crossfm:
Op you are doing a wonderful job here.I have been following your story since you started and I must commend you for doing great.But I think the last update is a negation of your good work.
My point is if really she was adopted by the psycho,then it ridicules the whole situation.she was with not only one but two top security personnel. Which I can say are intelligent considering how the both of them have been handling the case at hand.how could they be so careless to let melody be alone knowing how dangerous that action could be.the fact that she complained to the captain while shopping that ezenwa was very close should be a signal that she mustn't be left alone. The puncturing of his tyres was another glaring case that he was closer than they thought.
Another observation that baffled me is the scene at the hospital. A hospital that is big enough to have both male and female private wards should at list have a section where people are welcomed or a receptionist.the fact that you made her to stay back in the car made it too obvious that there is danger and for me that is very predictable.
My deduction from the story is that the character ezenwa is intelligent. If not how has he been able to conceal the series of killings.his ability to outsmart his brother and confined him to a mental asylum points to his intelligence. So he can disguise as a doctor,nurse,patient or even patients relative's to get to melody in the reception.
Op like I said earlier you are doing great. And mind you its just an observation.I love your work.

yes sir, thanks for your suggestions.

skubido:
Haaaa, wahala dey ooooo

OP why na, nothing must happen to our incoming wife oooo

yes sir, nothing will happen to her.

Ujunwa14:
shebi una don dey see damsel? nothing should happen to our Melody ooo, khristarl come and see, damsel wants to finally listen to Adesina12 to kill Melody. germophobe come and see ooo, prudysara, Ann2012 you people should come ooo, only me cannot see this.

hahahaha, take am easy na.

Thebigdream:
Nothing must happen to our Melody o

yes sir, nothing will happen to her.

Preshbeauty:
damsel, I know Melody is stubborn, but please, let nothing happen to her, i take God beg you.



thanks for the update

yes ma

Adesina12:

Exactly my observation and my thinking
It's not right to have let two official careless like that
And Ezenwa play over their intelligence
However, I am happy Melody was captured and I would like to read about how she was violated
But the scene of abduction demeaning the intelligence of Joel and detective
Sweet popcorn for you damselposh
following you bumper to bumper

Hia baby, you want me to kill Melody? remember na your sister oooo.

purity23:
Nothing should happen to Melody o

yes ma

Adesina12:

What do you think? This storyline should be tragicomedy You people only want to read about love stories Go and get Hardly Chase novels and enjoy yourself But Melody must .......... Damselposh baby ...over to you Sweet popcorn for all the readers both physical and ghost

aaahh aaahh baby

Thebigdream:
I've also noticed most nairalanders tends to read love stories and they love this motion of "Happily ever after" , this is why I love silver1996 stories, every character in his stories is dispensible, he kills both major and minor characters, funny enough he can save a character from beginning of the story only to kill it at the end, you'll just be wasting your time if you're expecting a happily ever after in his stories.

Anyhoo, Damselposh, your story rocks, infact I love it.

TeamJoel

thanks honey

IFEOLUWAKRIZ:
Make una allow the writer to twist his story the way he deems fit for his literary purpose.
Thanks@ the writer.

thanks for reading but am a female though.

Embellished:
Oya damsel, infact kill everyone, starting from

Joel
Melody
Chidiebube
The detective
Joel's parents
The stalker
The stalker's father
Okenwa down to
Udoka and
Mama Kola even Mama chidera sef.



Please nobody should come for my head oooo, ayam not feeling fine mbok. lol.

lol, you wan cause quarrel abi?

Tonyspecial:
Intelligent officers indeed




OP God bless yhu

thanks for reading

enirock:
These officers look like officers from the force of one country I know... Aye mi ooo, O my Melody don't die oh nd my Joel go show e Macho power. The stalker days are nearly over

hahahaha, you better talk the country ooo.

Toeyean1507:
Joel shouldn't have left Melody all alone. After all, his attention is not really needed in the ward.

He made an avoidable mistake.

yea, that's true

damselposh:



thanks for reading but am a female though.

Duly noted

OP you get luck say nothing do Melody hehehehehe, i for show you my fighting skills.


thanks for the update

Ujunwa14:
shebi una don dey see damsel? nothing should happen to our Melody ooo, khristarl come and see, damsel wants to finally listen to Adesina12 to kill Melody. germophobe come and see ooo, prudysara, Ann2012 you people should come ooo, only me cannot see this.

ujunwa i have see it finish. I just held my chest.
Damselposh, if anything happens to mels ah wee nor be ya fwend again.


Who else heard that name. "Miss Mels" OMG. Wait, lemme go and blush.

damselposh:




yes sir, thanks for your suggestions.

you are welcome. May your ink never try.

Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..

ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody.

Khriztarl:
Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..

ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody.

Joel won't die ni..won't read again!

Melody ooo, this woman will not kill somebody, madam strong bone

I'm glad it wasnt Okenwa that abducted her

damselposh Thanks for update

Mind rest



Thanks for the update

Khriztarl:
ujunwa i have see it finish. I just held my chest. Damselposh, if anything happens to mels ah wee nor be ya fwend again.

Who else heard that name. "Miss Mels" OMG. Wait, lemme go and blush.

I heard it ooo, Mels. lol

Khriztarl:
Damselposh, anybody can die but please not melody, It would be heartrecking. Even the joel can die sef. I no send o..

ujunwa, don't have my head for dinner please, i was talking for somebody.

lol, it is good that you are talking for somebody ooo.

Thanks damsel, you get luck sha ooo.

Thebigdream:
I've also noticed most nairalanders tends to read love stories and they love this motion of "Happily ever after" , this is why I love silver1996 stories, every character in his stories is dispensible, he kills both major and minor characters, funny enough he can save a character from beginning of the story only to kill it at the end, you'll just be wasting your time if you're expecting a happily ever after in his stories.

Anyhoo, Damselposh, your story rocks, infact I love it.

TeamJoel

Don't even bring Silver1996 here... he's an enigma

mhizv:

Joel won't die ni..won't read again!

Huh Like seriously? See joel's fans o. Lol

Ujunwa14:



lol, it is good that you are talking for somebody ooo.

lol

If anybody must die, it should be the stalker. well done OP and please keep Mels alive for us.

Preshbeauty:
If anybody must die, it should be the stalker.
well done OP and please keep Mels alive for us.

Looking at you in 3D
Just wait and stay with us to the end
Sweet popcorn for una