anoda innocent man again 