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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 6:25pm On Jul 25, 2016
I doubt what's between Rough's legs embarassed
"She's a guy" undecided
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Freeezzz(m): 12:19am On Jul 26, 2016
Ace why na?
cool
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Zeeenas(f): 3:07am On Jul 26, 2016
Beautiful master piece i must say. U dou are gifted.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 12:06pm On Jul 26, 2016
[b]**The next morning**

Slimmy and OJ were discussing behind the gate of the Arch Angels mansion while their boys were assembled outside the gate with three cars there, all ready for the rescue mission. The Arch Angels had a total of eight men while the Tigers had seven, most of them weren't dressed fully in their uniforms but only had a touch of their colours on their clothes, except for their leaders who were fully dressed. 

"We can't just go together, some of our boys have to wait as backup," Slimmy was saying to OJ as they strategized their movements. "Maybe your assistant should wait here with Rough and some of the boys from both teams while we lead some other boys there." 

"Sounds okay," OJ agreed. "So how many boys are you suggesting we go with?"

"Humm... I think the formation should be like this," OJ began to demonstrate with his hands. "Let's split into three teams; both of us would lead the first team, let's call it team A. Rough could lead the second team, Team B while your assistant leads the third team, Team C. Since we are fifteen altogether, each team should have five people in it, that means the both of us are going to get three more people to join us. Now, " Slimmy squatted and picked up a small broomstick, he began to sketch something on the floor. 

"There are two major routes to the place," he continued, this time illustrating with the diagram. "Team A would take the right route while team B, the left but they won't get to the place with us, they'll wait at a close distance. Team C would also take the right route and wait at a reasonable distance too. And when we get there and we see what's on ground, we'll contact the necessary team or both if needed." Slimmy finished explaining and got up. 

"Nice strategy! " OJ applauded, staring at Slimmy's face with a smile. He secretly wished he could enroll and learn some tactics from the Arch Angels after the battle but the ego he had as a rival cult leader would never allow that. 


++++

"Here," Kong was squatting behind a "Ghana must go" bag, bringing out bundles of money in two hundred naira notes and handing them over to the boys in front of him. "We have nothing to do with these girls, they aren't our real goals, they are just a means to an end." He looked up and said to them. Then he rose up to his feet after handing a bundle to the last of the twenty boys. 

"Slimmy and OJ are our main goals now, and they are coming for the girls already, I already got a text message from one of the spies saying they are in their way to Rushi." Kong said to the boys. "The goal is to capture Slimmy and OJ alive because I want to make them concede defeat and I'll make a video record of them, to announce to the world that I've finally taken over. We will kill the rest of the boys straightaway. The only reason we would kill Slimmy or OJ before making them concede is if they claim to be stubborn or want to give us too much tough time. Remember, we have a greater advantage because we outnumber them and we also know all of their steps, let's use this advantage to kill them all." He paused and looked at all of his boys faces, just like the late Host used to. "Does everyone understand?" He shouted in a determined tone. 

"Yes!" They all replied with a different type of determination in their voices. Theirs was not determination to take over but it was the determination stirred by the money on their palms.

Kong took in a deep breath and then signaled to one of the boys to pick up the bag of money and take it into another room. The money was what he had been able to make in just few weeks after Host had died and he became the major hitman and guardian of the Arch Angels' arsenal. 

While the rest of the Arch Angels and Tigers had been enjoying their moment of peace after the treaty was signed, Kong and Hercules had been working underground, making money by carrying out assassination jobs and political thuggery with the weapons of their cults. They had their proposed takeover well strategized already but Gentle's disagreement with Slimmy gave them an early opportunity to start. 

Kong's phone notification tone sounded, he took it out immediately and swiped down the notification bar. "We just stopped on the way now, we're waiting at some distance from Rushi. I don't know what for and I don't know if Capon and the rest are still heading for Rushi or going elsewhere " he read.  He looked at the eager faces of his boys and made a chuckle. Then he began to type a reply to the message. "Can you move away from the group, I need to speak with you and intimate you on some things" Kong sent. Few seconds later, he got the reply. "I'll enter into the bush in three minutes, you can call then."

++++

Rough sat on the bonnet of the car eagerly waiting for instructions from her Capon, as it was now, she was the second in command of the Arch Angels. From time to time, she'll glance back to the boys who were standing around the car, close to the bush and either discussing things in low tones or soliloquizing but she also took notice of one who had been busy with his phone all through. 

Not that she was too strict like the late Host who wouldn't allow anyone use their phones in his presence but there was something about his seriousness with the phone. One more thing that got her suspicious about the boy was the way he vibrated when their eyes met. At first, she discarded his vibration to think that he was only afraid of being caught chatting with his phone by the second in command but she began to ponder more on it later. No one under normal circumstances would have a mood for chatting or playing games or whatever he was doing with the phone when they were going on a serious mission like this. 

To make matters worse, the boy rose from the boot of the car where he was previously seated and said something to the other boys before he began to walk into the bush. 

Rough climbed down the bonnet and walked to the back of the car. "Where did he say he was going to?" She asked the rest of the boys. 

"He wants to ease himself," one of the boys answered. 

"Okay," Rough nodded thoughtfully and returned back to the car to pick up something. 
[/b]



Chapter 29A http://www.youngicee.com/2016/07/a-new-creation-chapter-29a.html?m=1

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Freeezzz(m): 9:50pm On Jul 26, 2016
Don't make me fall in love with this Rough ooo.
cool
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Rukkydelta(f): 11:42pm On Jul 26, 2016
Rough I hail you

Nice one Oyin and Kross you guys are really the best

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Kealmin(m): 1:34am On Jul 27, 2016
so so interesting
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Donpoker9(m): 9:35am On Jul 27, 2016
i love dis!!! kudos to the authors

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 9:53am On Jul 27, 2016
Freeezzz:
Don't make me fall in love with this Rough ooo.
cool


You dey fear love ni

cheesy
Kealmin:
so so interesting


Thanks boss


Donpoker9:
i love dis!!! kudos to the authors


Broda ah see you cheesy


Rukkydelta:
Rough I hail you
Nice one Oyin and Kross you guys are really the best


Omotena... Ndoh smiley

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Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by LordScent(m): 10:07am On Jul 27, 2016
nonshenx


donkross1:



You dey fear love ni

cheesy


Thanks boss





Broda ah see you cheesy





Omotena... Ndoh smiley
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Rukkydelta(f): 10:33am On Jul 27, 2016
LordScent:



nonshenx

Are you high on something ? sad
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Donpoker9(m): 10:35am On Jul 27, 2016
cool[quote author=donkross1 post=47927932]






Broda ah see you cheesy
cheesy[quote author=donkross1 post=47927932]






Broda ah see you cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 10:51am On Jul 27, 2016
LordScent:




nonshenx





Who opened gate for this one undecided. Oya go back to your Romance section grin
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by LordScent(m): 10:57am On Jul 27, 2016
Rukkydelta:

Are you high on something ? sad




Yes. Rukyruky na hia u kom hide. Abeg summarize kross's story for me bikoo
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Rukkydelta(f): 11:03am On Jul 27, 2016
LordScent:





Yes. Rukyruky na hia u kom hide. Abeg summarize kross's story for me bikoo
Too much of weed in action cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Dfrenzy(m): 11:11am On Jul 27, 2016
Donkross1 and Oyinprince, you guys are the greatest. Nice jobs guys
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 11:23am On Jul 27, 2016
Dfrenzy:
Donkross1 and Oyinprince, you guys are the greatest. Nice jobs guys

Thanks boss.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 11:24am On Jul 27, 2016
Rukkydelta:

Too much of weed in action cheesy


No mind dat guy grin
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Rukkydelta(f): 11:29am On Jul 27, 2016
donkross1:


No mind dat guy grin
Lol
He looks like a yabaleft escapee cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by LordScent(m): 12:01pm On Jul 27, 2016
Rukkydelta:

Too much of weed in action cheesy




Na even wet weedcheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by LordScent(m): 12:02pm On Jul 27, 2016
donkross1:



No mind dat guy grin



Hmmm you wan make i help you repaint this thread?
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Rukkydelta(f): 2:03pm On Jul 27, 2016
LordScent:




Na even wet weedcheesy
Na that one na strong pass o
You just made me to feel like eating Ibo beans
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by slimsue(f): 3:14pm On Jul 27, 2016
This one that everyone is loving Rough now, I just hope she won't be the next to die.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Dfrenzy(m): 4:26pm On Jul 27, 2016
donkross1:

Thanks boss.
You are the boss.
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 5:44pm On Jul 27, 2016
slimsue:
This one that everyone is loving Rough now, I just hope she won't be the next to die.


*FingersCrossed* cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by kenecaleb: 2:13pm On Jul 28, 2016
Abeg make una update nah
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 8:57pm On Jul 28, 2016
Freeezzz:
Don't make me fall in love with this Rough ooo.
cool

Fall na
Who dey Hol you
Sebi when she offend you na you go still dey apologize cheesy
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Hawlahscho(m): 9:01pm On Jul 28, 2016
donkross1:



*FingersCrossed* cheesy

WHENEVER YOU SAY FINGERS CROSSED, YOU ARE PLANNING TO KILL SOMEONE embarassed
Pls dont kill Rough embarassed embarassed
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Freeezzz(m): 9:17pm On Jul 28, 2016
Hawlahscho:


Fall na
Who dey Hol you
Sebi when she offend you na you go still dey apologize cheesy

Ehn, but at least, if any persin bin dey tink say hin ge sometin for hin head and kon do anyhow anyhow reach my side, I go fit for call my Rough to kon straighten hin head. grin grin grin
cool
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 1:04am On Jul 29, 2016
If you can't wait, just get the complete story here:
http://www.youngicee.com/2016/06/a-new-creation-complete-pdf-is-out.html?m=1
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by donkross1(m): 6:55am On Jul 29, 2016
Re: A New Creation. (A Story By Donkross1 And Oyinprince) by Oyinprince(m): 12:01pm On Jul 29, 2016
CHAPTER 29A



Rough climbed down the bonnet and walked to the back of the car. "Where did he say he was going to?" She asked the rest of the boys. 

"He wants to hiss himself," one of the boys answered. 

"Okay," Rough nodded thoughtfully and returned back to the car to pick up something. 


She opened the safe of the car and took out a small transparent nylon containing bullets, she hid it in the pocket of her big hooded jacket. Without arousing suspicions she also told the boys she needed to pee too, she entered into the bush but not directly into the part that the first guy had entered through, when she was out of view to the boys by the car she then traced her way back to where the guy went through, she made sure to walk as slow and silent as possible to keep her presence unknown to the guy, she saw the guy standing with his phone to his ear, Rofiat kept a reasonable distance but could hear the guy's voice from where she was. 


"Baba na lie ooh.... You mean say una don commot from that place.... so na trap you wan set for dem Slimmy n Oj.... Haaa Baba you bad ooo" The guy kept on laughing silently but wickedly as Kong kept on telling him about the plans, Rofiat waited silently and patiently to see if the guy could talk some more. "Baba u no go believe say na dat Rough dey lead my team now, meee, woman dey lead my team..... Baba no talk say no beordinary woman joor, woman na woman......Ok baba.... I sabi Rothman's street na... Enh that house for number 57, sheybi na der me and you go hide weapon dat day wey your girl just dey worry us.... No wahala baba, no wahala as soon as everything finish, na der I go dey run come" the guy dropped the call, kept his phone in his pocket and walked back to where the boys by the car where. 


Rofiat came out immediately behind him, the guy was shocked to the throat and was scared that she might have heard all his conversation. 


"Someone should collect this guy's phone and check his last caller" Rofiat ordered. 


"For wetin na" the guy protested as she immediately got up to defend himself incaseof any attacks. 


"Do you have anything to hide" Rofiat asked. 


"Wetin I wan get to hide na" the guy replied. 


"Then bring out your phone, let's check your last dialled or received call" Rofiat ordered again. 


The guy paused and stared around calculating his odds and chances, the were four all of the, does he stand a chance of taking all of them out if he is fast enough, he pondered over it for a while. 


"Okay Okay, let me bring out my phone" he mumbled as he swiftly quickly laid his hand on his gun behind his trousers and was about bringing it out, Rofiat who was already at alert shot him straight in the head even though she didn't aim for any part of his body. 


The remaining guys jerked back and all stared in surprise at what just played down, one of them then moved closer and  them raised the guy's shirt only to see his hands on a gun, the guy proceeded further and brought out the guy's phone, fortunately the phone was still unlocked for whatever reasons, he scrolled the phone through to the caller's log and exclaimed when he saw the last dialled. 


"Na Kong number be the last the call wey hin receive oh" All of them but Rofiat who was already dialling Slimmy's number had shock on their faces. Rofiat was dialling the number for the second time as Slimmy didn't pick at first, luckily the call was picked the second time.  


"Hello Capon" Rofiat Spoke to the phone with a pinch eagerness and excitement. 


"Rough which one na, shey you no say my phone no suppose dey ring, we are about tolaunch an attack na" Slimmy complained. 


"Boss it's a trap, it's a trap, you guys should return back here Asap" Rofiat Screamed on the phone. 


"Rough you are making no sense, calm down and explain to me properly" Slimmy replied calmly. 


"Okay, one of the guys that was in my team was giving out information to Kong, I caught him talking to Kong over the phone and from their conversation, I gathered that they are not in Rushi, it's just a trap they are trying to lure you and Oj into" Rofiat explained. 


Slimmy kept mute for a while as he thought everything through "Rough" he spoke after a moment of silence, just stay where you are, we will be there now so we can all make another strategy and formation all over again" Slimmy Replied and the line went dead. 


Rofiat collected the dead guy's phone and began to study the code and manner which he and Kong use in passing messages to each other because she knew they will have to send Kong a message with the guy's phone to lure him into his own trap. 



________



Oj began dialling Small's number immediately Slimmy told him what Rofiat had just found out, Slimmy made a u-turn as they enroute back to where Rough and his team were. 



"Hello Small". Oj said. 


"Yes baba" Small hailed. 


"It's a trap ooh, you guys should abort, head back to where team C is" Oj ordered. 


"Yes boss" Small replied and the line went dead. 


_______



Kong went into the room where Halimat and Hadijat was being held, he looked at them and felt pity at how their once beautiful and glowing face now looked gloomy, sad and pained, though despite all that they still look beautiful but not as ravishing and glowing like before. 


"When all this is over" Kong said "I will have one of you as my girlfriend because I see the two of you have soft spot for Capons offraternities, or who knows, I might just have the two of you for myself"


Kong started laughing hysterically as he enjoyed how everything was turning out, he stared at them waiting for one of them to speak back at him but when he got no reply from any of them, he started walking outside still laughing. 


"I'd rather die" Hadijat spoke just as Kong was about to open the door "I'd rather die than be with a coward like you" 


Kong turned back and gave her an evil stare "Die you shall die then" Kong replied and left the room. 






The full story is now available , see how to get it here
http://www.youngicee.com/2016/06/a-new-creation-complete-pdf-is-out.html?m=1

CHAPTER 29B is also available on the blog, I advice you go for the completed story

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