₦airaland Forum

Predstan:
So sweet, sharwama is missing me. I’m going Gaga... No worry, I will come hunting for u soon

Nb: I’m a tech Guy

Senatorbee:
Please help critisize my proposed transcript

Transcript

V.O- Where/Why are you going to in the U.S

To pursue a masters degree in criminal justice/safty studies at Henry C Lee college of criminal justice, University of New Haven, West Haven, Connecticut

V.O- Why this degree

There are many criminals out there whose target are YOU and I and I want to contribute everything I can to stop these, with respect to my career plan which is to be a crime analyst for the anti- Robbery and Kidnapping Department of the Nigeria police force, a masters in criminal Justice or closely related discipline is a core requirement.
Knowing fully that field operatives would rely on the information I provide in other to apprehend criminals these program will also improve my mental understanding about crime but also equip me with basic skill required to carryout my task as a crime analyst For the Nigeria police force

V.O-5 How many schools did you apply to

4
University of New Haven conneticut, Grand valley state university Michigan, Lewis university illinois and University of North Texas

V.O- How many admit you got

3 admit and one pending

V.O- Why UNH

My choice of institution was based on the availability of active or retired security personnel who are now lecturers, fortunately for me the faculty at UNH comprises of active and retired security personnel including Professor Emeritus Tafoya, whom I will be researching with Being my long standing opinion that GIS can be used to manage Robbery and kidnapping in Nigeria
Thus professor Emeritus Tafoya Research on how GIS (Geographical information System) can be used to manage bank robbery and Kidnapping influence my choice for UNH
I also got a 30% merit dean scholarship
UNH also has the second largest criminal justice faculty in the United State

V.O- Did you write any standardized test

Yes IELTS and I score 6.0
GRE was not required

V.O- Who is sponsoring you
My Uncle

V.O- Why?

He sponsored my degree program at EKSU and has promised to sponsor me upto masters level

V.O- Are you Married

Yes Happily Married

V.O- How many kids

1 beautiful daughter

V.O- When did you graduate and what have you been doing

I graduated in October 2017 after which I have been working at *********** Security Company Limited as security personnel and later admininistrative officer

V.O: What are your plans after studies

I will be returning to Nigeria to work with the Nigeria police force as a crime analyst

V.O- What are your course description

I am required to take 33-36 credit to obtain my master in criminal Justice
Courses required are
CJST 6601- Mental health, law and criminal Justice
CJST 6605- Theories of Criminal Behavior
CJST 6611- Research method in criminal Justice
CJST 6613- quantitative applications in criminal justice
CJST 6637- Criminal justice policy
CJST 6697- Thesis 1
CJST 6698- Thesis 2

V.O- How did you heard about UNH

I first heard of UNH from the presenter of Crime Fighter my favorite crime Exposition Television program, He spoke about the greatness of the faculty after which I decided to research more on it using U.S News,Best Police School and Best College Schools.
They all shower great accolade on the school ranking it among the best 20 Criminal Justice program

Pls help me vet it and make necessary

BIMestBabe:
Hello. I'll give you this firsthand information.
1. NEVER use Kaplan for GRE maths. It's a no no. Use Manhattan. Download the Manhattan quant series. Not the 10lbs book(past questions) o. The different books that concentrates on the 8 or 9 topics in GRE quant.
Work them, understand the questions and tricks.

After, there's a book like that, I've forgotten the name.. (You can pm me, I'll check it out for you). So, get the book and work the qstns.
I tell you, if you can do that, you are good to go for quant! You'll blast those questions��[/color][color=#770077]

For verbal, get, magrosh, and also watch the GRE Manhattan verbal. Watch the videos and practice a lot of questions.

If you can get Manhattan flash cards, that'll be perfect to sharpen your vocabs. Those cards are the best I tell you!! And the words are all over GRE verbal!

You're good to go!!
Pls, remember Manhattan is the best for quant oo! Don't use any other. I have them all, so I'm very sure of what I'm saying.
All the best.
Cheers.

Senatorbee:
Please help critisize my proposed transcript

Transcript

V.O- Where/Why are you going to in the U.S

To pursue a masters degree in criminal justice/safty studies at Henry C Lee college of criminal justice, University of New Haven, West Haven, Connecticut

V.O- Why this degree

There are many criminals out there whose target are YOU and I and I want to contribute everything I can to stop these, with respect to my career plan which is to be a crime analyst for the anti- Robbery and Kidnapping Department of the Nigeria police force, a masters in criminal Justice or closely related discipline is a core requirement.
Knowing fully that field operatives would rely on the information I provide in other to apprehend criminals these program will also improve my mental understanding about crime but also equip me with basic skill required to carryout my task as a crime analyst For the Nigeria police force

V.O-5 How many schools did you apply to

4
University of New Haven conneticut, Grand valley state university Michigan, Lewis university illinois and University of North Texas

V.O- How many admit you got

3 admit and one pending

V.O- Why UNH

My choice of institution was based on the availability of active or retired security personnel who are now lecturers, fortunately for me the faculty at UNH comprises of active and retired security personnel including Professor Emeritus Tafoya, whom I will be researching with Being my long standing opinion that GIS can be used to manage Robbery and kidnapping in Nigeria
Thus professor Emeritus Tafoya Research on how GIS (Geographical information System) can be used to manage bank robbery and Kidnapping influence my choice for UNH
I also got a 30% merit dean scholarship
UNH also has the second largest criminal justice faculty in the United State

V.O- Did you write any standardized test

Yes IELTS and I score 6.0
GRE was not required

V.O- Who is sponsoring you
My Uncle

V.O- Why?

He sponsored my degree program at EKSU and has promised to sponsor me upto masters level

V.O- Are you Married

Yes Happily Married

V.O- How many kids

1 beautiful daughter

V.O- When did you graduate and what have you been doing

I graduated in October 2017 after which I have been working at *********** Security Company Limited as security personnel and later admininistrative officer

V.O: What are your plans after studies

I will be returning to Nigeria to work with the Nigeria police force as a crime analyst

V.O- What are your course description

I am required to take 33-36 credit to obtain my master in criminal Justice
Courses required are
CJST 6601- Mental health, law and criminal Justice
CJST 6605- Theories of Criminal Behavior
CJST 6611- Research method in criminal Justice
CJST 6613- quantitative applications in criminal justice
CJST 6637- Criminal justice policy
CJST 6697- Thesis 1
CJST 6698- Thesis 2

V.O- How did you heard about UNH

I first heard of UNH from the presenter of Crime Fighter my favorite crime Exposition Television program, He spoke about the greatness of the faculty after which I decided to research more on it using U.S News,Best Police School and Best College Schools.
They all shower great accolade on the school ranking it among the best 20 Criminal Justice program

Pls help me vet it and make necessary

Stevenssen:
Good day all.
Most of my research have been on Canadian schools, I have also applied to some of them. But my GPA isn't very high (3.06/5) and Canadian schools are highly competitive.
I also want to apply to US schools.
Course : Computer Science
GRE 308.
No wes evaluation.

Any recommendations?

fairheart:
Yes, there is recommendations: use google to look for schools in the US. You'll have hundred of them to choose from. That is the first thing first!

Wretch32:
Good morning chief, can I send a dm please?

Johnolukolade:
Yes, reapply. You don't want to waste the funding. Your reason for switching school is LEGIT, the VO wasn't just pleased. Can you give a run down of your finances? How much is your GTA? How much is left as deficit for your uncle to offset?

BenAzie:
Thanks guys for this platform. Almost frustrated now.
As it stands, I have GTA Position covering my tuition with monthly stipend and my uncle pays the rest.

I am in between decision whether or not to make my 3rd application. Be detailed with your thoughts/suggestions please, whether harshly or kindly provided it passes your message.

Brief:
1st application.
I first applied using SJU Spring 2019 and got denied. Here, no funding, my uncle (different surname) had a functional statement of account that I used. I think I was denied here because as part of my sponsor, I put a friend in the US (medical doctor for that matter) which weakened my ties to Nigeria (as I was told later on though)

2nd application.
Just 2days ago another denial. I answered all questions well as I often got responsive nodding of the Window 6 woman until I was asked why I changed schools from SJU (as in my previous application) to IUP (in my new application). I never expected that and all I could say was IUP gave a me a GTA as against no funding from SJU. Someone suggested to me to have talked about research and my concentration like that.

3rd application.
Do you think I should apply again?
If yes, what possible questions should I expect for a third time application?

Many thanks. Help me please, help!!!

NB: all interviews were in Abuja.

Pefuele:
Reappply Again.
Which of the windows interview you when you went for Spring2019?

The slim woman in Window6 like travelling experience.Like you have a B1/B2 VISA with no overstaying your time in the US.He denied a friend of mine twice just by looking at his passport in both cases.Also denied a friend with GA worth $42k.
I think research could have been better for a change of school..Did you change course?

Predstan:
Until she’s legally taken before I can back out from the race... Until I see her change-of-name notice on New York Times, Wall Street journal and USA Today. This is not Child’s play.

Sharwama, let’s go to Paris to go have a taste of French Pizza and Croissant. The wine in Le cruesot is going to turn u on.

Na Burundi Porpor go carry u go. The name resembles one of Burundi’s bench player in AFCOn

Porpor:


You think you can entice her with the entreaties of Pizza and Wine. Is that your own way of wooing your fresh catch. Ladies are now getting wiser I still insist you go to Okuneye for his/her romance notes

Predstan:
Maybe You don’t know... Matured men go on a date with ladies.
Who knows, she might be paying for the expenses incurred.
I don’t need a book or notes that’s why I’m in tech. A smart Robot will do magic

Porpor:
I don catch am...one of those "bookwarms" in school. Okay let me inform you that romance is difference from "tech". Romance is one research area you'll never graduate from due to it's volume, coverage, and complexities. You need my recommendation bro

And again, don't be a gold digger by expecting a lady to foot the bill on your so-called first date

Predstan:
You should understand the meaning of “May” “Might”

Even u go turn Gay when I unveil that Robot...

Johnolukolade:
How can a VO deny your friend twice?

bamiDee1:
Good morning everyone. Please a quick need of someone's help. I want to pay the SEVIS fee now and just want to confirm if the "Address Information" refers to my home address (Nigeria) or my school address...

Thanks in anticipation

bamiDee1:
Please I need a response from those who have passed this stage before...

Thanks

Johnolukolade:
It's your house address in Nigeria.

Pefuele:
He didn't know he has right to tell the VO to be interviewed by another.The VO herself apparently didn't know she interviewed him before from what he said ...It was a quick decision.VO interviewed him in 2016.
He thought the VO should know and tell him if he would like to be interviewed by another.

Johnolukolade:
It's your house address in Nigeria.

sharwama:
Dearest Predstan,
the tech guy my heart beats for
I was hoping you would ask me what I really want.
Well, it's neither Paris nor Burundi, neither a date night in Dubai or some place really nice, I just want to be where you are.
I want to touch those gifted hands capable of programming things to existence
I want to see the spark in your eyes as you rave about robots
I want to watch you create magic with your fingers crawling all around the keyboard, deafened to the pleas of every key, commanding each to obedience.
I just want to watch you get lost in your universe, knowing no matter what happens, you will always come back to me.
I want to be your home, your starting point.
I want to know what it feels like to be multilingual without apologies.
I was thinking we could have Python on anniversaries, christen our kids Java and Fortran.
I know I am moving too fast but hey, time flies when you are with a tech guy, right?
Predstan, I just want you

Ehen! Porpor and King fairheart, I have broken the table ooo, biko come and pack it osiso

dreambound:
That's because they want to verify the aunthenticity of the financial statements..some applicants use fake statements and say it is owned by their uncle. Some use fake uncles instead.

fairheart:
The reason for picking your program should be both academic and personal, and you have acheieved that with your response here. The reason for picking the school is also well structured, and also personal. I give you 9 over 10 there.

HOWEVER, it is one thing to have a well-crafted interview tanscript that portrays you as a genuine student going to the US purely to study and not with the intent to migrate; it is another thing to be able to deliver the transcript confidently and calmly in front of the consular. I can say you have achieved the first, the second is where I am not sure. So, a mock with someone who can asssess you will be ideal.

Also, accept your transcript. Let it please you so that you can have confidence in it and yourself. If you are not pleased with what you plan to say, you may fumble during the interview. Take note!

As for uncle being your sponsor, I hope you know you're expected to say something about your own personal savings towards this program (especially because you're married with a daughter).

Goodluck

BenAzie:
Thanks guys for this platform. Almost frustrated now.
As it stands, I have GTA Position covering my tuition with monthly stipend and my uncle pays the rest.

I am in between decision whether or not to make my 3rd application. Be detailed with your thoughts/suggestions please, whether harshly or kindly provided it passes your message.

Brief:
1st application.
I first applied using SJU Spring 2019 and got denied. Here, no funding, my uncle (different surname) had a functional statement of account that I used. I think I was denied here because as part of my sponsor, I put a friend in the US (medical doctor for that matter) which weakened my ties to Nigeria (as I was told later on though)

2nd application.
Just 2days ago another denial. I answered all questions well as I often got responsive nodding of the Window 6 woman until I was asked why I changed schools from SJU (as in my previous application) to IUP (in my new application). I never expected that and all I could say was IUP gave a me a GTA as against no funding from SJU. Someone suggested to me to have talked about research and my concentration like that.

3rd application.
Do you think I should apply again?
If yes, what possible questions should I expect for a third time application?

Many thanks. Help me please, help!!!

NB: all interviews were in Abuja.

Senatorbee:
Please I will be very great full if u can hold a mock interview with me.
Please for Christ sake