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| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by obiZEAL(m): 9:34pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
menzo4u:That was a news headline and not a plan. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Jarus(m): 9:37pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
JUDGE'S (JARUS') COMMENT 1, I think it is crude oil that we're "blessed" to have in Nigeria, not PMS. We would have had PMS anyway. So, not sure this your opening. 2, You defined subsidy, not fuel subsidy, in your write-up. You should have customised your definition of "Petrol subsidy". 3, Your layman's analysis of "fuel subsidy" may have left the layman reading this probably more confused. It is not oil importers that are being subsidized, it is the consumers. It doesn't appear you understood the concept enough. Pls try to do better research next time 5, Your response to the opponent's questions in the rebuttal stage was however great. Scores to be sent to coordinators. menzo4u: |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 9:37pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
mooremadu:Hi there, Point of order. The debate was open to all schools, the schools we have for this edition are those who showed commitments from the onset, unfortunately, the private schools did not. Thank you. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Fynestboi(mod): 9:38pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
mooremadu:Private Universities (don't turn up) are not turning in, the first edition we had complains as regard having polytechnics, the second edition polytechnics turned up, and now we have their full participation, hence this debate is open to all schools(tertiary) in as much as you can provide us with atleast 3 reps, you are in. Thanks. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by betacitizen(m): 9:39pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Closing remark: I will like to requote this concluding part of my essay. "I strongly believe in the mantra which says, “Rome was not built in a day". So, if we must truly build a Nigeria that is even better than the ironic Rome, the removal of fuel subsidy is the first step in the right direction, therefore, it is definitely justified. Thanks." |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by obiZEAL(m): 9:43pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Before I proceed with my closing argument, I want to give a Shoutout out tho my opponents : Betacitizen and Menzo4u, this debate was both expository and interesting! The removal of fuel subsidy indeed comes with some perilous implications, which is obviously , Most felt by the masses, However and fortunately too there are measures the Government can take to minimize this implications BEFORE the remove the fuel subsidy, and those measures include : building, if possible, sophisticated refineries ( with the option of renovating the existing ones to maximum potential), providing quality palliative measures, increasing minimum wage and providing sufficient welfare packages, only then will the removal of fuel subsidy be justified. Obizeal for UNIJOS. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 9:48pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Well done debaters. You all performed greatly and very prompt. Results are being compiled and will be posted shortly. Thank you ![]() Menzo4u, Betacitizen, Noskyboy, ObiZEAL |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by noskyboy(m): 9:48pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
i want to say once again, thank you to the organisers who have given us a platform to flex our intellectual muscle. I want to also comment our oponents from yabatech, it has been great debating with you guys and thanks to all nairalanders for your time. To close, i would simply say that removing fuel subsidy because there is a fall in oil price is not what Nigeria needs at the moment, what the country needs at this time, is for the government led by Buhari to focus on sanitizing the oil sector, there by eliminating the fraud elements, then block all economic leakages in our economy, cutting down extravagant spendings on allowances and trips, diversify the economy and force state governments to look inwards in order to generate revenue for itdelf rather than sitting idle waiting for federal allocations, thereby giving the federal government more money to spend or reviving refineries, education, health and orther critical sectors, rather than pushing the suffering to the people. The problem we have as a country is not lack of money but lack of a government with political will who wont sacrifice for the people but expect the people to sacrifice again and again for the government. With a token of 18500naira, We pay our fees, we secure ourselves, we provide power for ourselves, we put food on our table and yet the only thing the government do for us, they have taken away. Therefore fuel subsidy removal CANNOT be justified under such conditions.THANKYOU! |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by tommytlj4u: 9:50pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
dis is highly educative. I gained a lot from dis. can't wait any longer for d result to announced. best of luck!!!! |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by tommytlj4u: 9:55pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
luxanne:@ Luxanne, wen is d next stage coming up? n wts d topic so dt we can get along as well. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Jarus(m): 10:04pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
JUDGE'S COMMENT 1, Your opening was cool. Appeal to authority sells in arguments and debates. 2, Your use of English is good, except a couple of subject-verb mismatch. However, you need to work on your punctuations. You used comma instead of full stop (and vice versa) in many places. 3, You did well in persuasion. I like the way you quoted stats. Overall, I think you did above average. Scores to be sent to judges. betacitizen: |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 10:06pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
tommytlj4u:Same time tomorrow ![]() Click the link below and be updated. https://www.nairaland.com/2811855/nairaland-interschool-debate-third-edition/1#41601367 Enjoy |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Jarus(m): 10:15pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
JUDGE'S COMMENT 1, Good effort. I like your use of simple English. No playful, often misused bomabsts that I have seen here and in past debates. 2, I like your categorisation of points into sociological, political, economic etc. It helped your flow. 3, Like others, you also commited many punctuation blunders. For example, you wrote "Thirdly; fuel subsidy ...". You should have comma after, not semi-colon after "Thirdly". 4, Overall, you also did above average. noskyboy: |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Jarus(m): 10:23pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
JUDGE'S COMMENT 1, You were largely persuasive, but the misuse of punctuations and some unpardonable grammatical flaws could be a turn-off. 2, I like the fact that you quoted stats too. obiZEAL: |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 10:25pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Well done Judge Jarus ![]() The moment we have all been waiting for is here... |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Aminat508(f): 10:32pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
luxanne:well done ma.... Nice one |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 10:36pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Results from Judge X Team Yabatech Menzo4u: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 2 2. Logic of arguments - 4 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 4 4. Persuasiveness - 3 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 5 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience. - 3 TOTAL = 21 .... Betacitizen: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 3 2. Logic of arguments - 2 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 3 4. Persuasiveness - 4 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 4 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience. - 1 TOTAL = 17 Team Unijos Noskyboy: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 4 2. Logic of arguments - 4 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 4 4. Persuasiveness - 2 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 4 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience. - 2 TOTAL= 20 .... ObiZEAL: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 3 2. Logic of arguments - 2 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 2 4. Persuasiveness - 2 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 4 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience. - 3 TOTAL = 16. Grand Total Scores Yabatech: 38 Points Unijos: 36 Points |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by natakin(f): 10:40pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
YES O!...YABATECH!..WE ALWAYS ROCK!!!! |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Nobody: 10:48pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Always Repping YabaTech no b beans oh ... I no knw y dem never change us to UNI .. nice 1 guys. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Bluezy13(m): 10:53pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Well, I just got to know of this debate this evening, after going through the various points raised, I however beg to STRUCTURALLY analyze the "debaters' assertions... No offence pls |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by mrlaw93(m): 10:59pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Congrats to Menzo4u and Betacitizen . U guyz ve made us proud. More grease to ur elbow. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Aminat508(f): 11:00pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
mrlaw93: |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by noskyboy(m): 11:03pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
is that all the results? chai |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by luxanne(op): 11:08pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Results from Judge Y Team Yabatech MENZO4u: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 2 2. Logic of arguments - 2 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 2.5 4. Persuasiveness - 2.5 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 1 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience - 4 Total = 14 .... Betacitizen: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 3 2. Logic of arguments - 3 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 4 4. Persuasiveness. - 4 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 4 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience - 4 Total = 22 Team Unijos Noskyboy: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) - 3.5 2. Logic of arguments - 4 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. 4 4. Persuasiveness 4 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject 4.5 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience - 3 Total = 23 .... Obizeal: 1. Presentation (opening, flow, paragraphs, grammar, punctuations, word count, closing,) 3 2. Logic of arguments - 4 3. Strength of facts, examples, cases. - 4 4. Persuasiveness - 4 5. Demonstration of knowledge and understanding of the subject - 4 6. Rebuttals and response to questions raised by the judges and the audience - 4 Total = 23 Grand Total Scores Yabatech: 36 Points Unijos: 46 Points |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by bamdexfarms(m): 11:09pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Yabatech, the first and still the best!!! shout out to all the hollywoodwers!!! |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Bluezy13(m): 11:10pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
menzo4u:Let's assume FIRSTLY to be your. paragraph (1): Paragraph 1,2,3 & 5 are expressing one view which is about diversion of subsidy revenue into other sectors of the economy. Paragraph 4 is about the refineries. Paragraph 6 about sacrifice. Paragraph 7 about corruption. Total = 4 points |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by natakin(f): 11:19pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
see gap..na wao |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by unitysheart(m): 11:28pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
I no understand that gap o. |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Bluezy13(m): 11:30pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
betacitizen:Let's assume the paragraph "IT IS AN UNDENIABLE FACT..." to be paragraph 1: Paragraph 1 deals with unequal standard of living with respect to educational infrastructure. Paragraph 2 has the same view as your colleague's Paragraph 4... about refineries. Paragraph 3 about creation of employment opportunities. Paragraph 4 corruption but with a different view to Paragraph 7 of your colleague about. corruption. Paragraph 5 comparison with other countries' experiences. Total = 4 points |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Fynestboi(mod): 11:31pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Network dealing treacherously with me here |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Fynestboi(mod): 11:36pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
bamdexfarms:Erm results never finish sir |
| Re: Nairaland Interschool debate Elimination stage Winner 1: Unijos by Bluezy13(m): 11:50pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
noskyboy:No Paragraphing... I will develop some. Let's assume "MY ANSWER IS NO..." be paragraph 1. Paragraph 1 questions the government's authority over capitalists. Paragraph 2 (I.e from SECONDLY ) attacks diversion of subsidy revenue to other. sectors of the economy. Paragraph 3 on price control. Paragraph 4 (ie from FURTHERMORE) categorical attack on effects of subsidy removal. Total = 4 points |
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