gat one word... Bullshit!!

Please don't be in a hurry to drop a music. It takes time, do your home work. I will not discourage you but brother, you don't want to lose your audience.

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
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professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Listen to dis guy and see how successful u gonna be, more power to ya elbow bro!

Airforce1:
http://www.datafilehost.com/d/86488c0d

am your fan and have always waited for your single. after listening to it, I wasn't satisfied and I have got to tell you this. this song falls short of expectations.
firstly, it's about you. your lyrics is a No. d chorus ain't professional, u kept repeating search diva tin all over, d entire lyrics doesn't carry weight. sounds like what anybody can just write.
secondly, its about your style. this style doesn't bring out the best in you. if u want a dance hall song that would be a hit. you have got to work hard cos this song cannot make a hit.
then my final word for you is, fire your producer, mixing was poor,beat was noisy and I could hear some unnecessary effect and auto tune. though I know getting a good producer would costbyou about a 100 plus naira but der re cheaper ones and this guys are good. if u need a contact. and you are in Lagos. I would offer you one but am in PH.
people would praise the song here cos de know little about music and cos de have been waiting too long but bro,take the critics comments cos that would guide you and improve you. the song is boring. you can't play on repeat cos you would get tired of it.
well done Airforce.

So it wasnt a joke afterall...pls change d stage name back to Airforce1.

your fan base ere on nairaland is enough to propel you 'to join dem guys soon'..please work harder.....Jah bless your hustle

Wowww, finally.

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Lol.. This might sound like a hater's aggression but its nothing but a truth,100% truth, op you have to read this over and over again

Everything this poster pointed out is true

Take the balanced criticism and work on yourself. Never ever give up, you will make it. One advice from me, pls, change your stage name to Airforce1, that name is so cool and already known by NL. You never know how large NL is.

Though I haven't listened to the song yet.wish u all the best

he try

Mskrisx:






Wetyn u Wan hear

something else but not dear

Now I am scared and gingered.... My own album is almost ready and I just realized that Nairaland users have a very high class. They know what is good. Kudos to Airforce 1 for no effort is a waste. Take the criticisms as constructive and better the work. I pray I get same support from NL when *gratitude* is finally released.

Airforce1 don drop finally!


#downloading

*modified*




The song ain't bad as haters said


There's always room for improvement tho'

milychocs:
The kind of hate, pessimism and "bad belle" I see on this site a few times give me the shivers...
Then I remember all the laughs, and jokes, and funnies by people, threads like"Humans of Lagos" and my hope is restored

Airforce.....may you "touch your stars"
I do not get pms.....I wish you would post an account number here....for me
.....and hopefully by next weekend I will send you my CD/DVD contribution
Nothing major though....just a token from my heart

May God bless your hustle
And your posts telling us about your downloading album always cracked me up!
So thank you!!!
......and d'emme!!!

the bad belle stuff caught my attention. i dont think critism is termed bad bellle. no one dislike air force. he is one dude with a large fan base on NL. dearie,if u really know music,you would join in trying to make him bigger cos der will b joy in seeing our fellow nairalander rock d bigger stage.
I was a DJ and producer in ma university days and I stopped wen I had to start ma career after service some years back. the song was poor but he could b better with more hard work. I want you to sing d chorus without a beat for a long time. isn't it getting boring saying search ur diva ehh non stop? that's called uncreative lyrics. maybe u enjoy d plenty noise in d song caused by too many effect and words jammed together and all if that. if he wants to touch d sky,he should work harder cos even if u were to b a judge on idols,you would say a no to this song. no one is being a bad belle here ma dear. we want him to go back and sit tight and give us something better I know music is no joke. I once spent 1 week with an up upcoming artiste who came for production but I could not just produce such song cos s d lyrics was poor but the tune was wow. we had to re write d lyrics so yes music ain't easy but hardworking gets u der. good morning

Just listened to it and people here are rigt.This would not make a hit.so much chorus and heard that Diva too much.overall its a good start.kudos

Weldone bro. The sky is not the limit. Hoping to hear your next song.

The chorus is too much (search my diva). Normally a song doesn't start with the chorus.

But still bro you have done a great job.

joebeckz:
the bad belle stuff caught my attention. i dont think critism is termed bad bellle. no one dislike air force. he is one dude with a large fan base on NL. dearie,if u really know music,you would join in trying to make him bigger cos der will b joy in seeing our fellow nairalander rock d bigger stage.
I was a DJ and producer in ma university days and I stopped wen I had to start ma career after service some years back. the song was poor but he could b better with more hard work. I want you to sing d chorus without a beat for a long time. isn't it getting boring saying search ur diva ehh non stop? that's called uncreative lyrics. maybe u enjoy d plenty noise in d song caused by too many effect and words jammed together and all if that. if he wants to touch d sky,he should work harder cos even if u were to b a judge on idols,you would say a no to this song. no one is being a bad belle here ma dear. we want him to go back and sit tight and give us something better I know music is no joke. I once spent 1 week with an up upcoming artiste who came for production but I could not just produce such song cos s d lyrics was poor but the tune was wow. we had to re write d lyrics so yes music ain't easy but hardworking gets u der. good morning

Well said bro.

Airforce1, I've been trying to download the song since but I can't. What's wrong.

Airforce1 truth is I never took you serious and with most of the comments I read, I said in my head "this lad is a joker" but downloading this song has changed my opinion. You have something and this is a decent attempt, if you keep working hard you will make a massive impact.

If you put David or Flavor on this song most of the folks criticizing you will dance like tomorrow. My favorite part is towards the end when the producer plays with keyboard and you say "chika". That's how you should start all your songs, ditch the "it's your boy chika". Well done!

NB: My one year old niece is dancing to your song, that should count for something.

downloaded and Listened to the song.

Airfoce1 I salute your courage. Weldone. Your next track will definitely be better. With less autotune and bad beats, the sky will be ur limits. Congrats once more.

*Runs To Dust Guitar*
Album Loading.
Martins301

ZeezaRapture:


*spits on your face**

if you think it's that easy, do your song too and let's hear it.

*stabs this imbecile_ in the skull* I've been there and done that and did better so shut the fk up when ogz who knows how things should be done are typing you nincompoop.

Cool song but your producer is wack.
The beat killed it.

redcliff:


Funny enough you dont even know crap. I know your type.

shut up you little bastardd do I sound like a novice in music? I've been down in melodies and tunes before you were conceived, I spit fact with no fkin sentiments unlike you fools doing nuffin but praising instead of telling him what and where he needs to work on himself. fuctardoz everywhere.

Vivly:
Airforce1, I've been trying to download the song since but I can't. What's wrong.

I don't kno w

Don't give up sha

Keep trying

nonjebose:
lwkmd!!! You no well at all at all. What of fuel price don go #100 to 105 to 120 to 150 to 200 to 300 and back in that order to #100

Am gonna add it now. Thanks

wristwatch:
Weldone bro. The sky is not the limit. Hoping to hear your next song.

The chorus is too much (search my diva). Normally a song doesn't start with the chorus.

But still bro you have done a great job.

Thanks

Tomfrench:
hahahahaahahahahahahaha !!!!!! Kingtom u no go ki pesin

Oga Morning o

konny1:


Yes part of the lyrics

Hmm.

The song is not downloading taking me to some other site.

daveP:
say that when he wins a hhwa award-soon

I will

KingTom:
Oga Morning o

Morning Chief

Tomfrench:
Morning Chief

How far na

Nneka123:
Hmm.

The song is not downloading taking me to some other site.

Don't give up ok