Hmmm,thanks tiff.

Intriguing

I'm so much loving this story. welldone tiff

Aunty Tiffany thanks for the update buh it was short oo

Tanx for d update.. nice bt short

Weldone Tiff,
U rock!!!

thks for d update madam tiff.

Aunt Tiff plz cum nd update ooo...oliver asks 4 mur

This is becoming more interesting.Lovely one Tiffany,keep up with the good work

ghen ghen.... adjust my seat belt..... I no move go anywhere

when u restarted this beautiful story and u didnt mention me, i decided to follow quietly without any comment. Buh at this junction, i have to commend ur effort on d twist n turns. Weldone tiffanyj, u re gifted. God bless u plenty.

Am nt sure i want ds story to end yet,but all same,thanks op,i hope the call Mr Nicholas is about to make isnt late?cos doz masked guys arent smiling ooooo

toykathy:
when u restarted this beautiful story and u didnt mention me, i decided to follow quietly without any comment. Buh at this junction, i have to commend ur effort on d twist n turns. Weldone tiffanyj, u re gifted. God bless u plenty.

I've really wrong so many people by not mentioning them. What really happened was this, there are so many readers, old and new. The only way I can get a complete list is by going through my work, page by page and copying.what I did instead was to copy the ones I already wrote at the begining of this work and paste when I decided to complete this story. That was my mistake, apperently, some names were not included and I found oo late as I got complaints from many people.
Like I said before, this is not an excuse for omiting some names, but I'm pleading with you to forgive me. I always wandered why you never comment. I even wished you a happy birthday the other day in another thread opened in your name and you said not a thing. I never knew I excluded your name until now. Please forgive me

Oh!!
Tot it was an update.


Emotional pple still exist

This is getting more interesting, the Nicholas's and Jasons fighting joel's wicked uncle.

chii8:
Oh!!
Tot it was an update.


Emotional pple still exist

You will get an update soon

Please Tiffany mk it a little longer than usual tanx in advance

I love dis story xoxo much,more grace sis.

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'Hello? Jordan how is he?'
'We don't know yet, he is in surgery'
'Tara and I will visit as soon as the day breaks'
'No mother, that's why I called'
'What do you mean?'
'Father said to tell you not to leave that house or let Tara, Eugene and Shan out'
'What is happening?'
'The robbers,we think they are assassins. They came for Mich'
'Oh my God, Mich? Who would want her dead?'
'Seriously mother I don't know. It might be an attack on the Nicholas family'
'Joel was shot'
'Twice, at the back of his shoulders'
'Oh my God, I saw him yesterday, he came to apologize to your father'
'Well, mother that's life for us, we never know what is lurking in the dark, waiting to devour us. Please if Tara is there give the phone to her'
'Okay. Tara, Jordan wants to talk to you'
'Hello?'
'My sweet'
'Jordan what is happening?'
'I too don't know Tara. Just don't leave that house. Eugene and Shan shouldn't go to school'
'Okay Jordan, please be safe'
'Bye, I love you'
'I love you Jordan'
Jordan pressed the end button and turned to Mich. She looked ready to faint again. A few minutes later, two doctors appeared. They moved to Mich and Jordan.
'Mr Nicholas, Mrs Jason, can we talk in my office?'
'Yea, sure' they both followed him to the office.
'I am doctor Joshua. Please have a seat'
They both sat down on the two empty seats in the office.
'How is he?'
'I believe he will live. Joel is a fighter. We should thank God he was shot at the shoulder. No major tissue was damage. He will be on his feet soon'
'Are you sure doctor?'
'Yes I am. I've known Joel for over five years, believe me when I say that he isn't ready to die yet. What I don't understand is why the robbers didn't pick what they wanted and leave in peace'
'Mrs Jason, you know your condition, don't let this weigh you down'
Mich nodded. 'Can we see him?'
'Yes you can, but he is sleeping at the moment. You know, he lost a lot of blood so we had to perform a blood transfusion for him'
'Okay, what about the. Bill?', Jordan asked'
'As a doctor in this hospital, he is entitle to some discount'
'Where can we pay the money?'
'Jordan, Joel wouldn't like you paying the hospital bill. You know him and his pride'
'Nonsense Mich, when he gets well, he should come fight me for paying the bill, for now, let's go see him'
They stood up and were accompanied to Joel's ward by doctor Joshua. They met Maureen and Leila. Joel was lying on his stomach and seemed to be breathing evenly.
'Joel please, open your eyes. You can't just lie down there. Who will take care of Leila, Maureen, I and the twins?', she said while sobbing'
Joel slowly opened his eyes. Her crying voice made him feel so helpless.
'Mich?', he managed to say
'No don't say anything. It will tire you', she told him.
'Maureen? Leila?'
'We are here Joel, please don't leave us'. Maureen told him
'He is tired, you should allow him rest', Joshua told them.
'Jordan, please take care of my them for me. They are all I've got'
'I will do anything you want, just quickly be on your feet'
'Thank you, Maureen, Jordan isn't like me, you must learn to listen to him'
They were ushered out. Jordan was at a corner talking to doctor John about Maureen and Leila. The doctor confirm that the girl wasn't rape but they were both in shock. They need love, attention and plenty of rest. He looked at his wrist watch, it was already 8am. A fair woman, a little bit on the short side appeared.
'You Michelle, you want to kill my daughter for me? No it won't work'
'What are you saying?'
'There were no robbers Mich, they were your thugs. You wanted them to kill my daughter'
'That's not true', Mich said in tears.
Paula, from her first fight with Mich, knew that Mich was strong. Today however, Mich was pregnant, ill and tired. She saw it as an opportunity to beat her up and make her miscarry the pregnancy. Later, on, she would apologize, after the deed was done.
'Mummy...'
'Sweet heart I'm coming, let me show this woman here that you still have a mother that cares'
Paula ran to Mich and pushed her. She fell down. Jordan, just stood at the corner watching. He wanted to see the extend that Paula would go.
'No Paula, don't touch her', Maureen shouted.
'Why? Do you know that I was suppose to marry Joel? She did this to me'
'She didn't Paula. Joel told me everything and why he never would marry you. I don't like Michelle, at least, she is honest. You care only for yourself'
Mich stood up. She saw Jordan coming and prayed he didn't see what had happened.
'Hey Mich, let's go home', Jordan was trying his best to control his anger.
'Hey Mich, I'm not done with you yet', paula said while dragging Mich. Jordan turned to Paula.
'Who are you?'
'Leila here is my daughter and your sister is trying to kill her'
'That's not what Leila and Maureen told us and the detectives. They said the robbers were sent to kill Mich and you Paula, are my number one suspect'
' What? You jerk'
'I saw you talked disrespectfully to Mich and I saw you pushed her down. Thank your stars you are a lady, if you were a man, I would have beat the hell out of you'
'Hey, you can't do that'
'Be warned lady, that if a strand of hair went missing from Mich's head, I will come after you. You are a rumor monger. Keep spreading rumor about Mich, I will make you pay'
'Who in the hell do you think you are'
'I am a Nicholas. We Nicholas take care of our own. Let me hear pin from the papers about Mich, you will regret ever being born for I will make sure I destroy you and all that is dear to you'
'Are you threatening me, mr Nicholas?'
'Yes, I am. What will you do about it?'
'Your sister snatch Joel from me'
'That's between you and Joel, leave Mich out of it'
'You are bluffing right?'
Jordan moved closer until he was an inch away from her.
'Don't expect not to get burnt when you play with fire. I am not Joel miss, so be careful what you say to me'
He moved and whispered in her ears
'Oh by the way, it seems business is running bad? Prostitute'
Paula was shocked. How did this man know that she sometimes stand on the roadside looking for business? Only Joel knew and she was sure he didn't tell him. Looking at Jordan Nicholas, she knew that he meant every single word he said. The man is dangerous. She took a step backward and turned to her daughter,
'Leila come, let's go home'
'She's not going with you Paula'
'You dare take my child?'
'Joel knew she had a mother when he asked me to take care of her. He left her in my care'
'He wouldn't do that'
'He did'
Paula was ready for trouble. She moved towards Leila and picked her up.
'If you have anything to say, go to Joel, but I won't let you take her'

Thanks op,u r a darling

first to read.hmmm,see gobe ooo
dat Paula no go rest,i pity her daughter shaa...and i predict... leila n Eugene's story coming up.

Pls op,go back to where joel was asking Jordan for help u omitted 'family' there or maybe anoda word.

Ya paula deserves it
aunty TJ i hail thee

interesting

Tiffanyj, u rendered me speechless when u decided to complete dis story, cos i was heartbroken when u stopped dis story then, u are amazing. i really admire ur bravery. keep it up.

And as for d story, it's getting more nd more interesting nd suspense-filled.. just keep it rolling.

Thanks 4 d updates.

Thanks for d lunch u r a darling tiffanyj

Well done tiff n thanx 4 d update

Keep up the good work tiff. God bless ya

dat was wonderful

tnk tiff
paulina or wateva her name nq knw dt she dear nt dear d Nicholas again...joel,wishing u quick recovery

Like I said before, you re already forgiven. But pardon me for nt replying u on my thread. I didnt see ur comment. I will recheck asap. Weldone Tiff, may God bless u more.

TiffanyJ:

I've really wrong so many people by not mentioning them. What really happened was this, there are so many readers, old and new. The only way I can get a complete list is by going through my work, page by page and copying.what I did instead was to copy the ones I already wrote at the begining of this work and paste when I decided to complete this story. That was my mistake, apperently, some names were not included and I found oo late as I got complaints from many people.
Like I said before, this is not an excuse for omiting some names, but I'm pleading with you to forgive me. I always wandered why you never comment. I even wished you a happy birthday the other day in another thread opened in your name and you said not a thing. I never knew I excluded your name until now. Please forgive me

tanking GOD 4 joel life.....paula mind wat u say to d NICHOLAS

tanking GOD 4 joel life.....paula mind wat u say to d NICHOLAS...tanks 4 d update tiff.