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The Dog Attendant (T. D. A) [COUNTLESS Part 2]. A story By Darousmart Emmanuel. / PERFIDY- A STORY OF LOVE,BETRAYAL AND DECEIT / United In Betrayal (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TemiGURL(f): 1:20am On May 16, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
Readers Assessment/Evaluation of COUNTLESS

Note: readers are begged to attempt every number.


1. Whats your view about the sex part of the story so far?

2. Whats your view about the violence part of the story so far?

3. Describe Darous, the main actor of the story based on your own view of him.

4. Explain where you got confused along the path of the story and I'll gladly do justice to it.

5. Who is your best character so far?


6. If you are to feature in COUNTLESS, which character would you love to replace?

7. Any word of advice for Darous based on his way of Responding to unexpected situations? Decision taking? Religious aspect? Please feel megabite free to specify if there are others unmentioned above.

8. If COUNTLESS is made into an E-book or novel or whatever means of business, do you think it will yield wonderful returns?

9. Based on the trajectory route the story is plying so far, how do you envisage the Epilogue?

10. Based on sincere logistics, rate COUNTLESS on a 5 star proportion. E.g 1star out of 5star.

11. Finally, drop a sentence of 'GROW UP' for the possible obstacles tackling the growth of the story out of this group of hinderances:

i. The author's rate of updating.

ii. The idiot that use to quote a whole update. (don't mention his moniker)

iii. The incensant anti-spot ban

iv. The Mods.

#Thanks

TheBlessedMAN.
gat to follow a mates assessment. Gracias maam Mimienudles:

1. ...as the title implies...
COUNTLESS. It befits the
story. It makes me look
forward to more updates.
And the sex part is... cool
2. Violence Iduno I
mean... okay... Very cool

3. Darous is like every
normal good looking
endowed guy which every
normal Bae (including me )
wants to call 'mine', some
for sexual reasons as he is a
woooow dude and a few
like Joke for Love and
Forever. Can I describe
Darous as being 'lucky' for
actually being the ladies guy
errrm Iduno... but he has
his way to every good thing
he wants and finds his way
out of any bad situation. I
like Darous
4. You''re a good writer of
our time. More Grace... I am
personally not confused at
all
5. Joke. She's just... I hope
she gets to be extremely
happy After... Iduno why I
feel pity for her
6. Joke. I love her feelings.
It's real but will definitely
get complicated as her
mom as...
7. Luck has a way of
disappointing. I think
Darous lifestyle will get him
down for real. And all bad,
he's obviously ready for a
new drama queen anytime.
If he lets his heart out to
Love, I mean true Love and
let go of all the bastard
daughters of konji, he will
be free indeed and he will
definitely make a real good
boo
8. Certainly! It will. It
undoubtedly will.
TheBlessedMAN is highly
blessed.
9. I'm alil confused about
what happens next as the
writer as a way of
unravelling certain events
that makes one wants
nothing but read through
the very end
10. 6star out of 5star... It is
a wonderful piece.
11. The idiot that quotes a
whole update is a certified
idiot. It's no news.
And the unnecessary and
almost confusing ban will
be taken care of by Shango
soonest
The author's rate of
updating indicates he is
human with other
responsibilities.
More Grace to him.

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TemiGURL(f): 1:22am On May 16, 2017
Darous really fvck up this last update. Let her go? What a silly thing to do
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 1:27am On May 16, 2017
Just have to join the people that are vexing for Darous. He fvck up big time. Shiooor. Wey u 4 bleep her ass to soreness. U 4k up jare.

Darousmart, weldone. Keep it coming bro. Ah dey feel u
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 8:54am On May 16, 2017
manuelFORBES:
Just have to join the people that are vexing for Darous. He fvck up big time. Shiooor. Wey u 4 bleep her ass to soreness. U 4k up jare.

Darousmart, weldone. Keep it coming bro. Ah dey feel u
thank u bro
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by jibs4lv(m): 10:42am On May 16, 2017
manuelFORBES:
Just have to join the people that are vexing for Darous. He fvck up big time. Shiooor. Wey u 4 bleep her ass to soreness. U 4k up jare.

Darous-----, weldone. Keep it coming bro. Ah dey feel u
smart is nt necesary.
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 3:28pm On May 16, 2017
jibs4lv:
smart is nt necesary.
u dey vex o
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Musampa73(m): 4:03pm On May 16, 2017
TemiGURL:
Darous really fvck up this last update. Let her go? What a silly thing to do


I know what you are insinuating, u wanna learn more skills to your hmmmm. lol
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by dimssy(m): 4:45pm On May 16, 2017
From the land of the gods,
You, TheBlessedMan has done so sell so far. the gods are happy with you.
So far, your updates as been constant.
Also, just like the gods when they want to strike, your suspense is killing.



Regards,
Obatala Brother
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 4:52pm On May 16, 2017
dimssy:
From the land of the gods,
You, TheBlessedMan has done so sell so far. the gods are happy with you.
So far, your updates as been constant.
Also, just like the gods when they want to strike, your suspense is killing.



Regards,
Obatala Brother
grin grin lolz, U are talastically funny bro. Ur head dey dia...
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by ODIAZ(m): 9:51pm On May 16, 2017
@theblessedman this is really a nice piece, your narrative skill has been so on point, but warn our guy uncle darous to hide his konji o
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Trhymes4love17(m): 9:57pm On May 16, 2017
The Blessedman. Thumbs up bro! You are mouthed.
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by meneski(m): 10:05pm On May 16, 2017
ani wan on i writer here? Pls i want in
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by talk2saintify(m): 10:37pm On May 16, 2017
Daddy jons cry

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Lordnagato(m): 10:55pm On May 16, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
Readers Assessment/Evaluation of COUNTLESS

Note: readers are begged to attempt every number.


1. Whats your view about the sex part of the story so far?

2. Whats your view about the violence part of the story so far?

3. Describe Darous, the main actor of the story based on your own view of him.

4. Explain where you got confused along the path of the story and I'll gladly do justice to it.

5. Who is your best character so far?


6. If you are to feature in COUNTLESS, which character would you love to replace?

7. Any word of advice for Darous based on his way of Responding to unexpected situations? Decision taking? Religious aspect? Please feel megabite free to specify if there are others unmentioned above.

8. If COUNTLESS is made into an E-book or novel or whatever means of business, do you think it will yield wonderful returns?

9. Based on the trajectory route the story is plying so far, how do you envisage the Epilogue?

10. Based on sincere logistics, rate COUNTLESS on a 5 star proportion. E.g 1star out of 5star.

11. Finally, drop a sentence of 'GROW UP' for the possible obstacles tackling the growth of the story out of this group of hinderances:

i. The author's rate of updating.

ii. The idiot that use to quote a whole update. (don't mention his moniker)

iii. The incensant anti-spot ban

iv. The Mods.

#Thanks

TheBlessedMAN.
Can't attempt all, but my short view on the story is that, while the sex scenes are good, there's not much else to the story.
I would give 3stars for the sex scene, your humor and rate of releasing updates... More grease to your elbow.
P S. I think you need to develop the story more not just the sex scenes if you want to publish an ebook
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 12:18am On May 17, 2017
72. COUNTLESS

This new lady was claded in a blue slinky dress. Her beautiful round face was covered slightly with talcum powder. She has a great back assets and moderate brests

I followed her to her room with drunky steps. She turned towards me and pointed to the wall adjacent the small bed in the room. I followed her hand with my gaze and my eyes settled on a paper pasted on the wall with various sex charges listed on it

1. 12k- for over night

2. 5k.- 3hrs

3. 4k- 2hrs

4. 3k- 1hr

5. 2k - 30mins

6. 1k - per release

7. 500naira - touch brest and ass only

I looked at her and smile. "why is overnight so costly? Its not as if A.C dey inside yah pussee nau."

"thats the official price here, but I can give you a discount because of your....um handsome body." She smiled revealing her perfect dazling set of teeths.

She moved closer to me and began twisting my n!pples and squeezing my semi hard konji through my pants

"your d!ck seems excited already...." She remarked with a smile as she continue working her fingers on my happy d!ck

"hmmmm....thats....darn too good....but I want to have a special night with you. Tell me, how many customers have you had today?"

She felt slightly daunted with my question and withdraw her hands from my body
"why asking?"

The reason why I asked her was because I really want to have a natural sex with her. No condom attached. Because its flesh to flesh sex that I keep having in the mystical dream and only whenever I want to release into the pussee of the strange woman in my dream that when I always faint. I just have to do it with this lady the same way I've always had it in my dream even if it means to risk contacting disease. Its just a risk that I had to take tonight

I moved closer to her making sure her eyes never misses mine.
"I just want to know if you are really going to match up with my strenght if I want to pay for overnight. Trust me, you ain't sleeping tonight atall and am gonna fvck you till day break."

"hmmm....I just resumed to work this night. I and my friend rotate the use of this room. She does 2pm to 9 and I do 10pm to daybreak."

"which means am your first customer this night?" I asked with a raised eyebrow

"absolutely. We've spent enough time talking already...its almost midnight. So handsome, which one do you want? Overnight or hour sex?" She said walking towards the edge of the bed

She picked a gold circle condom from the trolly near the bed and beckoned me to come closer

"whats that?..." She raised it up. "oh sh!t, I really hate gold circle condom. Do you have Kiss condom? Or Strawberry?"

"no. We don't use that here atall. Why? Whats wrong with gold circle?" She queried with a dazed face

"It always make my d!ck shrink. My d!ck is 8inches but gold circle will make it shrink to 5inches."

"thats bad o....I hate small d!cks too!."

"Thats why I hate it...." I moved closer to her and collected the gold circle and threw it inside the trolly. "you know what? I'll pay you 15k if you suck my d!ck, and let us do flesh to flesh."

"sucking your d!ck is not the problem here but 15k? For flesh to flesh? So that I can get pregnant? No...make it 20k so that I can buy enough contraceptives to flush your sperm out in the morning."

"ok. 20k then. Lets begin then. Shall we?" I said and dropped my phone inside the trolly

"I'm ready for you too, so lets fvck." She unzipped her dress and revealed she was wearing nothing at all underneath. No bra or panties, so was now completely nak3d as she kicked of her high heels

Although have had sex with different types of ladies before but never come across a body so enticing and enthralling as the one standing infront of me right there in that cyan painted room

I was frozen looking at her moderate and apple shaped naturally pert brests and the trimmed little bush between her long thin legs

"Is something wrong? Am I… not pretty enough?" She said with a slight worried tone

"not pretty? No, of course not. You're just so amazing that I couldn't stop staring at your sexy body." She blushed and turned her head away.

"you are a nice guy, please i'll show you something when we finish."

"and whats that?"

"not now, just need a little help from you. But lets get to business."

I shrugged and swooped next to her and took her chin in my hand, turned her head towards mine and kissed her on the lips gently for several moments. It wasn't a passionate kiss, but a pvssy lubricating one.

When we parted, she take over and grabbed my shirt and pulled it off my head, threw it away and grabbed my jeans. I stood up to help her and soon they were roughly pulled down along with my boxer

My d!ck was firm and pointed out proudly, ready for action. She eagerly got to her knees and began slobbering over my 8inches konji. She didn't go deep, but sucked and flicked my mushroom head with her tongue hard and fast

I was about to cum, but I didn't want to cum in her mouth not until I verify if the jinx's been broken or not

I pulled her up and ordered her, "Get on the bed."

She sat on the bed, laid down, and preemptively spread her legs open to show me her damp gash thats ready for business. I didn't waste any more time as midnight was fast approaching. I climbed on top of her, rubbed my hard cork up and down her moist slit a few times before logging into her nairaland

I squeezed my eyes shut at the amazing sensation of pushing into her frontpage and she moaned out in a little pain as I thrusted deeper

I pulled back and thrust forward again and penetrated even deeper into her. She whimpered slightly, but didn't complain so I just kept at it, each time pushing deeper into her

After five or six thrusts I felt her womb open and thrusted forward the more until my balls were slapping her asshole

She gasped out, "Oh Gawd!" and shook as she grabbed onto my shoulders and I felt her womb shudder around my engorged d!ck

"Are you alright?" I asked concerned I'd done something wrong to her

"No handsome, it's alright," she muttered, but I just looked at her and she said, "You're just a little bigger than all the d!cks I've ever taken."

I laughed with relief and she did as well. It was weird though, how I could feel her pussee walls vibrating with her laugh around my d!ck. Then she added,
"I'm fine, just keep going. Its your money afterall."

With those words, I instantly became an animal, grabbing at her moderate brests and jabbing her pvssy with my burrowing cork

I just let my experienced instinct guide me as I touched and forked and kissed her body

She was mine for tonight, bought and paid for, so I took and used her completely and who knows this might eventually be my last fvck on this world of pussee. I forked her hard and made her mine as best as I could and held out trying to enjoy her to the fullest until my balls could no longer take it as they call an ambulance for release

I kept forking her till the time clocks 00.00am and then my balls broke

"fork you Doyin! Fvck you and your pvssee!" I cried out before kissing her one last time as I wedged myself as deep into her pvssy crack as I could and my sperm began to fill her soaked pvssy. We were both breathing heavily and covered in sweats of ectasy

I had one of the biggest orgasm I'd ever had as each and every salty ejaculation squirted into her womanly womb for the first time since the day I first had the mystical dream which was almost 4weeks ago

I looked at the digital wall clock, it was 00.02am and heaved a deep sigh of relief. Am alive!

We slept off immediately after I set my alarm to 4:50am and collected the keys of the room from her and kept it hidden inside the pillow underneath my head

The contract of the mystical dream was trully terminated

***

Promptly as programmed, the alarm sounded and I rose up. She woke up instantly and begged me to have another round of sex with her

After 30mins we were both satisfied and I transfered the 20k into her account

"nice spending the night with you bae, see you some other time." I headed towards the door after getting dressed and was about to step outside when she called me back and handed a pics to me

"thats my daughter, please incase you...." The rest of her words trailed off as I turned the pics around and saw the same girl that was in the pics Favour showed me some hours ago inside this same pics

"stop! thats a lie....this is Favour's daughter. And not yours." I returned the pics to her and turned around

"what? Who is Favour?" She grabbed my shirt and pulled me back

"The lady in Room 5. She showed me this picture of her daughter with brest cancer problem and presently in UCH..so don't take advantage of my generousity please!" I declared with a scornful look

"I don't know anybody bearing that name here, but sincerely, this is my daughter, she's been missing for 2months now, thats why I gave the barman some pictures of her to give everybody that comes here. And everybody working here knows that Jenny is my daughter." She stressed effusively and I was totally confused

I took a long stare at the face in the pics and looked up at her face. I repeated it 3times and realised that there was a striking resemblance between her face and that of the little girl

My mind became alerted at once! I hurriedly ran towards Room 5, only to find it locked. I quickly dialled the number Favour gave me and a thick voice spoke out after picking it

"told you, our eyes are on you. Bottle Boy."

I was unable to comprehend the meaning of those words before the line went dead

Then slowly, the awful truth dawned on me, those armed robbers managed to use Favour to rob me!

How they find me was a mystery to me

I was expecting a physical combat from them but they had something else planned out for me and I fell for it

A whole Darous tricked easily like that? Repeatedly by Favour? That beautiful b!tch!

I don't need any psychiatrist to tell me that am mentally sick!

Truth be told my brain is not in form. Ah! My brain don lose form!


TBC

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by micstarboi: 2:08am On May 17, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
72. COUNTLESS

This new lady was claded in a blue slinky dress. Her beautiful round face was covered slightly with talcum powder. She has a great back assets and moderate brests

I followed her to her room with drunky steps. She turned towards me and pointed to the wall adjacent the small bed in the room. I followed her hand with my gaze and my eyes settled on a paper pasted on the wall with various sex charges listed on it

1. 12k- for over night

2. 5k.- 3hrs

3. 4k- 2hrs

4. 3k- 1hr

5. 2k - 30mins

6. 1k - per release

7. 500naira - touch brest and ass only

I looked at her and smile. "why is overnight so costly? Its not as if A.C dey inside yah pussee nau."

"thats the official price here, but I can give you a discount because of your....um handsome body." She smiled revealing her perfect dazling set of teeths.

She moved closer to me and began twisting my n!pples and squeezing my semi hard konji through my pants

"your d!ck seems excited already...." She remarked with a smile as she continue working her fingers on my happy d!ck

"hmmmm....thats....darn too good....but I want to have a special night with you. Tell me, how many customers have you had today?"

She felt slightly daunted with my question and withdraw her hands from my body
"why asking?"

The reason why I asked her was because I really want to have a natural sex with her. No condom attached. Because its flesh to flesh sex that I keep having in the mystical dream and only whenever I want to release into the pussee of the strange woman in my dream that when I always faint. I just have to do it with this lady the same way I've always had it in my dream even if it means to risk contacting disease. Its just a risk that I had to take tonight

I moved closer to her making sure her eyes never misses mine.
"I just want to know if you are really going to match up with my strenght if I want to pay for overnight. Trust me, you ain't sleeping tonight atall and am gonna fvck you till day break."

"hmmm....I just resumed to work this night. I and my friend rotate the use of this room. She does 2pm to 9 and I do 10pm to daybreak."

"which means am your first customer this night?" I asked with a raised eyebrow

"absolutely. We've spent enough time talking already...its almost midnight. So handsome, which one do you want? Overnight or hour sex?" She said walking towards the edge of the bed

She picked a gold circle condom from the trolly near the bed and beckoned me to come closer

"whats that?..." She raised it up. "oh sh!t, I really hate gold circle condom. Do you have Kiss condom? Or Strawberry?"

"no. We don't use that here atall. Why? Whats wrong with gold circle?" She queried with a dazed face

"It always make my d!ck shrink. My d!ck is 8inches but gold circle will make it shrink to 5inches."

"thats bad o....I hate small d!cks too!."

"Thats why I hate it...." I moved closer to her and collected the gold circle and threw it inside the trolly. "you know what? I'll pay you 15k if you suck my d!ck, and let us do flesh to flesh."

"sucking your d!ck is not the problem here but 15k? For flesh to flesh? So that I can get pregnant? No...make it 20k so that I can buy enough contraceptives to flush your sperm out in the morning."

"ok. 20k then. Lets begin then. Shall we?" I said and dropped my phone inside the trolly

"I'm ready for you too, so lets fvck." She unzipped her dress and revealed she was wearing nothing at all underneath. No bra or panties, so was now completely nak3d as she kicked of her high heels

Although have had sex with different types of ladies before but never come across a body so enticing and enthralling as the one standing infront of me right there in that cyan painted room

I was frozen looking at her moderate and apple shaped naturally pert brests and the trimmed little bush between her long thin legs

"Is something wrong? Am I… not pretty enough?" She said with a slight worried tone

"not pretty? No, of course not. You're just so amazing that I couldn't stop staring at your sexy body." She blushed and turned her head away.

"you are a nice guy, please i'll show you something when we finish."

"and whats that?"

"not now, just need a little help from you. But lets get to business."

I shrugged and swooped next to her and took her chin in my hand, turned her head towards mine and kissed her on the lips gently for several moments. It wasn't a passionate kiss, but a pvssy lubricating one.

When we parted, she take over and grabbed my shirt and pulled it off my head, threw it away and grabbed my jeans. I stood up to help her and soon they were roughly pulled down along with my boxer

My d!ck was firm and pointed out proudly, ready for action. She eagerly got to her knees and began slobbering over my 8inches konji. She didn't go deep, but sucked and flicked my mushroom head with her tongue hard and fast

I was about to cum, but I didn't want to cum in her mouth not until I verify if the jinx's been broken or not

I pulled her up and ordered her, "Get on the bed."

She sat on the bed, laid down, and preemptively spread her legs open to show me her damp gash thats ready for business. I didn't waste any more time as midnight was fast approaching. I climbed on top of her, rubbed my hard cork up and down her moist slit a few times before logging into her nairaland

I squeezed my eyes shut at the amazing sensation of pushing into her frontpage and she moaned out in a little pain as I thrusted deeper

I pulled back and thrust forward again and penetrated even deeper into her. She whimpered slightly, but didn't complain so I just kept at it, each time pushing deeper into her

After five or six thrusts I felt her womb open and thrusted forward the more until my balls were slapping her asshole

She gasped out, "Oh Gawd!" and shook as she grabbed onto my shoulders and I felt her womb shudder around my engorged d!ck

"Are you alright?" I asked concerned I'd done something wrong to her

"No handsome, it's alright," she muttered, but I just looked at her and she said, "You're just a little bigger than all the d!cks I've ever taken."

I laughed with relief and she did as well. It was weird though, how I could feel her pussee walls vibrating with her laugh around my d!ck. Then she added,
"I'm fine, just keep going. Its your money afterall."

With those words, I instantly became an animal, grabbing at her moderate brests and jabbing her pvssy with my burrowing cork

I just let my experienced instinct guide me as I touched and forked and kissed her body

She was mine for tonight, bought and paid for, so I took and used her completely and who knows this might eventually be my last fvck on this world of pussee. I forked her hard and made her mine as best as I could and held out trying to enjoy her to the fullest until my balls could no longer take it as they call an ambulance for release

I kept forking her till the time clocks 00.00am and then my balls broke

"fork you Doyin! Fvck you and your pvssee!" I cried out before kissing her one last time as I wedged myself as deep into her pvssy crack as I could and my sperm began to fill her soaked pvssy. We were both breathing heavily and covered in sweats of ectasy

I had one of the biggest orgasm I'd ever had as each and every salty ejaculation squirted into her womanly womb for the first time since the day I first had the mystical dream which was almost 4weeks ago

I looked at the digital wall clock, it was 00.02am and heaved a deep sigh of relief. Am alive!

We slept off immediately after I set my alarm to 4:50am and collected the keys of the room from her and kept it hidden inside the pillow underneath my head

The contract of the mystical dream was trully terminated

***

Promptly as programmed, the alarm sounded and I rose up. She woke up instantly and begged me to have another round of sex with her

After 30mins we were both satisfied and I transfered the 20k into her account

"nice spending the night with you bae, see you some other time." I headed towards the door after getting dressed and was about to step outside when she called me back and handed a pics to me

"thats my daughter, please incase you...." The rest of her words trailed off as I turned the pics around and saw the same girl that was in the pics Favour showed me some hours ago inside this same pics

"stop! thats a lie....this is Favour's daughter. And not yours." I returned the pics to her and turned around

"what? Who is Favour?" She grabbed my shirt and pulled me back

"The lady in Room 5. She showed me this picture of her daughter with brest cancer problem and presently in UCH..so don't take advantage of my generousity please!" I declared with a scornful look

"I don't know anybody bearing that name here, but sincerely, this is my daughter, she's been missing for 2months now, thats why I gave the barman some pictures of her to give everybody that comes here. And everybody working here knows that Jenny is my daughter." She stressed effusively and I was totally confused

I took a long stare at the face in the pics and looked up at her face. I repeated it 3times and realised that there was a striking resemblance between her face and that of the little girl

My mind became alerted at once! I hurriedly ran towards Room 5, only to find it locked. I quickly dialled the number Favour gave me and a thick voice spoke out after picking it

"told you, our eyes are on you. Bottle Boy."

I was unable to comprehend the meaning of those words before the line went dead

Then slowly, the awful truth dawned on me, those armed robbers managed to use Favour to rob me!

How they find me was a mystery to me

I was expecting a physical combat from them but they had something else planned out for me and I fell for it

A whole Darous tricked easily like that? Repeatedly by Favour? That beautiful b!tch!

I don't need any psychiatrist to tell me that am mentally sick!

Truth be told my brain is not in form. Ah! My brain don lose form!


TBC
Oh Gawd!
darous don dey over pay pass man utd 4
talent
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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 5:16am On May 17, 2017
micstarboi:
Oh Gawd!
darous don dey over pay pass man utd 4
talent
man, u shouldn't have quoted a whole update. Please just modify it. U get mouth. Thanx 4 d comment
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by wizsolzy(m): 5:53am On May 17, 2017
micstarboi:
Oh Gawd!
darous don dey over pay pass man utd 4
talent

Nd u HV to quote everything

Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by wizsolzy(m): 6:00am On May 17, 2017
Dats wat happens when pussy is ur password

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Damibiz(m): 6:55am On May 17, 2017
I told u,VENGANCE before u temper Justice with Ronaldo nd Ramos..u see for za second time,any way nice write up...we re going in again with Celta de Vigo,anoda final..hala madrid
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by stephenGee12(m): 8:01am On May 17, 2017
Dat awkward moment wen u no dat scammer has scam d scammer. And darousmart u be lasgidi oo and dey use u like say den dey use broom. I no go talk but abeg go wash ur head for river it neva too late shebi u still dey dat babalawo house. If jendall hear eh u don finish be dat. Upon all d olympics wey u do

My brother something is wrong somewhere grin grin cry undecided
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by stephenGee12(m): 8:03am On May 17, 2017
wizsolzy:
Dats wat happens when pussy is ur password

Ol boy u don sell dat carton of gala finish grin grin tongue tongue
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Adesina12: 8:46am On May 17, 2017
The BlessedMAN!!!

This story does not flow and the events are not properly presented

Let's look at the followings:

Favour was used by armed robbers to swindle you...right?

1. How did they know you are travelling to village?
2. How they got to know you want Bleep ashawo?
3. If they have those information, how did they know the exact brothel you will use and the location?

I am not just reading but follow the sequence and align the previous chapter with the current post
Shango has not deluded my reasoning faculty .....I beg try to blend the story and align them before posting

Good job done here already by the cousin of Obatala the heir of Shango himself

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TheBlessedMAN: 9:58am On May 17, 2017
Adesina12:
The BlessedMAN!!!

This story does not flow and the events are not properly presented

Let's look at the followings:

Favour was used by armed robbers to swindle you...right?

1. How did they know you are travelling to village?
2. How they got to know you want Bleep ashawo?
3. If they have those information, how did they know the exact brothel you will use and the location?

I am not just reading but follow the sequence and align the previous chapter with the current post
Shango has not deluded my reasoning faculty .....I beg try to blend the story and align them before posting

Good job done here already by the cousin of Obatala the heir of Shango himself
oga calm down na, no be everything you wan know inside one episode nau? If you know all the hidden details of the story now, how will you come bak for more? Just calm down and watch as the upcoming and next next upcoming update unravels everything. Just chillax.

Just as Joke's mum use to say, Curiousity is an admirable trait. But yu av to let me do my work the way I see it deemly fit bro. Just calm down.

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TemiGURL(f): 10:43am On May 17, 2017
Thank gawd u already knw the fact that you no well. It just pains me that you found out the bitter way...

TBM, keep em coming. Ama keep loving every bit of it
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Adesina12: 12:05pm On May 17, 2017
TheBlessedMAN:
oga calm down na, no be everything you wan know inside one episode nau? If you know all the hidden details of the story now, how will you come bak for more? Just calm down and watch as the upcoming and next next upcoming update unravels everything. Just chillax.

Just as Joke's mum use to say, Curiousity is an admirable trait. But yu av to let me do my work the way I see it deemly fit bro. Just calm down.

Alright, I am as calm as cold water...heheheee grin

My comment is to ginger you more to write what you are missing ok...bro

Waiting for the update
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by TemiGURL(f): 12:07pm On May 17, 2017
Adesina12:


Alright, I am as calm as cold water...heheheee grin

My comment is to ginger you more to write what you are missing ok...bro

Waiting for the update
thats the secret weapon of every writer. To keep u in the dark till they see it fit to show u the light. Its like an instinct for writing

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Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by Adesina12: 12:10pm On May 17, 2017
TemiGURL:
thats the secret weapon of every writer. To keep u in the dark till they see it fit to show u the light. Its like an instinct for writing

Ok mo ti gbo.....if you say so.
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by bimberry1307(f): 12:47pm On May 17, 2017
chai! I talk am but you no listen. now see your life outside.
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by gtin(m): 1:41pm On May 17, 2017
Favour jst dy catch Darous mugu anyhow na wa o
Re: Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. by manuelFORBES(m): 1:53pm On May 17, 2017
Its official! The latest mugu of the year award goes to Darous. You fvck up. Trully, Your brain isn't inform.


TBM, keep it coming boss. U ar doin fantastically good.

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