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Re: The Last Bus by Kaycee9242(m): 5:23am On Jul 09, 2020
Jameskudooski d king of suspense u try ooooooo. We really lost a hero in Mike. Op if Dy born u well make something happen to Amitabh. Great work jaree

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Re: The Last Bus by damis28crown(f): 11:36am On Jul 09, 2020
(with a serious face ) OP I WILL NOT PLAY WITH U AGAIN

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Re: The Last Bus by PrudySara(f): 12:02pm On Jul 09, 2020
I pray so too.

Michael's death though! It's sad. Please, O.P don't allow anyone to die, even Amitabh.

Is there no way out for them in this jungle?

Thanks for the update!
JamesKudooski:


Seriously PrudySara, I really feel for the little lad. He has seen things even many adults have not seen.

At a point, I felt like shedding tears for him while writing the novel.

I only pray he survives the whole ordeal.

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Re: The Last Bus by skubido(m): 5:52am On Jul 10, 2020
Boss benii ti yin riii

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:05pm On Jul 11, 2020
becca2017:
embarassed I also stood still o.. please don't let Amitabh die o, e joor.

Michael's death tho, it's so sad.

Michael's death was very painful really but that's life for you.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:08pm On Jul 11, 2020
Khriztarl:
Finally, i caught up. Started this evening though. Nobody mentioned me but my God never fails.
micheal's death tore through me. He didn't deserve such.
please save the boy. Haret ejoor, biko, mbok, hahutata (my own automatic strange word for please in hayak language) lol.
nice ups op.

Wooow! Khriztar just added to our vocabulary of Hayakite language!

Well, for little Amitabh, his life is in God's hands not mine.

And you are welcome to My World ... My Story, Khriztar.
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:10pm On Jul 11, 2020
Kaycee9242:
Jameskudooski d king of suspense u try ooooooo. We really lost a hero in Mike. Op if Dy born u well make something happen to Amitabh. Great work jaree

Oh! King of Suspense? You just burst my head. Thanks for the compliment, Kaycee even if you have to break my head later.

cheesy cheesy
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:12pm On Jul 11, 2020
damis28crown:
(with a serious face )
OP I WILL NOT PLAY WITH U AGAIN

Awwww! Damis28crown wants to join Kaycee in fighting me ooo! cry cry cry
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:14pm On Jul 11, 2020
PrudySara:
I pray so too.

Michael's death though! It's sad. Please, O.P don't allow anyone to die, even Amitabh.

Is there no way out for them in this jungle?

Thanks for the update!

I cannot guarantee that, PrudySara.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:14pm On Jul 11, 2020
skubido:
Boss benii ti yin riii


Skubido, I see you.
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 4:17pm On Jul 11, 2020
EkopSparoAyara where art thou?

Where have you been, bruv. I've really missed your wonderful commentaries oooo!!!!

Trust you are doing good.
Re: The Last Bus by Tominix(m): 4:17pm On Jul 11, 2020
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Re: The Last Bus by Khriztarl(f): 5:53pm On Jul 11, 2020
JamesKudooski:


Wooow! Khriztar just added to our vocabulary of Hayakite language!

Well, for little Amitabh, his life is in God's hands not mine.

And you are welcome to My World ... My Story, Khriztar.
lol. Language that i don't even know where it came from. Anyway, in this world i would gladly dwell. Thankyou.

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Re: The Last Bus by Khriztarl(f): 5:55pm On Jul 11, 2020
OP update na? Please.

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Re: The Last Bus by EkopSparoAyara(m): 7:54pm On Jul 11, 2020
JamesKudooski:
EkopSparoAyara where art thou?

Where have you been, bruv. I've really missed you wonderful commentaries oooo!!!!

Trust you are doing good.

Boss man, I've been busy lately oh . I'll read up tomorrow..

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Re: The Last Bus by toyhin123(f): 10:24am On Jul 12, 2020
Micheal is a real warrior. Please OP don't make Amitabh die. Thanks for the update

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Re: The Last Bus by EkopSparoAyara(m): 11:05am On Jul 13, 2020
Fiona lives on to die another day.. Kaycee and co are happy now..

Micheal is gone, dead, it's an inevitable end for all mortals, it's only saddening the way he died..

And now little Ambitah is on the verge of loosing consciousness, leaving this cruel word.. Maybe that's what will get him out of his misery, maybe he will survive the ordeal to tell his story to his generation yet unborn..

You never can tell, I await the next episodes to quench my burning curiosity, the suspense is hanging over a huge cloud of uncertainties..


BRAVO JAMESKUDOOSKI..

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Re: The Last Bus by Ann2012(f): 4:24am On Jul 14, 2020
Thumbs up Boss, keep the updates coming

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Re: The Last Bus by Khriztarl(f): 11:17am On Jul 15, 2020
Millieademi where art thou?
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:10pm On Jul 16, 2020
Khriztarl:

lol. Language that i don't even know where it came from. Anyway, in this world i would gladly dwell. Thankyou.

Lol!
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:10pm On Jul 16, 2020
Khriztarl:
OP update na? Please.

Cooking....
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:11pm On Jul 16, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:


Boss man, I've been busy lately oh . I'll read up tomorrow..

Oh, happy you're fine.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:13pm On Jul 16, 2020
toyhin123:
Micheal is a real warrior. Please OP don't make Amitabh die. Thanks for the update

As much as I would have loved everyone to survive, their lives are actually in God's hands.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:15pm On Jul 16, 2020
EkopSparoAyara:
Fiona lives on to die another day.. Kaycee and co are happy now..

Micheal is gone, dead, it's an inevitable end for all mortals, it's only saddening the way he died..

And now little Ambitah is on the verge of loosing consciousness, leaving this cruel word.. Maybe that's what will get him out of his misery, maybe he will survive the ordeal to tell his story to his generation yet unborn..

You never can tell, I await the next episodes to quench my burning curiosity, the suspense is hanging over a huge cloud of uncertainties..


BRAVO JAMESKUDOOSKI..

You see why I missed you when you were busy?

Your commentaries are usually topnotch.

Thanks bro.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:16pm On Jul 16, 2020
Ann2012:
Thumbs up Boss, keep the updates coming

Thanks dear

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 12:49pm On Jul 16, 2020
READY FOR FRESH EPISODES?

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Re: The Last Bus by Khriztarl(f): 12:57pm On Jul 16, 2020
JamesKudooski:

Cooking....
make e done fast ni, if e no gree fry am.

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Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 1:13pm On Jul 16, 2020
Khriztarl:

make e done fast ni, if e no gree fry am.

Lol! cheesy cheesy cheesy
Re: The Last Bus by JamesKudooski(m): 1:29pm On Jul 16, 2020
Chapter Ten
The Betrayal
(Episode 23)


She stood up and began scouting the entire surrounding for a substitute or anything that could extend the boy's life a little longer. She spotted a plant at the base of a boulder. She ran to it and plucked some of its leaves. She squashed it and squeezed the juice into his mouth and rubbed the crumpled leaves on the injury. Lilian dropped down beside the boy and held his hand and begged him to stay with us. Amitabh gradually began to shut his eyes. The earth stood still in that instant.

I turned to look at the path one last time with heightened fear and behold, Kammahayak was running towards us with a bunch of leaves in his hand. I yelled. Everyone else turned to the direction and whooped with joy. Hayakharet collected the leaves and rubbed some between her palms. She added a little water to make a paste and smeared it over the wound. It made a sizzling sound and vapour evaporated from the injury. Amitabh screamed. Hayakharet raised his head and put some of the paste into his mouth and washed it down with some water. No sooner than he swallowed the herb that he began to convulse. We all jumped back and exchanged looks and then looked at Hayakharet's face.

She smiled. “The Ntunja is working. Leave him.”

We all relaxed and fixed our eyes on the boy. He gradually calmed down and slept off. After about twenty minutes, he woke up and was looking vibrant! The Ntunja really worked magic. I had never seen such healing powers in my life. I then understood how Fiona's wounds could have healed so quickly.

Immediately we saw that Amitabh had regained some of his strength, we continued our journey. Before long, Hayakharet informed us that we had gotten to our destination, and it was at that point she and her warriors would go back to face their own troubles. We didn't understand her at first until we started hearing the honking of vehicles from a distance. She pointed to the bush ahead of us and explained that the moment we walked through it, we would burst out by the side of the express road.

We looked at each other, and tears of joy rolled down our eyes. It was then I realized how tattered we looked. We couldn't thank the warrior princess enough. Just like Michael, she was an enemy turned saviour. One after the other, we hugged her and kissed her forehead. However, when it got to my turn, she clutched me to her bosom and didn't want to let go. I felt a few drops of tears drop on my shoulder. I felt her pain. As a show of appreciation, I kissed her, not on her forehead, but her lips. That was the only parting gift I could give her. Her face became alive with unfathomable joy.

I turned to the others, grinning like I just won a jackpot. And indeed I just won back my life as one. It was late evening now. The sun was already getting ready to call it a day. Looking at the faces of my friends, I could feel what they were feeling right now. It was just like my people would say: if someone rode a horse in our bellies right now, he would never stumble.

“I think we should take a selfie,” I said out of the blue.

Sis Elizabeth carried me up with her eyes and hit me on the ground several times over. She curved her mouth in disgust and hissed, “Selfie kọ, Instagram ni. Hian!” She held her beret and continued marching forward.

Everybody laughed.

What was it with this woman, and that beret? God! Even with all that had happened, she didn't lose it for once!

The laughter had barely left our lips when Ubong suddenly gasped. An arrow pierced his heart. His eyes bulged, and blood trickled down a corner of his mouth. He held the arrow, fell to his knee, and then his face, driving the arrow deeper inside.

Hayakharet swung around. However, before her warriors could do anything, spears ran through them, and they crashed to the ground beside her. I looked at the direction the arrows came from, and my heart ran to my mouth when I saw warriors surrounding us—supreme commander's army no doubt!

Hayakharet turned back to look at me. I saw disbelief written all over her face. How on earth did they find us? She must have been wondering

To be continued ... Watch Out for the Next Episode!

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Re: The Last Bus by babajeje123(m): 2:47pm On Jul 16, 2020
James, come back here! Wetin be this now? One more episode to douse my heartaches please

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Re: The Last Bus by Lilly4endu(f): 12:04am On Jul 17, 2020
He intentionally doing us longer throat. Op i personally remove!! remove!!! Ooooh wetin i go remove now for you?

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Re: The Last Bus by Ann2012(f): 8:03am On Jul 17, 2020
Serious wahala be this ooooo

Thanks for the update

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