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TheBlessedMAN:
Readers Assessment/Evaluation of COUNTLESS

Note: readers are begged to attempt every number.


1. Whats your view about the sex part of the story so far?

2. Whats your view about the violence part of the story so far?

3. Describe Darous, the main actor of the story based on your own view of him.

4. Explain where you got confused along the path of the story and I'll gladly do justice to it.

5. Who is your best character so far?

6. If you are to feature in COUNTLESS, which character would you love to replace?

7. Any word of advice for Darous based on his way of Responding to unexpected situations? Decision taking? Religious aspect? Please feel megabite free to specify if there are others unmentioned above.

8. If COUNTLESS is made into an E-book or novel or whatever means of business, do you think it will yield wonderful returns?

9. Based on the trajectory route the story is plying so far, how do you envisage the Epilogue?

10. Based on sincere logistics, rate COUNTLESS on a 5 star proportion. E.g 1star out of 5star.

11. Finally, drop a sentence of 'GROW UP' for the possible obstacles tackling the growth of the story out of this group of hinderances:

i. The author's rate of updating.

ii. The idiot that use to quote a whole update. (don't mention his moniker)

iii. The incensant anti-spot ban

iv. The Mods.

#Thanks

TheBlessedMAN.

1. ...as the title implies... COUNTLESS. It befits the story. It makes me look forward to more updates. And the sex part is... cool

2. Violence Iduno I mean... okay... I can't recall a violence part

3. Darous is like every normal good looking endowed guy which every normal Bae (except me ) wants to call 'mine', some for sexual reasons as he is a woooow dude and a few like Joke for Love and Forever. Can I describe Darous as being 'lucky' for actually being the ladies guy errrm Iduno... but he has his way to every good thing he wants and finds his way out of any bad situation. I like Darous

4. You''re a good writer of our time. More Grace... I am personally not confused at all

5. Joke. She's just... I hope she gets to be extremely happy After... Iduno why I feel pity for her

6. Joke. I love her feelings. It's real but will definitely get complicated as her mom as...

7. Luck has a way of disappointing. I think Darous lifestyle will get him down for real. And all bad, he's obviously ready for a new drama queen anytime.
If he lets his heart out to Love, I mean true Love and let go of all the bastard daughters of konji, he will be free indeed and he will definitely make a real good boo

8. Certainly! It will. It undoubtedly will. TheBlessedMAN is highly blessed.

9. I'm alil confused about what happens next as the writer as a way of unravelling certain events that makes one wants nothing but read through the very end

10. 6star out of 5star... It is a wonderful piece.

11. The idiot that quotes a whole update is a certified idiot. It's no news.
And the unnecessary and almost confusing ban will be taken care of by Shango soonest
The author's rate of updating indicates he is human with other responsibilities.

More Grace to him.

Mimienudles:
1. ...as the title implies... COUNTLESS. It befits the story. It makes me look forward to more updates. And the sex part is... cool

2. Violence Iduno I mean... okay... I can't recall a violence part

3. Darous is like every normal good looking endowed guy which every normal Bae (except me ) wants to call 'mine', some for sexual reasons as he is a woooow dude and a few like Joke for Love and Forever. Can I describe Darous as being 'lucky' for actually being the ladies guy errrm Iduno... but he has his way to every good thing he wants and finds his way out of any bad situation. I like Darous

4. You''re a good writer of our time. More Grace... I am personally not confused at all

5. Joke. She's just... I hope she gets to be extremely happy After... Iduno why I feel pity for her

6. Joke. I love her feelings. It's real but will definitely get complicated as her mom as...

7. Luck has a way of disappointing. I think Darous lifestyle will get him down for real. And all bad, he's obviously ready for a new drama queen anytime.
If he lets his heart out to Love, I mean true Love and let go of all the bastard daughters of konji, he will be free indeed and he will definitely make a real good boo

8. Certainly! It will. It undoubtedly will. TheBlessedMAN is highly blessed.

9. I'm alil confused about what happens next as the writer as a way of unravelling certain events that makes one wants nothing but read through the very end

10. 6star out of 5star... It is a wonderful piece.

11. The idiot that quotes a whole update is a certified idiot. It's no news.
And the unnecessary and almost confusing ban will be taken care of by Shango soonest
The author's rate of updating indicates he is human with other responsibilities.

More Grace to him.

Me- (taps Jide's desk beside me) erm u av to cover for me if boss checks on me

Jide-(with a frown) wetin, where u dey go?

Me- to the rest room ofcouse...

Jide- to do what?

Me-(looks right and left...and speaks in a whisper)...a provocative masturbation comment just popped in on my story...(shows him the comment)

Jide- wow! This really calls for masturbation.

( now inside the restroom) i don't care if I got sacked..i need to masturbate to d glory of this comment...

TheBlessedMAN:
Me- (taps Jide's desk beside me) erm u av to cover for me if boss checks on me

Jide-(with a frown) wetin, where u dey go?

Me- to the rest room ofcouse...

Jide- to do what?

Me-(looks right and left...and speaks in a whisper)...a provocative masturbation comment just popped in on my story...(shows him the comment)

Jide- wow! This really calls for masturbation.

( now inside the restroom) i don't care if I got sacked..i need to masturbate to d glory of this comment...

ahhhhhhhhh
Masturbation That's not gonna make me smile jhor

Have a good day at work

Mimienudles:
Have a good day at work

thanx dear. U too much

TemiGURL:
uwlcm

Yo
Ah dun write finish

E reman result

Ah dey fear ooo

Buh God dey....

TheBlessedMAN Pls contact Shango for these epistle questions.

Thanks.

I beg update jhoor.

gawd pursh mercy. Na revenge sure pass. Wharrt! after all he went through?

bimberry1307:
gawd pursh mercy. Na revenge sure pass. Wharrt! after all he went through?

Am not sure thus is coming from a female mouth... Make dem punish Ur fellow female..

71. COUNTLESS

Guys, your assessment of the story is paramount to me. Kindly do the needful. Thanks


I'd barely left the door to my conscience open by bending my head down and was totally lost in thought when my inner Madrid and Barca conscience began their unending debate

Favour was still standing nak3d infront of me while the debate went on.

Trust Barca now, it spoke first.
'before you think of either to let her go or not, remember you need to test if the jinx with Doyin has been broken or not, and I think she's the best apparatus for this experiment of yours....' Barca conscience adviced

Hmmm, thats right, thats the only way I could be sure that the jinx of death has been anulled totally.

'Darous, you don't need to take vengeance on her to ascertain wether the jinx have been broken or not. All you need is to have faith that all is well... You can't die, remember you are not just any ordinary human being, you are too special to die like a chicken. Don't let your fear of death cloud your sense of fairness. Please show her some pity' Madrid cuts in

Hmmm, you are also on point, but am just confused right now, how do I tackle this?

'Darous my guy, remember that b!tch stole from you! And all the rigorous ordeal she made you go through. If you let her go unpunish, what message will that say about you? Please just fvck her already.' Barca curts in

Gawd! I really want to have this revenge, but I'm just confused because I believe she did it for her daughter...that poor girl of 8years on a life support with brest cancer...who would blame her? No amount of Jury can convict her for that

'thats the more reason why you have to let her go, she's already suffered alot'

you are on point. I have to put Audrey Timms Letting go' into use. I have to let her go. If not for anything atleast for the sake of her daughter

'don't tell me you are going to buy that bullshit...where has it ever been heard or spoken of that an 8years old girl is having a brest cancer. Release her on that reason and you will regret ever doing that. Fvck her and make her give you your wallet and money!'

This is a dilema o..how can I be this confused? I've.....

"Roberto, please answer me, lets get this over with quickly, I still have a lot of customers waiting for me" Favour cuts into my thoughts with a strained tone

I took a deep breath and stood up facing her. There's something inexplicable about her facial espression but I couldn't quite place my finger on it

Her beautiful shakira features finally suceeded into intimidating me into forgiving her

I placed my arms on her rounded and smooth toothpaste shoulders. "Favour, how much have you gathered out of the 500k needed for the surgery of Amy?"

She was taken aback with my question which I deducted through her agape mouth. Perhaps she wasn't expecting such a question from me, not at that time and moment

"just erm...erm....300 thousand naira. My parents gathered 200 and I worked hard for the remaining 100"

"hmm, by working hard you mean pick pocketing like you did to me?" I stated outrightly with a mordant tone and a raised eyebrow

"oh, no...am not always bad...I did a lot of menial jobs to raise that amount." She said with a less simper smile

"really? What about her father, isn't he going to take responsibility for his child?" I enquired picking my phone from the floor when I saw a silent incoming call from Jide. "excuse me..,..hello dude"

"Darous where you dey na? We don dey search everywhere for you...."

"am....am at somewhere...i'll call you later"

"are you alright? Are you feeling fine or feeling death?" His voice was laced with worry

"na who wan die? Me or you?" I stated playfully. "abi wetin concern your 3310 with Instagram?..."

"its obvious you are still with us...idiot, sha call me when you start vomitting out your smoked brain." He hissed and ended the call

Not giving a damn about my last question to Favour, I stared into her face and saw that I don't need a Palmist to tell me that I need to help her

"sit down" She obeyed hesitatingly
"I want to help you out. And once I did, I don't ever want to see you doing this type of Job anymore. Ok?" She nodded avidly

"let me make some calls...and see what we can do..." I picked my phone and dialed Doris number. It was past eleven o'clock. It took her the 2nd attempt before she picked the call.
"hello Doris"

She cleared her throat "Darous...how you?"

"am fine, but am sorry to bother your sleep, I just need your help urgently...please"

I could here some scuffle noise coming from her room, she's probably trying to get out of bed and sit properly
"are you ok? What is it?"

"am fine, just need to help out my mum. I got home to meet her and my siblings in a very dilapitated state. I was totally flabbergasted. I didn't call you earlier because I thought I could handle it. Please they are in total mess right now and nothing will thrill me more than to put a happy smile on their faces before I take my leave". I explained with a well mendacious tone

Flavour continued to stare at my face in absolute wonderment

She heaved a deep sigh. "ok. In what way do you need my help?"

"have been able to do the total calculations of all the expenses and its...."

"how much exactly? I need my sleep Darous, I have an early occasion tomorrow and I have to travel very early." She curts in

"just 200k...I'll be happy if...."

"send me your account details and expect it within 5mins." With that, the line went dead and I can't help but give myself a thumbs up

I quickly open a Diamond bank account and send the details to her. Promptly at 5mins I received an alert from my bank with the sum of 250k credited into it. I forwarded 200k into Favour's account and exchange numbers with her

Favour was full of praises and was showering me with kisses and hugs

I watch her as she began to pack her luggages and got ready to decamp the brothel as early as dawn

***

I have to test if the jinx has been broken and I didn't want to use Favour for it

I strolled to the open floor and found another beautiful girl. After taken another Goldberg, I followed her to her room.

Then something happened


TBC

Chaiii see gobe of highest order

Mchewwwwww ...I have lost interest in this epistle

Shango has deprived you of common sense eledumare ngbo

You just let her go like that with all the trouble you caused Jide..it it was you bitten to hell like that will you allow her to go? Idiot ode.

I am vex already and don't pacify me ....ok

Darous u just fall my hand

bossy512:
Darous u just fall my hand

Dz 1 pass falling of hand o...he cut d hand comot

This suspense na die!!!

More ink to your pen brother.
A fantastic story by a fantastic guy. Kudos Dude.
I must say I appreciate this wonderful work of yours and I await for an update soonest.

Chain!!! Shango don use darous brain smoke weed... The mumu no dey see anything under skirt.
Nice update bro.

Darous, u need deliverance....

Chai! Ur mata na case study...its jst xo countless.....

i can't help but laugh out loud on how munulistic sango is directing your step you dey help olosho, i see your Money on d latest Brazilian hair.........

Seriously,i hate dis episode,hw cud u? even if u ll show her mercy as in snubin our advices, must u stil giv her dat kind of moni, kai sori o bros TBM, darous mumu pass kingofcastin own.

So you still mumu like this? I feel like giving you useless Slap

Oponu
splits on you for this episode.
I too dey vex for you right now

Dem be say once bitten twice shy but me no come understand your own oo. See as babe chop ur money two times.

What will happen than you to do your permanent job

this darous character is really getting me frustrated
op, u fit just make the guy smart small?
I hate it when guys are dull, I didn't even finish reading the last update when I discovered he called Doris for help.
Also, to be sincere, I don't really know where the story is heading to...

TemiGURL:
don't mind that lazy hubby of mine.

Jezzzz. emi lazy? OK ooo

You guys dey vex for Darous gan o. Chisos! Wetin he do na?

Darous yhu 4l my hand o. How can u be so naive? U be idiot. TBM weldone you are doing great.

TheBlessedMAN:
Readers Assessment/Evaluation of COUNTLESS

Note: readers are begged to attempt every number.


1. Whats your view about the sex part of the story so far?

2. Whats your view about the violence part of the story so far?

3. Describe Darous, the main actor of the story based on your own view of him.

4. Explain where you got confused along the path of the story and I'll gladly do justice to it.

5. Who is your best character so far?

6. If you are to feature in COUNTLESS, which character would you love to replace?

7. Any word of advice for Darous based on his way of Responding to unexpected situations? Decision taking? Religious aspect? Please feel megabite free to specify if there are others unmentioned above.

8. If COUNTLESS is made into an E-book or novel or whatever means of business, do you think it will yield wonderful returns?

9. Based on the trajectory route the story is plying so far, how do you envisage the Epilogue?

10. Based on sincere logistics, rate COUNTLESS on a 5 star proportion. E.g 1star out of 5star.

11. Finally, drop a sentence of 'GROW UP' for the possible obstacles tackling the growth of the story out of this group of hinderances:

i. The author's rate of updating.

ii. The idiot that use to quote a whole update. (don't mention his moniker)

iii. The incensant anti-spot ban

iv. The Mods.

#Thanks

TheBlessedMAN.

1. The sex scene make sense.

2. Violence also moderate.

3. Darous na mumu with the last update.

4. Not atall.

5. Darous

6. My best character so far. Darous.

7. Ah no get advice for him o

8. He go sell well well. I fit buy the whole copy self

9. No idea

10. 6star /5star.

11. Middle finger for all the obstacles including d mods. Except you sha.

You this man, now I know that they're remoting u all d way from ur village. Chai. Good Samaritan. Omo 200k
Baba for d pu$$ies.
Ride on, ride on. We're still watching u from d high places.
Well done sir

PamelB:
You this man, now I know that they're remoting u all d way from ur village. Chai. Good Samaritan. Omo 200k
Baba for d pu$$ies.
Ride on, ride on. We're still watching u from d high places.
Well done sir

thanx love. Manchester in Betrayal needs your attention dear

Had it been i could make a physical contact with Darous, the kind slap wey i for whozz am initiate restore factory setting for him head.

Had it been i could make a physical contact with Darous, the kind slap wey i for whozz am go initiate restore factory setting for him head.

TheBlessedMAN:
Readers Assessment/Evaluation of COUNTLESS

Note: readers are begged to attempt every number.


1. Whats your view about the sex part of the story so far?

2. Whats your view about the violence part of the story so far?

3. Describe Darous, the main actor of the story based on your own view of him.

4. Explain where you got confused along the path of the story and I'll gladly do justice to it.

5. Who is your best character so far?

6. If you are to feature in COUNTLESS, which character would you love to replace?

7. Any word of advice for Darous based on his way of Responding to unexpected situations? Decision taking? Religious aspect? Please feel megabite free to specify if there are others unmentioned above.

8. If COUNTLESS is made into an E-book or novel or whatever means of business, do you think it will yield wonderful returns?

9. Based on the trajectory route the story is plying so far, how do you envisage the Epilogue?

10. Based on sincere logistics, rate COUNTLESS on a 5 star proportion. E.g 1star out of 5star.

11. Finally, drop a sentence of 'GROW UP' for the possible obstacles tackling the growth of the story out of this group of hinderances:

i. The author's rate of updating.

ii. The idiot that use to quote a whole update. (don't mention his moniker)

iii. The incensant anti-spot ban

iv. The Mods.

#Thanks

TheBlessedMAN.

As for me
1) Sex scene make sense
2) Violence scene moderate.
Daroussmart na him be boss
3nobody wey I fit represent.
Title countless fit am. Cos as it get beginnig it neva reach half of the journey it go pass wrong road con manouver come back only to get lost. Cos as I dey so I no pray make dis story finish.
Bleep all the mods even dat princeofforcasting and anybody wey one derail go dey answer to shango and me with my boys.

100stars
It go over sell
Tbm no let any body pour sand sand for ur garri cos just dey flow as u dey flow.
Cos still I follow.

No go masturbate for office make dey no go sack u b4 u go come dey use dat one as excuse say make u no update

stephenGee12:
As for me
1) Sex scene make sense
2) Violence scene moderate.
Daroussmart na him be boss
3nobody wey I fit represent.
Title countless fit am. Cos as it get beginnig it neva reach half of the journey it go pass wrong road con manouver come back only to get lost. Cos as I dey so I no pray make dis story finish.
Bleep all the mods even dat princeofforcasting and anybody wey one derail go dey answer to shango and me with my boys.

100stars
It go over sell
Tbm no let any body pour sand sand for ur garri cos just dey flow as u dey flow.
Cos still I follow.

No go masturbate for office make dey no go sack u b4 u go come dey use dat one as excuse say make u no update

bro u are d next thing to basket mouth. U funny die