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| Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nobody: 8:23pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
I can't say this poem is perfect but I just wrote is some minutes ago. someone challenged me to write it within a stipulated time. please, i need to make it better and your suggestion and editing is welcome. Thanks The women conscience Are we but nothing to say Her mordern conscience,nothing but nay Eve realized but compromise But this llater,nothing, a negligence Your pride even now, worsen Even this act inflaming But we read she's mind broaden Every step into civilization path Maketh this later one, sociopath Yet she claims feminism Belay! This, nothing but vague egoism All sparkles and self- loathing Your conscience, dead as doornail And an agradisement of yard sawmill ...... yeah its sonnet. dedicate it to BENEDICTA who challenged me to this and all Nairalanders cc: Seun Lalasticlala From Drabeey |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by afolwalex20(m): 8:24pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
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| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Imortal001: 8:26pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
I score 3/5! |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nobody: 8:28pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
Imortal001:Thanks, I think I would do better next time, but thank u |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Imortal001: 8:31pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
Drabeey:You are welcome, more greese to your elbow. |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nobody: 9:47pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
I really wants criticism |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by IamLEGEND1: 9:48pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
this nónsense makes no sense 1 Like |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by faradexs09(m): 9:56pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
Uhm u can do better,ain't a poet but I miss d flow in and all it has got the glow  |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nobody: 9:57pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
IamLEGEND1:dts Y it's called poetry, dt write up z spiritually inclined only d "poet"@drabeey understands.  |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nobody: 10:03pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
to u@OP, visit d Abyss, get an Ink, come here and spill it. |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by AlienStar: 10:40pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
Easy IamLEGEND1: |
| Re: Is There Anyone Here Who Loves Poem? Pls Appreciate This or criticize by Nicklaus(m): 10:58pm On Sep 15, 2015 |
The poem is schizophrenic. I can do better in a panic. |
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