Abeg who is Jeff again? I have forgotten and what did she do? Aunty bibi please come and tell us

vicdall:
Abeg who is Jeff again? I have forgotten and what did she do? Aunty bibi please come and tell us

Juliet' s bro. He raped her......remember now?

Wonderful story bibs, I'm right behind you

johnwizey:
Wat if its nt Jeff dat infected Ify in the first place? Well, i guess he paid for his sin

The next update will reveal that.

skarlett:
Wonderful story bibs, I'm right behind you

skarlett:
Wonderful story bibs, I'm right behind you

Thank you. Please i want you to review it n tell me where i need to work on n what u think my write ups lack. Thanks

bibijay123:




Awww. Why is there no hug emoji? You ve said it all.

Oya chop hug plus kisses...

bibijay123:




Awww. Why is there no hug emoji? You ve said it all.

Oya chop hug plus kisses...

bibijay123:




Awww. Why is there no hug emoji? You ve said it all.

Forgive me, I guess am just old fashioned....sending you huggs from the comfort of my heart....

bibijay123, mind yourself o and come and finish this story..
Cant wait to leave the office, face Lagos traffic and continue reading this....but please na...shebi u ll finish it by Friday.

thank you

ibiyemi93:
bibijay123, mind yourself o and come and finish this story..
Cant wait to leave the office, face Lagos traffic and continue reading this....but please na...shebi u ll finish it by Friday.

thank you

Loool am trying my best bro........can't promise it will end by Friday or not o. Lagos n traffic ehn! Pele.

I thought you've updated self, bibijay123 Please cuman update o, I can't fit wait.

mhiz:
I thought you've updated self, bibijay123 Please cuman update o, I can't fit wait.

Too tired sis

bibijay123:



Thank you. Please i want you to review it n tell me where i need to work on n eat u think my write ups lack. Thanks

Lol. So far your suspense is top notch, thats one quality all your stories possess which make them a must read to the end. Also laudable is the fact that you do some research on your characters and then some of your actions are drawn from non-fictional events. It makes it really easy for your readers to relate with.

What I think you need to work on are typos but that can be blamed on the rush to update and not keep us waiting, yeah I appreciate that a whole lot.

In 'The Devil Has The Money', you began to lose me with the superstitous part especially, Mara the spirit wife ish. Some of the actions in that story were not clear too like why did the devil wait till he was 40 before he helped him out? And if those herbalists had turned Kojo away because they felt he could get his money through more legit means than 'juju' why did he not make it till the devil helped him out?

In 'When Tears Bring A Yes' I loved the story line too but some of the actions were confusing too. The internal dialogue was not smooth and we never did know why Mike blatantly refused to accept the child. And whose child she was.

Finally in this story, the actions seem smoother than in previous stories but Ifeoma don suffer sha Please on behalf of I, me and myself let Ify have a happy ending if for nothing else but for being my namesake

Biko!

In all you're doing a good job Bibs and getting your work out here like this will only serve to make you better. More ink to your golden pen

Signed:
Huge fan

Why did the rapist have to named Jeff!

That's how Royver sef called his villain JJ.


What did I do to you people na!!

finally, I've seen a writer that's my namesake, thumbs up girl...make us proud

Bibi u strt new story without Inviting me ?? Chaii ... The gods must hear this

skarlett:


Lol. So far your suspense is top notch, thats one quality all your stories possess which make them a must read to the end. Also laudable is the fact that you do some research on your characters and then some of your actions are drawn from non-fictional events. It makes it really easy for your readers to relate with.

What I think you need to work on are typos but that can be blamed on the rush to update and not keep us waiting, yeah I appreciate that a whole lot.

In 'The Devil Has The Money', you began to lose me with the superstitous part especially, Mara the spirit wife ish. Some of the actions in that story were not clear too like why did the devil wait till he was 40 before he helped him out? And if those herbalists had turned Kojo away because they felt he could get his money through more legit means than 'juju' why did he not make it till the devil helped him out?

In 'When Tears Bring A Yes' I loved the story line too but some of the actions were confusing too. The internal dialogue was not smooth and we never did know why Mike blatantly refused to accept the child. And whose child she was.

Finally in this story, the actions seem smoother than in previous stories but Ifeoma don suffer sha Please on behalf of I, me and myself let Ify have a happy ending if for nothing else but for being my namesake

Biko!

In all you're doing a good job Bibs and getting your work out here like this will only serve to make you better. More ink to your golden pen

Signed:
Huge fan

Thank you babe. I think d problem is i try too hard to make a fictional write up look real. Thereby leaving out some vital points, an instance : a lady i knew had many rich kids BT dey never took care of her and she finally died by the roadside. In a fictional write up those children will end up with regrets BT in real life they are still wealthy n doing well......u get? In life people do bad stuffs n get away with it so i try to follow that pattern .


N nobody criticized any of the stories so i tot every angle was taken care of and as for d typos i try my best to edit besides i type on my phone on my way to work or in the bus wen i close. Will def do my best to work on those angles.


Thank you babe

Bibijay123, I'm sending you a recharge card, it's small but accept it. This story has caused me an emotional laceration... I'm in tears!

My mail is my moniker at yahoo dot come

sulakishop:
Bibijay123, I'm sending you a recharge card, it's small but accept it. This story has caused me an emotional laceration... I'm in tears!

My mail is my moniker at yahoo dot come

Loool chai !! Pre_ birthday gift! BT how do u know the network i use? Thanks!

orijintv:
Bibi u strt new story without Inviting me ?? Chaii ... The Gods must hear this

Awww my persin no vex ooo

Bb4u:
finally, I've seen a writer that's my namesake, thumbs up girl...make us proud

bibijay123:




Loool chai !! Pre_ birthday gift! BT how do u know the network i use? Thanks!

I promise, I won't spam u, Pls get across b4 I sleep, I can top u up through my mobile banking app. Not joking

JeffreyJamez:
Why did the rapist have to named Jeff!

That's how Royver sef called his villain JJ.


What did I do to you people na!!

Awwww boss no be so not every Jeff is a bad person nau. Am even gonna name my son Jeff

sulakishop:



I promise, I won't spam u, Pls get across b4 I sleep, I can top u up through my mobile banking app. Not joking

Will get across to u tomorrow please. Thank you

bibijay123:





Will get across to u tomorrow please. Thank you

Will be waiting....

Great work BB, keep it up dear.. I will appreciate if I can get ur email add.

bibijay123:






Thank you babe. I think d problem is i try too hard to make a fictional write up look real. Thereby leaving out some vital points, an instance : a lady i knew had many rich kids BT dey never took care of her and she finally died by the roadside. In a fictional write up those children will end up with regrets BT in real life they are still wealthy n doing well......u get? In life people do bad stuffs n get away with it so i try to follow that pattern .


N nobody criticized any of the stories so i tot every angle was taken care of and as for d typos i try my best to edit besides i type on my phone on my way to work or in the bus wen i close. Will def do my best to work on those angles.


Thank you babe

9t9jacobs:
Great work BB, keep it up dear.. I will appreciate if I can get ur email add.

blessinggaglo@yahoo.com


Thank u.

bibijay123:



Awwww boss no be so not every Jeff is a bad person nau. Am even gonna name my son Jeff

Better lol

Thumbs up jare.

Fabulous write-up bibijay123. My whole night was all for this story and i had fun. More graces b.

I also suggest that you give this wonderful piece a little more flesh

Ah!
Jeff is now a HIV donor abi carrier?
Where did she find him?
Hmmmmmm!
Bibijay123!!!!!
Come and finish what you started

cultureclub1983:
I also suggest that you give this wonderful piece a little more flesh

Good morning. How? .....don't get u