Bosun's Diary. - Romance (4) - Nairaland
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| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 3:26pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
###################### I led her to her room as we got home. We kissed more - it was passionate and so soothing. "Can I have a space on your bed tonight?" I asked. My arms around her waist from behind, I kissed her neck. "Yes, it's all yours henceforth my Love." "Thank you. I'll be with you shortly." I left for my room. Went for cold shower and came back with white on white. I had the bird painting with me too. "What's that?" she enquired about the frame. "It's yours." I handed it over to her She looked, but couldn't make anything out of it. "Let me explain" I started "Okay..." "The sky is ME and the only bird in it is YOU." "Oh so sweet! And you signed it?" "Yes my Love" We kissed so much and fell into the bed. "Help me unzip my gown Sweet." ############################## 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 3:32pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
******†**********†***********†******** THE END *******†********†**********†********** |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 3:58pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Whao! Many thanks to you all - those that followed, the commentators and every reader! Apologies again for the typos and grammatical errors. I hope they were not too much. I'm still expecting more of your comments, observations, suggestions. Also feel free to share lesson learnt, similar experiences, your best scene etc. Once again "thank you all..." |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by Yampotatocarrot(m): 4:22pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
The speed with which I read the story made me think you started writing it and also ended it today. Good work... In fact great job. U were able to build ur reader's imagination. It was just like reading one of Vince Flynn's novels 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 4:32pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
Yampotatocarrot:Thanks bro... appreciate. |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by Duane212(m): 5:43pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
Beautiful write up, buh what about grace? 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 6:06pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by hoebamaa(m): 7:16pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
1stNumeroUno:Great work ..when is the part 2 coming up? 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 7:20pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
hoebamaa:Wishing I could drop within this month but it won't be possible. I promise to mention you when it starts sir. Thanks... |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by kelish(f): 7:28pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
1stNumeroUno:nd me! 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 7:40pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
kelish:Noted ma'am.... thanks! |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by mohshuks: 7:55pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
I really enjoyed reading this, it's very relatable. Please I need a mention when part 2 starts o. Thanks 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 8:35pm On Nov 09, 2018 |
mohshuks:Ok boss... thanks! |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by Jayskit: 11:26am On Nov 10, 2018 |
Not bad Op.. You did well. Don't forget to mention me in the other updates 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by Basics007: 5:57pm On Nov 10, 2018 |
Nice one. Totally enjoyable 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by metalgear11(m): 6:12pm On Nov 10, 2018 |
Very nice story. So what happened to Grace? How about 'Lewa? 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 8:20pm On Nov 10, 2018 |
Jayskit:Noted bro... |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 8:26pm On Nov 10, 2018 |
metalgear11:Subsequent parts will reveal them both and Andy, DJ Joe et al. |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by Ayomideafuwape14(m): 11:00pm On Nov 12, 2018 |
Not a ghost reader but rather started today. Nice one bro need more of DJ Joe naughty attitude so i think i need a mention for d part2 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by 1stNumeroUno(op): 1:32pm On Nov 13, 2018 |
Ayomideafuwape14:Noted sir... 'DJ Joe' says hello! 1 Like |
| Re: Bosun's Diary. by mistarsam(m): 9:36pm On Nov 16, 2018 |
1stNumeroUno:Nice one Keep up the good work 1 Like |
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