A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland - Romance (2)

A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland - Romance (2) - Nairaland

Nairaland Forum › Nairaland General › Romance › A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland (5304 Views)

1 2 3 Reply (Go Down)

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 8:53am On Feb 26, 2017

this one dey studio dey create gud music the other one dey create alternates,see him oyeel face like mechanic.

2 Likes

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by youngdanee(m): 8:54am On Feb 26, 2017

Bumbae1:
Tell me joor

The song nice as op use nose to sing, e make sense sha people wey use mouth sing such a diva no reach grin

2 Likes

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 8:54am On Feb 26, 2017

UniQuegrACE:
not bad, God save you I didn't waste my mb, because if I had you would have been banned for years

good song, but op, who's Sally?
.
lol, you try unlike some people they know their self

thanks alot for the love miss, I'm grateful, Pls do share to family and friends

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 8:55am On Feb 26, 2017

youngdanee:
The song nice as op use nose to sing, e make sense sha people wey use mouth sing such a diva no reach

Is he better than lipsrsealed

u know who ba grin

If u have to pick one who would it be

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by olac21(m): 8:58am On Feb 26, 2017

Though i havent downloaded it,my intuition tells me you did a good job!I will pass my judgement after i download it!

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:01am On Feb 26, 2017

olac21:
Though i havent downloaded it,my intuition tells me you did a good job!I will pass my judgement after i download it!

ok bro... I pray it interests you bro...

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nenye75(f): 9:04am On Feb 26, 2017

I'm awed....the song is really awesome.. Keep it up .....

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by youngdanee(m): 9:05am On Feb 26, 2017

Bumbae1:
Is he better than u know who ba
If u have to pick one who would it be

This op is better joor

The other guy and common sense grin

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Mznaett: 9:05am On Feb 26, 2017

Pass mark...but be audible next time... No dey sing for nose again undecided

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:06am On Feb 26, 2017

Bumbae1:
Is he better than u know who ba
If u have to pick one who would it be

what do u think about the song miss?

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:08am On Feb 26, 2017

Nenye75:
I'm awed....the song is really awesome.. Keep it up .....

im grateful Miss,very grateful... Thanks for ur honest comment.

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by PrickGetSize(m): 9:09am On Feb 26, 2017

Pray for me o
My baby
Pray for me o
I'm longing for your touch.

Cool romantic music for the loveless females on this section. Nice one, Op.

1 Like

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:09am On Feb 26, 2017

Mznaett:
Pass mark...but be audible next time... No dey sing for nose again

lol...ok miss, I guess with time and dedication, I'll be better. Thanks for ur honest comment

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:11am On Feb 26, 2017

youngdanee:
This op is better joor
The other guy and common sense

im grateful bro... With comments like yours, I'll always get better. Thanks bro

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:12am On Feb 26, 2017

PrickGetSize:
Pray for me o
My baby
Pray for me o
I'm longing for your touch.

Cool romantic music for the loveless females on this section. Nice one, Op.

thanks big time bro... That wasn't my original chorus Tho, my manager forced me to change to that, but I'm really glad you like it

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Mznaett: 9:13am On Feb 26, 2017

Kamirun:
lol...ok miss, I guess with time and dedication, I'll be better. Thanks for ur honest comment

GOOD

1 Like

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by ElizaVeta(f): 9:20am On Feb 26, 2017

slimthugchimee:
common 3.8mb

onye owu ite

Is it your 3.8 mb huh

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by LorDBolton(m): 9:38am On Feb 26, 2017

Mznaett:
Pass mark...but be audible next time... No dey sing for nose again

First real critique on the song.

Honestly only the chorus was clearly audible,

Also @ kamirun you should have turned this song into a 'trey songz' type 'just gotta make it' song.

I don't understand how your lyrics (which centers around remorse for hurting your girl)
Relates to the chorus 'pray for me'...you dig?

It's a lovely beat, try refixing it? Like you're hustling to put a smile on your mama's face? Your girls face? Your fams face?

So they should 'pray for you'...shebi u know say we dey sentimental d song go quick blow grin

#my 2cents

4/10. Keep up the good work

2 Likes

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:44am On Feb 26, 2017

LorDBolton:
First real critique on the song.

Honestly only the chorus was clearly audible,

Also @ kamirun you should have turned this song into a 'trey songz' type 'just gotta make it' song.

I don't understand how your lyrics (which centers around remorse for hurting your girl)
Relates to the chorus 'pray for me'...you dig?

It's a lovely beat, try refixing it? Like you're hustling to put a smile on your mama's face? Your girls face? Your fams face?

So they should 'pray for you'...shebi u know say we dey sentimental d song go quick blow

#my 2cents

4/10. Keep up the good work

thanks bro... I understand u clearly bro, will work on my flaws

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by falconey(m): 9:44am On Feb 26, 2017

Kamirun:
thanks big time bro... That wasn't my original chorus Tho, my manager forced me to change to that, but I'm really glad you like it

Its a love song, the beat is dancehall. you get the memo? it doesn't sound compatible.

The beat is crap and for a love song artiste you should be more vocal.

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by yhermmie(f): 9:48am On Feb 26, 2017

this song is dope... kudos to u kamirun

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:48am On Feb 26, 2017

falconey:
Its a love song, the beat is dancehall. you get the memo? it doesn't sound compatible.

The beat is crap and for a love song artiste you should be more vocal.

noted bro.. Thanks alot for this honest contribution bro... It's actually my first time.

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Nobody: 9:49am On Feb 26, 2017

yhermmie:
this song is dope... kudos to u kamirun

big thanks yemi... I'm grateful and glad u like the song

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by SINZ: 9:53am On Feb 26, 2017

Nice one, bruh. Please maintain this pace, sky's your limit. cool

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Younghustler1: 9:59am On Feb 26, 2017

3/10

Re: A Nairalander Releases His First Song And Decides To Share It First On Nairaland by Mznaett: 10:06am On Feb 26, 2017

LorDBolton:
First real critique on the song.

Honestly only the chorus was clearly audible,

Also @ kamirun you should have turned this song into a 'trey songz' type 'just gotta make it' song.

I don't understand how your lyrics (which centers around remorse for hurting your girl)
Relates to the chorus 'pray for me'...you dig?

It's a lovely beat, try refixing it? Like you're hustling to put a smile on your mama's face? Your girls face? Your fams face?

So they should 'pray for you'...shebi u know say we dey sentimental d song go quick blow

#my 2cents

4/10. Keep up the good work

Woa! Brilliant and constructive critism.. I so much appreciate your effort... @Kamirun,no one is undermining your confidence okay?... In fact,this is just the best way to get the best out of you.