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Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 12:56pm On Mar 28, 2015
harjibolar10:

Are you serious at all, I know you must be joking.

What did you want me to be doing, before the election result is announce? Make I dey go help them count vote abi?
You no go do am like that now

@bolded; you better not try me, if the result no favour your candidate nko? Believe me, I go come comot ya thumb and go dey type the remaining tory ma self


Did I forget to include that; I like the kind of sophia lady, she's what I'm looking forward to as a wife, you know


Thanks for the update ma'am

Everyone suppose to count na, abi you are not a good citizen of Nigeria ni cheesy

And please o, I need my thumb for plenty things, let's leave the thumb out ehn smiley

And did I make that Sophia too perfect? sad
Wish you all the best in finding a 'Sophia' in Nigeria wink
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 1:00pm On Mar 28, 2015
SexySapphire:
Kizzy, are u being for real that the story will soon come to an end? When did we even start dat we are finishing this early? Anyway, it's being a nice ride all along and I can't wait to know what the final chapter entails. Thanks so much for taking your time to write dis beautiful story kizzykeziah

I'm for real o. It may have a second part but I haven't decided that yet. Maybe I should turn it into season film, lol.
And it was a great pleasure of mine to have given you a nice ride. smiley
Saranghe!
Re: Eothen-Our losses by gorgybee(f): 4:58pm On Mar 28, 2015
I wouldn't love the story to end anytime soon....anyways, am looking forward to the last part.
Thanks for coming this far sweetie.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 6:31pm On Mar 28, 2015
gorgybee:
I wouldn't love the story to end anytime soon....anyways, am looking forward to the last part.
Thanks for coming this far sweetie.

Saranghe kiss
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 9:57pm On Mar 28, 2015
kizzykeziah:


Everyone suppose to count na, abi you are not a good citizen of Nigeria ni cheesy

And please o, I need my thumb for plenty things, let's leave the thumb out ehn smiley

And did I make that Sophia too perfect? sad
Wish you all the best in finding a 'Sophia' in Nigeria wink
It may be from any part of the world, ah don't mind


And the last time I check, I'm from france. So i cant a good citizen to someone else country
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 3:15pm On Mar 29, 2015
harjibolar10:

It may be from any part of the world, ah don't mind


And the last time I check, I'm from france. So i cant a good citizen to someone else country



I hope you also won't mind one from Syria or Somalia. The bride price there should be reasonable enough. You would just need to learn how to dodge missiles cheesy
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 8:18pm On Mar 29, 2015
kizzykeziah:


I hope you also won't mind one from Syria or Somalia. The bride price there should be reasonable enough. You would just need to learn improve on how to dodge missiles cheesy
Cos dodging missiles? That's what I do most this days ooo

Bride price is not the problem jhoor


And, when you wan update now, or you still stand on what you posted earlier?
Re: Eothen-Our losses by VanTee20(m): 9:04pm On Mar 29, 2015
Good evening dear moderators, I wish to use this medium to endorse/recommend this thread for frontpage (I used to know of a thread like that for frontpage nomination and stuff but I can't find it anywhere now).

The writer has done a great job so far, penning a story this splendid as a debutant, then the story itself is near the end so there is no issue of the writer abandoning the story half way. Also, it's been quite a time since a story from this section made frontpage. This story is certainly a good option to fill that lacuna.

I'll be glad if this request is seen to in due time (before the story ends). Thanks.

Tags;

Obinnau, Mynd44, Cuddlemii, Ishilove, Humbledbygrace.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by Nobody: 7:47am On Mar 30, 2015
Keziah,you are doing a great work here,though i'm not through with readin.
I'm impressed so far.

Nice one,sis smiley
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 3:27pm On Mar 30, 2015
harjibolar10:

Cos dodging missiles? That's what I do most this days ooo

Bride price is not the problem jhoor


And, when you wan update now, or you still stand on what you posted earlier?

I'm dead serious o. It's a matter of small time.... Like six hours or less cheesy cheesy
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 3:29pm On Mar 30, 2015
kitnah:
Keziah,you are doing a great work here,though i'm not through with readin.
I'm impressed so far.

Nice one,sis smiley

Thanks and it's not so long na so read up fast smiley
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 3:31pm On Mar 30, 2015
VanTee20, thanks for the endorsement. I really really really really really appreciate that.

You've been an awesome mentor indeed.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by Nobody: 3:48pm On Mar 30, 2015
kizzykeziah:


Thanks and it's not so long na so read up fast smiley
Aiit

I wl catch up tonight unfailingly.

Nice work ma
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 7:01am On Mar 31, 2015
kizzykeziah:


I'm dead serious o. It's a matter of small time.... Like six hours or less cheesy cheesy
Your 6hours never laps, abi


Ah go comot your thum now, you dey try me
Re: Eothen-Our losses by SexySapphire(f): 8:06am On Mar 31, 2015
VanTee20:
Good evening dear moderators, I wish to use this medium to endorse/recommend this thread for frontpage (I used to know of a thread like that for frontpage nomination and stuff but I can't find it anywhere now).

The writer has done a great job so far, penning a story this splendid as a debutant, then the story itself is near the end so there is no issue of the writer abandoning the story half way. Also, it's been quite a time since a story from this section made frontpage. This story is certainly a good option to fill that lacuna.

I'll be glad if this request is seen to in due time (before the story ends). Thanks.

Tags;

Obinnau, Mynd44, Cuddlemii, Ishilove, Humbledbygrace.
I strongly second this motion.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 11:05am On Mar 31, 2015
harjibolar10:

Your 6hours never laps, abi


Ah go comot your thum now, you dey try me

I'm trying to type now. Seriously trying to make the final update worth it.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 12:22pm On Mar 31, 2015
kizzykeziah:


I'm trying to type now. Seriously trying to make the final update worth it.
I trust you now...

I'm waiting for you oo, before I post my own update
Re: Eothen-Our losses by buoye1(m): 12:24pm On Mar 31, 2015
harjibolar10:

I trust you now...

I'm waiting for you oo, before I post my own update
dont tell me you re doing this!!!!!!!!!!update na him um no mention ur bro?
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 1:55pm On Mar 31, 2015
buoye1:
dont tell me you re doing this!!!!!!!!!!update na him um no mention ur bro?
Big boss, don't mind me jaree, trust me now...

Me just wan do small write - up for her maa ni, after she must have finish her tori


Update keee, Me know sabi write story jhoor
Re: Eothen-Our losses by stuff46(m): 4:32pm On Mar 31, 2015
SexySapphire:

I strongly second this motion.

I am thirding this motion.



Ishilove
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 7:06pm On Mar 31, 2015
Namesake, I'm coming o. Was about to update when good news came 2ru my t.v. and I'm still dancing now.

Update loading........ Till jubilation over grin
Re: Eothen-Our losses by Nobody: 7:24pm On Mar 31, 2015
I'm through with reading,all i can say is WOW!!

Nice one keziah

Btw,you born in april?? well me too smiley
Re: Eothen-Our losses by VanTee20(m): 10:09pm On Mar 31, 2015
kizzykeziah:
VanTee20, thanks for the endorsement. I really really really really really appreciate that.

You've been an awesome mentor indeed.

You are welcome Keziah.

You have been a wonderful student yourself.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by VanTee20(m): 10:11pm On Mar 31, 2015
kitnah:
I'm through with reading,all i can say is WOW!!

Nice one keziah

Btw,you born in april?? well me too smiley

Me too smiley.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by harjibolar10(m): 11:37pm On Mar 31, 2015
kizzykeziah:
Namesake, I'm coming o. Was about to update when good news came 2ru my t.v. and I'm still dancing now.

Update loading........ Till jubilation over grin
Roger that ma'am
Re: Eothen-Our losses by Nobody: 8:26am On Apr 01, 2015
VanTee20:


Me too smiley.
Wow!!

Mine is on 4,wen is urs??
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 11:46am On Apr 01, 2015
Yay!!! April kids sure rock cool

Congrats to the man of the age now on being elected into the office of the President of Nigeria. It is really nice to be on the winning team grin cheesy


Well, well.... In the awesome mood of celebration I'm presently in, I would wrap it off right about now.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 11:53am On Apr 01, 2015
Chapter 30


Final chapter


" It's been almost eight hours. I'm beginning to get worried," Sophia observed and stood up from the chair.

" I'm sure your father is doing his best," Tunde told her.
In the short time frame he had sat with her, he had been able to connect with her. She was really different from his own wife. There were a lot of striking variations between them that he kept wondering how they ever got along.

" I know my dad would do that. I'm only anxious," she said and paced.

After another almost three hours of anxiety, she saw her father come out of one of the theater rooms of the hospital from the lit up passage way since it was already dark. Night had fallen for over six hours already.

Sophia sighed and approached him as he kept walking to the doctor's office,
" That sure took long," she tried hiding her anxiety and walked with him.

Dr. Ayoola stopped shortly in his steps seeing his daughter was worried. No use keeping her in the dark, " Well, Sophia, I do not have good news for you. I'm so sorry but we couldn't do anymore than just save the baby. She gave up and I am so sorry but we did try. Only, she got out of comma for something less than five minutes, made some mutterings and gave up the struggle. I'm sorry, sweetheart and I'm sorry, Tunde," he let out as Sophia staggered back.

This wasn't right. Abigail wasn't meant to just leave this way. They still had a lot to fight and talk about. She hadn't asked her what made her commit unwarranted acts against her. Abigail couldn't be....dead. No! Sophia couldn't stifle the tears that rushed to her face. She put her hand to her mouth and choked on the tears.

Tunde was not so surprised but he never really wanted his wife to die either. She had her own share of evils but who didn't?

" It's a boy, sir," the smart nurse handed the infant to its father. The baby didn't even blink and just stared at his dad's eyes. Tunde took the child from her and shrank back to the wall. This was their baby. The one she didn't bother living to see.

"I'm still trying to decipher what she was saying at the last moment. She was struggling to get the words across but none of us could hear. We were too busy trying to save her life," Sophia's dad explained.

Abigail's own doctor who was a specialist at the hospital and had also gone into operation room with him spoke now, " She never cared about antenatal. Didn't bother with tests. I always wondered what else could engulf an expectant mother other than her pregnant condition." He shook his head and led the way into his office.

Dr. Ayoola hesitated looking at his daughter and how she was taking the news of the death of her childhood friend.
No matter what, they shared something once and a sad ending was not deserved. He pulled her to himself and patted her back, " It's okay, sweetheart," he consoled her as she choked on her tears.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 12:16pm On Apr 01, 2015
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" That is really expensive, dear. I'm not Sophia's boyfriend. I'm just an architect who works under someone else," Daniel pointed out as Dammy pointed out a shoe from the catalogue she was going through on the laptop.

" Come on, don't be so stingy," Dammy cajoled him but only got a straight answer.

" We can't afford that," Daniel put in all seriousness.
" Whatever," she said and turned to the next page. The wedding was going to be in six weeks. Her father in law to-be couldn't spare more time and since he didn't bother with heads up, she had a short time to really get ready. Not that she hadn't been preparing since long ago. They were always going to get married, no matter how long it took. That was how much she was confident in Daniel.

" I'd get that," Daniel offered as the front door was tapped. Dammy was really excited after a while because of the wedding coming up. Looking at her now, he didn't regret his choice in a bride. She was almost everything he hoped for.

" Wow, Sophia. I didn't know you were coming," Daniel had to exclaim as he saw Sophia at the door with her daughter.

" It's a surprise. Congrats on your decision to get married finally, guys, " Sophia smiled and walked in.
Dammy put down the laptop and went to hug her, "Thanks, dear. How are you sweetheart and I am totally loving your cap," She said to Temi in admiration of the baseball cap that was nearly covering her face as she picked her up.

" Fine," the girl said eagerly and smiled back.

" Don't mind the cap. I was planning on stopping by the salon before coming here but for I don't know what reason, the salon is closed so we just have to stay with baseball caps for longer," Sophia said and went to sit.

" This kid is so cute. I hope you don't mind her being my little bride," Dammy requested as they all sat.

" Yeah, we were going to ask you that too," Daniel seconded her.

" Of course. She's you guys goddaughter anyways so why not?" Sophia gave her word immediately.

" Well, that aside. Can your boyfriend spare a Lamborghini or something for the conveyance of the bride?" Dammy added jokingly.

" Hmmm, let me talk to him about that. He wouldn't dare say no," Sophia told her sitting back in the sofa.

" No, I was just kidding. I'm glad enough to be getting married before you," Dammy smiled at her fiance who shook his head and got up.

" Well, I have to excuse you ladies. I need to meet this uncle of mine who could take offence if I do not present the wedding I.V. to him personally," Daniel told them and picked up his car keys on the table.

" You won't take long?" Dammy asked him.
" Come on, Sophia could keep you company for a while. And no, I won't take long," he told her and kissed her cheek before leaving.

" Now that is adorable," Sophia had to say as Daniel walked out.

" Well...." Dammy shrugged, " Come help me with choosing the best out of these options here," Dammy requested pulling the laptop over.

" Alright, I sure could help," Sophia went to sit beside her leaving Temi to sit between them both though she couldn't exactly decipher whatever was on the screen in front of her.

" And you are sure you would rather Bimbola was my chief bridesmaid?" Dammy asked again. She had asked Sophia over the phone to be the chief bridesmaid but she had said she preferred her kid sister in the dress.

" You know she is cuter," Sophia joked.

" Yeah, right. Or you are planning a getaway?" Dammy raised her eyes.

" You could say so," Sophia pulled the laptop away from her friend.

Dammy cleared her throat and hesitated a little. Unsure of what reply she would get, " I heard about Abigail and I just lost words. How are you holding up? Your dad was around for the case, right?" She asked seeing Sophia wasn't ready to touch the topic.

Sophia kept staring at the laptop screen, " I only wished a lot had been different. But she just.....left," Sophia tried hard to hold her tears back in. No matter how bad Abigail was to her, they had been friends once. An important note to take. She hated her but still wished they had fought it out. Clawed at each other or something but with her being gone, that part of Sophia's life felt void. A gap nothing could fill up, " Let's not talk about that, please," Sophia pleaded.

Dammy nodded. It wasn't any use discussing what couldn't be fixed, she concurred, " So Michael hasn't called you since he left last Saturday?It's past two weeks now," Dammy observed as she changed the subject.

" He sent a text. Told me he would be busy for a while and about to leave for Hong Kong. Asked me to give his love to his daughter. That's all," Sophia told her friend. Glad the topic was changed.

" Hmmm, I wonder how you plan on sharing his love with Temi," Dammy teased and finally got Sophia smiling.

" I could occasionally get jealous," Sophia replied and looked at her daughter beside her who tried standing in the sofa as she caught her and put her across her thighs, " And he knows what he's in for when he gets back. He's got a lot of explaining to do," Sophia told her friend as she scrolled through pointing out nice shoe choices to Dammy.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by Nobody: 12:50pm On Apr 01, 2015
Wow!!
Re: Eothen-Our losses by kizzykeziah: 1:06pm On Apr 01, 2015
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Mike turned off the car stereo and ignition, " So here we are," he turned to Sophia who said nothing and opened the car door,

" Sophia, the silent treatment is so not nice. Just say whatever it is that's bothering you," Mike pleaded as he also got out of the car.

Still saying nothing, Sophia went to the car's bonnet and sat looking away with the wind blowing her hair around.

" Seriously, this is not cool, sweetheart," Mike continued and stood in front of her.

" Come on, sit," she tapped the space beside her to the left.

" Okay, so I take it you're angry or something," he told her and sat beside her on the car's bonnet.

" Good. You're really impressive, Michael. Is this part of bribery by bringing me here?" She asked him not taking her gaze off the sunset and trying to push her hair behind her ear.

" Maybe. I was actually planning to reserve a whole restaurant but knew you might not go along with that so this seemed easier. Just watching the sunset from a beach," he told her making her laugh,

" Because this was the last kind of date I went with you? Or you have firsthand knowledge that Sophia's one hobby is watching the sunset?" She asked still laughing and not taking her eyes away as the sun gradually disappeared behind the ocean.

" You could say so. It took me a while to figure it out in Minnesota but it did stick in my head since then,"

" It's gone now," Sophia observed getting more serious as the smile gradually faded from her lips.

Mike nodded, " I take it you heard about the company already. Sorry I couldn't get back to you that Saturday. I needed to get a lot of things sorted out before coming back to you. I'm sorry if I kept you in the dark all along," he apologized when Sophia finally looked at him.

" Peter was first to inform me and I did my little research. You really messed up, Michael," she told him as the breeze got colder.

" I had to. Wasn't fun going against daddy dearest," he admitted.

" So what now? Your dad would just watch? And your fiancee, Stella also?" She asked concerned.

" Ex-fiancee if you want to term that correctly. And, of course not. He would get to me in time. He won't exactly let me off after making him look like a fool in front of a board. I only have enough time to win the girl's heart again," he told her and Sophia nodded laughing,

" Yeah, you have a lot of work to do there," she told him.

Mike helped her with the hair she was struggling to keep in place and pushed it behind her ear, keeping his hand on her head,
"I'm not going to promise you 'happily ever after'. The term gets me nauseous," he said and they both laughed again, "But I could assure you that even if I'm made to kneel again, I would do that alone. I could guarantee you that I would never walk out on you like I did foolishly once. I could tell you that whenever my dad tries to put you down or anyone tries to put you away, I would be right there to grasp your hands as well as possible. I hope not to disappoint the trust I'm asking you to repose in me," he assured her.

Sophia was at first unable to say anything and just stared at him. She knew he could be so cute but no this awesome so she looked away quickly.

" So...nothing?" He asked her waving his palm in front of her eyes.

Sophia smiled back, " You just stay around, okay?" She simply said and placed her head on his shoulder as the moon came into full view and they looked to the ocean as it calmed and everywhere became dead silent.

" Did I tell you I never stopped loving you for one second?" Mike's voice broke into her thoughts as she put her forefinger to his lips,

" Shh... I've always known that, Michael," she gently answered and relapsed back into her thoughts. This was going to be a really long journey. Only she wasn't scared to tread with Michael being right there.
Re: Eothen-Our losses by SexySapphire(f): 1:08pm On Apr 01, 2015
Lovely updates Kizzy. By the way, I didn't knw there are so many April babies in the house VanTee20, kitnah, kizzykeziah and me!!! Well today is mine, so happy birthday to me. It will be an honour to av the last update dedicated to me(just hoping sha)

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