wheeew AM BACK!!!
@Airmark wadup!!!..long time.
@kr0ne oqa..i no understand ur parolz ooo...u jst forget ur guy.
@teddybiyasi: how far. . .how's babcock? mind if i pay u a visit der?

#ELVIS-JAY

liricyst:


I like it cos it is different

check this one out
it was a playful one from me

https://m.facebook.com/notes/liricyst-nornor/your-figure-na-die-feat-wordsworth-poison/1417582661894481/?refid=21

you are maverick right...you had the best line to me...o...very interesting
Hehehe...nice one

obainojazz:
you are maverick right...you had the best line to me...o...very interesting
Hehehe...nice one

Yea..i'm maverick...Lol, thanks.
I wanted something different. Battle lines are great but sometimes you just need to free your mind just write. I'm thinking of doing more sef

ELYMAXiimus:

hahaha. because i siad shady did it u're quick to say it's correct. If i said it was me who did it, i'm sure you would rebuke me.

He rhymed "cleaver" with "jesus"

isn't it d same as me rhyming "water" with "cautious"?
..

@ jreyez.... Eminem is the king of sick multisyllabic rhyming. He can't be wrong. English is his native language.

MY FRIENDLY ADVICE: Don't kill your self over rhymes bro, i noticed that lately. be it perfect or slant, rhymes na rhymes long as it looks decent to you.

and simply because someone said your rhymes ain't perfect doesnt mean you ain't good... don't try to rhyme like nobody
always be yourself in anything you do..its very very important.

Elvisonjack2:
wheeew AM BACK!!!
@Airmark wadup!!!..long time.
@kr0ne oqa..i no understand ur parolz ooo...u jst forget ur guy.
@teddybiyasi: how far. . .how's babcock? mind if i pay u a visit der?

#ELVIS-JAY

u forget me?

Limerick:

MY FRIENDLY ADVICE: Don't kill your self over rhymes bro, i noticed that lately. be it perfect or slant, rhymes na rhymes long as it looks decent to you.

and simply because someone said your rhymes ain't perfect doesnt mean you ain't good... don't try to rhyme like nobody
always be yourself in anything you do..its very very important.

I can't be too sure...but this may be the realest talk i've ever seen on this platform.

Elvisonjack2:
wheeew AM BACK!!!

@Airmark wadup!!!..long time.

#ELVIS-JAY

Hey my friendly enemy I just dey ooo. Touched down naija few days ago and avariciously enjoying all I have missed since. Where have you been too?

liricyst:


I can't be too sure...but this may be the realest talk i've ever seen on this platform.

no, on a more serious note....
that guys letting this so called perfect rhyme of a thing bother him too much...
even if u must rhyme perfectly_ there are several rhyme dicos online you can consult and get joy rather than killing yourself over one person's opinion

Limerick:
no, on a more serious note....
that guys letting this so called perfect rhyme of a thing bother him too much...
even if u must rhyme perfectly_ there are several rhyme dicos online you can consult and get joy rather than killing yourself over one person's opinion

lol..true
Its good for one to develop his/her methods..that way it comes easy to you.
I listen to criticisms but i still make sure i improve myself in my own way

liricyst:


lol..true
Its good for one to develop his/her methods..that way it comes easy to you.
I listen to criticisms but i still make sure i improve myself in my own way

I bullshit critics, ignore them completely

you'd think me and critics dey keep malice

Limerick:

I bullshit critics, ignore them completely

you'd think me and critics dey keep malice

Lol...no holmes..you gotta listen. But never take it to heart.
Some actually may be on point.
I listen, then reflect before dismissing those i feel were dished out based on pure hate.

the moral storys !....i trek pass ...C'O anyone after the tourney lets do 10

007Bruce:
Rakim kini? has Rakim done 10 syllabic rhyme in his life? Rakim kini? has Rakim done 10 syllabic rhyme in his life?

Even if you want to use long syllables as a yardstick for rhyming, Em is still not the best. Common, Talib Kweli and Kool-G-Rap (king flow) do that better. But for perfect rhyming, Rakim is the god. Go listen to uplift; he was basically playing with rhymes.

ELYMAXiimus:

lol @ careful as rakim.

We all have different tastes. For me, when it comes to multi-syllabic rhyming, em is second to none.
The way he stringes his rhymes together is always scintilating nd tantalizing to the hear.
Em is the only one that could use 2, 3 rhyme scheme simultaneously in a verse nd still keep the rhythm nd flow. I don't know how, but he does this in such a lovely way .

He did this in the third verse of "the monster".

Most times, Em deceives his listeners with his accent. Some of lyrics don't rhyme but he knows the right tone of voice to use in order to rhyme anything with anything. The same thing with Canibus. In one of his tracks he said "technically these words wouldn't rhyme on paper." Rakim doesn't, or hardly does, that. Try listening to his tracks, never mind his wack beats though.

Lyrics for UPLIFT



[1st verse]
Levantore!
Yeah, it's just ghetto, kid test the devil to hit the next level
Wish they was a rebel with cerebral metal
Inflex the bezzle with the peddle to the metal
In a thug's paradise where love have a price
So we love for life like thugs love the night
They sell drugs for ice for the Benz with bug lights
Some hug mics to the world, hung like parasites
The likes lethal, the mics lead you
A sneak preview, watch what we do and what the hood teach you
I still see through the eye of a needle
So I can watch people cause slug backwards is evil

[2nd verse]
Levantore!
Yo, what's this? Yo bust this. Yo it's time to up lift
They think all we do is bust clips and puff splifs
And plush whips and clutch chips and touch chicks
Flont rocks like Fort Knox and hog blocks
Taunt cops with more props and we want not
Panhandling with your mans and them
Scrambling, gambling, plans to win
While the cops clock em, thieves flock em
Women watch em, traders wanna top em
Ay yo what's the problem
Before the narcs knock em opposite playas plot to rob em
The ghetto got em, my man said it's rough at the bottom

[3rd verse]
Levantore!
Ghetto alert, let's do whatever work to get rid of the curse
We went from 1st to America's worst
On this competitive turf, now let's inherit the earth
There's more prize for one another, and call shots
12:00 til the next ball drop
All year around plus they shuffle non stop
You think it's rough at the bottom, it's even rougher on top
My peeps gonna have to reach and turn for me
And everybody's side of the street'll be celly
Ain't nothing funny, burn plenty and burn money
And earn money and watch the century turn 20

[4th verse]
Levantore!
We all should, from the woods to the big city and the small hood
Everybody should be welcome to the ball if we all could,
But we fall cause we brawl, yo it ain't all good
We need to play right, stay tight with ya air alight
Keep your game tight, no need to play trife
Get cheese from the daylight to the late night
And it's shouldn't take death to appreciate life
Before a lot parish, we got to cherish if Allah let us
Let's give prop and merits till the block flourish
In this metropolis, stay on top of this
You know what the prophet is, be prosperous

[5th verse]
Levantore!
Now we networking
Respect the next person, it'll be less hurting
Or left lurkin, while we kept our dreads working
Connect set for certain, total networking
Last chance to advance and stash grands
If you have plans to have fam and mad land
Own shine, condone crime or hold 9s
I know what the problem is, killing our own kind
To my flame throwers, train sober, remain soldiers
Stay sane so these pretty dames can hold us
Terror terrain rollers and Range Rovers so the train goers
Claim your fame, maintain, till your game's over

[6th verse]
Levantore!
Ghetto alert, let's do whatever work to get rid of the curse
We went from 1st to America's worst
On this competitive turf, now let's inherit the earth
There's more prize for one another, and call shots
12:00 til the next ball drop
All year around plus they shuffle non stop
You think it's rough at the bottom, it's even rougher on top
My peeps gonna have to reach and turn for me
And everybody's side of the street'll be celly
Ain't nothing funny, burn plenty and burn money
And earn money and watch the century turn 20
Levantore!

Smh, I said someone should remind me how bolds and italics are done

I think Obesemf is a Rakim fan too. He uses similar pattern.

BTW good morning y'all.

Kr0ne Em is that good too.
Verse 1 of rap god is a proof

[Verse 1:]
But for me to rap like a computer must be in my genes
I got a laptop in my back pocket
My pen'll go off when I half-coock it
Got a fat knot from that rap profit
Made a living and a killing off it
Ever since Bill Clinton was still in office
With Monica Lewinski feeling on his nutsack
I'm an MC still as honest
But as rude and as indecent as all hell
Syllables, skill-a-holic (Kill 'em all with)
This flippity, dippity-hippity hip-hop
You don't really wanna get into a pissing match
With this rappity-rap
Packing a mack in the back of the Ac
backpack rap, crap, yap-yap, yackety-yack
and at the exact same time
I attempt these lyrical acrobat stunts while I'm practicing
that
I'll still be able to break a motherfuckin' table
Over the back of a couple of fagggots gots and crack it in half
Only realized it was ironic
I was signed to Aftermath after the fact
How could I not blow? All I do is drop "F" bombs
Feel my wrath of attack
Rappers are having a rough time period
Here's a Maxi-Pad
It's actually disastrously bad
For the wack while I'm masterfully constructing this
masterpiece yeah

Geoxpress, compare what you just posted with mine in terms of rhymes.

kr0ne:
Geoxpress, compare what you just posted with mine in terms of rhymes.

They are both good. Maybe the rakim guy is better, maybe Em is better, dunno.

How do they do the bold and italic?

Geoxpress:

They are both good. Maybe the rakim guy is better, maybe Em is better, dunno.

How do they do the bold and italic?

Highlight the words you want to italicise/embolden then use the tool-bar above the box you're typing in.

kr0ne:

Highlight the words you want to italicise/embolden then use the tool-bar above the box you're typing in.

Aii, thanks

Coogar, Lagunna1 and Guykhena, please go vote on this brawl so we can move on:
https://www.nairaland.com/2439702/holocaust-tourney-semi-finals-obesemf-vs

kr0ne:
Coogar, Lagunna1 and Guykhena, please go vote on this brawl so we can move on:
https://www.nairaland.com/2439702/holocaust-tourney-semi-finals-obesemf-vs

the judges have seen the brawl, they don't want to vote. You and Ibime gave Obesemf your votes...i will go ahead and trust your judgement. Close the thread so I can start scripting for the third place brawl

liricyst:


the judges have seen the brawl, they don't want to vote. You and Ibime gave Obesemf your votes...i will go ahead and trust your judgement. Close the thread so I can start scripting for the third place brawl

Not yet, bro. Your case is quite different from Rebel's. The thread is still open.

Sokrates:
aite man. No p

hey man...what time is our battle today...and how many bars

Elvisonjack2:
wheeew AM BACK!!!

@Airmark wadup!!!..long time.

@kr0ne oqa..i no understand ur parolz ooo...u jst forget ur guy.

@teddybiyasi: how far. . .how's babcock? mind if i pay u a visit der?


#ELVIS-JAY

you're still alive?

Rakim's Uplift is rhymming in its unadulterated form. Godamnit!!

I hope this won't end in another Ra vs Em argument?

kr0ne:
Geoxpress, compare what you just posted with mine in terms of rhymes.

So dark and so cold my friends don't know this other
side of me
There's a monster inside of me it's quite ugly and it
frightens me
But they can't see what I can see there's a vacancy in
my tummy
It's makin' me play hide n' seek like Jason I'm so
hungry
She's nåkëd see no privacy but I can see she wants me
So patient see I try to be but Gee why does she taunt
me
Pulls the drapes and she goes right to sleep
And I creep right through the front see
So blatantly but silently cuz I know that she's sound
asleep
Who's wakin' me so violently and why is he on top of
me
He's rapin' me she try's to scream somebody please
get him off me
He's tapin' me he's biting me he's laughing likes it's
funny
She's scrapin' me she's fightin' me she's scratching
like some dumb freak
Escapin' me no dice ya see I might just be Ted Bundy
Or Satan gee what a site to see I'm dancing in my red
panties
I'm crazy but it's alright with me man life can be so
empty
Stay away from cuz I'm dancing to quite a different
drum beat