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| Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 3:12am On Dec 09, 2015 |
Am a lover of Literature. Until I took out time to read lots of literature textbooks when I was in SS1, I always found literature so boring. but now, its like a change of phase, I now love literature, and most especially poems. I now love poems to the extend that I can now recite my favorite poem 'homeless not hopeless' with ease. and I have longed to write poems, so if you are a lover of poems like me maybe here is the perfect place were we would be trying a few Lines out. |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 7:38am On Feb 13, 2016*. Modified: 10:50am On Feb 14, 2016 |
Gbagun! Gbagun! I heard from the rear Like the war is horrying near saddle the donkey with a perfect gear caurse kingdom heads are bound with fear. Alas! Alas! the warriors Cried No more food and no more wine Left overs from their favourite kind Alas! Alas! the kingdom cried. quik! quik! shout his men hundred at once ran accross they ran accross and out of sight bravo! said the king from atop. Gbagun! gbagun! I heard from the rear Like the kingdom is free from fear. Hilary chibuzor |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 10:13am On Feb 13, 2016 |
I just woke up this morning and just felt like posting a poem and out no where, my magic hands gave life to it. please I need your comment to just know ur view, thanks. |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by lezz(m): 11:05am On Feb 13, 2016 |
chukwubuzor123:Splendid! With strong imagery and rhythm. I love it. |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by lezz(m): 11:10am On Feb 13, 2016 |
chukwubuzor123: |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 11:42am On Feb 13, 2016 |
lezz:Thank you very much, am glad u love it |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by lezz(m): 11:46am On Feb 13, 2016 |
chukwubuzor123:You're welcome, bro. |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by daprofo: 12:28pm On Feb 13, 2016 |
Gbagun Gbagun is a great poem. You're gifted, Chukwubuzor! Keep writing more poems. DaProf, www.writersafriq. |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 1:04pm On Feb 13, 2016 |
daprofo:Thanks Dear |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by joanee20(f): 11:38pm On Feb 13, 2016 |
You promised me your world The day you crashed into mine You promised me every hour while you were wasting all of my time You promised me the ocean, and even the rivers And I was drowning in your sea You promised to be there But now all I have left is me You promises were lies Only words filled with deceit Cause when you gave me your love You threw mine on the street |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 1:09am On Feb 14, 2016 |
joanee20:Splendid! keep it up |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 1:13am On Feb 14, 2016 |
I want to do some poetic Analysis on that gbagun, but probably it would be tommorow or should I say later today as tommorow is even here already. Gud night |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 1:13am On Feb 14, 2016 |
I want to do some poetic Analysis on that gbagun, but probably it would be tommorow or should I say later today as tommorow is even here already. Gud night! |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by joanee20(f): 1:23am On Feb 14, 2016 |
chukwubuzor123:Thanks |
| Re: Poem Writing.... Let's Improve Our Mind. by Nobody: 11:27am On Feb 14, 2016 |
gbagun is about a kingdom that was Living in piece and hamony. One morning a nearby war chariot passed through their kingdom, so the kingdom was greatly disturbed and they were running helter skelter. the king odered one of his courtier to saddle his donkey so that he can flee. In that early morning, the soldiers cried out they were not ready for a Fight as their is no food to feed their stomach nor any leftover wine to make them vibrant, they just lied helpless and so is the villagers. Then sudenly, men from the war chariot shouted, Quik Quik, Indicating another direction, and hundred of soldiers ran accross. as they ran out of sight, king started shouting bravo from the top of his donkey. Then, another gbagun is heard, but this the clattering sound of the villagers in happy mood because they are free from what they thought was a siege from the Enemy. The poem is seen from the eyes of a common villager who stood the chance of examminig the whole event. |