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| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by EvaJael(f): 11:16am On Jan 08, 2018 |
Thanks for the dedication rachealfst. I'm enjoying this |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 11:42am On Jan 08, 2018 |
whinnie:Amen, God bless you too. Thanks. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 11:44am On Jan 08, 2018 |
Gucciqueen38:Thank you..... |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 11:44am On Jan 08, 2018 |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ephhay(f): 12:18pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Thanks for the dedication. Ride on ma'am. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by joromi36(f): 12:21pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
wow... NYC one rachaelfst wish I had close friends lyk crystal. � more ink to ur pen sis |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 12:55pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
joromi36:Thanks. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by SurestG(f): 12:55pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
queenitee: youbetterspecify |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by prettieO(f): 1:11pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Wonderful story dear I am super in love with it. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mofy1(f): 2:25pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
All I can say is wow wow like a siren. Tnx for the mention. Hrt u dear. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by WarriFirstBorn(m): 2:27pm On Jan 08, 2018*. Modified: 2:57pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Beautiful! I just wonder there are still friends of this nature. Everything just appears perfect among them. Nice one, Racheal. Thanks for the mention. I aappreciate! |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by princessadeola(f): 2:41pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
WarriFirstBorn:It's still possible to have Friends like that, it's a matter of trust. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 3:10pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
prettieO:Thanks. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Melancholy(m): 4:10pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
queenitee:hmm... SureG abeg come pick ur option o cos i wan pick mine. lol Rachaelfst, thanks for the dedication! |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by nerd51(f): 5:37pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Thanks for the mention, Rachaelfst. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by empress101(f): 6:11pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
interesting... |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 7:15pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
ONOCHIE Now it's time to share. If there's anyone who needs an advice or solutions from the house please signify by raising up your hand. Crystal: Sorry to interrupt, we have some pending issues on ground, I think we should start from there before going into fresh cases. Me: That true. Feso and Enitan's issue is still pending. Let's start with Enitan. Enitan stepped out. “How is it going with your step dad" Onochie asked her. Enitan: Well... we are still on it, my step father still insisted that I can't marry an Igbo. Jay: What's your mum’s take on this? Enitan: Well, at first she was indifferent but later as usual nau...her husband get into her head. And she said she's in support of anything he says, imagine. Me: Seriously, this man as no say in this matter, he's a step for crying out loud. Soma: You are right, Onochie but if we don't thread carefully this man will keep on prolonging the matter. Jay: What do we do now? Soma: I suggest we talk one on one with Enitan's mum. Dume: Please help me beg them to give me my wife. Onochie: Who gave you wife? She's not yet your wife bro. Dume: Is it because, I just want to do things the right away, I'll take her out of this country and let's see who can stop me. Crystal: You know that's a wrong approach, just exercise patience. Soma: Like I said earlier, let us meet her mum and convinced her, once she's on our side.... Me: Then the step father can go to hell. Feso: Soma's right, once her mum agreed, then one of Enitan's Uncle can sit as the father on the engagement day. Jay: Then give her hand in marriage to the priest in church. Hauwa: Case closed. Let’s stick to Soma’s plan. Me: Final solution? All: Final solution. Me: Next is Feso, please step out Feso: Hi friends. Me: How is it going with you and Senator ( I said it sarcastically) Everybody laughed because Feso was already boiling. Feso: Hauwa, I'm sorry. (apologizing to her fiance)but Senator is bossing me around and I don't like it at all. Imagine, he asked me to come to Canada this week for wedding plans. Jay: Again! Feso: Yes, making it the third visit. Hauwa: Now what other choice do you have, I've told you to endure him till the wedding is over. Feso: What if this continues after we get married. He will just pick his phone and summon me out of the blue! Enitan: Like Hauwa said just exercise patience Feso. Feso: I hate been bossed around, I'm not cut out for this. Hauwa knows, my parents can try this with me. Crystal: That's why they are called in-laws. Let's just endure till the wedding is over. Feso: You guys haven't answered my question. What if this continues after marriage. Soma: Let's hope it won't get to that stage. Me: And if it does? Soma: We'll cross that bridge when we get there. So my guy just let him have his way this time at least till you get your woman. Me: Final solution? All: Final solution. Me: Any other person who has something to share? Silence..... Me: Ok then, I have a problem. My girlfriend just broke up with me. Soma: Again! ______________Toyin Taiwo CRYSTAL "Zite please stepped out and anchor this, since it’s Onochie's case we have on ground now" I said and Zite stepped out. Zite: Guys, Let's hear your thoughts on this. Feso: I thought you said money and good sex keeps girls, so what happened again this time. Why did she leave? Dume: Maybe he's now lacking in that department, I mean the latter. Some of the guys laughed. Onochie: Dume and Feso, I'm not joking here. By the way stop deceiving yourself, claiming you don't sleep with your women. Feso: Leave our women out of this and face the truth. Onochie: What truth? Crystal: I have told you times without number not to spend too much on women, let them love you for who you are and not for what you have. But you prefer to flaunt your money in their faces. “I work in multinational company, I have a house on the island”(she mimicked him) They will spend your money and leave once they are through exploiting you. Feso: Imagine he just bought a car for this girl o. Soma: Onochie I've told you times without number, money is not love. Let a girl loves you naturally, when you are sure that you've gain her heart, then you are free to do anything for her. Look around you and see our friends, do you see anyone who lure their women with money. So please change that mentality of yours. Do things right this time when you meet someone else. Dume: I pray he listen. Crystal: In addition to what everyone has said, I think. you should pray about it in case it's spiritual. Because it's not only ladies that experience rejection, it happens to men too. Please before starting any relationship pray about it and let God guide you. For the first in time in Onochie life, he was remorseful. I think those words get to him. Zite: Conclusion, pray and stop spending unnecessarily on women. Right? All: Yes. Onochie: Thanks everyone. __________Toyin Taiwo Zite: We still have one more thing to discuss but let's go on a break and take our refreshment. Enitan, Hauwa and I displayed all the foods on the stand You are not serve yourself. Jay was the DJ of the day, the music was playing. He entertained us by playing latest hits back to back. Everyone served himself except Hauwa who served her fiance by herself. We stepped on the dance floor and dance. You are free to dance with anyone, either the person is your partner or not. I looked around to check on Ezinne, she was on the dance floor too and all the guys took turn to dance with her, she was all smiles. I'm glad she was enjoying herself. No one trade the fun we use to have amidst us with anything in the world. I excused myself to make use of the restroom, unfortunately I ran into him. I brushed pass him but he caught my hand. "What?" "What's the meaning of those scenes you shot at my house and in your office?" He queried. "I thought I made it clear to you, that we can only talk in the presence of our friends nothing more" "That's your stupid decision not mine" "Whatever, can I go now?" "Crystal, why are you doing all this, why are you bent on torturing me emotionally" I looked away. “Let go of me, I don't want anyone to walk up on us" "I don't care at this point" "That was not the agreement" "You are hurting me Crystal?" "That's is not my problem" "Really, I'll go out there now and tell everybody what's going on between us" "I forbid you to speak, you dare not" I said and walked out on him. __________Toyin Taiwo An hour later, Zite stepped out and told everyone to settle down for the next matter on the Agenda. Onochie: I think Ezinne, should excuse us, you guys understand that this situation is kind of different. Zite: Ezinne we are very sorry, can you please excuse us. I promise you’ll get to hear everything later but we don't want the people involved to be uncomfortable. Ezinne: No problem, I understand. Hauwa: Have my key Ezinne, you can sit in the car and relax. She handed the key to her and she left. Zite: We have a big issue to trash today and we won't leave this place until we get to the root of the matter. Immediately he finished those words, I knew what Zite said as to do with me." No ooooo Zite you can't do this to me" I said under my breath. I looked back to pass Hauwa's phone I was holding to her. He's eyes met with mine but I shifted my gaze. Then I came up with an idea. Me: Excuse me everyone, I just got a message from the office, my attention is needed now. Zite: On a Saturday! Crystal, seriously! Onochie: My friend sit your butt down. Feso: Crystal... now! I was bursted, so I had no choice than to sit, there's no hiding place for me this time. Zite: Crystal had a secret affairs with one of us in school. I mean the guys. Which obviously turned sour and she's been carrying the hurt over the years. And she refused to move on. Today that guy must come out clean. “So who is the guy in question?” Zite asked. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rchilee: 7:35pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
I just hope its not Hauwa's guy |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pearl05(f): 7:58pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Babe, I noticed that you usually use "as" instead of "has". Work on it please. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Rockyrascal(m): 9:26pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
rachealfst:madam Rachael, thanks for the mention. I made sure I saved all the pages available in order not to miss any part of the story. By the way how can one get a copy of the published book? |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by aprilwise(m): 9:30pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
Am seeing a little hiccup in their clique here. Every update is always on point. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by oluangelkay(f): 10:45pm On Jan 08, 2018 |
rachealfst:Mama, Thanks for the mention, I appreciate big time. You have a great story here, weldone sweetheqrt |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by WarriFirstBorn(m): 12:37am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Ghen Ghen! Crystal yanch go don dey boil now. Today na today. Dat guy must surface. Nice one, baby. You are the best. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mofy1(f): 4:06am On Jan 09, 2018 |
I so love this their cycle. Racheal pls carry on. More strength to you. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Rockyrascal(m): 7:48am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Madam rachael,thanks for the mention. I made sure I saved all the pages available in order not to miss any part of the story. By the way how can one get a copy of the published book?. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 9:22am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Rockyrascal:Please don't quote the whole update. Thanks. You can get the book via this link. https://okadabooks.com/book/about/broken_hedge/17067 |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 9:24am On Jan 09, 2018 |
oluangelkay:You are welcome but please next time use the reply option instead of quote. Thanks. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(op): 9:26am On Jan 09, 2018 |
WarriFirstBorn:Thank you. |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Mcweber(m): 9:29am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Please to everyone following this story, it doesn't make sense quoting the whole post if you want to comment. Kindly comment with your own post and mention the OP to gain her attention.....plssssssssss!!!! |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Melancholy(m): 10:55am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Well, am not a good guesser, but.............. i suspect onochie |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by nerd51(f): 10:57am On Jan 09, 2018 |
Melancholy:Me too |
| Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 12:56pm On Jan 09, 2018 |
rachealfst:Thanks for the mention darling.❤ |
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