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martinsmartest:
u deserve an award bayo

thanks bro.and i also want a way i can write for money

will007:
Lovely story...but an Epilogue won't be a bad idea

ok sir

Nice one bro. Thumbs up man!

mohdimplez:
Nice one bro. Thumbs up man!

thanks bro nd thanks for the likes too. You can checkout my other story. Big bold woman thanks

wat an interesting story ...u re dope bro......

Lovely write up,

Ay04z:
wat an interesting story ...u re dope bro......

wow .thanks bro.dnt know that people are still reading this story.appreciate man

CuteChiluv:
Lovely write up,

thanks dear appreciate

Front page things...

[color=#990000][/color]guy you shud hav beg her and and explained to her what actually happpened back then in school.

[color=#000099][/color]Continue the story pls

boyo123:
On getting to my car , I looked at my wrist watch and I saw that it was  11:52am, with the way am feeling if I don’t see ope today am going to lose my mind , it was then I decided to stay in the car till she’s discharged  . Later that day at around 3:00pm i was listening to a program on the car radio when I heard a tap on the side window of my car and I reduced the volume of the radio simultaneously as I whined down the window,” good afternoon oga  a young security man said to me” good  afternoon  I replied, then he said “ I noticed that you have been sitting here for a while now are you waiting for someone sir? “  yes I replied “and when is the person coming sir because the hospital don’t allow people to stay too long in the premises “  the person am waiting for will be discharged this evening so I have to wait” in that case am sorry sir I will have to search your car sir, that is the order from above” I nodded my head opened the door and came down, the security man searched the whole of my car but it was clean he apologized again then left,

It was 4:20pm when I saw a wheel chair coming out of the hospital building , it was opeyemi that was being pushed by her husband then followed by Mrs. Badmus, as they approach their car I came out from my car and walked towards them, Mrs. Badmus saw me first and immediately she made a sign to me to go back but I refused,” good evening sir I said” I said, my boss looked back at me and said “ what the hell are you doing here, answer me ? What are you doing here?” he ran towards me ,just like I was ready for it  I started running backwards , he  became faster  and I ran faster too until I got to were two of the security men were standing I quickly stood behind one of them, he came running at both of us with me hiding at the man’s  back and peeping occasionally, he threw a punch and surprisingly it landed at the side of my face as I was trying to peep, I felt really hurt and angry then came out from hiding and stood in front of him, I guessed he saw the anger in my face because I noticed that he was less aggressive  then he said, “ tunji am going to show you,” now standing in one spot “ before you will end my marriage I will end your life you bastard” , I just stood there with anger in me patiently waiting for him to make a move for me so that I would beat the hell out of him, when I saw that he wasn’t going to make the move I decided to move towards him, that was when I heard opeyemi’s voice from  my back that says “ you guys should stop this nonsense , am really ashamed of you two, look at the way you guys are behaving like kids.

At that point I notice that he has calmed down so I calmed down too, he moved towards his wife and Mrs. badmus who was standing behind her,he tried moving the wheelchair when I said “ wait ope I want to talk to you”, he tried pushing the wheelchair  again when she said “ please leave the chair alone with a frown on her face”  he left her and I began to talk “ope I want to apologize for all the trouble have caused you in your life,I wish I never met you that night ,I wish I never ran away when you threatened me with the police, I wish I was there to defend you when everyone called you a slut when you were carrying my baby, i know  that in your heart you know that I didn’t do all those things on purpose, I don’t know what else to say than just ask for your forgiveness, have made up my mind ope am leaving your life completely, as from now on I no longer work at the company and I don’t want  to meet  our son anymore” I turned to her husband and said “have always had great respect for you,i never tried to spoil your marriage all I wanted was my child” then to Mrs.badmus “ mummy thank you for everything, but I want you to know that am not a gold digger “  then back to ope “ I only want to ask you for a favor, when ben is old enough to understand everything that happened please don’t tell him that am dead, if he feels like meeting his father he could come find me” I didn’t even realized that I was crying by the time I finished talking, I turned my back on them and left.

THE END.  

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a big thanks to everyone that as been following this story.God bless you all

Wow! U are going places dude!
Just a few blunders in ur english dat needs to be corrected and u are good to go.
Big thumbs up

boyo123:
oh am sorry sis.u can just go down the page and click on reply then u can post without quotin. u welcome to nairaland sis we need people like you here

Nice one bro.

Hmmm...am speechless

Olaide59:
I'm enjoying this, please feed me more!!

No b only u the story is interesting

Good Storyline....abeg when you wan finish am?

mineANDurs:
Wow! U are going places dude!
Just a few blunders in ur english dat needs to be corrected and u are good to go.
Big thumbs up

thanks sis. will work on that.
u can check my profile for my other story.

boyo123:
oh am sorry sis.u can just go down the page and click on reply then u can post without quotin. u welcome to nairaland sis we need people like you here

Keep it up bro, you are such a good writer.

You make my day already op



Corrections
You used as in place of has
Shared office with not sheard with

boyo123:
Here I am sitting in a smaller office, a office space that is suppose to occupy just one person as now been stocked to take two,  office files littered on the table “see wetin my life done turn to, shey make I quit this work self ni” I thought. its been three and half weeks since I got demoted  .”hello baby ,how are you today, have really missed you” that was john talking. john  is the other guy I sheared the office with,I think have been very unlucky to be shearing an office with this guy. he talks too much, lousy  and above that his dirty ,he was always on the phone with his girlfriend ,I can bet my life that this guy spends all his salary on airtime just to talk with his girlfriend, he even ask me for money sometimes to buy it. Back to my boss and his wife.my boss wasn’t happy with me being demoted but like he said he can’t do anything about it.there was a day I ran into opeyemi in the elevator .i was asked to take some files  upstairs, a floor before were her office is located, for signing, after signing I took the file and left the office, normally  I could have taken the stairs but something just pushed me towards the elevator so I optioned for  it.i could see that the elevator was in use i.e coming from top floor but I never thought it will be opeyemi that’s the occupant. As the elevator got to the floor i was I pressed open and to my biggest surprise I saw opeyemi standing alone in the elevator,all  of a sudden fear came over me,I picked the courage to say “good afternoon “  and she replied “good afternoon”  we both became silent as the elevator moved downwards although I was catching a glimpse of her with the side of my eye, “men  this girl as grown so big and elegant  the tiny opeyemi back then in school” I thought ,I later sermon the courage to tell her how sorry I was but then I heard the elevator tone  signaling that we have reached our floor and the door opend. She  walked out of the elevator without saying a word and I did same . I watched as she walked towards the secretary post situated on that floor i.e were Mrs badmus post was an something surprised me.madam big ego opeyemi knelt down to greet Mrs. badmus  while she says “mummy  ekasan  ma”.

YOU HAVE TAKING MY BREAKFAST TIME. BE CAREFUL GUY.

ibkgab001:
You make my day already op



Corrections
You used as in place of has
Shared office with not sheard with

thanks,all corrections noted.really appreciate. u can checkout my other story i think its better edited

Nice story Boyo123 simply d best

See Nollywood script don set o. Guy which b ur own na, continue the tori joor nw wey e don dey sweet me.

this is what story writers on nairaland should learn, DONT MAKE YOUR STORY TOO LONG... nice one OP.

boyo123:
thanks sis. will work on that. u can check my profile for my other story.

Have u thought about turning this your story to a film script?

nice story..

This is a masterpiece, what an experience. I almost missed out on my appointment, cos i really need to read on till the end ..... Very lovely.

nice write up nice write up

Boyo, indeed its a very lucrative story I must recommend, from the story headline to the body its fantastic, constructive, educative and quite sympathetic and encouraging but at the same time, please most readers can not comprehend abbreviations such like; as in place of (has), our (hour) etc. Which I believe they are corrective blunders. Thanks, keep it up and I'm still expecting more of your stories.

IT SEEMS THIS STORY WILL EQUALLY TAKE MY LUNCH PERIOD

a great master-piece u hv got here broda Boyo123 aka Mr Tunji... may ur the thespian ink in u never runs dry... #$tayBlessedBro...

idensko:
Have u thought about turning this your story to a film script?

dnt know how to go about it.will be glad if u can help me