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nakitoo22: I actually don't know much about literature so I need some assistance in that area to make my poems beTter.

well, am not a guru myself cos am still learning. I can only advise you to stick around this section more, surfing and going tru the stories being written here...

And do a crash course with Google, that's my secret

Okay, am in...

-good story line so far, superb and captivating suspense too......
-story seem multidimentional and really a shift away from the one-dimensional status quo stories, kudos to you...

-but, you ain't working on spacing to give it some eye comfort, especially as it is being read online
-and i noticed the recent updates kind of give spoilers with comments like 'or so he thought' 'how wrong he was' 'but not for long' etc. Please cut out that ending phrases, if this is a novel and not an autobiography, then such comments shouldn't come in. Instead the readers would follow the story as it unravels, to get the heights and fall of the characters okay?

Now say thank you.
and Nice job still

chistar01: thanks.. Critiques expected tho

you got it!

chistar01: dear princesa.. Please, it's Φk♠γ̲̣̣̥. Nah...

okay, no more troubles from me

nakitoo22: You are welcome .. Am new here I'd liked some assistance.

assistance with what?

Madawaki01: sharap there,na ur type dey always form tough girl on d internet,but 4 real life?

in real life, meek as a dove
on the internet, ready to burst ur nose

Clemzy16: hehehe...wat iz dis gal feelin lik sef?

™ƺƔcιεмεηт®

like la femme Nikita

now you, what are you feeling like, spamming nairaland with ur silly signature ™ƺƔcιεмεηт®

[quote author=Mynd_44]This is getting interesting[/quote]yeah it was, till you decided to invite them in! Now don't get me wrong...am one that loves to treat company, but poetry required so so much concentration

anyways, goodmorning everyone! Hope church is topmost in ur minds? Happy Sunday!

Tovot: lolzz,my thought exactly,we are just three right?we could divide him into equal parts

are we still talking about dinner and poems here

ibkaye: I'm sure they'll be enough of him the food to go around

am sure they would be enough of the FOOD to go round, but i can't concentrate on teaching him poetry if you both are around

Tovot: Nah,I don't fish, the fishes come begging and I choose the best.

now you're even a better fisher-woman than me

[quote author=Mynd_44]When with me, you can't doze off. Lai lai...you might even break a rib laughing.

And the music is a part of me. Something softer and I might just turn it off[/quote] and i love to laugh, and eat and write poems and teach poetry


oh okay, you're a guy that loves hard music? Hmm interesting

ibkaye: I think Mynd should cook for me us all

uhm, i think not, two is just perfect! Three is Four is

i asked first

Tovot: Thanks sweetie,HE's not even worth the Hassle.

we are finally getting somewhere. And always remember, there are so many fishes in the river, thin and fat ones, so make ur pick and be willing to explore

[quote author=Mynd_44]Now you are talking business. I love cooking especially if I have company and we can work on poems.

About the music, I work better with music as it spices things up[/quote]okay, cook something light, tasty and hmmm so i don't dose off inbetween teaching you poetry

and if you wanna leave the music on, try something less heavy and masculine, jeez!

Obinoscopy: Yikes!

busted right? Am i good or what


now Tovvy darling, stay away from men like him okay?
how's the weekend by the way?

[quote author=Mynd_44]A broke dude like me? I am a small boy and can't afford all those[/quote]can i come over then, so you can cook for me instead, then we would learn poetry all night

and inbetween, put off that radio/laptop/phone...whatever! That's playing the music i don't like

ibkaye: Hey dear! Aww, you too, you know you're the only person I can be cheesy for

Hope the week was good

yes i know, and you're the only chocolate in my ice cream

weekend was work work work

thank you for sharing

[quote author=Mynd_44]You are too poetic for me. Can you teach me poetry?[/quote]sure! If its over a plate of sharwama and ice cream at KFC, then am game

Obinoscopy: Honey don't mind d jealous princesa. She knows why I adore you. She knows I'd die for u. She's knows u're my one, my all. She knows I love you. Always has; always will .

#files nails lazily, raises head to give him a one over stare, then shifts glance to his rickety volvo car parked few miles away from HBG's compound, scoffs and returns attention to nails#

jealous indeed! hmm, i think I'd go for pink colour for my nails, even though i hate that colour

ibkaye: Hello there

hi tweety crush! Missed you loads

maishot: I'm sorry,
Did Ɣõu̶̲̥̅̊ say something?


#Wondering why we have active 'dumb-ars's' in NL#

see, if i wanna give this dude a run for his money, you would say am exploring my bad side. So, am just gonna leave you two to ur battles

#grabs popcorn#

inbetween...chistar, speedy recovery, the Lord is ur muscle

maishot: Princesa - princesa!
Hummmmmmm.

I see Ɣõu̶̲̥̅̊ haven't changed.
So its true what dey say about the Leopard and its spot.





Only, in ur case..,
they seem to be getting larger and darker.








I seriously wish Ɣõu̶̲̥̅̊ could do something about it baby.
Ɣõu̶̲̥̅̊'re a beauty,
Don't You let d 'bad' side wash it away.

I need to remain tough in a world filled with men, else they would drive me crazy! So the 'bad' side is an asset

ibkaye: Baahaaaa

hello

[quote author=Mynd_44]I should ban you for this ...classic[/quote]if its the price to pay for the truth... *in 2 face's voice* then i want to be haunted

HumbledbYGrace: you jelos our loff? Abeg jor, get over yourself

nope, just trying to save a damsel before she falls into distress

Obinoscopy: Well my day was very uneventful. However I must admit I spent most of them thinking abt u. And the thought of u made me smile all day long .

if a chick still believes that in this age and century, then we finally give up