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|The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 10:53pm On May 25, 2018|
GUYS THIS IS A STORY I'VE HAD SINCE 2016. I EVEN PREMIERED IT ON WATTPAD LAST YEAR. I WANTED TO WAIT TILL THE CONCLUSION OF MY CURRENT STORY 'THE CHRONICLES OF TAOFIK-SHAKITIBOBO' https://www.nairaland.com/4490126/chronicles-taofik-shakitibobo-miracle-mistress BEFORE PREMIERING THIS ON THIS PLATFORM. BUT A READER #SunFlow ACCUSED ME OF PLAGIARISM. so this is actually to him. Bros this writing thing no be today e start.
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 10:59pm On May 25, 2018|
ABEG BEFORE WE GO COME DEY CALL OGUN TO COME JUDGE MATA, MAKE WE USE CHURCH MIND TAKE DO THINGS ORDERLY. MAKE NOBODY USE ANY PART OF THIS STORY ANYWHERE AND ANYTIME FOR ANY REASON. JUST IN CASE U NO FI RESIST AM THEN ABEG CONTACT ME FIRST THROUGH THE MAIL: firstname.lastname@example.org
THE STORY STARTS SHORTLY
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 11:01pm On May 25, 2018|
THE ENEMY WITHIN
The tension in my living room could boil water up to 100°C within a second, the look on everyone's face does not seem friendly at all to put it mega mildly and the quietness almost feels like you could hear the movements of the ants.
I'm sitting here wondering why we have to gather this much people before my wife's 27 years old younger sister tells us who owns her pregnancy. I mean for crying out loud she could have done that over the phone and even if she had to still gather this much people why is my house the venue? At least my father in-law's house is more central. My wife had asked me like gazillion times if I had anything to do with the pregnancy given my close relationship with her sister but honestly she almost got on my nerves before she ended the conversation. She almost made me spill the beans.
See, the truth is I knew Abigail was pregnant even before Jide my best friend who impregnated her knew about it. I was the first person she told and had begged me not to tell another soul except for Jide. Jide happens to be a high ranking staff at my work place. We met when my father in-law who happens to be the CEO of the company introduced me to him as the heir apparent to his throne. Since then he has been showing me the ropes and honestly he has been a very good friend to me both in need and indeed.
Despite the fact that Jide had been at the firm for over six years, he never got to meet Abigail until I introduced them to each other and ever since their love for each other has waxed stronger. The only problem is that my father inlaw have higher plans for Abigail in terms of her educational career and is just not ready to hear anything about his beloved daughter settling down just yet. As a matter of fact the news of Abigail's pregnancy broke him down completely and I just wonder what Jide's fate will be when my father inlaw gets to know that Jide is behind his current predicament.
My mother in law is the calmest of us all. She really doesn't care if her second daughter marries right away as long as the man is decent enough and I'm sure the news that Jide is responsible for her daughter's pregnancy will be a welcome idea. Her only concern in the matter is how her husband is taking the matter too seriously.
The look on my mum's face is that of confusion and hope. She happens to be a part of this meeting mainly because she has been with us ever since my wife gave birth to Caleb our son three months ago. She hopes everything goes well. Like my wife, she has her doubts too but once I told her I didn't do it, she believed me. At the same time, like me, she wonders why Abigail has to create this much fuss over who owns her pregnancy. My mum and Abigail too are very close. Their relationship goes way back when Abigail's parents had to move abroad and she was left with my mum in order for her to complete her WASCE examinations. She lived with us for over a year and she has been a very close friend of my family since then. As a matter of fact, my mum always chided her as my wife back then in her teenage years even up to her early twenties though I am like 4 years older. I think I used to fancy her but she has always been firm that she couldn't date me. I used to think she was trying to form class for me until she introduced me to her sister.........
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|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by SunFlow(m): 11:05pm On May 25, 2018|
Madera001:Good... Go and complete your other story and stop beating around the bush
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 11:09pm On May 25, 2018|
That was the day I knew she had only respect and adulation for me. Her sister was and still is the finest thing I've ever seen. I like my woman endowed appropriately in the right places and that is exactly how Andral is. 'Hello I'm Andral and I'm sure you are Benjamin, right?' She said when we first met. My heart melted and I was immediately lost in her gaze. I quickly gathered myself together to give her an answer 'yes' I said. That was our first conversation and that was how we hit it off until this very day.
My father in law had always thought it would have been my wife that will bring in an unwanted pregnancy to his family. She had been the black sheep of the family. There was a time she eloped with a man for over three years. She had just returned home when I met her. She told me everything about her past and I told her I didn't care. I married her and my father in law has been grateful to me ever since then for turning the black sheep into a good mother. When the news of my wife's pregnancy got to him, he bought me a house in Gbagada in Lagos to show his appreciation. Fast forward to today: it is the golden girl that has now made us have that gathering.
Abigail came in alone without Jide the main culprit in the matter. She looked dull, remorseful and scared. She greeted everyone and went straight to sit beside my mum. My mum held her hands as if to tell her that everything will be alright. In my mind I'm like let's get this over with ASAP, Chelsea versus Arsenal match will soon start.
Abigail rose up and said 'good afternoon everyone, I called this meeting today because of the gravity of the sin I've committed.........' In my mind I'm like 'gravity.....sin...ah, na wa oo. Ordinary pregnancy!!!' She continues ' I hope everyone affected by my actions will find it in their heart to forgive me........' ' my friend will you cut to the chase and tell us who owns this shameful thing you call pregnancy!' My father in law cuts in abruptly. 'Haba! Calm down now, at least let her finish what she has to say, she will get there' his wife interceded. 'Ok.....ok oo! Oya continue'. He retorted. By this time tears had started pouring out from her eyes and I was just stunned at how she was making this look like we were dealing with a murder case. She continued her speech 'the owner of my pregnancy is someone close to this family, someone I've know for sometime now and that person is seated among us today. The owner of my pregnancy is Ben...Benjamin!'
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|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 11:11pm On May 25, 2018|
OK SIR WILL DO JUST THAT
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Vulcanheph(m): 12:37am On May 26, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Akinwale14(m): 9:58am On May 26, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 1:54pm On May 27, 2018|
HEY GUYS THE CHRONICLES OF TAOFIK SHAKITIBOBO - BANK ALERT IS NOW OUT, PLEAS GO HERE TO READ--------> Just in case you are wondering, that girl’s phone is no longer with me, it is now with the owner and in case you are still wondering too, I now know her name. Her name is Peju and she is (as a matter of fact) the daughter of a Lagos businessman and they are so damn wealthy. How did all these happen? Follow me.
After that episode where the chieftaincy title of ‘The Most Dense Dude Alive’ was conferred on me by no other than Peju (The Miracle Mistress- YOU CAN READ THE STORY IN THIS THREAD ABOVE), I quickly checked out of the hotel room. I figured they may soon realize that Peju left her phone and will definitely come back. I boarded a bike and headed home straight.
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by emperorblog(m): 2:11pm On May 27, 2018|
interesting read more cool and interesting atory on
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 6:58am On May 29, 2018|
HEY GUYS, HAPPY DEM-DEY-CRAZ.....(OH SORRY! DEMOCRACY DAY) TO YOU ALL. HERE IS THE THIRD EPISODE OF OUR FAVORITE STORY. PLEASE ENJOY.
DON'T BE A SILENT READER, PLEASE SHARE YOUR COMMENT, IT HELPS THE READER GET BETTER
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 7:06am On May 29, 2018|
THE ENEMY WITHIN
To say that I was shocked will be an understatement, saying that I was confused still will not cut it. I was completely taken aback! I just could not fathom what just happened. Why is she naming me as the one responsible for her pregnancy? Whatever happened to Jide? Did she mistakenly mention my name instead of Jide's? But wait...Jide is not sitting with us, or is she just joking? Maybe she is just joking? She has to be! To me that seem the only reasonable explanation. I don't smoke nor drink so the question of maybe I got high and dinked her is completely out of the picture. So she has to be joking.
The reaction that greeted Abigail's revelation could not have been more dramatic. It was like catching a thief in your house, only for the thief to mention your wife/husband as his accomplice. Different exclamations, different body positioning and then everyone's gaze at this point became firmly placed on me like 'oga explain yourself'. All I could moot out was 'sorry please, which Benjamin are you talking about?' That question must have touched something not-so-pleasant in her. Her reaction was stuffs of the fire that consumed Sodom and Gomorrah. It left me even more confused and for the first time angry. She flaired up! 'How dare you ask me that foolish question! How dare you!!? You dare deny that this baby is not yours now?' She shook her head as if she'd rather not say more, picked up her bag and hurried out tearfully. My mother inlaw ran after her but not without giving me the 'I am so disappointed in you' look.
My father in law who by now cut the figure of a frustrated father, stood up , raised his two hands up like that statue that symbolizes equality on court buildings, with traces of tears in his eyes, he said 'Ben........you saved me with one hand and ruined me with the other'. Then he too walked out.
My wife surprisingly was the calmest of them all (or so I thought),she gave me the 'I'm sorry for you' look without uttering a single word, she gathered our baby into her arms and made for the bedroom.
I was just too confused to react to any of their reactions. I sat down to notice my mum looking at me, so bothered and waiting to hear my side of the story. I told her I didn't do it and that I am as confused as she is too. I couldn't wrap my head around it. I was hoping that at some point someone will tell me this is all just a prank.
Could all this have been a prank? Stay tuned for the next episode
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by pweetygiftofGod(f): 7:32am On May 29, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by stevodot22(m): 9:24am On May 29, 2018|
Hmmm, nice one
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by rockstar435(m): 10:39am On May 29, 2018|
I like this..abeg continue jare
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by skubido(m): 11:00am On May 29, 2018|
Nice wan. Following.
Abeg make he no b like we go dey beg u to update oo.
God go help u.
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|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by SPDAZZY(f): 12:06pm On May 29, 2018|
Seen The Enemy Within on wattpad but yet to find Exposed the part 2
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Ann2012(f): 12:37pm On May 29, 2018|
Nice story, more updates pls
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Sexyolori(f): 1:00pm On May 29, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by kayusdguy(m): 5:33pm On May 29, 2018|
Madera001:Oh My Goodness. Please tell me it's a prank.
Nice story by the way keep it up.
I also read shakitibobo (your other story) and i must commend you for your good stories. Ride on boss.
But abeg you know say updates are the main thing. Abeg update fast o
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Elviswifey1(f): 5:56pm On May 29, 2018|
skubido:That's what get me angry wit them.u will beg for update tire,b4 u know it the writer will stop entirely that someone stole his work as a case of plagiarism. Na so he go leave that one undone.i know wan slap person for this story.I never read am sha but make I start.lolz
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Elviswifey1(f): 10:11pm On May 29, 2018|
SunFlow:Lolz.even the way he update the story self n d short episode discourages one to read this bcs its obvious he won't still finish dis one still.na so
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by SunFlow(m): 10:32pm On May 29, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by mjay05(m): 10:34pm On May 29, 2018|
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 8:00am On May 30, 2018|
Thanks for reading all along. It's a good thing we are meeting here. You will get the full story here bro. No more wait.
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 8:02am On May 30, 2018|
Thanks for reading bro, but I can assure you that this story is complete.
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Madera001(m): 8:05am On May 30, 2018|
Lol....thanks a lot I really appreciate comments like this. I will not say if it's a prank or not but I'll give you the full story instead. The updates will come as soon as possible. No too much wait
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by wizsolzy(m): 11:20am On May 30, 2018|
Abeg am not trying to run u down. But hope dis story go complete ooo
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|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Pilopher(m): 12:13pm On May 30, 2018|
I dey follow ,
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by Herdex(m): 1:40pm On May 30, 2018|
nice story,continue please
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by kayusdguy(m): 2:19pm On May 30, 2018|
Madera001:Okay, oya update na
|Re: The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal by koolbee7: 3:37pm On May 30, 2018|
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