Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:13pm On May 16, 2020 |
crossfm: Op you are doing a wonderful job here.I have been following your story since you started and I must commend you for doing great.But I think the last update is a negation of your good work. My point is if really she was adopted by the psycho,then it ridicules the whole situation.she was with not only one but two top security personnel. Which I can say are intelligent considering how the both of them have been handling the case at hand.how could they be so careless to let melody be alone knowing how dangerous that action could be.the fact that she complained to the captain while shopping that ezenwa was very close should be a signal that she mustn't be left alone. The puncturing of his tyres was another glaring case that he was closer than they thought. Another observation that baffled me is the scene at the hospital. A hospital that is big enough to have both male and female private wards should at list have a section where people are welcomed or a receptionist.the fact that you made her to stay back in the car made it too obvious that there is danger and for me that is very predictable. My deduction from the story is that the character ezenwa is intelligent. If not how has he been able to conceal the series of killings.his ability to outsmart his brother and confined him to a mental asylum points to his intelligence. So he can disguise as a doctor,nurse,patient or even patients relative's to get to melody in the reception. Op like I said earlier you are doing great. And mind you its just an observation.I love your work. yes sir, thanks for your suggestions. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:14pm On May 16, 2020 |
skubido: Haaaa, wahala dey ooooo
OP why na, nothing must happen to our incoming wife oooo
yes sir, nothing will happen to her. 1 Like |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:15pm On May 16, 2020 |
Ujunwa14: shebi una don dey see damsel? nothing should happen to our Melody ooo, khristarl come and see, damsel wants to finally listen to Adesina12 to kill Melody. germophobe come and see ooo, prudysara, Ann2012 you people should come ooo, only me cannot see this. hahahaha, take am easy na. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:16pm On May 16, 2020 |
Thebigdream: Nothing must happen to our Melody o yes sir, nothing will happen to her. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:17pm On May 16, 2020 |
Preshbeauty: damsel, I know Melody is stubborn, but please, let nothing happen to her, i take God beg you.
thanks for the update yes ma |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:19pm On May 16, 2020 |
Adesina12:
Exactly my observation and my thinking It's not right to have let two official careless like that And Ezenwa play over their intelligence However, I am happy Melody was captured and I would like to read about how she was violated But the scene of abduction demeaning the intelligence of Joel and detective Sweet popcorn for you damselposh following you bumper to bumper
Hia baby, you want me to kill Melody? remember na your sister oooo. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:19pm On May 16, 2020 |
purity23: Nothing should happen to Melody o
yes ma |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:21pm On May 16, 2020 |
Adesina12:
What do you think?
This storyline should be tragicomedy
You people only want to read about love stories
Go and get Hardly Chase novels and enjoy yourself
But Melody must ..........
Damselposh baby ...over to you
Sweet popcorn for all the readers both physical and ghost
aaahh aaahh baby |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:21pm On May 16, 2020 |
Thebigdream: I've also noticed most nairalanders tends to read love stories and they love this motion of "Happily ever after" , this is why I love silver1996 stories, every character in his stories is dispensible, he kills both major and minor characters, funny enough he can save a character from beginning of the story only to kill it at the end, you'll just be wasting your time if you're expecting a happily ever after in his stories.
Anyhoo, Damselposh, your story rocks, infact I love it.
TeamJoel thanks honey |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:22pm On May 16, 2020 |
IFEOLUWAKRIZ: Make una allow the writer to twist his story the way he deems fit for his literary purpose. Thanks@ the writer. thanks for reading but am a female though. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:23pm On May 16, 2020 |
Embellished: Oya damsel, infact kill everyone, starting from
Joel Melody Chidiebube The detective Joel's parents The stalker The stalker's father Okenwa down to Udoka and Mama Kola even Mama chidera sef.
Please nobody should come for my head oooo, ayam not feeling fine mbok. lol.
lol, you wan cause quarrel abi? |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:24pm On May 16, 2020 |
Tonyspecial: Intelligent officers indeed
OP
God bless yhu
thanks for reading |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:26pm On May 16, 2020 |
enirock: These officers look like officers from the force of one country I know... Aye mi ooo, O my Melody don't die oh nd my Joel go show e Macho power. The stalker days are nearly over hahahaha, you better talk the country ooo. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by damselposh(f): 12:27pm On May 16, 2020 |
Toeyean1507: Joel shouldn't have left Melody all alone. After all, his attention is not really needed in the ward.
He made an avoidable mistake. yea, that's true |
Re: Roses And Thorns by IFEOLUWAKRIZ: 12:48pm On May 16, 2020 |
damselposh:
thanks for reading but am a female though. Duly noted |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Embellished(f): 12:52pm On May 16, 2020 |
OP you get luck say nothing do Melody hehehehehe, i for show you my fighting skills.
thanks for the update |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Khriztarl(f): 12:52pm On May 16, 2020 |
Ujunwa14: shebi una don dey see damsel? nothing should happen to our Melody ooo, khristarl come and see, damsel wants to finally listen to Adesina12 to kill Melody. germophobe come and see ooo, prudysara, Ann2012 you people should come ooo, only me cannot see this. ujunwa i have see it finish. I just held my chest. Damselposh, if anything happens to mels ah wee nor be ya fwend again. Who else heard that name. "Miss Mels" OMG. Wait, lemme go and blush. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by crossfm: 12:55pm On May 16, 2020 |
damselposh:
yes sir, thanks for your suggestions. you are welcome. May your ink never try. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Khriztarl(f): 12:58pm On May 16, 2020 |
Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..
ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by mhizv(f): 1:14pm On May 16, 2020 |
Khriztarl: Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..
ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody. Joel won't die ni..won't read again! |
Re: Roses And Thorns by purity23(f): 1:21pm On May 16, 2020 |
Melody ooo, this woman will not kill somebody, madam strong bone I'm glad it wasnt Okenwa that abducted her |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Akinwale14(m): 1:29pm On May 16, 2020 |
damselposh Thanks for update |
Re: Roses And Thorns by skubido(m): 2:35pm On May 16, 2020 |
Mind rest
Thanks for the update |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Ujunwa14(f): 3:07pm On May 16, 2020 |
Khriztarl:
ujunwa i have see it finish. I just held my chest.
Damselposh, if anything happens to mels ah wee nor be ya fwend again.
Who else heard that name. "Miss Mels" OMG. Wait, lemme go and blush.
I heard it ooo, Mels. lol 1 Like |
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Re: Roses And Thorns by Ujunwa14(f): 3:08pm On May 16, 2020 |
Khriztarl: Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..
ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody. lol, it is good that you are talking for somebody ooo. 1 Like |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Ujunwa14(f): 3:09pm On May 16, 2020 |
Thanks damsel, you get luck sha ooo. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Christie171(f): 3:13pm On May 16, 2020 |
Thebigdream: I've also noticed most nairalanders tends to read love stories and they love this motion of "Happily ever after" , this is why I love silver1996 stories, every character in his stories is dispensible, he kills both major and minor characters, funny enough he can save a character from beginning of the story only to kill it at the end, you'll just be wasting your time if you're expecting a happily ever after in his stories.
Anyhoo, Damselposh, your story rocks, infact I love it.
TeamJoel Don't even bring Silver1996 here... he's an enigma |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Khriztarl(f): 4:21pm On May 16, 2020 |
mhizv:
Joel won't die ni..won't read again!
Huh Like seriously? See joel's fans o. Lol |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Khriztarl(f): 4:23pm On May 16, 2020 |
Ujunwa14:
lol, it is good that you are talking for somebody ooo.
lol |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Preshbeauty(f): 4:35pm On May 16, 2020 |
If anybody must die, it should be the stalker.
well done OP and please keep Mels alive for us. |
Re: Roses And Thorns by Adesina12: 4:54pm On May 16, 2020 |
Preshbeauty: If anybody must die, it should be the stalker. well done OP and please keep Mels alive for us. Looking at you in 3D Just wait and stay with us to the end Sweet popcorn for una |