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Re: United In Betrayal by Jane1234f(f): 5:26pm On Jul 31, 2017
Weldone pamelb,am still speechless on the happenings
Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 5:45pm On Jul 31, 2017
kerenjay:
newbie in the block..... nice story, been following it since the start, as a guest tho, I love it, wehdone ma
Welcome. I love your moniker. Is Keren your name?
Re: United In Betrayal by Mztemmy(f): 5:49pm On Jul 31, 2017
Sensitivity1254:


Lolz....
How did Claire give chance for the destruction of her marriage?
my point exactly....... Is it by not knowing she's pregnant or by calling Phil to take her to d hospital when the beast of her husband left her to die

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Re: United In Betrayal by WHOcarex: 5:59pm On Jul 31, 2017
Mike will shamelessly ask chantel out
Re: United In Betrayal by uminem02(m): 6:11pm On Jul 31, 2017
WHOcarex:
Mike will shamelessly ask chantel out
If he does that, i'll just switch to team phil n claire. Funny i have this feeling chantel won't resist
Re: United In Betrayal by FortunateB(f): 8:01pm On Jul 31, 2017
Please let's behave like adults, we are all entitled to our individual opinions, if you are not OK with ones point of view don't force him/her to accept yours cause we see things differently.

PalmelIb, nice story, keep the ball rolling.

I support the divorce cause Micheal is not ready to change and Claire has hoped he will change but to no avail, the most annoying part was the way Amara was treating/insulting her elder sis that gave her reason to live. My opinion though

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Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 8:05pm On Jul 31, 2017
Mztemmy:
my point exactly....... Is it by not knowing she's pregnant or by calling Phil to take her to d hospital when the beast of her husband left her to die


The thing tire me.

We keep finding excuses for abusive men. To think that the excuse is even coming from a lady.

Even after being beaten and pushed down, she made sacrifices to make her marriage work. She forgave him. But the man did not deal with his demons before he got married. He was far gone. Slept with his secretary, he was forgiven but he never stayed away from her. Then he turned to his sister in-law and maid. He was even the one that told her that it's over.

One lesson you must learn from this story if at all you learnt nothing is: Marriage shouod not take your happiness and personality (+ve) away. The fact that God is against divorce, should not make you to keep up with an abusive marriage and a cheating partner. If you do, one day, it will be your corpse that they will carry out and you will end up being infected.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:04pm On Jul 31, 2017
I totally support the.divorce even the bible will support it in this circumstances self. It is only an ADULTKID that will blame claire, i bet these adultkids that if they find themselves in her shoes they wont be able to.bear it a day.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:06pm On Jul 31, 2017
Sensitivity1254:



The thing tire me.

We keep finding excuses for abusive men. To think that the excuse is even coming from a lady.

Even after being beaten and pushed down, she made sacrifices to make her marriage work. She forgave him. But the man did not deal with his demons before he got married. He was far gone. Slept with his secretary, he was forgiven but he never stayed away from her. Then he turned to his sister in-law and maid. He was even the one that told her that it's over.

One lesson you must learn from this story if at all you learnt nothing is: Marriage shouod not take your happiness and personality (+ve) away. The fact that God is against divorce, should not make you to keep up with an abusive marriage and a cheating partner. If you do, one day, it will be your corpse that they will carry out and you will end up being infected.

Please it's only a story, we are all here to learn.. You people don't understand what I'm trying to say.. So let's forget about it & move on... Good night
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:08pm On Jul 31, 2017
Sensitivity1254:


Lolz....
How did Claire give chance for the destruction of her marriage?

I wonder. Some people reasoning tire me self. No wonder so many women are dying all in the name of marriage.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:11pm On Jul 31, 2017
iamloyalty:
I totally support the.divorce even the bible will support it in this circumstances self. It is only an ADULTKID that will blame claire, i bet these adultkids that if they find themselves in her shoes they wont be able to.bear it a day.


And who are you calling adultkid? I just realized that people here are quick to insult someone. Everyone has been saying their minds since but I never insulted anybody here... The first one insulted my unborn child just because I point out some faults of Claire.. And now you are calling me an adultkid just because I said my mind... Smh please drop your comments without making side talks... Good night!!!
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:27pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



And who are you calling adultkid? I just realized that people here are quick to insult someone. Everyone has been saying their minds since but I never insulted anybody here... The first one insulted my unborn child just because I point out some faults of Claire.. And now you are calling me an adultkid just because I said my mind... Smh please drop your comments without making side talks... Good night!!!

Abeg abeg i wasn't making side talk toward u, did i mention u? I have important things doing than picking immature fight.
Re: United In Betrayal by Pricelessangel0(f): 9:29pm On Jul 31, 2017
To me as a good christian i don't believe in advice but i advise separation in these case until maybe the guy comes around and incest he committed is cleanse from him. but to be frank Christianity put people in complication because let assume claire is pregnant or given birth it could have worsen the situation. but may God leads us that are still single because if one don enter u don enter be dat o.

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Re: United In Betrayal by IamLukas(m): 9:34pm On Jul 31, 2017
Pricelessangel0:
To me as a good christian i don't believe in advice but i advise separation in these case until maybe the guy comes around and incest he committed is cleanse from him. but to be frank Christianity put people in complication because let assume claire is pregnant or given birth it could have worsen the situation. but may God leads us that are still single because if one don enter u don enter be dat o.
Biko,how do they cleanse incest
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:35pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



And who are you calling adultkid? I just realized that people here are quick to insult someone. Everyone has been saying their minds since but I never insulted anybody here... The first one insulted my unborn child just because I point out some faults of Claire.. And now you are calling me an adultkid just because I said my mind... Smh please drop your comments without making side talks... Good night!!!



What is it with NL, cant i comment in peace again? Did i mention u?
Move on from ur frustration IS JUST A STORY. Sweet dreams!!!!!!!!!
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:37pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



And who are you calling adultkid? I just realized that people here are quick to insult someone. Everyone has been saying their minds since but I never insulted anybody here... The first one insulted my unborn child just because I point out some faults of Claire.. And now you are calling me an adultkid just because I said my mind... Smh please drop your comments without making side talks... Good night!!!

Abeg abeg i wasn't making side talk toward u, did i mention u? I have important things doing than picking immature fight.
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 9:41pm On Jul 31, 2017
iamloyalty:


Abeg abeg i wasn't making side talk toward u, did i mention u? I have important things doing than picking immature fight.
u're jst not mature. Everyone is entitled to his/her own opinion, no one should be insulted for baring out their minds about a particular subject. Everyone's mindset is different frm one another
Re: United In Betrayal by Anuoluemma(m): 9:54pm On Jul 31, 2017
i don't see Claire at fault here. she was trying to work things out with Michael but Michael couldnt hold himself. All the fault is from Michael. he allowed what people said about his wife got to him. i.e the pictures Amara sent to him, he should have asked her about it instead of just asking for divorce. this just my view on the matter
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:55pm On Jul 31, 2017
Chumzypinky:

u're jst not mature. Everyone is entitled to his/her own opinion, no one should be insulted for baring out their minds about a particular subject. Everyone's mindset is different frm one another

Who are u please?
Because the last time i checked i dont know u or probably i must have forgotten abt u neither did i MENTION U. So please grow up.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:57pm On Jul 31, 2017
Chumzypinky:

u're jst not mature. Everyone is entitled to his/her own opinion, no one should be insulted for baring out their minds about a particular subject. Everyone's mindset is different frm one another

Who are u please?
Because the last time i checked i dont know u or probably i must have forgotten abt u neither did i MENTION U. I didnt insult U So please grow up.
Re: United In Betrayal by orijintv(m): 10:02pm On Jul 31, 2017
Women And Unecessary Quarrels. See As Grown Ass Women Dey Argue On Top Prose Wey Be Full Time Fiction. Everyone Is Entitled To His/Her Opinion Concerning A Character In This Story. If Your Opinion Or Thoughts Doesnt Match With Someone Else, Just Ignore Rather Than Insulting Yourselves Please
Re: United In Betrayal by yewande1234(f): 10:12pm On Jul 31, 2017
What's all dis we all are mature na,why insult one another untop a story which is jz a fiction haba dats too bad. All because u av data on ur phone and u sit in d comfort of ur room,dat also as nt given u d right to insult nw cos we humans are like rivers we never can tell wer we can see each other so pls lets behave matured
mummy Chumzypinky no mind us na pikin dey do us,cos u are nd we always be our mummy on NL
Re: United In Betrayal by kennedith9: 10:25pm On Jul 31, 2017
Who Does Not Know The Man Is A Dog? But Unlike What A Lot Of People Thinks,I Don't Believe 'Miss Victim' Is A Saint.She Should Have Walked Away From The Marriage A long Ago Since It'd Turned Abusive And She's In Love With Another Man.
Re: United In Betrayal by eitsei(m): 10:42pm On Jul 31, 2017
Oga oo... This is one of the reasons why I hardly drop comment or read other people's comments on nairaland especially literature section I just scroll down looking for the name of the writer and continue the story.. See as insults is flowing upandan
Re: United In Betrayal by Skimpledawg(m): 10:42pm On Jul 31, 2017
orijintv:
Women And Unecessary Quarrels. See As Grown Ass Women Dey Argue On Top Prose Wey Be Full Time Fiction. Everyone Is Entitled To His/Her Opinion Concerning A Character In This Story. If Your Opinion Or Thoughts Doesnt Match With Someone Else, Just Ignore Rather Than Insulting Yourselves Please
I just dey vex here gan. U. Which kain nonsense be this?

I refreshed to see 3 new pages thinking Pamelb has dropped some hot updates only to see puerile banters and counter BS. undecided

Please keep your fvcking opinion to yourself. sad
Re: United In Betrayal by orijintv(m): 11:02pm On Jul 31, 2017
Skimpledawg:

I just dey vex here gan. U. Which kain nonsense be this?

I refreshed to see 3 new pages thinking Pamelb has dropped some hot updates only to see puerile banters and counter BS. undecided

Please keep your fvcking opinion to yourself. sad

I swear i think say my Network get issues, i neen dey think say Pamel B don Update sef
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 11:05pm On Jul 31, 2017
orijintv:
Women And Unecessary Quarrels. See As Grown Ass Women Dey Argue On Top Prose Wey Be Full Time Fiction. Everyone Is Entitled To His/Her Opinion Concerning A Character In This Story. If Your Opinion Or Thoughts Doesnt Match With Someone Else, Just Ignore Rather Than Insulting Yourselves Please

Funny thing is that they made their own comments & I didn't say anything... I'm a ghost reader & for the first time,I'm saying my mind dem won chop me raw... I was totally disappointed with their reactions...
Re: United In Betrayal by Chommieblaq(f): 11:19pm On Jul 31, 2017
Mehnn I'm pained with kind of comments I'm reading here.
There's no need for insults, we can all aire our view without trading words na.
If you don't agree with a comment, counter it with your own point rather than being condescending.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Tharshar: 11:33pm On Jul 31, 2017
Welldone oooooo. Lovely story
Ghostmode deactivated
Re: United In Betrayal by Jazmiynne: 11:37pm On Jul 31, 2017
Pricelessangel0:
To me as a good christian i don't believe in advice but i advise separation in these case until maybe the guy comes around and incest he committed is cleanse from him. but to be frank Christianity put people in complication because let assume claire is pregnant or given birth it could have worsen the situation. but may God leads us that are still single because if one don enter u don enter be dat o.

Christianity does not put anyone into any form of complication. It is people who chose to close their eyes to the Bible's truth.

Even God allows a partner to choose Divorce as an option on the grounds of adultery. In this case, Micheal has committed "Adulteries". I can't find the complication anywhere.

It is the kind of thinking that some females have been propagating on this thread that makes women suffer in silence.
Honestly, PamelB if Claire and Michael come back together for any reason, your story loses it's substance because it would thus become very artificial, an obviously forced attempt to ensure a fairy tale ending. Please do the needful. More ink to your pen and data to your Phone. wink

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Re: United In Betrayal by kerenjay(f): 12:17am On Aug 01, 2017
EvaJael:

Welcome. I love your moniker. Is Keren your name?
thanks.....nah, keren is not my name.. i juz adopted it

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 12:29am On Aug 01, 2017
Now my own Penny of opinion concerning the story so far.
If you guys observe right from when this story started, I haven't said anything or try to give an opinion concerning Michael and Claire marriage ( i.e whether they should divorce or not, who is at fault and what Claire and Micheal should or shouldn't have done ) because I know whatever i will say will be nothing but a LIE. I will only be giving my judgement base on what I think is right not base on what I feel and know is right out of experience because I'm not in the marriage and I don't pray to be in such marriage. shey who no like better thing.

Most of us if not all of us saying Claire shouldn't have divorced Micheal are saying so because they aren't the one in such situation or marriage for clarity sake because I know that if they are the one (i.e some of those nairalanders saying Claire shouldn't have divorced Micheal), they for done run four forty comot from that marriage since day one and vice versa.
I really wish infact I want Micheal and my sweetheart Claire to be back together but that should be after Micheal has undergone through a serious deliverance at MFM because that thing wey dey do am for body no be ordinary.

As the title of the story says UNITED IN BETRAYAL, from the look of things the story is gonna have two major parts or theme. the BETRAYAL and the UNITY. so let us buckle up and watch as PamelB twist and turn our mind, soul and spirit even our head self through the BETRAYAL and the UNITY.

As I said before I'm not saying anything concerning their marriage because all I will be saying will be a big fat LIE because
1.) I'm not the one in the marriage neither have I experienced something of that nature before. so my opinion won't be coming from experience but by what I assume.
2.) I don't want any Uncerebral being to come and insult his or herself by firing junks at me.

But the one I'm 100% sure according to my instinct except my instinct decides to decieve me is PHIL. something within me tells me that that guy has a dark side, I think he has something up his sleeves but well that's for PamelB to prove me right or wrong.

One more thing, I'm just surprise how someone's father or mother or wife or husband will show case their talent of quarreling and insulting his or her fellow Nairalander because of a story or a character or an event in the story just to prove his or her point or opinion. I Wonder and I won't be Flummoxed if someone will waste his mb just to quote and insult me over what I've said.

And before I forget PamelB come and do something about this uproar in your thread oh. Keep doing the good work of entertaining and educating me via your blockbuster cum mega hit story.

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