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tooawesome:
Yeah...seriously.. No harm trying

lol

Imapearl:
lol

Dont just laugh, come and collect it

Just a simple correction and you are already mad and insulting.

Looks so boring for me to read too.


I already know your type from your replies

greatnaija01:
pls EDIT and PARAGRAPH your write up.... those who need it will be put off by its CLUMSINESS

chenzen:
fault finders are rarely successfull persons... in everything you do, get wisdom

tolugar:
Just a simple correction and you are already mad and insulting.

Looks so boring for me to read too.


I already know your type from your replies

make use of ur time bro. u av urself to blame if u dont put into good use of ur time

chenzen:
ur type struggles through life... l am sure u wont beat me in any form of creative non-fiction article writing. The most important thing for me is delivering the goods but some mid-night school drop-out like you refuses to extract and absorb the message rather you choose to advertise partisan thuggery... receive sense in the name of Jesus.

Try and take correction. The lack of paragraphs makes it tiring to read. You need to segment and you are here talking about beating someone in a competition instead of humbly accepting the criticism.

ImaIma1:
Try and take correction. The lack of paragraphs makes it tiring to read. You need to segment and you are here talking about beating someone in a competition instead of humbly accepting the criticism.

not everyone likes reading bro... the lazy ones will certainly complain. if l may ask... when last did u read a book from begining to end? huh?

chenzen:
not everyone likes reading bro... the lazy ones will certainly complain. if l may ask... when last did u read a book from begining to end? huh?

Oga, come off your high horse and take corrections. Your write-up is indeed clumsy as it was pointed out to you. Why are you so impervious to being corrected?
Because of your attitude, the topic that was supposed to be a good discussion and front page worthy has been turned into a "rofo rofo". Enjoy the exchange of words then.

chenzen:
ur type struggles through life... l am sure u wont beat me in any form of creative non-fiction article writing. The most important thing for me is delivering the goods but some mid-night school drop-out like you refuses to extract and absorb the message rather you choose to advertise partisan thuggery... receive sense in the name of Jesus.

Hello boss, he is right. Be mature and improve. No one is confuting your mastery at being a professional writer. when I first clicked on your thread, I didn't read what you've written, I thought it's a prologue until I saw the others commenting on the article .

Kudos for such a write up, but you still need to intensify your knowledge for spacing, paragraphs and punctuation.

I hope you ain't demeaned by what I have written and will take it as an avenue to do better.

I believe in you.




Signed,
Sola.

Jackossky:
Hello boss, he is right. Be mature and improve. No one is confuting your mastery at being a professional writer. when I first clicked on your thread, I didn't read what you've written, I thought it's a prologue until I saw the others commenting on the article .

Kudos for such a write up, but you still need to intensify your knowledge for spacing, paragraphs and punctuation.

I hope you ain't demeaned by what I have written and will take it as an avenue to do better.

I believe in you.




Signed,
Sola.

Hahahahaha. This is so mild. What yeye non fiction jargon is he talking about? I'll produce five primary 6 pupils that will flog the OP in creative writing. I read his write-up too and was only able to make sense out of it somewhere in the middle. Nwa writer. Smh

Imapearl:
read the fall of David
read the fall of Samson
read the fall of Adam
read the fall of Solomon
then you will see the points there
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mumu

Why r U calling me mumu? I asked for somtin objective n U label me wit an abuse. Knowing U r a female even makes it worse. Plsss, learn to be civil...I'm not Ur peer so I won't trade insults wit U.

Jackossky:
Hello boss, he is right. Be mature and improve. No one is confuting your mastery at being a professional writer. when I first clicked on your thread, I didn't read what you've written, I thought it's a prologue until I saw the others commenting on the article .

Kudos for such a write up, but you still need to intensify your knowledge for spacing, paragraphs and punctuation.

I hope you ain't demeaned by what I have written and will take it as an avenue to do better.

I believe in you.




Signed,
Sola.

you av the option of scrolling and ignoring and doing something else with precious time. l dont spend time as much as u jobless haters do... l share my stories as it comes and only to those smart enough to understand it... it aint my fault that u av to struggle with it. the likes of u bro is not the reason y l av come... there are already enough intelligent persons who likes and appreciate that piece of imperfect work... there is not a single perfect article on nairaland but we the smart and matured ones knows where the jigsaw fits into the puzzle. grow up

naturalwaves:
Hahahahaha. This is so mild. What yeye non fiction jargon is he talking about? I'll produce five primary 6 pupils that will flog the OP in creative writing. I read his write-up too and was only able to make sense out of it somewhere in the middle. Nwa writer. Smh

u couldnt make sense of it because weed and tramadol is in ur blood... that should be the only thing you understand

naturalwaves:
Oga, come off your high horse and take corrections. Your write-up is indeed clumsy as it was pointed out to you. Why are you so impervious to being corrected?
Because of your attitude, the topic that was supposed to be a good discussion and front page worthy has been turned into a "rofo rofo". Enjoy the exchange of words then.

show me one perfect work on nairaland u ve seen... u av a long way to go...

ImaIma1:
Try and take correction. The lack of paragraphs makes it tiring to read. You need to segment and you are here talking about beating someone in a competition instead of humbly accepting the criticism.

l woudnt nice it up for u. l m doing it for free u should be thankful

chenzen:
show me one perfect work on nairaland i ve seen... u av a long way to go...

Dude your post made sense

No need for these quarrels, ok?

naturalwaves:
Hahahahaha. This is so mild. What yeye non fiction jargon is he talking about? I'll produce five primary 6 pupils that will flog the OP in creative writing. I read his write-up too and was only able to make sense out of it somewhere in the middle. Nwa writer. Smh

Kikikikikikiki

chenzen:
not everyone likes reading bro... the lazy ones will certainly complain. if l may ask... when last did u read a book from begining to end? huh?

The answer to this question is of no consequence to you. My reading is my business.

Free things are not meant to be done in a shabby way. At least no one compelled you to write it. As long as you decided to do it, do it well.

chenzen:
you av the option of scrolling and ignoring and doing something else with precious time. l dont spend time as much as u jobless haters do... l share my stories as it comes and only to those smart enough to understand it... it aint my fault that u av to struggle with it. the likes of u bro is not the reason y l av come... there are already enough intelligent persons who likes and appreciate that piece of imperfect work... there is not a single perfect article on nairaland but we the smart and matured ones knows where the jigsaw fits into the puzzle. grow up

I should have scrolled and ignore what you've written, but if I do that, how will you learn?
I thought maybe you won't be parochial and you will be happy to learn but...

Jackossky:
I should have scrolled and ignore what you've written, but if I do that, how will you learn?
I thought maybe you won't be parochial and you will be happy to learn but...

u are only being mischievious and bored... a busy person wont av time for this... we av not crossed path before neigther am l ur brother... so park and make good use of ur time

ImaIma1:
The answer to this question is of no consequence to you. My reading is my business.

Free things are not meant to be done in a shabby way. At least no one compelled you to write it. As long as you decided to do it, do it well.

my intention is to write for intelligent persons not babies that ll ask me to define concepts... l doubt if u made credit in English after waec... l dare u to show ur result... maybe u understand ur local dialect better.

At the point when you trying to advice someone, yet refuse to take advice from another,,, kettle calling pot black... Shame!!! Hypocrite everywhere!!!

ImaIma1:
The answer to this question is of no consequence to you. My reading is my business.

Free things are not meant to be done in a shabby way. At least no one compelled you to write it. As long as you decided to do it, do it well.

l ll always step on ignorant toes and stay on the same page and level with highly respectable, noble and intelligent individuals on this forum... its a promise. No insensitive critic is allowed to dwell anywhere near my elysium.

obisite:
At the point when you trying to advice someone, yet refuse to take advice from another,,, kettle calling pot black... Shame!!! Hypocrite everywhere!!!

in ur best interest do not join in this partisan thuggery !

chenzen:
my intention is to write for intelligent persons not babies that ll ask me to define concepts... l doubt if u made credit in English after waec... l dare u to show ur result... maybe u understand ur local dialect better.

Let me know when you have grown up mentally and are able to have a meaningful conversation void of insults.

Obviously i can see that day is not today.

ImaIma1:
Let me know when you have grown up mentally and are able to have a meaningful conversation void of insults.

Obviously i can see that day is not today.

in this life of me l ll let myself down in every form to condesend to the level of u... my class speaks volume

chenzen:
show me one perfect work on nairaland u ve seen... u av a long way to go...

It is not about being perfect, it is about taking corrections. The guy that corrected you actually saw that you have an interesting write-up and only wanted it to be more visually appealing but you took it wrongly.

chenzen:
u couldnt make sense of it because weed and tramadol is in ur blood... that should be the only thing you understand

Odeinstein! You think everyone is like a junkie like you. I have never seen nor felt any of those rubbish you put up there. You're claiming to be a professional writer with several syntax errors in your replies . You should desist from taking harmful substances that could be injurous to your health.

naturalwaves:
It is not about being perfect, it is about taking corrections. The guy that corrected you actually saw that you have an interesting write-up and only wanted it to be more visually appealing but you took it wrongly.

there are procedures and sensitive methods of placing suggestions not corrections ... perhaps all of what he felt was inapproriate in that article was observed even before publishing... there are proper and constructive approach to placing suggestions (corrections) send a mail

naturalwaves:
Odeinstein! You think everyone is like a junkie like you. I have never seen nor felt any of those rubbish you put up there. You're claiming to be a professional writer with several syntax errors in your replies . You should desist from taking harmful substances that could be injurous to your health.

that path u ve chosen to thread on will only have one outcome... doom !!!

naturalwaves:
Odeinstein! You think everyone is like a junkie like you. I have never seen nor felt any of those rubbish you put up there. You're claiming to be a professional writer with several syntax errors in your replies . You should desist from taking harmful substances that could be injurous to your health.

until u begin to convert ur little knowledge into cash, u re only existing and not living. therefore a nobody

chenzen:
that path u ve chosen to thread on will only have one outcome... doom !!!

Rant on!

philcz:
Rant on!

u ve copied a lot here so far l guess... u re loving it, aint u?